Throughout this entire series there is a severe disconnect between love, loss, & family. The words are there, but the feelings and actions that should have been exhibited are not and the decisions that should have been made, weren't.
The emotional responses are flat. It's especially bad between the mom, Nila, & her remaining daughter. Her responses are nonsensical and she seems fine with constantly leaving her kid for someone, anyone, else to watch. Excuse me, but this IS the apocalypse. Why she wasn't more strict with her, for her safety, I'll never understand.
She consistently underrated the danger, and makes inane decisions, which have deadly and/or dangerous consequences.
She gives out information that gets people killed and constantly makes decisions that simple common sense would have halted. And she still has this "kind of" strained friendship, possible, future romance that still doesn't gel. It's just awkward through the entire series.
And the typos, ugh.