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Mr. Darcy's Bargain: A Pride and Prejudice Vagary
Darcy and Elizabeth are about to learn how “necessity” never makes a fair bargain. When ELIZABETH BENNET appears on his doorstep some ten months after her refusal of his hand in marriage, FITZWILLIAM DARCY uses the opportunity to "bargain" for her acceptance of a renewal of his proposal in exchange for his assistance in bringing Mr. George Wickham to justice. In Darcy's absence from Hertfordshire, Wickham has executed a scam to defraud the citizens of Meryton, including her father, of their hard-earned funds. All have invested in Wickham's Ten Percent Annuity scheme. Her family and friends are in dire circumstances, and more importantly, Mr. Bennet's heart has taken an ill turn. Elizabeth will risk everything to bring her father to health again and to save her friends from destitution; yet, is she willing to risk her heart? She places her trust in Darcy's ability to thwart Wickham's manipulations, but she is not aware that Darcy wishes more than her acquiescence. He desires her love. Neither considers what will happen if he does not succeed in bringing Mr. Wickham before a magistrate. Will his failure bring an end to their “bargain”? Or will true love prevail?
314 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 12, 2016
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Regina Jeffers
132 books707 followersRegina Jeffers, an award-winning author of historical cozy mysteries, Austenesque sequels and retellings, as well as Regency era romances, has worn many hats over her lifetime: daughter, student, military brat, wife, mother, grandmother, teacher, tax preparer, journalist, choreographer, Broadway dancer, theatre director, history buff, grant writer, media literacy consultant, and author. Living outside of Charlotte, NC, Jeffers writes novels that take the ordinary and adds a bit of mayhem, while mastering tension in her own life with a bit of gardening and the exuberance of her “grand joys.”
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November 14, 2016
Let’s make a deal…or…How to catch a thief?
Our story opens ten months after Hunsford. We have a bitter and contrite Darcy still stinging from Elizabeth’s refusal and rebuke. And, he is still in possession of the letter he wrote to her right after her refusal. He attempted to get the letter to her but did not see her before he left Kent. He has kept it hidden and locked in his desk drawer all this time; unable to destroy it, unable to open it and reread it for fear of what he had written. Imagine his surprise when the butler approached carrying a visitor card and said the lady would not leave without seeing him. So, begins our story.
Upshot… WICKHAM… that scumbag rat-bastard has swindled most of Hertfordshire in an annuities scam and her father collapsed under the stress. Elizabeth and her Uncle Gardiner have come to see Mr. Darcy in hopes he can help them find a way to circumvent Wickham’s scam. The militia was due to leave Meryton shortly and they were afraid he would leave the area with the funds. Darcy immediately sent for our dear Colonel Fitzwilliam. Sigh!!! I love our dear Colonel.
Now begins the story of how to catch a thief.
First you get all the information.
Next, you make the thief think he has all your trust.
Then, you make him greedier by giving him another patsy or additional funds.
After that, you start removing his associates. Take them out one at a time when he is not looking.
And while you are undermining his network, locate the counterfeiter, the forger and any other associates that were unfortunate enough to help him.
This was a whirlwind of an adventure. The excitement was throughout the book. We were not long between explosive scenes and it didn’t drag in very many places.
Darcy: such a man in love. I was blown away by his love language whether in thought or in writing. It simply melted my poor heart.
Elizabeth: WTH!!! What the heck was her problem? Dang… I wanted to shake Mrs. Bennet for always putting down [or inflicting emotional abuse to] her least favorite child. That woman had so diminished Elizabeth’s self-worth that she did not know how to believe she was worthy of the love of a good man. After a while it began to grate on my nerves. I wanted to scream…suck it up and get a grip. I could only take so much and poor Darcy could only take rejection so many times. That man deserved an award for perseverance and his tolerance for abuse. I wonder if he has a red room? Oops! Did I say that out loud?
There will be reviews that explain the whole story line…there always are, so I will not do so. I just want readers to know this was a freaking wild ride. Man, it was one adventure after another. One heroic maneuver after another, with strategic planning and use of man-power. We had the militia searching, Colonel Fitzwilliam and his men roaming the country side, Colonel Forster and his men, the Bow Street Runners gathering information, and still Wickham was on the loose. In fact, he pulled such a sneaky get-a-way that I was totally amazed at the author’s creativity. Most JAFF authors have him captured within a paragraph or two and then it’s over. Not so, this was a wide-spread search and rescue, after a selfish and self-centered little girl stuck her nose in the fray. OMG, I wanted to snatch her bald, I was so upset.
Concerns: not what I didn’t like, because I really liked this: There were concerns. As our story was building and starting toward the wind down or dénouement … it felt like the author was planting additional seeds to the conspiracy. For some reason, I picked up or sensed that perhaps there was another person involved… like a master mind. Not that Wickham wasn’t capable of concocting the conspiracy, but that it was out of his normal MO [modus operandi] or method of operation. There were several threads left hanging. Did the author change her mind and forget to go back and remove the seed planting or suggestion? Or was there a mastermind or puppet master behind all the machinations. One who simply used the twisted mind of the revengeful Wickham as a front man? I still feel there was more to this.
****SPOILER**** **** End Spoiler****
There wasn’t an epilogue, so there were many questions left unanswered unless there is a sequel that will answer them later. [????] What about the Lucas family in their determination to have Maria become Mrs. Wickham? Will their overspending compromise the family? How did Mr. Bennet handle Lydia for the next six months? How did Mr. B handle Mrs. B for the next six months? What became of Lydia? Did she ever understand the danger? What about her attitude? Did she ever get a CLUE as to the damage she had done to the family and her sisters? What became of the American? Lots of questions.
Our story opens ten months after Hunsford. We have a bitter and contrite Darcy still stinging from Elizabeth’s refusal and rebuke. And, he is still in possession of the letter he wrote to her right after her refusal. He attempted to get the letter to her but did not see her before he left Kent. He has kept it hidden and locked in his desk drawer all this time; unable to destroy it, unable to open it and reread it for fear of what he had written. Imagine his surprise when the butler approached carrying a visitor card and said the lady would not leave without seeing him. So, begins our story.
Upshot… WICKHAM… that scumbag rat-bastard has swindled most of Hertfordshire in an annuities scam and her father collapsed under the stress. Elizabeth and her Uncle Gardiner have come to see Mr. Darcy in hopes he can help them find a way to circumvent Wickham’s scam. The militia was due to leave Meryton shortly and they were afraid he would leave the area with the funds. Darcy immediately sent for our dear Colonel Fitzwilliam. Sigh!!! I love our dear Colonel.
Now begins the story of how to catch a thief.
First you get all the information.
Next, you make the thief think he has all your trust.
Then, you make him greedier by giving him another patsy or additional funds.
After that, you start removing his associates. Take them out one at a time when he is not looking.
And while you are undermining his network, locate the counterfeiter, the forger and any other associates that were unfortunate enough to help him.
This was a whirlwind of an adventure. The excitement was throughout the book. We were not long between explosive scenes and it didn’t drag in very many places.
Darcy: such a man in love. I was blown away by his love language whether in thought or in writing. It simply melted my poor heart.
Elizabeth: WTH!!! What the heck was her problem? Dang… I wanted to shake Mrs. Bennet for always putting down [or inflicting emotional abuse to] her least favorite child. That woman had so diminished Elizabeth’s self-worth that she did not know how to believe she was worthy of the love of a good man. After a while it began to grate on my nerves. I wanted to scream…suck it up and get a grip. I could only take so much and poor Darcy could only take rejection so many times. That man deserved an award for perseverance and his tolerance for abuse. I wonder if he has a red room? Oops! Did I say that out loud?
There will be reviews that explain the whole story line…there always are, so I will not do so. I just want readers to know this was a freaking wild ride. Man, it was one adventure after another. One heroic maneuver after another, with strategic planning and use of man-power. We had the militia searching, Colonel Fitzwilliam and his men roaming the country side, Colonel Forster and his men, the Bow Street Runners gathering information, and still Wickham was on the loose. In fact, he pulled such a sneaky get-a-way that I was totally amazed at the author’s creativity. Most JAFF authors have him captured within a paragraph or two and then it’s over. Not so, this was a wide-spread search and rescue, after a selfish and self-centered little girl stuck her nose in the fray. OMG, I wanted to snatch her bald, I was so upset.
Concerns: not what I didn’t like, because I really liked this: There were concerns. As our story was building and starting toward the wind down or dénouement … it felt like the author was planting additional seeds to the conspiracy. For some reason, I picked up or sensed that perhaps there was another person involved… like a master mind. Not that Wickham wasn’t capable of concocting the conspiracy, but that it was out of his normal MO [modus operandi] or method of operation. There were several threads left hanging. Did the author change her mind and forget to go back and remove the seed planting or suggestion? Or was there a mastermind or puppet master behind all the machinations. One who simply used the twisted mind of the revengeful Wickham as a front man? I still feel there was more to this.
****SPOILER**** **** End Spoiler****
There wasn’t an epilogue, so there were many questions left unanswered unless there is a sequel that will answer them later. [????] What about the Lucas family in their determination to have Maria become Mrs. Wickham? Will their overspending compromise the family? How did Mr. Bennet handle Lydia for the next six months? How did Mr. B handle Mrs. B for the next six months? What became of Lydia? Did she ever understand the danger? What about her attitude? Did she ever get a CLUE as to the damage she had done to the family and her sisters? What became of the American? Lots of questions.
November 15, 2016
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
Having read all of Ms. Jeffer's previous P&P variations, I must say this is very different from all the others. It's more like a chess match, with moves and counter-moves to drive the story. Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner, Elizabeth, Mr. Darcy, Mr. Bingley, Colonel Fitzwilliam, and Mr. Bennet team up to thwart Mr. Wickham's scheme to cheat pretty much all of Meryton in a kind of Ponzi-like investment scam. Perhaps a closer comparison than chess would be Mission: Impossible or the current TV show Leverage. Even though you may be tempted to skim through some of the long explanatory passages, you run the risk of missing pertinent information if you do, so take your time and savor it all.
Although the main impetus for the plot is gathering evidence to trap Wickham, there's plenty of romance between Darcy and Elizabeth. This book begins after the marriage proposal at Hunsford. Darcy subsequently wrote his letter but, in this variation, he never actually delivered it to her. Considering that Wickham has proven himself to be an untrustworthy cad, Elizabeth now has only warm feelings for Mr. Darcy but assumes he must despise her because of her rude rejection of his proposal. When her father collapses upon discovering how heavy his financial losses are from his investments with Wickham, Elizabeth comes to London with her uncle and calls on Darcy to throw herself on his mercy, knowing that he's their best hope of finding a solution.
The "bargain" agreed to is that she will marry him if he assists her family and Meryton neighbors to avoid financial ruin. Naturally, Darcy would do anything for her even without her promise to marry him, but he uses it as a bargaining chip, and Elizabeth certainly doesn't mind since she's already figured out that she loves him. (Naturally, since this is a P&P variation, neither one has a clue as to what the other is thinking or feeling!)
The two work together as a formidable team (with several sweet interludes of banter and yearning touches and embraces, etc) and, along with the others, gradually acquire the information they need. Unfortunately, Wickham recognizes that someone is on his trail and he throws up a seemingly insurmountable roadblock.
There's a lot going on here, and at times it's difficult to follow, with all the various characters who are discussed or active in the story. Mr. Parker, Mr. Denny, Mr. Cowan, Colonel Forster, Mr. Webster, Mr. Kiernaugh, Major General Townville, Viscount Stafford... There are more names I could add. Sometimes there's just too much to process. The various dead ends that are followed help to build the suspense, but limiting the storyline to the leads that bear fruit would make it less confusing at times. (I must admit that I often felt the same way watching Mission: Impossible, so maybe others won't find it to be an issue!)
There are also some questions remaining unanswered for the reader, which is uncharacteristic of Ms. Jeffers. I was able to make some educated guesses based on what's in the story but, without confirmation, I'm left wondering whether I'm correct or not.
Lady Catherine is in her usual busybody mode and makes a brief but memorable appearance. Mr. Bingley starts out fine but, by the end, I was happy to see him confronted about what a wishy-washy idiot he is; he doesn't deserve a sweet lady like Jane, IMO. Lydia will make you just want to reach into your book and smack her upside the head. (Thankfully, Mrs. Gardiner will do it for you.)
It all leads to a most satisfactory HEA, of course. Just hang on for a wild ride throughout this adventure-romance.
Having read all of Ms. Jeffer's previous P&P variations, I must say this is very different from all the others. It's more like a chess match, with moves and counter-moves to drive the story. Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner, Elizabeth, Mr. Darcy, Mr. Bingley, Colonel Fitzwilliam, and Mr. Bennet team up to thwart Mr. Wickham's scheme to cheat pretty much all of Meryton in a kind of Ponzi-like investment scam. Perhaps a closer comparison than chess would be Mission: Impossible or the current TV show Leverage. Even though you may be tempted to skim through some of the long explanatory passages, you run the risk of missing pertinent information if you do, so take your time and savor it all.
Although the main impetus for the plot is gathering evidence to trap Wickham, there's plenty of romance between Darcy and Elizabeth. This book begins after the marriage proposal at Hunsford. Darcy subsequently wrote his letter but, in this variation, he never actually delivered it to her. Considering that Wickham has proven himself to be an untrustworthy cad, Elizabeth now has only warm feelings for Mr. Darcy but assumes he must despise her because of her rude rejection of his proposal. When her father collapses upon discovering how heavy his financial losses are from his investments with Wickham, Elizabeth comes to London with her uncle and calls on Darcy to throw herself on his mercy, knowing that he's their best hope of finding a solution.
The "bargain" agreed to is that she will marry him if he assists her family and Meryton neighbors to avoid financial ruin. Naturally, Darcy would do anything for her even without her promise to marry him, but he uses it as a bargaining chip, and Elizabeth certainly doesn't mind since she's already figured out that she loves him. (Naturally, since this is a P&P variation, neither one has a clue as to what the other is thinking or feeling!)
The two work together as a formidable team (with several sweet interludes of banter and yearning touches and embraces, etc) and, along with the others, gradually acquire the information they need. Unfortunately, Wickham recognizes that someone is on his trail and he throws up a seemingly insurmountable roadblock.
There's a lot going on here, and at times it's difficult to follow, with all the various characters who are discussed or active in the story. Mr. Parker, Mr. Denny, Mr. Cowan, Colonel Forster, Mr. Webster, Mr. Kiernaugh, Major General Townville, Viscount Stafford... There are more names I could add. Sometimes there's just too much to process. The various dead ends that are followed help to build the suspense, but limiting the storyline to the leads that bear fruit would make it less confusing at times. (I must admit that I often felt the same way watching Mission: Impossible, so maybe others won't find it to be an issue!)
There are also some questions remaining unanswered for the reader, which is uncharacteristic of Ms. Jeffers. I was able to make some educated guesses based on what's in the story but, without confirmation, I'm left wondering whether I'm correct or not.
Lady Catherine is in her usual busybody mode and makes a brief but memorable appearance. Mr. Bingley starts out fine but, by the end, I was happy to see him confronted about what a wishy-washy idiot he is; he doesn't deserve a sweet lady like Jane, IMO. Lydia will make you just want to reach into your book and smack her upside the head. (Thankfully, Mrs. Gardiner will do it for you.)
It all leads to a most satisfactory HEA, of course. Just hang on for a wild ride throughout this adventure-romance.
July 29, 2023
It's strange that men should take up crime when there are so many legal ways to be dishonest. ~Author unknown
Is anyone surprised to discover that Wickham is a criminal?
In this case, his crimes are financial as well as sexual. Wickham pre-dated Ponzi by 100 years and conned all of Meryton into his “investment”.
Mr. Bennet has been trapped with the others and his suspicions of the scheme caused a heart attack. Elizabeth and Mr. Gardiner travel to London to ask for aid from Mr. Darcy.
I have to agree with J. W. Garrett’s review. I, too, picked up signals that someone other than Wickham was behind the plot. How did Lady Catherine know so much? What happened to Denny?
Lydia’s story also seemed unfinished – did she agree or object to her fate? Was she reformed or still the impossible brat? I personally don’t believe in spanking, especially not in anger. Yet, in Lydia’s case, I always wish Papa Bennet would apply the riding crop where it would do some good. Once again, Lydia’s problem is handled with no consequences to her.
In spite of these flaws, I did enjoy this book very much.
Laws are like cobwebs, which may catch small flies, but let wasps and hornets break through. ~Jonathan Swift, A Critical Essay upon the Faculties of the Mind, 1707
Is anyone surprised to discover that Wickham is a criminal?
In this case, his crimes are financial as well as sexual. Wickham pre-dated Ponzi by 100 years and conned all of Meryton into his “investment”.
Mr. Bennet has been trapped with the others and his suspicions of the scheme caused a heart attack. Elizabeth and Mr. Gardiner travel to London to ask for aid from Mr. Darcy.
I have to agree with J. W. Garrett’s review. I, too, picked up signals that someone other than Wickham was behind the plot. How did Lady Catherine know so much? What happened to Denny?
Lydia’s story also seemed unfinished – did she agree or object to her fate? Was she reformed or still the impossible brat? I personally don’t believe in spanking, especially not in anger. Yet, in Lydia’s case, I always wish Papa Bennet would apply the riding crop where it would do some good. Once again, Lydia’s problem is handled with no consequences to her.
In spite of these flaws, I did enjoy this book very much.
Laws are like cobwebs, which may catch small flies, but let wasps and hornets break through. ~Jonathan Swift, A Critical Essay upon the Faculties of the Mind, 1707
December 31, 2016
Dear Reader,
We all know Wickham to be a charming, clever and charismatic individual,one who is silver tongued,witty,handsome and all persuasive.
But what,dear Reader,do you think would occur if his finely tuned persuasions worked their magic on the fine upstanding citizens of Meryton?
If Wickham successfully duped Mr Bennet, Sir William Lucas and their neighbours into investing their hard earned cash in a money making scheme that promised returns aplenty and profits too numerous to count?
Who would Elizabeth turn to in her direst hour of need,her father recovering from the shock of his and his neighbours' potential and very probable ruination?
What man knew Wickham better than he knew himself,and would said man be willing to see Elizabeth again,some ten months after his disastrous proposal in Kent?
Would he be willing to strike a bargain so intriguing that it would render Elizabeth little choice but to agree to his terms?
This was a fantastic,fast paced,somewhat complex story that was not as straight forward as I initially assumed it would be!
Fraught with complications and peppered with angst,not only were we privy to the machinations involved in catching Wickham, but we also witnessed an elopement,and the oh! so sweet romance that bubbled between a desperate and lovelorn Darcy and a strong,determined and brave Elizabeth.
I loved this action packed and cleverly plotted story and found it quite compelling. Beautifully crafted,I recommend it to all Austen lovers.
We all know Wickham to be a charming, clever and charismatic individual,one who is silver tongued,witty,handsome and all persuasive.
But what,dear Reader,do you think would occur if his finely tuned persuasions worked their magic on the fine upstanding citizens of Meryton?
If Wickham successfully duped Mr Bennet, Sir William Lucas and their neighbours into investing their hard earned cash in a money making scheme that promised returns aplenty and profits too numerous to count?
Who would Elizabeth turn to in her direst hour of need,her father recovering from the shock of his and his neighbours' potential and very probable ruination?
What man knew Wickham better than he knew himself,and would said man be willing to see Elizabeth again,some ten months after his disastrous proposal in Kent?
Would he be willing to strike a bargain so intriguing that it would render Elizabeth little choice but to agree to his terms?
This was a fantastic,fast paced,somewhat complex story that was not as straight forward as I initially assumed it would be!
Fraught with complications and peppered with angst,not only were we privy to the machinations involved in catching Wickham, but we also witnessed an elopement,and the oh! so sweet romance that bubbled between a desperate and lovelorn Darcy and a strong,determined and brave Elizabeth.
I loved this action packed and cleverly plotted story and found it quite compelling. Beautifully crafted,I recommend it to all Austen lovers.
February 5, 2022
Regina Jeffers is a master storyteller and this one does not fail. I had to let my imagination open up a bit to entirely to love this one but in the end it came through.
Second reading: Oh, loved it. :)
Reread: I went with it and Regina did not fail me! Loved it.
Reread: One of my faves. Has Lord Stafford shown up in any other books? I would love a story featuring him.
Reread: Still would love a Lord Stafford romance!!
Second reading: Oh, loved it. :)
Reread: I went with it and Regina did not fail me! Loved it.
Reread: One of my faves. Has Lord Stafford shown up in any other books? I would love a story featuring him.
Reread: Still would love a Lord Stafford romance!!
November 15, 2016
This was a tense drama with two plans of action drawing and keeping my attentions. Like a tennis match my attention was on edge as the evil known as Wickham was able to involve the entire community of Meryton and its surrounds in a plot depriving citizens of hard earned and saved revenue. And then I was heart torn in reading of Darcy's bargain...just when we think he has his life's desire, the lady, knowing where her own love was pledged places his honor and respectability above their joining.
While it is really a big stretch of the imagination to think that everyone could be drawn in...after all has no one learned that if it sounds too good to be true it probably is...just go with it. It sets the stage for Elizabeth in company with her uncle to travel to the Darcy town house and plead for Darcy's help. He sees it as a chance to gain what he has never been able to set aside in his thoughts. He makes a bargain with Elizabeth: his help, her hand.
With Mr. Bennet on what could be his death bed, plans must be very carefully drawn and there are several times when it seems that Wickham must have a fly on the wall as he sniffs out and confronts members of the Bennet family hoping to trip up and find out if they know of his real nature or if they have ceased to be charmed by him.
Sneaking back and forth to London, seeking out forgers, researching background of accomplices, and using sticky fingers to lift the journal of misdeeds...all add up to tense page turning. And in the end, when all is said and done...it still seems as if it is for naught. Stupid, stupid girl!
Mr. Bennet may surprise you...he did me. Usually he is portrayed as a man of sloth and indolence but as he sees his favorite cast away her own happiness he plots a different outcome and takes action to implement such. I was teary eyed but then sighing as we do get our HEA.
While it is really a big stretch of the imagination to think that everyone could be drawn in...after all has no one learned that if it sounds too good to be true it probably is...just go with it. It sets the stage for Elizabeth in company with her uncle to travel to the Darcy town house and plead for Darcy's help. He sees it as a chance to gain what he has never been able to set aside in his thoughts. He makes a bargain with Elizabeth: his help, her hand.
With Mr. Bennet on what could be his death bed, plans must be very carefully drawn and there are several times when it seems that Wickham must have a fly on the wall as he sniffs out and confronts members of the Bennet family hoping to trip up and find out if they know of his real nature or if they have ceased to be charmed by him.
Sneaking back and forth to London, seeking out forgers, researching background of accomplices, and using sticky fingers to lift the journal of misdeeds...all add up to tense page turning. And in the end, when all is said and done...it still seems as if it is for naught. Stupid, stupid girl!
Mr. Bennet may surprise you...he did me. Usually he is portrayed as a man of sloth and indolence but as he sees his favorite cast away her own happiness he plots a different outcome and takes action to implement such. I was teary eyed but then sighing as we do get our HEA.
February 5, 2017
Ms. Jeffers has hit this one out of the park! This was truly a most compelling and well developed vagary of Pride & Prejudice. The story was fascinating, moving and altogether brilliant! Can you tell I loved it?! I couldn't put the book down and had to finish it the same day I started.
Elizabeth Bennet sets aside her pride and humbles herself to ask for Mr. Darcy's help. Mr. Darcy doesn't let such an opportunity slip out of hands. I had to know the honorable but reticent Mr. Darcy would save the day and thwart Wickham's fraud scheme. However, Elizabeth was no slouch either when it came to not only realizing what Wickham was doing, but taking a big part in helping to solve it. The Gardiners play a big role in helping the Bennet's and even Bingley and the Colonel are called in to help. Wickham just oozes charm, but like a snake, leaves a wet cold slimy feeling behind. There are touching scenes between Darcy and Elizabeth that just sparkle and are so emotionally charged. There is a wonderful sparring exchange between Elizabeth and Caroline Bingley at the theatre that you just wanted to applaud! Oh and let's not forget Lydia...stupid, selfish girl! I do like how Mrs. Gardiner dealt with her! One other thing I loved about this book is the cover. I do believe it helps to set the stage.
Elizabeth Bennet sets aside her pride and humbles herself to ask for Mr. Darcy's help. Mr. Darcy doesn't let such an opportunity slip out of hands. I had to know the honorable but reticent Mr. Darcy would save the day and thwart Wickham's fraud scheme. However, Elizabeth was no slouch either when it came to not only realizing what Wickham was doing, but taking a big part in helping to solve it. The Gardiners play a big role in helping the Bennet's and even Bingley and the Colonel are called in to help. Wickham just oozes charm, but like a snake, leaves a wet cold slimy feeling behind. There are touching scenes between Darcy and Elizabeth that just sparkle and are so emotionally charged. There is a wonderful sparring exchange between Elizabeth and Caroline Bingley at the theatre that you just wanted to applaud! Oh and let's not forget Lydia...stupid, selfish girl! I do like how Mrs. Gardiner dealt with her! One other thing I loved about this book is the cover. I do believe it helps to set the stage.
November 16, 2016
I really, really, really liked this unique P&P what if. It was just so wonderful to read a book that kept my interest and kept me guessing for at least 80% that I couldn't give it less than 5 stars. There are a few things I will concede are minor flaws; Lizzy is way too self effacing and a bit of a watering pot.
This is a twist in the tale where following the 'disastrous proposal in Hunsford' Darcy doesn't find Lizzy to hand her the letter, she returns to Meryton unaware of Mr. Wickham's true nature, the militia goes to Brighton and returns with no elopements and she and the Gardiners don't go to Pemberley.
It is now 10 months past Hunsford when Lizzy and Mr. Gardiner arrive on Mr. Darcy's doorstep to plead for his assistance with Wickham. Mr. Wickham has set up confidence scheme involving investments and seems to planning to leave his Meryton investors in the lurch. Taking this from a regular P&P what if to a P&P thriller, mystery, adventure.
The story is clever and fast paced. There are elements of P&P but very little direct quoting. It is delicious.
This is a twist in the tale where following the 'disastrous proposal in Hunsford' Darcy doesn't find Lizzy to hand her the letter, she returns to Meryton unaware of Mr. Wickham's true nature, the militia goes to Brighton and returns with no elopements and she and the Gardiners don't go to Pemberley.
It is now 10 months past Hunsford when Lizzy and Mr. Gardiner arrive on Mr. Darcy's doorstep to plead for his assistance with Wickham. Mr. Wickham has set up confidence scheme involving investments and seems to planning to leave his Meryton investors in the lurch. Taking this from a regular P&P what if to a P&P thriller, mystery, adventure.
The story is clever and fast paced. There are elements of P&P but very little direct quoting. It is delicious.
December 3, 2016
Can a bargain between two headstrong people evolve into a lifetime of happiness?
When Elizabeth Bennet (who never received the letter Darcy wrote to her in Kent) and her Uncle Gardiner show up in London, ten months after Darcy’s failed marriage proposal, asking him for his help, can Elizabeth really expect the gentleman to assist her during her time of need? Once Darcy learns the particulars of her family’s troubles and realizes that there are many people in Meryton affected by her family’s woes, Darcy must decide what’s in it for himself as he plots to best George Wickham against his vicious schemes towards the residents of Meryton. But are Elizabeth and Darcy truly both willing to enter a marriage of “convenience” just to save Bennet’s neighbors from financial ruin? Once Darcy and Elizabeth decide upon the terms of their “bargain,” they set to work together to unravel Wickham’s schemes.
Mr. Darcy’s Bargain is a fast-paced, adventure-filled story that contains a nice mix of romance and intrigue as many of our favorite characters become personally invested in beating Wickham at his nefarious plots. Once Darcy and Mr. Gardiner take the time to survey the situation, plans are set into motion to fool Wickham and recover the thousands of pounds that are at stake between the residents of Meryton. Foolish Mr. Bennet! After placing his own family and friends into a perilous situation, he now has no other recourse but to work in conjunction with Mr. Darcy in an attempt to help him save his reputation in Meryton after his carelessness allowed him to fall for Wickham’s plots. As Elizabeth becomes an intimate part of their operation, Mr. Bennet and Darcy grow weary about allowing her to remain involved in their plans; however, it’s unclear to both of them how they can be successful without Elizabeth’s timely interventions.
Yet, even with the support of friends and family, including Colonel Fitzwilliam and Charles Bingley, things don’t fall neatly into place the way that Darcy and Elizabeth had initially hoped for, and with each one doubting the other’s true intentions, misunderstandings and arguments become all too frequent between the two of them. As tenuously as their bargain began, the nature of their relationship follows a similar course and becomes filled with uncertainty for a happy future together. As both of them seem to grow more stubborn about their true feelings, events unfold that cause them to grow even further apart. Was there ever any real hope that their bargain would bring happiness to either one of them?
Regina Jeffers knows how to write a variation that pulls readers quickly into her plot and makes them cheer for our dear couple from the very first chapter. I loved the clever schemes that Ms. Jeffers put together throughout this story and the wild twists and turns that she throws in along the way that makes the characters work even harder to find solutions to their dilemmas. The story moved at a pretty even pace throughout the book and maintained a moderate amount of angst for the majority of the story.
My only quibble about this story was that there were a few loose ends that I didn’t feel were wrapped up by the end of the book in the manner that I would have liked to see them resolved. I had some questions pertaining to some of the supporting characters and I had wished I would have learned a bit more about their situations by the end of this story.
All in all, Mr. Darcy’s Bargain is an entertaining tale of precarious beginnings, nefarious schemes, and a hard-earned happily-ever-after!
I’d like to thank Ms. Jeffers for providing me with the opportunity to read an eARC of this story for a fair and honest review.
When Elizabeth Bennet (who never received the letter Darcy wrote to her in Kent) and her Uncle Gardiner show up in London, ten months after Darcy’s failed marriage proposal, asking him for his help, can Elizabeth really expect the gentleman to assist her during her time of need? Once Darcy learns the particulars of her family’s troubles and realizes that there are many people in Meryton affected by her family’s woes, Darcy must decide what’s in it for himself as he plots to best George Wickham against his vicious schemes towards the residents of Meryton. But are Elizabeth and Darcy truly both willing to enter a marriage of “convenience” just to save Bennet’s neighbors from financial ruin? Once Darcy and Elizabeth decide upon the terms of their “bargain,” they set to work together to unravel Wickham’s schemes.
Mr. Darcy’s Bargain is a fast-paced, adventure-filled story that contains a nice mix of romance and intrigue as many of our favorite characters become personally invested in beating Wickham at his nefarious plots. Once Darcy and Mr. Gardiner take the time to survey the situation, plans are set into motion to fool Wickham and recover the thousands of pounds that are at stake between the residents of Meryton. Foolish Mr. Bennet! After placing his own family and friends into a perilous situation, he now has no other recourse but to work in conjunction with Mr. Darcy in an attempt to help him save his reputation in Meryton after his carelessness allowed him to fall for Wickham’s plots. As Elizabeth becomes an intimate part of their operation, Mr. Bennet and Darcy grow weary about allowing her to remain involved in their plans; however, it’s unclear to both of them how they can be successful without Elizabeth’s timely interventions.
Yet, even with the support of friends and family, including Colonel Fitzwilliam and Charles Bingley, things don’t fall neatly into place the way that Darcy and Elizabeth had initially hoped for, and with each one doubting the other’s true intentions, misunderstandings and arguments become all too frequent between the two of them. As tenuously as their bargain began, the nature of their relationship follows a similar course and becomes filled with uncertainty for a happy future together. As both of them seem to grow more stubborn about their true feelings, events unfold that cause them to grow even further apart. Was there ever any real hope that their bargain would bring happiness to either one of them?
Regina Jeffers knows how to write a variation that pulls readers quickly into her plot and makes them cheer for our dear couple from the very first chapter. I loved the clever schemes that Ms. Jeffers put together throughout this story and the wild twists and turns that she throws in along the way that makes the characters work even harder to find solutions to their dilemmas. The story moved at a pretty even pace throughout the book and maintained a moderate amount of angst for the majority of the story.
My only quibble about this story was that there were a few loose ends that I didn’t feel were wrapped up by the end of the book in the manner that I would have liked to see them resolved. I had some questions pertaining to some of the supporting characters and I had wished I would have learned a bit more about their situations by the end of this story.
All in all, Mr. Darcy’s Bargain is an entertaining tale of precarious beginnings, nefarious schemes, and a hard-earned happily-ever-after!
I’d like to thank Ms. Jeffers for providing me with the opportunity to read an eARC of this story for a fair and honest review.
September 7, 2021
Great Story
Reviewed in Canada on April 10, 2020
I really enjoyed this variation. Wickham isn’t my favorite in a story, and while he is involved in the plot, he doesn’t overtake the story. I only wished the author would have left some room at the end for a bit of ODC together at last.
Reviewed in Canada on April 10, 2020
I really enjoyed this variation. Wickham isn’t my favorite in a story, and while he is involved in the plot, he doesn’t overtake the story. I only wished the author would have left some room at the end for a bit of ODC together at last.
July 29, 2023
4 solid stars.
Lots of surprises in this one.
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Wickham scams the citizens of Meryton and Elizabeth travels to London with her Uncle Gardiner to ask Darcy to help them.
Great story development here and it’s very original.
Wickham is ultimately brought to justice … and it’s a fatal one for him. Hanged!
Several tense moments but we get a nice HEA eventually.
Lots of surprises in this one.
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Wickham scams the citizens of Meryton and Elizabeth travels to London with her Uncle Gardiner to ask Darcy to help them.
Great story development here and it’s very original.
Wickham is ultimately brought to justice … and it’s a fatal one for him. Hanged!
Several tense moments but we get a nice HEA eventually.
January 18, 2018
Not one of my favorites.
December 28, 2016
I read it in a day! Who needs sleep when there's such an enjoyable read. Just enough angst without it being over the top cheesy. Loved Mrs. Gardner in this version, especially how she kept Mrs. Bennett in line during the scheme against Wickham. She forgot about keeping Lydia in line and of course Lydia didn't disappoint in her part. Loved the ending and Mr. Bennet's role in bringing Lizzie her HEA!
February 27, 2020
I got this as an amazon freebie, and I had to check twice if I got the correct copy, because mine contained many mistakes, editing formating errors and also some serious literary language choice mistakes too... That "detail" seriously detracted from my enjoyment of the story in the first third of the book. The story itself was interesting and I wished it would have been more polished and revised to offer full enjoyment. I read through and the secondary plotline took over and hijacked the main (and satisfyingly familiar) love story, in a way that made me disapprove of the characters for unnecesary angst at the end.
It was an ok read, specially if bargain-engagement is your catnip within the P&P variations>historical>post-Hunsford-scenario specific sub-genre.
It was an ok read, specially if bargain-engagement is your catnip within the P&P variations>historical>post-Hunsford-scenario specific sub-genre.
June 9, 2022
An adventurous variation. Elizabeth seeks Darcy's help when Wickham cons her father and the people of Meryton. Darcy bargains for her hand in marriage as payment. How they trap Wickham, what are the side effects of their scheme forms the story. Fast moving story. There could've been an epilogue with ODC because poor things didn't spend much time together because of Wickham.
October 7, 2017
Re-read 10/6/17
Oddly, I didn't like this book as much the second time around. The language felt overly stiff, and Darcy and Elizabeth alternated being overly sappy and being morons.
Maybe I just wasn't in the mood. Hrm.
Original read 12/6/16
This book was lovely! I've read a few others where crimes were investigated or there was intrigue of some sort, but the twist here is that things were being investigated stealthily before the authorities ever got involved. I really enjoyed seeing Elizabeth, Darcy, the Gardiners, Mr. Bennet, and Mr. Bingley in cahoots to take Wickham down. The secret letters exchanged, Jane unknowingly helping them, Wickham's paranoia--all so much fun. However, I appreciated that Darcy and Elizabeth's story didn't get lost in the weeds of this plot. Since this was set many months after the Hunsford proposal, Elizabeth had already had time to soften to Darcy a bit, but the absence of Darcy's letter left just enough rough edges to their courtship to make it interesting.
4.5 stars rounded up to 5.
Oddly, I didn't like this book as much the second time around. The language felt overly stiff, and Darcy and Elizabeth alternated being overly sappy and being morons.
Maybe I just wasn't in the mood. Hrm.
Original read 12/6/16
This book was lovely! I've read a few others where crimes were investigated or there was intrigue of some sort, but the twist here is that things were being investigated stealthily before the authorities ever got involved. I really enjoyed seeing Elizabeth, Darcy, the Gardiners, Mr. Bennet, and Mr. Bingley in cahoots to take Wickham down. The secret letters exchanged, Jane unknowingly helping them, Wickham's paranoia--all so much fun. However, I appreciated that Darcy and Elizabeth's story didn't get lost in the weeds of this plot. Since this was set many months after the Hunsford proposal, Elizabeth had already had time to soften to Darcy a bit, but the absence of Darcy's letter left just enough rough edges to their courtship to make it interesting.
4.5 stars rounded up to 5.
April 18, 2017
I hate to give books 2 star or below ratings. I try to save 1 star for books I couldn't finish. This came close, but it was a short book, so I was able to finish it. I had two major problems with this book and a bunch of little ones. The first problem I had was that the plot took up the entire book and we hardly saw Darcy and Elizabeth together except briefly for the very beginning and very end. That's it! The plot was so convoluted that I noticed even Ms. Jeffers couldn't keep track of it all and made some who is who/and setting mistakes. The second major issue I had is really an Amazon issue, not a writing issue. I bought this as an ebook for my Kindle from Amazon and the text after the first couple of chapters turns from black to grey! It is SO hard to read! I had to change the font to the darkest that Amazon has available. I have notified Amazon before when I have had a book do this and they say they are going to fix it and then never do, so I didn't even bother to notify Amazon this time.
January 14, 2017
I enjoyed reading this book. Wickham's fraud plot was excellent, and the investigation was well executed. Mr Bennet and the Gardiners were a pleasure to read. And one viscount Stafford was refreshing character. The solution to Lydia's elopement was creative and surprising, and I loved it.
The only quibble I have is Lizzy's persistence in disbelieving Darcy's professed love. But her stubbornness lead to a couple of unusual and funny scenes, like their wedding day. There were a couple of lose ends left, but not with major characters.
4.5 stars for me because of this little quibble.
The only quibble I have is Lizzy's persistence in disbelieving Darcy's professed love. But her stubbornness lead to a couple of unusual and funny scenes, like their wedding day. There were a couple of lose ends left, but not with major characters.
4.5 stars for me because of this little quibble.
February 29, 2020
So this is something a bit different - Darcy left Kent without giving Elizabeth his letter. They have no contact for 10 months until Elizabeth arrives at Darcy House asking for his assistance. Much of the Meryton community has been duped by Wickham in a financial scheme. Darcy agrees to help on this understanding that Elizabeth will agree to marry him. At this point, I wasn't sure I was going to enjoy this story. It seemed quite manipulative on Darcys part. However, with everything that goes on to happen, I found I could go with it.
It's quite a long book - a lot happens so it held my interest but now I've finished it, I'm left feeling a bit dissatisfied. There are a lot of unanswered questions - especially about Jane and Mr Bingley. Also Elizabeth really started to get on my nerves. She just seemed to find more and ways to be difficult and obstructive... even at the very end she was still doing it!! I didn't really like the end of this book. It was brave and different, definitely unique - but I didn't like it.
Overall, this is something different but Elizabeth's behaviour ended up being pretty annoying. I felt a lot of the threads of the story weren't really concluded which is a shame.
It's quite a long book - a lot happens so it held my interest but now I've finished it, I'm left feeling a bit dissatisfied. There are a lot of unanswered questions - especially about Jane and Mr Bingley. Also Elizabeth really started to get on my nerves. She just seemed to find more and ways to be difficult and obstructive... even at the very end she was still doing it!! I didn't really like the end of this book. It was brave and different, definitely unique - but I didn't like it.
Overall, this is something different but Elizabeth's behaviour ended up being pretty annoying. I felt a lot of the threads of the story weren't really concluded which is a shame.
May 25, 2020
Very exciting book! Lots of twists and turns and excellent recoveries that are plausible. (I hate it when authors have implausible plot points and want you to suspend your concept of reality!) The odd non-Regency word, but I'm fussy. I thought it was weird when the Bennet sisters referred to their parents as Mr. Bennet and Mrs. Bennet some of the time, but adjusted to the anomaly. The core love story was fantastic! Wow! This is much better than a previous Regina Jeffers book I read, and I almost didn't read it. I think that since she puts out so many novels, she's allowed to have great ones and the odd miss. This is the former. Definitely recommended.
As usual, I present my conflict of interest statement: I'm also a JAFF writer, but when I review books, I am impartial and honest.
As usual, I present my conflict of interest statement: I'm also a JAFF writer, but when I review books, I am impartial and honest.
February 9, 2017
Elizabeth and her uncle Gardiner show up on Darcy's London doorstep to seek his help. Wickham is swindling the citizens of Meryton of their well earned money In a fake investment. Elizabeth comes to Darcy knowing he has a past with him and has come to see beyond wickhams charms and Darcy's integrity. Darcy is still wounded over Elizabeth's refusal of marriage 10 months earlier and wants her for himself so he makes her a bargain - his help for her hand in marriage. Elizabeth agrees and here starts an interesting investigation into wickhams scheme and the hearts of both of our characters. I loved Darcy in this novel. The path to love for these two chapters doesn't run smoothly so it takes others to help them along their way. Clean romance with intrigue - a good read!
August 18, 2017
A variation of Austen's Pride and Prejudice, Mr. Darcy's Bargain starts with Elizabeth and Mr. Gardiner on Darcy's London doorstep about ten months after her rejection at Hunsford. They request his help in trapping George Wickham who has apparently tricked Mr. Bennet and the good people of Meryton with a "get-rich-quick" investment scheme. The stress upon suspecting that Wickham is not on the "up-and-up" has caused Mr. Bennet to have a heart attack.
Darcy agrees to assist with entrapping Wickham . . .in exchange for Elizabeth's acquiescence to a renewal of his proposal. With her father ill and the citizens of Meryton, including her own family, facing ruin, Elizabeth agrees to Darcy's bargain.
But the scheme is far more detailed and deep than anyone suspected. Will Darcy find solid evidence of Wickham's trickery, and if he does not, will Elizabeth uphold her part of the bargain?
A complex and highly entertaining Austen variation. Regina Jeffers never fails to please!
Darcy agrees to assist with entrapping Wickham . . .in exchange for Elizabeth's acquiescence to a renewal of his proposal. With her father ill and the citizens of Meryton, including her own family, facing ruin, Elizabeth agrees to Darcy's bargain.
But the scheme is far more detailed and deep than anyone suspected. Will Darcy find solid evidence of Wickham's trickery, and if he does not, will Elizabeth uphold her part of the bargain?
A complex and highly entertaining Austen variation. Regina Jeffers never fails to please!
March 1, 2020
Another story where Lizzie fights as hard as she can to not marry Darcy
Seems to be a preponderance of stories lately where Lizzie fights as hard as she can to not be married. It’s an odd outlook for authors to adore.
P&P is really a Cinderella story. As soon as her Prince Charming gets some manners, she is anxious to love him. But the plot that she is almost shrew-like isn’t really how she is in P&P.
This is a good story, she just fights to hard to find reasons not to marry.
Seems to be a preponderance of stories lately where Lizzie fights as hard as she can to not be married. It’s an odd outlook for authors to adore.
P&P is really a Cinderella story. As soon as her Prince Charming gets some manners, she is anxious to love him. But the plot that she is almost shrew-like isn’t really how she is in P&P.
This is a good story, she just fights to hard to find reasons not to marry.
July 7, 2018
The bargain was very entertaining! It had the traditional clean, sweet romance of the original P&P, but added more intrigue and danger involving Wickham. This story had more of Mr Darcy and his love for Elizabeth. Recommend for any avid fan of Darcy and Elizabeth.
January 15, 2018
Another wonderful vagary of P&P! The author has set it up so that Lizzie, along with her Uncle Gardiner, must seek Mr. Darcy's help to thwart Mr. Wickham in his current scheme. Darcy will help them but in return Elizabeth must agree to marry him. She does agree to wed him. She also blames herself for not sharing with others what Mr. Darcy had confided to her about Wickham when last they spoke. Nor had Darcy sent the letter he wrote after he had proposed to her at Rosings. I enjoyed Elizabeth allowing herself to fall in love with Darcy and reading more of her aunt and uncle Gardiner. The plan to foil Wickham seemed plausible and Lydia seemed like old fifteen year old Lydia. Jane and Bingly act as I would expect them to act. I also enjoyed Lady Catherine's visit to warn off Elizabeth and it seemed familiar to me. Loved that. If you love P&P and the vagaries that abound, you'll love this one.
January 13, 2020
Thank you Regina Jeffers for a was inspiring version. The change made the reality of given the opportunity of getting an education and being raised as though George And mom was treated like he was a son .every other author never posed him as. Capable of earning a living . Darcy had more to be hurt by his lack of disregard of all his father had done for George. Ms. Jeffers shows his intelligence by having him dupe at least one diplomat. This is a must read for all P and P fans . In this day and age a man would not hung for a crime of this nature but his jail time might be a little harsh. So be it. justice, t his
Is the only way for hit to really regret his ways. A little more about Lydia could have been added . She just seem to have faded into the woodwork.
Is the only way for hit to really regret his ways. A little more about Lydia could have been added . She just seem to have faded into the woodwork.
November 22, 2023
I have no words how happy it made me when EB finally defends herself after enduring numerous set downs and not so thinly veiled insults from CB.
"Anger turned Miss Bingley’s cheeks a harsh red. “Obstinacy will prove your downfall!”
“Mayhap,” Elizabeth declared with a triumphant lift of her chin. “But it is my experience men of Mr. Darcy’s ilk take what they want. You have held the gentleman’s acquaintance for some three years, and he has yet to ‘take’ what you offer.” With a nod of dismissal, Elizabeth strode away..."
Jeffers, Regina; Lady, A. Mr. Darcy's Bargain: A Pride and Prejudice Vagary (p. 30). Kindle Edition.
"Anger turned Miss Bingley’s cheeks a harsh red. “Obstinacy will prove your downfall!”
“Mayhap,” Elizabeth declared with a triumphant lift of her chin. “But it is my experience men of Mr. Darcy’s ilk take what they want. You have held the gentleman’s acquaintance for some three years, and he has yet to ‘take’ what you offer.” With a nod of dismissal, Elizabeth strode away..."
Jeffers, Regina; Lady, A. Mr. Darcy's Bargain: A Pride and Prejudice Vagary (p. 30). Kindle Edition.
February 27, 2020
Pretty good.
I don't write the plots in my reviews, as the books have them.
It was a bit convoluted in areas. An interesting plot that went on a bit too long in some areas and not long enough in others.
Some may not like the idea (it seems) Elizabeth and Lydia are forced to get married.
*SPOILER* If Wickham is a favorite, he doesn't live.
The ending felt a bit tacked on and rushed.
However, I'm keeping it and will probably read again.
I don't remember if it was free or .99, either way it's worth it.
I don't write the plots in my reviews, as the books have them.
It was a bit convoluted in areas. An interesting plot that went on a bit too long in some areas and not long enough in others.
Some may not like the idea (it seems) Elizabeth and Lydia are forced to get married.
*SPOILER* If Wickham is a favorite, he doesn't live.
The ending felt a bit tacked on and rushed.
However, I'm keeping it and will probably read again.
I don't remember if it was free or .99, either way it's worth it.
March 9, 2020
Good. Not a fan of Woe is Me Elizabeth and too much Wickham
The book is okay, but not for me. It is rare for me to truly enjoy a book with Wickham as a main character. The same goes for a spoiled Elizabeth. Elizabeth wants Darcy to spill his heart out to her just so she can keep silent. She refuses him AGAIN and then ask him a litany of questions so he can proof himself to her... Keep in mind she hasn't confessed her love for him. She says things to him she doesn't mean and the cries about it when she is alone. Frustrating!
The book is okay, but not for me. It is rare for me to truly enjoy a book with Wickham as a main character. The same goes for a spoiled Elizabeth. Elizabeth wants Darcy to spill his heart out to her just so she can keep silent. She refuses him AGAIN and then ask him a litany of questions so he can proof himself to her... Keep in mind she hasn't confessed her love for him. She says things to him she doesn't mean and the cries about it when she is alone. Frustrating!
August 13, 2018
Don't like it
I did not like her Darcy, don't believe Darcy should make a bargain like that. I don't like her Elizabeth when she decides for him, don't like the way he responds then either. Bingley needed to grow a pair, as well. So best part was lack of to much Mess Bennet. Did not care for the English used either. "Take" instead of "make", for example. Don't know if it was on purpose or die to pr editing.
I did not like her Darcy, don't believe Darcy should make a bargain like that. I don't like her Elizabeth when she decides for him, don't like the way he responds then either. Bingley needed to grow a pair, as well. So best part was lack of to much Mess Bennet. Did not care for the English used either. "Take" instead of "make", for example. Don't know if it was on purpose or die to pr editing.
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