"Grace [Paley]’s sentences are identifiable a mile away. She packs more humanity, longing, regret, humor and pathos into the three pages that make up 'Wants' than many doorstop novels, and yet the art is invisible. Her enormous control, her exquisite precision, are deployed entirely in the service of her characters’ internal lives." - Dani Shapiro, author of Still Writing: The Perils and Pleasures of a Creative Life
About the Author: Born in the Bronx in 1922, Grace Paley was a renowned writer and activist. Her Collected Stories was a finalist for both the Pulitzer Prize and the National Book Award. She was the author of five collections of stories and five collections of poems; Fidelity, her final volume of poetry was published after her death in Vermont on August 22, 2007.
About the Guest Editor: Dani Shapiro is the author of five novels and three memoirs. Her newest, Still Writing: The Pleasures and Perils of a Creative Life, is just out in paperback.
About the Publisher: Electric Literature is an independent publisher amplifying the power of storytelling through digital innovation. Electric Literature’s weekly fiction magazine, Recommended Reading, invites established authors, indie presses, and literary magazines to recommended great fiction. Once a month we feature our own recommendation of original, previously unpublished fiction.
This is the first Paley work I've read, and I admit to initial confusion. She does not favour commas or quotation marks. However, her sentences are structured to avoid seeming wholly like stream of consciousness. I have never been exposed to this type of sentence before, and I'm quite intrigued by them.
As for the plot, well, it's very nice. It's believable and I felt the main character's concern over her unremarkability. Finally, her acceptance of it. So much of her personality and her husband's is on display in a mere three pages. It's quite the feat, and I recommend to all aspiring writers because this style is unique but effective.
I disliked how emotionally detached the main character was from her own life. She meets her ex-husband in a library (where she returns books she's had for 18 years - who does that?!), and they have a short conversation about the failings of their marriage. Their tones are accusatory, yet resigned. He accuses her of having no wants or aspirations in life, which is presumably where the title of the piece comes from. There is no build-up, no climax, and little resolution. The main character's final sentiment is that she needs to be jolted into doing even the most insignificant of productive tasks in her life. I was also quite bothered by the lack of quotation marks in this story.
I thought that this story was very odd. I personally didn't like that there was no action or any conflict in it. I believe that there could be a lot more conversation between ex-husband and the wife because it would bring some excitement to the book. It also would add some background information on their life together so readers know what is happening and possibly the time period so readers know what war they are in. I also had a question to why the story ended the way it did. Did she change or does she need another "jolt" to make her change again? I think it could be taken either way.
I did not appreciate how this story had a very bland story line. There was no climax, no resolution, nothing that made this seem like a classic short story. I see that the author was trying to show the growing process of her main character and how she has matured and become stronger since the divorce. I applaud the writer for creating a strong woman character however, I didn't really like the writing style and how the story had no build to it.
I read this in September for my first-semester 12th grade English class. I didn't remember the story very well, so I just skimmed through it, and the original emotions this story evoked for me resurfaced. To me, this story was saddening in a way that no other story I've read since has been. The idea of people from your life, who used to be your entire life, becoming but a memory, is one that makes me want to cry - for some reason that I can't put my finger on. I guess maybecit speaks to the temporary nature of relationships, and even more broadly, the temporary nature of life, which I consider a very somber concept. This story is concise, emotional, and simple. I've seen people in other reviews call it "bland" or "boring," which I firmly disagree with. I don't think a story needs action or multiple dense layers of meaning to be interesting. This story says what it is intended to say, and nothing more. It is not bland; it just isn't complex or layered.
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It's not like i hated this one, but can't say i liked it enough to give it more than two stars. It's not because of how short it is, but seeing a main character so devoid of emotions felt incredibly awkward. It felt to me like this woman, whoever she is, seems to not give a single care about herself, her life, she just seems to go with the flow - and delivering books 18 years late,gahh - and to me that makes me terribly anxious.
This short-short-short story is about exactly what the title suggests it’s about; “wants. It’s about what the narrator’s ex husband wants. It’s about what the narrator wants. What Paley thinks about the competing approaches to life, wants, seems clear, maybe too clear (dare I say sophomorically clear?). Great fodder for discussion groups and since I read it for an upcoming book club, that’s fine by me.
A story gives the readers a feeling of loneliness. A narrator, a woman who had been married for twenty-seven years and got divorced, met her ex-husband. They had a short conversation without any emotions. He accused her of not paying much attention to his wishes like buying the boat or meeting with their acquaintances.
She has a completely different attitude to her life, her wishes are to be a better person and to live in imaginable perfect society. It is very different what she wants.
The story goes on the background of returning the books which she took in the library eighteen years ago. She was fined by the librarian and consequently, the clerk accepted her apologies.
I think that the main idea of this short story is to show how the time passes. She said that she had not thought about his wishes because "my father was sick that Friday, then the children were born, then I had those Tuesday-night meetings, then the war began ..."
This feeling when the time has gone and there is no chance to change the passing life is known for people in the old age (in fact it is known to everyone) ... Grace Paley described it very well.
There is uncertainty in the plot of this story, but it is a part of life. People are strangers on the way between the past and the future, during the short pause they could think about what did not happen with regret.
The narrator described in very bright expressions the way, how people can harm others giving just remarks about features of others characters. What she thought: "He had had a habit throughout the twenty-seven years of making a narrow remark which, like a plumber's snake, could work its way through the ear down the throat, half-way to my heart. He would then disappear, leaving me choking with equipment."
People are very vulnerable in terms of what other people say about them. The narrator had her personal point of view for life which is a very different from what her ex-husband had, but after she stayed alone, she didn't feel sure about her rightness. "I felt extremely accused. Now, it's true, I'm short of requests and absolute requirements. But I do want something"
She isn't a strong person, she doesn't mind being jolting by somebody, in the last line of the story she said: "when a person or an event comes along to jolt or appraise me I can take some appropriate action". I suppose that the moral of this story is the person is only a part of society and she is acting according to the circumstances like a lonely boat in an endless ocean.