sheer madness.
If this is not his worst novel, it is certainly his most unhinged. Yet, I couldn't stop reading. Morbid fascination.
JCP might've had an interesting concept, but he didn't stay on the rails. Plot was never a primary concern. Rather, he prefers deep dives into character psyches. Our main character, referred to as Captain, can be loathsome at times, but his sole refrain is vituperation. He is not overly concerned with his injuries, with their seemingly inescapable plight, their death in life, nor the goings on with his lady love, the eponymous Morwyn. All of these concerns are subordinate to his main obsession, which he rightly calls his obsession. This is of course, his pet topic, vivisection. He also addresses his son continually, as if he were telling this story at the fireside. But who would listen to such a wandering, absurd story unless one were forced to?
The story starts out promisingly. The narrator ascends a cliff with Morwyn and someone annoyingly named Mr. ---. (The name seems to have been redacted in the final draft.) His dog's name is Black Peter. These all accompany him into Hell, after they are flung into it by some 'living star' in a vague way. It is at times called a meteorite. It represents the devil, who was called the Morning Star.
The motto in Hell is "do as you will." This is interpreted variously.
To the detriment of the novel, Morwyn is given almost no lines of dialogue. She remains a mystery because we can't trust any of the ridiculous things the narrator says and thinks.
For this book, JCP choses the cumbrous term "System-of-Things," as a stand-in for God. Other characters employ the same term, sometimes switching to "God," to add to the inconsistencies. This is essentially a return of the First-Cause Syndrome from Glastonbury Romance.
he just so happens to meet Rabelais a few pages after discussing the writer with Socrates. Socrates knows the French author well, is familiar with his books and personality. And what topic do they start in on without preamble? Why, vivisection, of course. What a coincidence.
The fabric of the novel is riddled with mistakes: he "taps out" a message on Morwyn's back, so that he may not be overheard by their companions. The message is characteristically loquacious, and is around half-a-page long. How does he tap this out? Morse code? Of course, the language of Hell, called Leprosid, is a silent language, a sort of thought emanation, understood by all (except Socrates for some unexplained reason.) So why bother to tap it out?
The unconvincing meeting with Socrates reveals that the sophic philosopher has knowledge of such things as 'insulin,' and his rants are not in keeping with his historic persona.
It is strange how our main character knows who these shades are before they introduce themselves. Some of them never say who they are, but he becomes aware of their identity: especially Nero, Marquis de Sade, and Taliesen. He makes too many assumptions, especially about Morwyn's feelings and state of mind. Does she actually desire him? There is little evidence of it.
The Marquis de Sade describes himself as a 'sadist.' This made me laugh out loud. The famous Frenchman delivers his philosophical views at length. Like all the characters in this novel, he is a mouthpiece for the author's views and their opposite. The discussions are circular, touching on human relationships, spiritual capacities, extreme forms of individualism, human progress, the inevitability of cruelty, etc.
The depictions of torture are colorful. One is tempted to call them compelling. The scenes in the airships are preposterous. Where do these air ships and television screen come from? Who manufactures them and ships them to Hell? This was published in 1937. Televisions were not in wide commercial use yet. He was prescient in predicting that they would convey horrid images directly to the masses.
Unfortunately, there is no world-building in this book. Things just happen. I was drawn to this title because I am interested in tales of Katabasis. But this portrait of Hell is hardly Dantean. The suffering seems all virtual. It is not crowded. There's an abundance of space and plentiful entertainment. Very little is described, sadly. JCP neglects his gifts for physical description in favor of pseudo-scientific jeremiads.
Instead of panicking, the characters have stilted conversations. They leisurely stroll for hours at a time, take long rides on highly accessible airships. Powys' style is profoundly odd, rhythmic and easy to read. The whole scenario feels like a wild dream, not a sensical journey. The descent into the depths mirrors the plummet into human nature offered by our m. c.'s psychological insights.
He describes a titan immobilized, immortalized, pecked to pieces by birds of prey, which is reminiscent of Prometheus' fate. Prometheus brought knowledge of fire to mankind. JCP denounces the exploration of forbidden knowledge in the realm of science, while practicing his own form of mysticism. Knowledge must not come at the expense of human or animal life. His main argument.
His references to Milton, Goethe, Homer, Shakespeare and others lent the whole a mock-epic quality. It had the makings of an epic, though he fumbles the form and subject early on, writing perhaps the first things that come into his head instead of carefully composing a lasting work worthy of his legacy.
The morality speeches are sometimes rapturous, always didactic, and occasionally unbearable. The condemnations are worth enduring. The rest of the dreamlike nonsense doesn't sit well, leaves this reader mightily unsatisfied.