I struggled with this book. It was poorly written and needed a good editor; for example, there were a lot of sentences where the opening phrase didn’t modify the subject of the sentence, thus causing a huge drop in clarity (e.g. “At twenty-two years old, her parents must have been...” — but her parents aren’t 22, she is).
I also found it hard to really like or understand the narrator when he made so many irresponsible decisions, in some cases hurtful ones, and generally didn’t show a lot of character other than persistence. For example, he lies about being late for his own wedding in order to get on a flight, then says “Who says lying doesn’t pay?” It was gross, not funny. He also really does not give enough credence to his second wife’s fear of him going back to Everest. When they were arguing about whether he should go back, he described her attitude as “defiance” multiple times, not seeing that she had really good points about how he might leave his kids without a dad. She seemed more like an obstacle than a beloved partner in his mind. At the very end of the book, even after he had *promised* her the second try would be it no matter what, he still leaves it open whether he’d try again.
I also got tired of the fact that he kept quoting all these comments people put on his Facebook posts. They were meaningful to him but won’t be for the typical reader, so I don’t think it was a good choice as a writer to fill out the book with Facebook comments.
The best part was when he wrote about actually hiking up to and being on the mountain.