I'm a bit past 50% through the book now and it's finally starting to pick up, but I wanted to mention the first half of the book now before I forget.
Nothing really happens the entire first half of the book. Like seriously. We learn that Evelyn works at a strip club to put herself through grad school. (I could have done without the strip club scene, though it wasn't raunchy.) Then she travels to Scotland to help her best friend Piper who inherited her like great-grandmother's estate and her billions, who is having an problem so dire that she flies her friend out the next day without even letting her make arrangements with her work and schooling, essentially. And then when she gets there, they don't really do anything.
It's hard to tell how much time is passing, but considering there is a displaced highlander in Piper's castle who may or may not be a murderer, they spend a hell of a lot of time eating, sleeping, talking about how exhausted they are, crying for no reason I could distinguish (and I'm sort of a cry baby, but emotions just didn't seem high AT ALL when the ladies take turns having cry fests), and sitting around reading irrelevant documents. Oh and discussing how time travel books could maybe have been true stories the authors published as fiction. Because that's the real reason Evelyn was brought over: because she's an "expert" in time travel books... cuz that's a good enough reason to bring her into the story... That doesn't seem like a contrived reason to have her meet Sam AT ALL!
Oh, and Piper seems to be falling in love with the highlander (who I was still suspicious was a murderer, remember) , Lachlan, but because this takes place off screen, the reader can't really grasp the emotion of the romance... which I really WANT to, because I love highlanders, but I can't due to the way it's written. It just sort of pops up randomly and suddenly with no explanation. If it's meant to be a double love story, we need scenes from Evelyn's AND Piper's points of view!!
O... K.... Finished the book today... Did you know that the way to determine whether or not a guy is The One is to ask him if he's ever been to a strip club? If he says "no," he's The One! Because apparently these guys are so rare... Yeah, I don't even know. I agree that step clubs are awful and I'd never have dreamed of marrying a guy who went to those places, but that's your ONLY criterion? Except that when she "confesses" about her job, you can tell he thinks it's sexy she might be a stripper... And I don't see how that's any better... Whatever! Oh, and Evelyn and Sam go back in time to sleep together... That was pretty much the only purpose as far as I could tell...
And Piper sleeps with Lachlan (with no objection from him AT ALL ... Though if he somehow magically loves her, he should have at least given a token's protest about propriety) after he killed someone with an axe and is covered in blood... And not even shower sex... Sex outside in the freezing cold on the ground behind a shrubbery. Mmmm... Sexy! Freezing cold outdoor bloody sex has always been a favorite of mine, too! *barfs* I still don't even understand how they've managed to fall in love in the first place. Seems awfully random to me!
Overall the writing was just so meh with the emphasis in all the wrong places (sleeping, eating, etc, see above and not on important things like relationship development or a good reason why any of this crap was happening in the first place...). If Ms. Cayman had an editor, she needs to find a new one who isn't related to her and who will give actual honest feedback about writing, pacing, plot, and character development and not just, "Squeeeee! I love Lachlan! He's soooo hawt!"
Also I read a few spoilers about future books. Wow. SOOOOO NOT INTERESTED!!!