Where to start.... this book was poorly written with run on sentences, poor grammar and told as if you were sitting on some old relatives knee, but not in a good way. It is very repetitive in it's descriptions and narrative. There are pictures throughout which was a terrible addition. The story itself is boring, unoriginal because of the writing. More practice writing and editing with this and it just might be a decent scare. It gives off the feel that a middle school kid wrote it (mind you it is not appropriate for children) and submitted it for publication on their lunch period.