Edit to say - I read this one years ago when I was an angry reviewer 😅 I’m going to reread this at some point though!
Original review (2018)
Gah I hated this book. What a completely unlikable *ss of a hero. The heroine too was a pushover that held certain beliefs that crumbled at a moments notice. I’m going to put some book snippets in to share.
The concept of the book is there is a wager on whoever can publicly ruin the heroine will win 5,000 pounds. The hero takes the bet, to protect her from other unscrupulous men that will take her virginity.
Here’s a view of literally their first meeting. He runs into her outside in a secluded area of the garden
“Ambrose slid an arm around her waist, pulling her against him. “I would never say you were a peahen. You remind me more of a doe. Deep, expressive eyes, sleek limbs. All you need is a proper buck, one to mount you and claim you as his with deep, powerful thrusts.” He painted the verbal picture and punctuated it with a slow roll of his pelvis against hers.”
This made my my mouth fall open. I was not impressed, but was like okay maybe he’ll redeem himself as the book goes on. I’m fine with bad boys, I’m fine with bad choices....but I felt like he never did redeem himself.
He finds out that subject of the bet, his prey, the heroine, is actually the daughter of his friend. You would think he would inform his friend of the bet to protect his friends daughter and thus resolve the problem of the entire wager. But he continues on because for whatever reason, he must do it. But we know he’s purely selfish and wants her and is using it as some jacked up noble excuse.
“But he certainly had every intention of fulfilling his end of the wager and seducing her.
Once he realized who she was, the bet had seemed less important than his genuine desire to take her to bed. Part of him knew he was damned because once he’d fulfilled his bet, he wouldn’t be welcomed back into this house by her or her father. They would never know he’d sought to save her from a fate with a worse man than him.”
*eye rolling*
She says no I must stand strong and not let him seduce me! The very next moment he pulls her away they basically do everything except actually lose the virginity. Then she invites him to her bed. There’s no tension, there’s no getting to know the characters on a better level before intimacy. To me it was a book with the barest of plots to get to the sex. Which is totally fine for some people, but I don’t like it, personally.
So it all ends up working out and they live happily ever after. I just felt like I didn’t get to know any of the characters, the hero went from bent on seduction and never ever going to marry to head over heels in love and I just didn’t get to see how he got there. Books like this make the relationship feel insincere to me and I am always left with the feeling that their happily ever after doesn’t actually last. 😢