This is my second book by Tom Lowe. I recently finished A False Dawn and found it a fairly enjoyable enough read as I am a Florida native and enjoyed the local settings. I picked this up because of the glowing reviews and the plot seemed particularly interesting, focusing around Osceola and the Seminole culture. After finishing the book I can't help but wonder if these reviews are from diehard fans that will love any and everything the author puts out. The story plot itself is interesting enough but the rabbit trails it takes to get through it bogs the story down. I found it way too easy to put this down and kept going back only to make sure I finished. But that was not the main problem with this book. It is filled with errors from incorrect subject-verb agreement to using the wrong homophone, here, instead of hear. It was infuriating that the author continues to restate his characters' identities throughout the whole book, using commas to restate the names and using last names when not needed, even to characters who would obviously know who they were. A glaring, but not unique example, would be the following:
" you might want to talk to your sister, Nita,..." ( This is the ONLY sister mentioned in the book) or
" I spoke with Joe's attorney, Lana Halley, about it" ( to someone who already knows the attorney)
I found it tiresome that this continues to the end, always referring to characters that are well known by first and last names. It sounds too contrived and not at all like common conversational speech.
My biggest peeve, however, was the use of blatantly incorrect facts that any elementary school child would know. With all the research he has obviously done with Florida history and Seminole culture, he has a character share information like, " crows are one of the few mammals that can use tools to open things." Crows are NOT MAMMALS. They are BIRDS, an entirely different animal group! Then later in the book one of the Seminoles tells O'Brien there are NO scorpions in the Everglades! What???? There are scorpions in my backyard and plenty in the Everglades!
These things were a bit too much for me to ignore. This is the last Tom Lowe I will read. 1.5 Stars