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The Wings of War #2
The Warring Son
Raz i'Syul Arro is a hunted man. To the south, the Mahsadën of Miropa are gone. The šef lay dead, slain at Raz's own hands, their cruel will ripped from the shadows of the city. In response, riders careen to every reachable corner of the known realms, telling anyone with a mind to listen of the boundless riches promised for the Monster's head. The world now turned against him, Raz is forced to flee, escaping along the northern roads just as the summer months come to an end. For a time the coolness and breathtaking verdure of the great rolling woodlands he finds himself in are a welcome change, offering a sublime peace from a life that has rarely known more than brutality and bloodshed.
But that peace - as is so often the case - is a shallow trickery. The North, it seems, is not far-gone from the corruption and wickedness Raz had hoped to leave behind in the fringe cities. Before long he finds himself embroiled in the savage politics of this new land, forced to play a part in the ugly game of intrigue and violence once more. To survive, Raz must again give way to the Monster, making his stand within the devouring walls of the cruel coliseum the Northerners call simply "the Arena".
Blood, after all, freezes as hard and cold as anything else.
But that peace - as is so often the case - is a shallow trickery. The North, it seems, is not far-gone from the corruption and wickedness Raz had hoped to leave behind in the fringe cities. Before long he finds himself embroiled in the savage politics of this new land, forced to play a part in the ugly game of intrigue and violence once more. To survive, Raz must again give way to the Monster, making his stand within the devouring walls of the cruel coliseum the Northerners call simply "the Arena".
Blood, after all, freezes as hard and cold as anything else.
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First published November 29, 2016
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December 5, 2018
The Warring Son
By: Bryce O'Connor
Narrated by: Mikael Naramore
This is a great follow up from book one! From the very beginning I was hooked, just like the first book! There is a lot of battles and fighting going on..a lot of corruption in the control of the government that leads to terrible laws. Our dear hero is trying to help the people but finds them blood thirsty. Great narration also.Wonderful performance!
By: Bryce O'Connor
Narrated by: Mikael Naramore
This is a great follow up from book one! From the very beginning I was hooked, just like the first book! There is a lot of battles and fighting going on..a lot of corruption in the control of the government that leads to terrible laws. Our dear hero is trying to help the people but finds them blood thirsty. Great narration also.Wonderful performance!
February 28, 2017
Woof! I couldn't even finish this. The light tone of the first book continues into the sequel to ill effect.
The first book was so fun and interesting that I didn't mind that the characters lacked depth or that their arches defied logic but in the back of my mind I hoped that some of that insight would be introduced in the sequel. No such luck. THE WARRING SON is one of the worst sequels I've read since WORLD'S EDGE which suffered from a similar problem.
The characters were so shallow and the tone was so light that the story came off as frivolous and muddled. About half way through I was lost and I just didn't care.
RECOMENDATION: Read the first book as a one-off and skip the sequel. NOT RECOMMENDED.
The first book was so fun and interesting that I didn't mind that the characters lacked depth or that their arches defied logic but in the back of my mind I hoped that some of that insight would be introduced in the sequel. No such luck. THE WARRING SON is one of the worst sequels I've read since WORLD'S EDGE which suffered from a similar problem.
The characters were so shallow and the tone was so light that the story came off as frivolous and muddled. About half way through I was lost and I just didn't care.
RECOMENDATION: Read the first book as a one-off and skip the sequel. NOT RECOMMENDED.
April 9, 2017
Buddy read with Shari Kay
Thanks Shari! It was so much fun to read this with you. I can't wait until June when book 3 comes out. Hope we can read it together! I already pre-ordered it! (I am buying them all so I can re read one day).
4.5 stars
My half-assed summary
The book picks up with Raz in the woods. The freeze is soon approaching. He is lost wandering North when he comes across Lueski who asks him for help to save her brother.
Of course Raz does it and then starts to plan how he can clear the names of his newfound friends and find shelter in Azbar the nearest town. (Being a lizard he doesn't tolerate the cold as well as humans).
So Raz comes up with what I thought was a good plan which not only clears his friends names, but also provides relief to the townfolks of Azbar in two ways. 1. Providing money as he fights in the pits, and 2. saves the residents from being chosen to fight in the pits.
The added benefit is that Raz gets to kill a bunch of rotten people who desevre it in the process.
Yadda yadda...Raz gets very attached to his new friends especially little Lueski, he now can't figure out how to stop fighting in the pits...and he meets up with Talo and Carro who give him much to think on.
While back at the citadel, Syrah finds out the mountain men have prepared for war, breaking their treaty, and decimated two Northern towns, brutally killing or enslaving all those within. She sends for Talo and Carro to return North.
My thoughts:
I really liked it. My problem is that I wanted to see more of Syrah and the goings on at the citadel. I wanted more magic too. AND I am still wondering about the witch bitch back in Karth..what is she up to? I also want to see Raz learn to use his wings more..AND I want to see what his people, his mother, are doing!
I felt there was too much about the pit fighting..not that I didn't enjoy it..but I really wanted to get to the meat of the story.. OK I get it..bad rulers..corrupt rulers.. but a whole book of it?
Maybe I am just too impatient.
There was alot of intense momments..but some were predictable.
As Shari pointed out to me, there were some rare instances of modern dialogue used. That is usually a big pet peeve of mine..but it honestly didn't bother me. The F word, and other modern profanity used in fantasy is sometimes jarring, as it was here, but there were also some phrases used a time or two that were definately out of place/time. It didn't bother me as much as my reading buddy Shari..who pointed it out to me. Good catch Shari!
All in all I liked the book, and I know from experience the second books are never as great as the first. I suspect book 3 will be better, but I don't see the story wrapping up in 3 books. I Suspect this will go on for at least and one or two more after. I hope so!
Great writing, great world building, and 3 dimensional characters.
BRAVO!! to the author.
Content: Blood gore. Graphic violence. Torture. No sex, but there is a sensual scene with Syrah and Reyn in the beginning. No details.
Thanks Shari! It was so much fun to read this with you. I can't wait until June when book 3 comes out. Hope we can read it together! I already pre-ordered it! (I am buying them all so I can re read one day).
4.5 stars
My half-assed summary
The book picks up with Raz in the woods. The freeze is soon approaching. He is lost wandering North when he comes across Lueski who asks him for help to save her brother.
Of course Raz does it and then starts to plan how he can clear the names of his newfound friends and find shelter in Azbar the nearest town. (Being a lizard he doesn't tolerate the cold as well as humans).
So Raz comes up with what I thought was a good plan which not only clears his friends names, but also provides relief to the townfolks of Azbar in two ways. 1. Providing money as he fights in the pits, and 2. saves the residents from being chosen to fight in the pits.
The added benefit is that Raz gets to kill a bunch of rotten people who desevre it in the process.
Yadda yadda...Raz gets very attached to his new friends especially little Lueski, he now can't figure out how to stop fighting in the pits...and he meets up with Talo and Carro who give him much to think on.
While back at the citadel, Syrah finds out the mountain men have prepared for war, breaking their treaty, and decimated two Northern towns, brutally killing or enslaving all those within. She sends for Talo and Carro to return North.
My thoughts:
I really liked it. My problem is that I wanted to see more of Syrah and the goings on at the citadel. I wanted more magic too. AND I am still wondering about the witch bitch back in Karth..what is she up to? I also want to see Raz learn to use his wings more..AND I want to see what his people, his mother, are doing!
I felt there was too much about the pit fighting..not that I didn't enjoy it..but I really wanted to get to the meat of the story.. OK I get it..bad rulers..corrupt rulers.. but a whole book of it?
Maybe I am just too impatient.
There was alot of intense momments..but some were predictable.
As Shari pointed out to me, there were some rare instances of modern dialogue used. That is usually a big pet peeve of mine..but it honestly didn't bother me. The F word, and other modern profanity used in fantasy is sometimes jarring, as it was here, but there were also some phrases used a time or two that were definately out of place/time. It didn't bother me as much as my reading buddy Shari..who pointed it out to me. Good catch Shari!
All in all I liked the book, and I know from experience the second books are never as great as the first. I suspect book 3 will be better, but I don't see the story wrapping up in 3 books. I Suspect this will go on for at least and one or two more after. I hope so!
Great writing, great world building, and 3 dimensional characters.
BRAVO!! to the author.
Content: Blood gore. Graphic violence. Torture. No sex, but there is a sensual scene with Syrah and Reyn in the beginning. No details.
December 7, 2017
Unnecessarily graphic, December 6, 2017
This review is from: The Warring Son (The Wings of War Book 2) (Kindle Edition)
The writing itself is better in this volume than it was in volume one. The story, however, is just not that good. SPOilERS OR CALL IT WARNINGS AS YOU CHOOSE: The accounts of Raz and his activities are little more than a roll call of graphic violence, torture, mayhem, evil and tragedy. There is even torture and murder of children with details which I did not need to know in order to follow the action. The Laorin priests continue to be an almost ineffectual group. The priestess Syarh is not a particularly interesting character despite learning of her sex life. That and the homosexual pairing of two other main characters seems almost entirely gratuitous, adding nothing to the plot and little to character development. By adding nothing to the plot, I mean that their sexual preferences do not affect their actions in the story in any way. Another thing which I regard as a problem is the ending. We are left with Raz facing an attack by a wolfpack. See next volume for the outcome. All of this aside, the book does move along at a rapid and suspenseful pace, so three stars instead of two.
This review is from: The Warring Son (The Wings of War Book 2) (Kindle Edition)
The writing itself is better in this volume than it was in volume one. The story, however, is just not that good. SPOilERS OR CALL IT WARNINGS AS YOU CHOOSE: The accounts of Raz and his activities are little more than a roll call of graphic violence, torture, mayhem, evil and tragedy. There is even torture and murder of children with details which I did not need to know in order to follow the action. The Laorin priests continue to be an almost ineffectual group. The priestess Syarh is not a particularly interesting character despite learning of her sex life. That and the homosexual pairing of two other main characters seems almost entirely gratuitous, adding nothing to the plot and little to character development. By adding nothing to the plot, I mean that their sexual preferences do not affect their actions in the story in any way. Another thing which I regard as a problem is the ending. We are left with Raz facing an attack by a wolfpack. See next volume for the outcome. All of this aside, the book does move along at a rapid and suspenseful pace, so three stars instead of two.
April 7, 2020
Unlike the last book, this was much closer to a 4 than a 3. I was very happy to return to the world of buff lizard daddy, despite the issues in the first book.
As for this book, the plot structure was stronger, but the pacing and scene density still needed a lot of work. There were entire chapters devoted to conveying that a single character had a minor realization, and giving it a ton of fluff and padding that wasn't necessary to progress the plot. The grammar was better. It seemed like the editing jumped up a level in quality. There were less instances of all-caps dialogue which was a massive pet peeve in the last book for me. I liked the new characters, especially the Doctore. We didn't see enough interaction with Tern, but he was a decent Villain. I really wish that we had less scenes of Tern thinking to himself, and more of him actually talking to Raz and providing actual back and forth push and pull between them.
One funny think I'm finding is that, as Bryce doesn't seem to be an unrepentant furry like me who wants nothing more than to swoon in Raz's scaly arms, he fridges characters in an unusual way. In 90% of fantasy, you'll have the main character get their motivation by raping or killing a significant other (usually a woman, because fantasy has traditionally been quite sexist, using female trauma to fuel male heroism) or by killing their family. In The Wings of War, however, Raz collects orphans to be murdered by bad guys. That's what gives him the push for revenge. Well, they're only murdered if nothing terrible has happened to them yet. If they've already gone through something terrible, he sends them off into the night never to be seen again and uses their trauma to fuel his brooding.
In summation, A++ would be Raz's little spoon cuddled next to a campfire surrounded by four feet of snow.
As for this book, the plot structure was stronger, but the pacing and scene density still needed a lot of work. There were entire chapters devoted to conveying that a single character had a minor realization, and giving it a ton of fluff and padding that wasn't necessary to progress the plot. The grammar was better. It seemed like the editing jumped up a level in quality. There were less instances of all-caps dialogue which was a massive pet peeve in the last book for me. I liked the new characters, especially the Doctore. We didn't see enough interaction with Tern, but he was a decent Villain. I really wish that we had less scenes of Tern thinking to himself, and more of him actually talking to Raz and providing actual back and forth push and pull between them.
One funny think I'm finding is that, as Bryce doesn't seem to be an unrepentant furry like me who wants nothing more than to swoon in Raz's scaly arms, he fridges characters in an unusual way. In 90% of fantasy, you'll have the main character get their motivation by raping or killing a significant other (usually a woman, because fantasy has traditionally been quite sexist, using female trauma to fuel male heroism) or by killing their family. In The Wings of War, however, Raz collects orphans to be murdered by bad guys. That's what gives him the push for revenge. Well, they're only murdered if nothing terrible has happened to them yet. If they've already gone through something terrible, he sends them off into the night never to be seen again and uses their trauma to fuel his brooding.
In summation, A++ would be Raz's little spoon cuddled next to a campfire surrounded by four feet of snow.
June 11, 2017
A Decisive Continuation That Further Shapes The Series
The Warring Son is the second chapter in the now-running Wings of War fantasy series. The sequel to Bryce O'Connor's debut novel, Child of the Daystar, expands upon every element of the series, bringing more world building, more character development, and more riveting action, as we further explore the story and ordeals of Raz i'Syul Arro, the bitter atherian anti-hero, and the people he meets during his crusade for justice and freedom.
Yet, as I did in my previous review, before heartily recommending it, I shall delve a bit deeper into the novel and its inner workings.
FAIR WARNING: This review assumes that the reader is already familiar with the previous book of the series, Child of the Daystar . If not, please go ahead and take the time to familiarize with my review of it; a lot of the finer details about the story and the characters will be lost if you are planning on reading The Warring Son as a stand-alone book.
Setting
The first thing that is immediately apparent in the sequel is the change of location - gone are the sand dunes and oases of the blazing-hot South; instead, the story unfolds amidst the high mountains and thick evergreen forests of the artic-cold North. Again, this is only the larger backdrop; the exact place where the majority of events develop are in the great city of Azbar, which to all intents and purposes serves the same role in the story, as did its counterpart, Miropa. However, this duality is what makes the book fresh and different setting-wise – the juxtaposition between the two cityscapes. Azbar, with its solid timber houses and snow-laden streets makes a vivid contrast to Miropa's dusty alleys and sun-scorched slums. Even though the two metropolises are fundamentally equal in form and function, each of them has a distinct personality of their own.
And that is an important aspect of the book, since it makes the reader that much more dismayed when they discover the darkness of human nature, which plagues the South, is also present in the North.
Characters
The Warring Son is as much character-driven as the first book, and again, author Bryce O'Connor has done a fantastic job when it comes to portraying the individuals who move the plot, and their complex interactions. Everybody, from the protagonists, to the most minor extra, feels as a complete person with their own wants, dreams, fears and everyday thoughts. The dialogue between characters is superb, and in several instances, downright inspiring. The emotions the characters experience are vividly described and feel absolutely spot-on. When it comes to writing imaginary people, Mr. O'Connor shows real talent that few authors have exhibited in recent years.
Again, the majority of the plot revolves around Raz i'Syul Arro, the main character of the series. The towering amber-eyed atherian mercenary with a chip on his shoulder for any evil-doer is a savage, poignant, and conflicted person as always, and the sequel further reinforces those traits. Given how he continues to dispense justice in the "ultimate manner", Raz also seems to be shaping up into a far darker, fantasy version of Lee Child's Jack Reacher, which in my opinion is not a bad thing; on the contrary, I've been itching for just such a character in speculative fiction for a long time, and this is yet another reason why I find this series so refreshing.
There are several new important characters, as well as a couple of new villains, one of which doesn't survive in the end. (Somewhat predictably.) Old characters also make an appearance, particularly Talo Brahnt, who gets a healthy dose of background development, and, in an ironic twist of events, this time he is the one who plays a pivotal role in Raz' life. Syrah also makes an appearance, albeit a brief one, mainly to underline the rise of one of the antagonists.
Overall, it seems that living the consequences of one's choices in both past and present is going to be a recurring theme in the series.
Finally, we also get another singular chapter involving Queen Shas-hana Rhan and the glacially-advancing story arc about the secret atherian society in the mysterious Under Caves.
Story
The plot of the novel unfolds differently than the previous book. This time the events take place only in the span of a couple of months, instead in three large periods spanning two decades. The story's pacing hasn't suffered because of this change, so it has retained its flowing quality, though this does make it drag ever-so-slightly in a few places.
What's notable, is that the narrative has also retained its grim tone, which gets considerably darker towards the end. The author makes some hints at a good outcome in the end of the series, but for those who were expecting The Warring Son to be less harsh than the first book, think again. I won't spoil the gist of it, but suffice to say that the cruel plot twist came in the least expected moment, at least for me. However, it does heighten the drama considerably, and, if used well in the future books, can lead to some very breath-taking turning points.
However, in order to be completely honest, I should point out that while reading, there were some parts during which I felt the novel was slightly rushed. Nothing major, but I do hope Mr. O'Connor takes notice and spends a bit more time in the future while working on his next projects, in order for us readers to have an even greater experience.
Overall, the novel was again a riveting read, one I covered in only three sittings, and would've done it faster, if I had the time. Despite the few blemishes, again all the main draws are here: the awesome, conflicted, non-human main character, the rich and complex cast of supporting characters, the solid plot, and the still new and yet-with-places-to-explore setting.
Conclusion
The Warring Son continues exactly where Child of the Daystar left off: in a world full of despair and shattered societies, a few brave souls try to make a difference, sacrificing much in the singular belief of giving everyone a chance for better future. If the series continue in this direction, it will make for a fine saga about the triumph of hope over fear, and the courage and strength for one to find inside despite the horrors they have faced. As I have stated in my previous review, I will follow The Wings of War series with great interest; because there is certainly much promise in it, and because Bryce O'Connor has every potential to turn into the next best-selling author.
For those of you who are already hooked, I can assure you this book delivers. For those who have just stumbled upon this humble review, I say to get the previous book. Then come here again and relish in the gritty, inspiring, deep world that is The Warring Son.
The Warring Son is the second chapter in the now-running Wings of War fantasy series. The sequel to Bryce O'Connor's debut novel, Child of the Daystar, expands upon every element of the series, bringing more world building, more character development, and more riveting action, as we further explore the story and ordeals of Raz i'Syul Arro, the bitter atherian anti-hero, and the people he meets during his crusade for justice and freedom.
Yet, as I did in my previous review, before heartily recommending it, I shall delve a bit deeper into the novel and its inner workings.
FAIR WARNING: This review assumes that the reader is already familiar with the previous book of the series, Child of the Daystar . If not, please go ahead and take the time to familiarize with my review of it; a lot of the finer details about the story and the characters will be lost if you are planning on reading The Warring Son as a stand-alone book.
Setting
The first thing that is immediately apparent in the sequel is the change of location - gone are the sand dunes and oases of the blazing-hot South; instead, the story unfolds amidst the high mountains and thick evergreen forests of the artic-cold North. Again, this is only the larger backdrop; the exact place where the majority of events develop are in the great city of Azbar, which to all intents and purposes serves the same role in the story, as did its counterpart, Miropa. However, this duality is what makes the book fresh and different setting-wise – the juxtaposition between the two cityscapes. Azbar, with its solid timber houses and snow-laden streets makes a vivid contrast to Miropa's dusty alleys and sun-scorched slums. Even though the two metropolises are fundamentally equal in form and function, each of them has a distinct personality of their own.
And that is an important aspect of the book, since it makes the reader that much more dismayed when they discover the darkness of human nature, which plagues the South, is also present in the North.
Characters
The Warring Son is as much character-driven as the first book, and again, author Bryce O'Connor has done a fantastic job when it comes to portraying the individuals who move the plot, and their complex interactions. Everybody, from the protagonists, to the most minor extra, feels as a complete person with their own wants, dreams, fears and everyday thoughts. The dialogue between characters is superb, and in several instances, downright inspiring. The emotions the characters experience are vividly described and feel absolutely spot-on. When it comes to writing imaginary people, Mr. O'Connor shows real talent that few authors have exhibited in recent years.
Again, the majority of the plot revolves around Raz i'Syul Arro, the main character of the series. The towering amber-eyed atherian mercenary with a chip on his shoulder for any evil-doer is a savage, poignant, and conflicted person as always, and the sequel further reinforces those traits. Given how he continues to dispense justice in the "ultimate manner", Raz also seems to be shaping up into a far darker, fantasy version of Lee Child's Jack Reacher, which in my opinion is not a bad thing; on the contrary, I've been itching for just such a character in speculative fiction for a long time, and this is yet another reason why I find this series so refreshing.
There are several new important characters, as well as a couple of new villains, one of which doesn't survive in the end. (Somewhat predictably.) Old characters also make an appearance, particularly Talo Brahnt, who gets a healthy dose of background development, and, in an ironic twist of events, this time he is the one who plays a pivotal role in Raz' life. Syrah also makes an appearance, albeit a brief one, mainly to underline the rise of one of the antagonists.
Overall, it seems that living the consequences of one's choices in both past and present is going to be a recurring theme in the series.
Finally, we also get another singular chapter involving Queen Shas-hana Rhan and the glacially-advancing story arc about the secret atherian society in the mysterious Under Caves.
Story
The plot of the novel unfolds differently than the previous book. This time the events take place only in the span of a couple of months, instead in three large periods spanning two decades. The story's pacing hasn't suffered because of this change, so it has retained its flowing quality, though this does make it drag ever-so-slightly in a few places.
What's notable, is that the narrative has also retained its grim tone, which gets considerably darker towards the end. The author makes some hints at a good outcome in the end of the series, but for those who were expecting The Warring Son to be less harsh than the first book, think again. I won't spoil the gist of it, but suffice to say that the cruel plot twist came in the least expected moment, at least for me. However, it does heighten the drama considerably, and, if used well in the future books, can lead to some very breath-taking turning points.
However, in order to be completely honest, I should point out that while reading, there were some parts during which I felt the novel was slightly rushed. Nothing major, but I do hope Mr. O'Connor takes notice and spends a bit more time in the future while working on his next projects, in order for us readers to have an even greater experience.
Overall, the novel was again a riveting read, one I covered in only three sittings, and would've done it faster, if I had the time. Despite the few blemishes, again all the main draws are here: the awesome, conflicted, non-human main character, the rich and complex cast of supporting characters, the solid plot, and the still new and yet-with-places-to-explore setting.
Conclusion
The Warring Son continues exactly where Child of the Daystar left off: in a world full of despair and shattered societies, a few brave souls try to make a difference, sacrificing much in the singular belief of giving everyone a chance for better future. If the series continue in this direction, it will make for a fine saga about the triumph of hope over fear, and the courage and strength for one to find inside despite the horrors they have faced. As I have stated in my previous review, I will follow The Wings of War series with great interest; because there is certainly much promise in it, and because Bryce O'Connor has every potential to turn into the next best-selling author.
For those of you who are already hooked, I can assure you this book delivers. For those who have just stumbled upon this humble review, I say to get the previous book. Then come here again and relish in the gritty, inspiring, deep world that is The Warring Son.
September 3, 2018
Actual rating: 2.5
As readers, we love sequels and series. The opportunity to revisit familiar worlds and characters is appealing. Re-experiencing the same thrill an original story gave us is desired. But rare. Many sequels are weaker than their predecessors.
Unfortunately, that's the case here. The Warring Son doesn't feel as fresh as The Child of the Daystar. Instead of taking characters and ideas of the first story and evolving them into something completely original, we experience switching out the villain and repackaging the same conflict (answering why and how would spoil things).
Raz i'Syul Arro is on the run, escaping along the northern roads of the country. Before long he finds himself embroiled in the savage politics of this new land, forced to play a part in the ugly game of intrigue and violence once more. To survive, Raz enters The Arena where he fights (or rather destroys) gladiators and bounty-hunters who come to Tern to collect the bounty on his head. Fights are brutal and nicely choreographed.
We also learn more about Talo's past. His arc moves the plot forward preparing readers for the large-scale events that'll take place in the next book. Here, though, not much is happening. There's action, casual cruelty and drama. Raz is coming to terms with his inner Monster. Despite this, I don't feel that any of the characters were developed in any significant way. The plot is repetitive and straightforward. I choose to believe it's just a bloody interlude between two better books.
Don't misunderstand me - I don't think it's a bad book. But I think that, compared to Child of the Daystar, it's just ok. As I like Bryce O'Connor's writing I'll read Winter's King shortly and I hope it'll deliver significant developments.
As readers, we love sequels and series. The opportunity to revisit familiar worlds and characters is appealing. Re-experiencing the same thrill an original story gave us is desired. But rare. Many sequels are weaker than their predecessors.
Unfortunately, that's the case here. The Warring Son doesn't feel as fresh as The Child of the Daystar. Instead of taking characters and ideas of the first story and evolving them into something completely original, we experience switching out the villain and repackaging the same conflict (answering why and how would spoil things).
Raz i'Syul Arro is on the run, escaping along the northern roads of the country. Before long he finds himself embroiled in the savage politics of this new land, forced to play a part in the ugly game of intrigue and violence once more. To survive, Raz enters The Arena where he fights (or rather destroys) gladiators and bounty-hunters who come to Tern to collect the bounty on his head. Fights are brutal and nicely choreographed.
We also learn more about Talo's past. His arc moves the plot forward preparing readers for the large-scale events that'll take place in the next book. Here, though, not much is happening. There's action, casual cruelty and drama. Raz is coming to terms with his inner Monster. Despite this, I don't feel that any of the characters were developed in any significant way. The plot is repetitive and straightforward. I choose to believe it's just a bloody interlude between two better books.
Don't misunderstand me - I don't think it's a bad book. But I think that, compared to Child of the Daystar, it's just ok. As I like Bryce O'Connor's writing I'll read Winter's King shortly and I hope it'll deliver significant developments.
January 29, 2020
Apparently I loved every single word written in this book. 91 highlights, this has got to be my personal best, which I can't even share because, lets face it, it will be giving away the whole book. Plus I don't think anyone would have time. I could have highlighted the whole book if I didn't have to restrain myself. I loved it so much that if I could give it infinite star, I would. Unfortunately I am only allowed five so the best I can do is create a special shelf for it "Infinite stars".
November 26, 2025
Just binge it. Don’t resist. It just flows start to finish.
Brutal but good. Several surprises in this one.
Brutal but good. Several surprises in this one.
May 24, 2019
The second installment of the Wings of War series accomplishes everything it should. While Raz's growth and complexity as a character still take center stage, what we get to see here is the world unfolding before his (and our) eyes. Where Child of the Daystar focused on mostly one city and Raz's efforts there, with The Warring Son we see a broader world with accordingly broader implications and, of course, problems.
Fans of Child of the Daystar will get to dig deeper into the secondary characters, most notably Syrah, Talo, and Carro. Now, compared to their passing presence in Child of the Daystar, we see them become more directly intertwined with Raz and his destiny. The beast, the Monster of Karth, the animalistic lizardman...he is now becoming their greatest hope of surviving what is to come.
And on the flip side, we see an incredible development in our protagonist. Where the world throws its contempt, its scorn, and its violence at Raz, something in him continues to guide him yet toward the light rather than the dark. While he solves most of his problems with his forked spear, he does it with good intentions and with the hope of changing what he fights against, rather than just becoming a shadow of it. That same dichotomous nature that I so enjoyed in Child of the Daystar just continues to build.
Take note, this tale is bloodier than the first, but O'Connor is not just filling pages with gore to portray fantasy bloodlust. There is a definite goal here, an endgame that the series title suggested from the get-go, and The Warring Son - both in title and in plot - continues to build upon that. How it all turns out is what keeps us turning pages, and The Warring Son is guaranteed to make fans of the series scramble to Twitter and social media to ask O'Connor when Book 3 is coming. I know because I already did!
Fans of Child of the Daystar will get to dig deeper into the secondary characters, most notably Syrah, Talo, and Carro. Now, compared to their passing presence in Child of the Daystar, we see them become more directly intertwined with Raz and his destiny. The beast, the Monster of Karth, the animalistic lizardman...he is now becoming their greatest hope of surviving what is to come.
And on the flip side, we see an incredible development in our protagonist. Where the world throws its contempt, its scorn, and its violence at Raz, something in him continues to guide him yet toward the light rather than the dark. While he solves most of his problems with his forked spear, he does it with good intentions and with the hope of changing what he fights against, rather than just becoming a shadow of it. That same dichotomous nature that I so enjoyed in Child of the Daystar just continues to build.
Take note, this tale is bloodier than the first, but O'Connor is not just filling pages with gore to portray fantasy bloodlust. There is a definite goal here, an endgame that the series title suggested from the get-go, and The Warring Son - both in title and in plot - continues to build upon that. How it all turns out is what keeps us turning pages, and The Warring Son is guaranteed to make fans of the series scramble to Twitter and social media to ask O'Connor when Book 3 is coming. I know because I already did!
November 29, 2016
As Child of the Daystar ends and The Warring Son begins, Raz I’Syul, a most unusual and dangerous hero, finds himself on the move. The chilly winds of the North make Raz’s cold blood even colder, and he finds refuge from the forthcoming bitter winter when he helps and befriends a brother and sister fleeing Azbar and The Arena that boasts death as a bloody form of entertainment and a tyrannical show of power.
In helping these two children, Raz is reluctantly drawn to this town and this Arena and a cause that inevitably propels him toward bloodshed and heartache and agony.
While Raz is a true and noble hero, his method of using his size and strength and mad skills to fight injustice is quite violent and bloody, and it can be easy to forget that he is still young and vulnerable and prone to heedlessness and stubbornness.
Syrah does make an appearance in this second in the series, but her overall story takes a backseat to her mentor, Talo, and his partner, Carro, as they travel to Azbar and cross paths with Raz and as the reader discovers Talo’s spectacular and astonishing past.
Raz I’Syul will once again steal your heart and leave you breathless with his amazing courage and fortitude and his fierce loyalty to those he loves and protects.
Death and destruction seem to follow Raz wherever he goes, and Bryce O’Connor pulls no punches as he continues the Wings of War series. The Warring Son is fast paced and engaging, and you will once again cheer for Raz as he valiantly slashes his way through cruelty, hate, and greed.
***
"Surviving a duel is as much about being able to wield and control your own strengths as it is knowing an opponent's weaknesses."
In helping these two children, Raz is reluctantly drawn to this town and this Arena and a cause that inevitably propels him toward bloodshed and heartache and agony.
While Raz is a true and noble hero, his method of using his size and strength and mad skills to fight injustice is quite violent and bloody, and it can be easy to forget that he is still young and vulnerable and prone to heedlessness and stubbornness.
Syrah does make an appearance in this second in the series, but her overall story takes a backseat to her mentor, Talo, and his partner, Carro, as they travel to Azbar and cross paths with Raz and as the reader discovers Talo’s spectacular and astonishing past.
Raz I’Syul will once again steal your heart and leave you breathless with his amazing courage and fortitude and his fierce loyalty to those he loves and protects.
Death and destruction seem to follow Raz wherever he goes, and Bryce O’Connor pulls no punches as he continues the Wings of War series. The Warring Son is fast paced and engaging, and you will once again cheer for Raz as he valiantly slashes his way through cruelty, hate, and greed.
***
"Surviving a duel is as much about being able to wield and control your own strengths as it is knowing an opponent's weaknesses."
June 22, 2017
I'm really struggling with this review and rating. On one hand the book was good, it was really good. I love the character development and internal struggles we see with Raz and the development of the bigger story happening in the world.
However, there was one part, I won't give anything away, but there was one scene in the book that broke my heart. Even as I'm trying to write this I can't stop crying. It was a brutal scene that hurt my soul. I'm aware that this is an incredible accomplishment for the author. To be able to create something so powerful and moving that it has this sort of a physical reaction on a reader is an amazing accomplishment. I do think it was a very mean and cruel thing to do to the readers, but I understand why it was done.
I'm going to go find a puppy to hug because I really need some happiness in my life after finishing this story.
However, there was one part, I won't give anything away, but there was one scene in the book that broke my heart. Even as I'm trying to write this I can't stop crying. It was a brutal scene that hurt my soul. I'm aware that this is an incredible accomplishment for the author. To be able to create something so powerful and moving that it has this sort of a physical reaction on a reader is an amazing accomplishment. I do think it was a very mean and cruel thing to do to the readers, but I understand why it was done.
I'm going to go find a puppy to hug because I really need some happiness in my life after finishing this story.
November 30, 2025
After destroying the figureheads of the shadow government ruling the Southern cities, Raz i’Syul Arro flees into the frigid North without a plan or a map. It’s a risky maneuver for a lizardman, but before he can succumb to the cold, he comes across and rescues the orphans Arrun and Lueski. He returns them to their hometown of Azbar, discovering that the North is just as cutthroat, if not more so, than the South. Azbar has resurrected its bloody arena under the direction of Chairman Quin Tern. In Tern’s eagerness to fill his coffers and the bloodlust of the spectators, he has emptied the prisons and turned to snatching citizens off the streets for minor offenses, forcing them to die in the arena, and that includes children. Raz becomes the guardian of the orphans and strikes a deal with Tern: He will be the main attraction of the arena, pulling fighters from all over the North and South seeking to claim the bounty on his head, and Tern will no longer prey on his citizens, wiping clean the debts of Lueski and Arrun in the process. Raz enters a bloody affair where he must survive daily arena battles while hoping to shut down the whole operation.
I dislike when people use the term “filler” to refer to a storyline, especially as that word has been abused and stretched far beyond its original purpose in reference to anime/manga. Still, I was a little concerned to see that thrown around here, and dismayed to find that it’s not totally unwarranted. This book feels like reheated leftovers from the first, takes place mostly in one location, and not much changes once everything is said and done. I thought Raz’s days as an unstoppable mercenary were the weakest parts of Child of the Daystar, and this book doubles down on it. For as much gladiatorial bloodshed as there is, most of it lacks tension and friction because Raz is the most bestest fighter that ever lived. A tournament arc falls flat on its face when no one in the tournament is a real match for the protagonist.
Most of the surviving characters from Child of Daystar are not in this book, which means whatever arcs they had going on are unresolved. There are a host of new characters, however. Arrun and Lueski get close to almost making Raz feel like a whole character again, but they aren’t much of characters themselves. Arrun is sort of the smartass teen and Lueski behaves half her age, begging Raz to get rid of the “bad men.” The Doctore, Alyssa Rhen, ends up being Raz’s handler, but has no agency to affect the situation, and often feels like she’s just there to have another (adult) character for Raz to bounce off of occasionally.
Quin Tern is the villain of this story and the only way he can be described is maliciously obese. The prose wants you to know that he’s fat and yes, it is a morality judgment. The persistent references to his weight and body in the prose carries shades of JK Rowling body shaming—they’re even in the dialogue tags! I don’t need to know that Tern’s triple chins and jelly rolls roil like a gelatinous ocean every time he speaks. (There are other clumsy descriptors here, like characters with dark skin being referred to as “shadowy” in appearance, as if conjured by exotic magic instead of just being melanated.) Tern is said to be a cunning and powerful ruler, but the one power play he makes is incredibly stupid and blows up spectacularly in his face. He and Raz only really have two confrontations. Opportunities to build antagonism and establish a power struggle are sidelined for the butchery of more one-note gladiators instead.
Returning are the Laorin priests who are dealing with problems twofold. Syrah is the deuteragonist in theory, but High Priest Talo Brahnt is the character that travels to Azbar in hopes of shutting down the arena and crosses paths with Raz. Syrah is mostly restricted to the citadel, reacting to what appears to be the real overarching threat of books, a mountain man that has amassed an army of twenty-five thousand, cutting a swath of death through the North and utterly obliterating every town in his way. One of the few positive things I can say about the priests is that Talo’s homosexuality is mostly normalized instead of using it to define his character or his arc.
And there is Raz himself. I so desperately wanted him to be more interesting than he is. There’s so much room for growth and no real attempts at it. We still don’t know how he evolved from the son of merchants to this unstoppable terminator during the time skip (though I suspect it’s because there is no adequate explanation for how he became so much better than any other fighter in existence). There is a slight bit of development where, in isolation, Raz decides to stop holding a grudge against people he knows weren’t responsible for what happened to his family. There’s a meager attempt to add depth to the violence by having characters claim repeatedly that Raz does not enjoy killing, even while he publicly tortures a man to death, sometimes with a smile. This also reinforces one of Raz’s weaknesses... he is not a thinking man. When he’s approached with a problem, he often maneuvers himself into a position where’s forced to fight and kill endlessly. If he can’t kill a problem, he can’t solve it, and usually another character forces the situation to change into something he can kill.
I was disappointed because I thought this book could build off the potential set up by the first, but it just digs its heels further into the weakest aspects. The set up for the third book sounds like it could force some needed change, but I’m not sure if I want to get stuck in another endless cycle of butchery and priests not accomplishing anything. 2.5 stars.
I dislike when people use the term “filler” to refer to a storyline, especially as that word has been abused and stretched far beyond its original purpose in reference to anime/manga. Still, I was a little concerned to see that thrown around here, and dismayed to find that it’s not totally unwarranted. This book feels like reheated leftovers from the first, takes place mostly in one location, and not much changes once everything is said and done. I thought Raz’s days as an unstoppable mercenary were the weakest parts of Child of the Daystar, and this book doubles down on it. For as much gladiatorial bloodshed as there is, most of it lacks tension and friction because Raz is the most bestest fighter that ever lived. A tournament arc falls flat on its face when no one in the tournament is a real match for the protagonist.
Most of the surviving characters from Child of Daystar are not in this book, which means whatever arcs they had going on are unresolved. There are a host of new characters, however. Arrun and Lueski get close to almost making Raz feel like a whole character again, but they aren’t much of characters themselves. Arrun is sort of the smartass teen and Lueski behaves half her age, begging Raz to get rid of the “bad men.” The Doctore, Alyssa Rhen, ends up being Raz’s handler, but has no agency to affect the situation, and often feels like she’s just there to have another (adult) character for Raz to bounce off of occasionally.
Quin Tern is the villain of this story and the only way he can be described is maliciously obese. The prose wants you to know that he’s fat and yes, it is a morality judgment. The persistent references to his weight and body in the prose carries shades of JK Rowling body shaming—they’re even in the dialogue tags! I don’t need to know that Tern’s triple chins and jelly rolls roil like a gelatinous ocean every time he speaks. (There are other clumsy descriptors here, like characters with dark skin being referred to as “shadowy” in appearance, as if conjured by exotic magic instead of just being melanated.) Tern is said to be a cunning and powerful ruler, but the one power play he makes is incredibly stupid and blows up spectacularly in his face. He and Raz only really have two confrontations. Opportunities to build antagonism and establish a power struggle are sidelined for the butchery of more one-note gladiators instead.
Returning are the Laorin priests who are dealing with problems twofold. Syrah is the deuteragonist in theory, but High Priest Talo Brahnt is the character that travels to Azbar in hopes of shutting down the arena and crosses paths with Raz. Syrah is mostly restricted to the citadel, reacting to what appears to be the real overarching threat of books, a mountain man that has amassed an army of twenty-five thousand, cutting a swath of death through the North and utterly obliterating every town in his way. One of the few positive things I can say about the priests is that Talo’s homosexuality is mostly normalized instead of using it to define his character or his arc.
And there is Raz himself. I so desperately wanted him to be more interesting than he is. There’s so much room for growth and no real attempts at it. We still don’t know how he evolved from the son of merchants to this unstoppable terminator during the time skip (though I suspect it’s because there is no adequate explanation for how he became so much better than any other fighter in existence). There is a slight bit of development where, in isolation, Raz decides to stop holding a grudge against people he knows weren’t responsible for what happened to his family. There’s a meager attempt to add depth to the violence by having characters claim repeatedly that Raz does not enjoy killing, even while he publicly tortures a man to death, sometimes with a smile. This also reinforces one of Raz’s weaknesses... he is not a thinking man. When he’s approached with a problem, he often maneuvers himself into a position where’s forced to fight and kill endlessly. If he can’t kill a problem, he can’t solve it, and usually another character forces the situation to change into something he can kill.
I was disappointed because I thought this book could build off the potential set up by the first, but it just digs its heels further into the weakest aspects. The set up for the third book sounds like it could force some needed change, but I’m not sure if I want to get stuck in another endless cycle of butchery and priests not accomplishing anything. 2.5 stars.
February 18, 2017
really a horrible book specially final chapters
January 29, 2021
I am trying hard not to give this one a lower rating right now as fresh off the back of that ending I am not a satisfied reader in the slightest. However, before I get on to the reasons why I was frustrated with this book, let’s start with what was good.
The good about this book is that it flows every bit as well as the last novel. It is fast paced, the action interesting, the characters likeable and as a result its the sort of book you just breeze through in no time. For the vast majority of the time that I was reading this I was enjoying the story as it was unfolding so overall I have to say that this was a good book. If you enjoyed the first book, then you will more than likely enjoy this one as well.
Now, onto the major issues I had with this book.
1 - Stupid decisions
In this book, Raz makes a lot of very questionable decisions. This was true to some extent in the last book as well, but this is the first time that they felt deliberately stupid rather than honest mistakes. The path he takes in this novels and his actions are all based on a terrible idea that he should have learnt not to make after falling for something similar in the last book. I expected the Raz who survived book one to be much more wary of falling into the same kind of traps again.
The consequences for his stupid decisions directly leads to the second point which, if you want to read, will include serious spoilers for the novel. Read on at your own peril.
Verdict
Overall, I enjoyed maybe 80% of this book almost as much as I enjoyed the first, and for that reason this book gets 4-stars and I think I will keep reading. However, the next book needs to do something great or it might be where me and this series part ways
The good about this book is that it flows every bit as well as the last novel. It is fast paced, the action interesting, the characters likeable and as a result its the sort of book you just breeze through in no time. For the vast majority of the time that I was reading this I was enjoying the story as it was unfolding so overall I have to say that this was a good book. If you enjoyed the first book, then you will more than likely enjoy this one as well.
Now, onto the major issues I had with this book.
1 - Stupid decisions
In this book, Raz makes a lot of very questionable decisions. This was true to some extent in the last book as well, but this is the first time that they felt deliberately stupid rather than honest mistakes. The path he takes in this novels and his actions are all based on a terrible idea that he should have learnt not to make after falling for something similar in the last book. I expected the Raz who survived book one to be much more wary of falling into the same kind of traps again.
The consequences for his stupid decisions directly leads to the second point which, if you want to read, will include serious spoilers for the novel. Read on at your own peril.
Verdict
Overall, I enjoyed maybe 80% of this book almost as much as I enjoyed the first, and for that reason this book gets 4-stars and I think I will keep reading. However, the next book needs to do something great or it might be where me and this series part ways
June 23, 2019
The Warring Son, book two of Bryce O’Connor’s Wings of War series, continues where the previous book left off, with Raz i'Syul Arro fleeing to the north, pursued by bounty hunters. There, he becomes entangled in The Arena, a vicious coliseum that could most likely spell his death.
I thought this book was an entertaining sequel to the previous book and remedied several issues I had as well. The plot was neater and more cohesive, and it was good to see the errant chapters of side character woven into the first book come into fruition in this book (it still feels a little frustrating feeling like the first book was just elaborate backstory). Raz’s background and history play a lot into his decision making and his internal conflict, which helped yield some good character development.
Probably the most shocking thing about this book was the following:
Like the first book, I felt that this one was too short yet again – this wasn’t as painful of a reaction as it was to book 1 ending, but it was still frustrating to watch all the main characters run out of the city where the arena was and leave that as a problem for later, as there now exists a bigger problem to deal with (I mean, they killed the chairman, so maybe that solves the arena problem?). That said, the book length is still a clever marketing tactic by the author, so cheers to him.
The book kind of gave me weight Terry Goodkind Sword of Truth vibes where the main character rolls into a new place where things had been good but now things are corrupt and bad . Maybe that’s just emphasized by the is just , but at least Raz himself is a little bit more morally grey, as he struggles with enjoying a system of slaughter and being good at it, despite finding it abhorrent at some level. So yeah, the novel does seem to lack shades of grey in a sense with the antagonists.
Also, as much as I enjoy Raz as a protagonist, him kind of being unstoppable in every fight does cause the story to lose some tension.
So overall, I enjoyed reading this book and felt like it addressed several of my complaints I had with the prequel book. I think I’ll eventually grab book three in the series, and I am hoping that the future books will show more nuance in character and plot development.
I thought this book was an entertaining sequel to the previous book and remedied several issues I had as well. The plot was neater and more cohesive, and it was good to see the errant chapters of side character woven into the first book come into fruition in this book (it still feels a little frustrating feeling like the first book was just elaborate backstory). Raz’s background and history play a lot into his decision making and his internal conflict, which helped yield some good character development.
Probably the most shocking thing about this book was the following:
Like the first book, I felt that this one was too short yet again – this wasn’t as painful of a reaction as it was to book 1 ending, but it was still frustrating to watch all the main characters run out of the city where the arena was and leave that as a problem for later, as there now exists a bigger problem to deal with (I mean, they killed the chairman, so maybe that solves the arena problem?). That said, the book length is still a clever marketing tactic by the author, so cheers to him.
The book kind of gave me weight Terry Goodkind Sword of Truth vibes where the main character rolls into a new place where things had been good but now things are corrupt and bad . Maybe that’s just emphasized by the is just , but at least Raz himself is a little bit more morally grey, as he struggles with enjoying a system of slaughter and being good at it, despite finding it abhorrent at some level. So yeah, the novel does seem to lack shades of grey in a sense with the antagonists.
Also, as much as I enjoy Raz as a protagonist, him kind of being unstoppable in every fight does cause the story to lose some tension.
So overall, I enjoyed reading this book and felt like it addressed several of my complaints I had with the prequel book. I think I’ll eventually grab book three in the series, and I am hoping that the future books will show more nuance in character and plot development.
January 11, 2019
It wasn't bad, but it wasn't good either. I liked the beginning of the story (in book one), the idea of Raz as someone who is going to help his kind understand humans and forge better relations with them. The concept was not ideal - there was talk that artherians have tried to go to humans and learn language before but it never worked out. (Why it didn't? excuse was very weak, I wondered why they've never tried to kidnapp someone and force them to teach the language, which should be quite obvious to think of,but overall I let it slide.) I accepted the concept as it was.
I liked Raz and enjoyed reading of his time with Arros. Later tho... not so much. I don't mind painfull experiences, it shapes character, I don't mind taking revenge, I like powerfull characters and I didn't mind his killing spree, what I did mind was lack of any bigger political structure. I just didn't buy it. So we know there is a desert, we have South and North and cities there. No countries, no kings, no borders. Every city is separate with some kind of government. Well, not very convincing. And later those governments are replaced by crime boses and a lot of them. In all of those cities in South. Without any explanation why those governments were so weak to give in and without mention (except Raz) of anyone doing anything to change that. So all of the citizens just accepted that without any fight?
That was in book one. I had hope that the second book will be better, but I've found it eqully lacking (sense, or at least good explanation why things were how they were).
I liked Raz and enjoyed reading of his time with Arros. Later tho... not so much. I don't mind painfull experiences, it shapes character, I don't mind taking revenge, I like powerfull characters and I didn't mind his killing spree, what I did mind was lack of any bigger political structure. I just didn't buy it. So we know there is a desert, we have South and North and cities there. No countries, no kings, no borders. Every city is separate with some kind of government. Well, not very convincing. And later those governments are replaced by crime boses and a lot of them. In all of those cities in South. Without any explanation why those governments were so weak to give in and without mention (except Raz) of anyone doing anything to change that. So all of the citizens just accepted that without any fight?
That was in book one. I had hope that the second book will be better, but I've found it eqully lacking (sense, or at least good explanation why things were how they were).
November 30, 2016
This is a next book in the Wings of War Series and it is an excellent addition to the expanding saga of Raz i'Syul Arro the hero of Child of the Daystar (The Wings of War Book 1). Bryce O'Connor writing style is solid and has matured since the publication the previous entry in the saga. This book creates a sense of investment in the characters fates' while building and expanding the world that continues to draw the reader into the multiple layers of intrigue and plot presented throughout the novel. As for the story, readers are in for an epic ride as our hero explores the Northern parts of the world and faces challenges from choices made in the previous novel.
Some of the Best aspects of this Novel are:
The story is a treasure and provides everything a reader both new and old could want of a sequel.
The character growth and world building Bryce O' Conner is creating a world. The detail he crafts into each page is amazing and makes the reader want to turn the page to see what hidden gems are lurking within the next page of the novel.
The flow of the book is amazing most books when presenting multiple characters perspectives have a very choppy flow where you jumping from character to character juggling events Bryce O' Conner manages this well the transition are seamless and it keeps the book very approachable and enjoyable.
The overall story presented in this novel was amazing it is a must read for Fantasy/Adventure Lovers.
Some of the Best aspects of this Novel are:
The story is a treasure and provides everything a reader both new and old could want of a sequel.
The character growth and world building Bryce O' Conner is creating a world. The detail he crafts into each page is amazing and makes the reader want to turn the page to see what hidden gems are lurking within the next page of the novel.
The flow of the book is amazing most books when presenting multiple characters perspectives have a very choppy flow where you jumping from character to character juggling events Bryce O' Conner manages this well the transition are seamless and it keeps the book very approachable and enjoyable.
The overall story presented in this novel was amazing it is a must read for Fantasy/Adventure Lovers.
March 27, 2018
I read all three of these in one weekend and loved all three of them. While I think using violence against women to get the plot moving is a lazy plot device, there is violence against everyone in this book, so be prepared.
In the first book, we Raz grows up with people who love him and teach him to be his best self. Raz struggles to understand how best he can use his strengths to help people he loves. In the second book, when bad things happen, and you know they do, he tries to make change from within the criminal organization but is reminded by circumstances who he really is. In the third book, he meets some people who help him understand himself better and how he can help others. The end was resolved well, but lots of things were left hanging and I hope there are more in the series. the author does call it a series and not a trilogy, so we can hope.
So of course there is much more to these books than just that. The author does a great job of making Raz feel human, react human and yet still use his alien-ness as both a strength and a weakness: the wings, the claws, the size. Raz's choices are familiar to anyone who has had to make the best of a bad situation or had to choose the lesser of two evils.
I would have liked to see more Atherians and to resolve what they meant when they said there was a prophecy that they thought was about Raz, because that was just touched upon in the first three books.
In the first book, we Raz grows up with people who love him and teach him to be his best self. Raz struggles to understand how best he can use his strengths to help people he loves. In the second book, when bad things happen, and you know they do, he tries to make change from within the criminal organization but is reminded by circumstances who he really is. In the third book, he meets some people who help him understand himself better and how he can help others. The end was resolved well, but lots of things were left hanging and I hope there are more in the series. the author does call it a series and not a trilogy, so we can hope.
So of course there is much more to these books than just that. The author does a great job of making Raz feel human, react human and yet still use his alien-ness as both a strength and a weakness: the wings, the claws, the size. Raz's choices are familiar to anyone who has had to make the best of a bad situation or had to choose the lesser of two evils.
I would have liked to see more Atherians and to resolve what they meant when they said there was a prophecy that they thought was about Raz, because that was just touched upon in the first three books.
July 16, 2019
This the 2nd book in the series has become even darker than the first book, and the only creature in the novel who is not a monster is the one everyone knew as the monster. Raz i'Syul Arro is a beautiful character and it seems the only one with heart, and a soul he is not willing to compromise, he is the only thing keeping me reading further into this very brutal series where life is not considered to be worth anything for those in power. Once again Raz is used, abused and betrayed, going on the premise that everyone is as honourable as he is, Raz is fooled once again. He makes mistakes in the decisions he takes, as he goes by his own measure of principles and what is right, and has no real clue as to the deviousness and greed humans base their lives on. This is a very heart wrenching book, in fact it had me crying my eyes out at the surprising twist of betrayal it portrayed. Raz seems to always be in the wrong place at the wrong time, but sometimes if it had not been so those in need would have had no one to save them! The pits in the fighting arena I think were an even worse ordeal that the experience suffered at the hands of the slavers, and I do hope Raz's life will one day become a bit easier to live through because if anyone deserves this, it's Raz. An amazingly gripping dark fantasy brutal series which has me totally engrossed in it, I highly recommend this series to lovers of dark fantasy.
November 29, 2016
Bryce has done it again! In this second book in the Child of the Daystar series Bryce has been able to continue the exciting story of Raz, introducing new characters and more importantly giving a little more insight into the personalities and back stories of some of my favorites. The book is well written in that the story continues to evolve from where the previous book left off rather than beginning anew, a sign of a well thought out and executed plotline for the series. Some of the plotlines are brought fully to light in this book while others, hinted at in the previous book continue to tease your interest again in the sequel, which keeps the excitement and interest alive without leaving you hanging. In addition to his well thought out storyline Bryce has included wonderfully written scenes and events in this book that evoke true emotional reactions as you read. You know it’s good when you read chapter after chapter and finally have to cut yourself off because let’s face it, you have to work really early in the morning and as it is you’re only going to get a few hours of sleep now… thanks for that Bryce! In summation this is a wonderfully written book that builds on the first without disappointing as the story and the characters continue to grow and evolve! If you enjoyed the first book then you must read on! WELL DONE!!!
January 13, 2019
As with the previous book, the narrator is skilled but his range of voices (particularly for female characters) is a little disappointing.
Thankfully, this book does not continue the time skipping problem the first book had.
Is all quite linear and logical. And while the actual storyline is a bit simple and unbelievable, it was entertaining.
However, the indecisive POV problem from the first book continues, as does the shallowness of the secondary characters. One or two become a bit more real in this one, but the others are still quite two-dimensional.
Finally, this didn't bother me in the first book as there were other factors that made it fun and kept things a little more balanced, but in this book it was a major thing and a fairly serious problem.
Raz is just too powerful. Somehow, apparently by merit of nothing more than his species, he is stronger, faster, smarter, more skilled, more durable, and faster to heal than anyone else we've seen in the world so far.
The author does a decent job of arranging scenarios that manage to challenge him, but in the end there still isn't anyone in the world (at least by all appearances) who could stand against him in a one-on-one battle.
I'm still curious enough to continue the series, but my expectations are significantly lower now.
Thankfully, this book does not continue the time skipping problem the first book had.
Is all quite linear and logical. And while the actual storyline is a bit simple and unbelievable, it was entertaining.
However, the indecisive POV problem from the first book continues, as does the shallowness of the secondary characters. One or two become a bit more real in this one, but the others are still quite two-dimensional.
Finally, this didn't bother me in the first book as there were other factors that made it fun and kept things a little more balanced, but in this book it was a major thing and a fairly serious problem.
Raz is just too powerful. Somehow, apparently by merit of nothing more than his species, he is stronger, faster, smarter, more skilled, more durable, and faster to heal than anyone else we've seen in the world so far.
The author does a decent job of arranging scenarios that manage to challenge him, but in the end there still isn't anyone in the world (at least by all appearances) who could stand against him in a one-on-one battle.
I'm still curious enough to continue the series, but my expectations are significantly lower now.
December 7, 2016
I was a beta reader for this book.
The Warring Son (The Wings of War, #2) by Bryce O'Connor, begins where Child of the DayStar left off: on a road headed north.
Winter is coming, and Raz i’Syul Arros intends to weather the next few months uneventfully in The North, safe from the Mahsadën's assassins in The South, by escaping to The North ahead of the freeze. Alas, the best laid plans…. Raz's naiveté proves an ever-enduring fulcrum to leverage the plot.
The Warring Son starts with an interesting epitaph and curiosity soon pulls the reader in.
The characters feel three-dimensional and have their own distinct voices, virtues, flaws. They proactively influence the plot with believable and appropriate emotionally-driven motivations. The story is further enhanced by well-rounded secondary characters and believable, uncontrived feeling, inter-character relationships.
The Warring Son has a compelling manner and flow; relevant scenes add to the story, and effective scene transitions move the story along at a nice pace. Each chapters' end compels you to begin the next. Vivid descriptions, with a clear sense of place and time, further enhance the story.
The characters' dialogue feels natural, appropriate, and reveals, as it moves the story forward. The characters' voices are consistent and distinct as well. The mix of narrative and dialogue is well balanced.
The writing tells and shows scenes with the senses. The story’s tone is consistent throughout. Point of views and changes are also handled consistently well.
Overall, The Warring Son carries its leg of the series well. And As The Grandmother’s prophecy continues to unfold in the forested ‘scapes of The North, the story does not feel thin, rushed, sluggish, or over-loaded.
Once again, O'Connor wields the epitaph well, bringing desirable, history, depth, and flavor to The Warring Son — without it feeling like pace-slowing backstory or information dumping.
Bryce O'Connor continues to be an interesting voice and storyteller. I really enjoyed reading this story and look forward to the next installment.
The Warring Son (The Wings of War, #2) by Bryce O'Connor, begins where Child of the DayStar left off: on a road headed north.
Winter is coming, and Raz i’Syul Arros intends to weather the next few months uneventfully in The North, safe from the Mahsadën's assassins in The South, by escaping to The North ahead of the freeze. Alas, the best laid plans…. Raz's naiveté proves an ever-enduring fulcrum to leverage the plot.
The Warring Son starts with an interesting epitaph and curiosity soon pulls the reader in.
The characters feel three-dimensional and have their own distinct voices, virtues, flaws. They proactively influence the plot with believable and appropriate emotionally-driven motivations. The story is further enhanced by well-rounded secondary characters and believable, uncontrived feeling, inter-character relationships.
The Warring Son has a compelling manner and flow; relevant scenes add to the story, and effective scene transitions move the story along at a nice pace. Each chapters' end compels you to begin the next. Vivid descriptions, with a clear sense of place and time, further enhance the story.
The characters' dialogue feels natural, appropriate, and reveals, as it moves the story forward. The characters' voices are consistent and distinct as well. The mix of narrative and dialogue is well balanced.
The writing tells and shows scenes with the senses. The story’s tone is consistent throughout. Point of views and changes are also handled consistently well.
Overall, The Warring Son carries its leg of the series well. And As The Grandmother’s prophecy continues to unfold in the forested ‘scapes of The North, the story does not feel thin, rushed, sluggish, or over-loaded.
Once again, O'Connor wields the epitaph well, bringing desirable, history, depth, and flavor to The Warring Son — without it feeling like pace-slowing backstory or information dumping.
Bryce O'Connor continues to be an interesting voice and storyteller. I really enjoyed reading this story and look forward to the next installment.
February 13, 2019
The grand finale of this will be one of those book scenes that stay with me forever. I have never read an author so good at making the slaughter and brutality feel necessary and not gratuitous. But again, no sex, so prudes can read it. Where would he stick it anyway, he is a lizard in a land of humans 😂
Starting where the last novel took off, with Raz on the run after events in Miropa, it unfolds into a slightly grander story, yet still smaller in scale than most fantasy is by the 2nd novel. On the side the greater story is starting to unfold elsewhere, but the author doesn't take Raz and shove him into "savior of the world" status the way most authors do at this point. He is being built up to meet it. I like this slow unfolding. It is refreshing.
In this Raz takes advantage of the return of Talo's worst nightmare, the Arena, to cull down the bounty hunters coming for him. But in Raz fashion, he has a philanthropic ulterior motive that he struggles with. This is why he is the warring son. Talo is the main secondary character here, and his interactions with Raz are wonderful.
My only complaint, not worth a star removal, is the little italic passages in each chapter to fill in history. I have always found that a bit lazy.
Starting where the last novel took off, with Raz on the run after events in Miropa, it unfolds into a slightly grander story, yet still smaller in scale than most fantasy is by the 2nd novel. On the side the greater story is starting to unfold elsewhere, but the author doesn't take Raz and shove him into "savior of the world" status the way most authors do at this point. He is being built up to meet it. I like this slow unfolding. It is refreshing.
In this Raz takes advantage of the return of Talo's worst nightmare, the Arena, to cull down the bounty hunters coming for him. But in Raz fashion, he has a philanthropic ulterior motive that he struggles with. This is why he is the warring son. Talo is the main secondary character here, and his interactions with Raz are wonderful.
My only complaint, not worth a star removal, is the little italic passages in each chapter to fill in history. I have always found that a bit lazy.
May 22, 2017
The Warring Son picks up where Child of The Daystar left off and ties in well with the storyline. New characters are introduced, and existing characters are further developed, as they start to tie into the main storyline more. This novel is more graphic and brutal than the first, but I like that. It had my blood pumping. As with the Child of the Daystar, the pace is right on track. Everything that needs to be included is. Although there is a lot of fighting in this one, there is plenty of time to develop other characters and explore some other story lines that feel like it will be all coming together in the 3rd book. The emotions delivered in this book are incredible. The last few chapters had me on the edge of my seat and included a surprise I would have never guessed. It is a rollercoaster of action and emotion. To me, this is the perfect middle book for a trilogy. It continues along, has plenty of conflicts, and builds everything up to what I hope is another fantastic book and a great climax to the overall storyline. I can’t wait for the next book to be released so I can dive into it as well.
May 31, 2021
I sort of liked "Child of the Daystar," which featured Raz i'Syul Arro as a non-human killing machine with a heart of gold.
Arro is an atherian, a lizard-like biped that's bigger, stronger and faster than humans, and after his family is wiped out by a group of villains, he takes them all down. In book two, he moves from the desert to a land of winter, where once again he kills, kills and kills again, with bloody descriptions attached.
The plot revolves around Arro's desire to save the people of Azbar from a corpulent (naturally) ruler who takes his own citizens and forces them into gladitorial shows as cannon fodder. At the same time, a former champion of the arena where Arro is now fighting has become (naturally) the high priest of the most important religion.
Arro fights off numerous challengers (of course), which passes for the plot, as the real action, or so it seems at book's end, takes place offstage.
This is probably a 2.5, but Bryce O'Connor is so earnest in his pleas for support, I gave him the benefit of the doubt. That benefit, however, does not extend to reading the next volume.
Arro is an atherian, a lizard-like biped that's bigger, stronger and faster than humans, and after his family is wiped out by a group of villains, he takes them all down. In book two, he moves from the desert to a land of winter, where once again he kills, kills and kills again, with bloody descriptions attached.
The plot revolves around Arro's desire to save the people of Azbar from a corpulent (naturally) ruler who takes his own citizens and forces them into gladitorial shows as cannon fodder. At the same time, a former champion of the arena where Arro is now fighting has become (naturally) the high priest of the most important religion.
Arro fights off numerous challengers (of course), which passes for the plot, as the real action, or so it seems at book's end, takes place offstage.
This is probably a 2.5, but Bryce O'Connor is so earnest in his pleas for support, I gave him the benefit of the doubt. That benefit, however, does not extend to reading the next volume.
July 30, 2017
This was a powerful, emotional, and ultimately sad inclusion to the series. Raz is a great character and in this book feels far more kinder then he ended up last time. He still has a hardness to him but seeing him open up again and try to save others in his own way was touching and engaging to read.
Going from one bad situation to another isn't easy to endure but for Raz cruelty and violence is always a means to an end, never the end he desires most. He will become what he needs to in order to protect the innocent around him and we see that again here in the contrast between how he is in arena and how he is personally with others.
This is once again a somber book with some very dark moments but the lighter touches and joy keep it from being overwhelmingly depressing and sad. Still there is clearly trouble on the horizon so I look forward to seeing where Raz's journey takes him next.
Going from one bad situation to another isn't easy to endure but for Raz cruelty and violence is always a means to an end, never the end he desires most. He will become what he needs to in order to protect the innocent around him and we see that again here in the contrast between how he is in arena and how he is personally with others.
This is once again a somber book with some very dark moments but the lighter touches and joy keep it from being overwhelmingly depressing and sad. Still there is clearly trouble on the horizon so I look forward to seeing where Raz's journey takes him next.
August 2, 2017
The Realities of Humanity as Seen through the Eyes of an Outsider
I truly loved reading this book. It managed to provide an intriguing and riveting story filled with everything that is wrong with humanity. War, deceit, bloodlust, slavery... And yet even still the main character tries to hold out hope that they can be better.
Raz as a main character provides an interesting point of view on the world in which he lives. He's an Anthropomorphic dragon who was trained in the martial arts by his adoptive uncle. He wields a forked spear and brings death on all who oppose him. While at the same time showing great affection toward humans he deems innocent and deserving thereof.
The book is a good read and one that I wouldn't mind recommending to non-furries, if they can stomach the violence.
I truly loved reading this book. It managed to provide an intriguing and riveting story filled with everything that is wrong with humanity. War, deceit, bloodlust, slavery... And yet even still the main character tries to hold out hope that they can be better.
Raz as a main character provides an interesting point of view on the world in which he lives. He's an Anthropomorphic dragon who was trained in the martial arts by his adoptive uncle. He wields a forked spear and brings death on all who oppose him. While at the same time showing great affection toward humans he deems innocent and deserving thereof.
The book is a good read and one that I wouldn't mind recommending to non-furries, if they can stomach the violence.
September 21, 2018
The second book in the Wings of War series delivered just like the first. I like that the premise is different from the first and our beloved Raz is on a different sort of journey but still fighting the good fight. The reader still follows several character story lines throughout the book and we get to know some characters better from the first book while we also get to meet some new characters. I very much enjoyed the book but what really had me not be able to put it down was the last 8 “chapters” or so. Incredibly gripping, they will tug at your heart (I may have actually cried), you will feel anger, and you will feel the justice at the end. You feel everything Raz feels. I’d say that this was just as good as the first book and I can’t wait to dive into the third installment in the series. Well done Bryce!
March 16, 2019
I rolled right into The Warring Son after reading the first book of the Wings of War series, Child of the Daystar. So well did the first book roll into the second I didn't even REALIZE I was reading a second book. I was deep in a great, well written story. I couldn't be bothered by such trivial details as knowing, much less caring, that I was onto the second book. The Warring Son continues a well thought out story. It flows well with exciting action, top notch world building and unique, well developed characters.
A word of warning. The villains do evil, despicable sh#! (I REALLY wanted to give the bad guys a good ole fashioned, steel-toed, sphincter kick). Additionally, you're gonna get a good education on what a spear, sword, axe or hammer does to the human body. This is raw, edgy, mature, epic fantasy.
I LOVED IT.
A word of warning. The villains do evil, despicable sh#! (I REALLY wanted to give the bad guys a good ole fashioned, steel-toed, sphincter kick). Additionally, you're gonna get a good education on what a spear, sword, axe or hammer does to the human body. This is raw, edgy, mature, epic fantasy.
I LOVED IT.
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