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❝If books could have Grammys, Cinderelliot deserves one.❞ --- @Spitefully, Wattpad author.

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❝He was my Prince Charming; I wasn't his Cinderella.❞

[BASED ON A TRUE STORY]

In this short story narrated from the perspective of an unsung version of Cinderella, Elliot Banks tells what it truly feels when you have an unrequited same-gender love with your straight close friend.


ⓒ 2016 Fury Evan's
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10 pages, ebook

Published September 13, 2016

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July 8, 2017
'Cinderelliot' is a beautiful and heartbreaking short story filled with amazing quotes and descriptions. It certainly keeps its readers on their toes and wanting for more. It is a wonderful short story, but I am definitely supportive if the author wishes to lengthen it into a full-length novel. Thank you so much for writing such a work of art.
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145 reviews
March 29, 2018
There are no words to describe the Earth-shattering beauty this story tells.
Let me cast a small light on this terribly love-struck boy Elliot. Who is madly in love with this boy he is a friend with, Ronan. Things go from bad to worse to good to bad to okay. Reed is another boy we meet later.
If you haven't read this, you need to. It is simplistic with beautiful wording. Evans knows that every word counts and does not waste it.

Now being me, I was reading this about twenty minutes to midnight. It was dark, and I was tired, but this book wakes you up. It takes every fiber of your being to keep going and keep reading it. That is about painful it is to try to live through these experience with Elliot. I just want to give him a hug.

Unlike many many fairytales this ending.....well I will not say any more than this: True love may be real, but happy endings....they're not.

There is pain there is joy this is unconditional love there is sorrow. This story is brutally real and sadly based on true events. I want to give Elliot a hug. I hope everyone can take something away with them, for this is so much this story will tell.
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684 reviews40 followers
January 1, 2021
4.5/5

Another Wattpad hidden gem is Cinderelliot. Never in all my years have I read such a poetic, captivating, and soul-wrenching story.

One thing that stands out most is that when it's cinderELLA and prince charming, they will always get happily ever after. But when it's cinderELLIOT and prince charming, it's more difficult and very impossible. god so much pain is happening, but this is very realistic in a world that works against all of us cinderelliots. This book reminds us that all endings are happy so are sad we just have to get up and go through life with a smile and remember the happy times we shared with that person.

1 review14 followers
March 29, 2017
dude this book was so lit, ahaha. it was great. so many turns and twists, and so much raw emotion that is delved into the words, cinderelliot gives the entire world a feel for how much pain there is when you have to deal with homophobia and love.

it was interesting and unique, poetic and artistic. the plot twists (damn you fury), gives readers a splitting view of how vulnerability of a human being can change into courage, therefore power. a beautiful book, completed again by the amazing fury (enter real name here) evans.
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66 reviews
July 13, 2017
Just....incredible. This book is a short story, with short chapters, but it just has this way of pulling you in. The writing style is different from what most everyone is used to, and it's a story that breaks your heart, because I'm sure many people can relate to loving someone who might not be the best person. This book has amazing metaphors and the weaving of the story is masterful. Absolutely loved it.
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113 reviews44 followers
November 28, 2016
4.5/5

First chapter and I am already head over heels for this book! I love the way the author narrated it and it made me feel different emotions. Honestly, though, it was only the butterflies in my stomach that I felt all the time while I was reading this wonderful piece of art! This literary piece deserves more recognition.
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March 9, 2017
Fury Evans is a great author, and I just recently discovered these amazing books.
However, (yes I know that the word however is foreboding) I think there might be some room for change maybe? I don't really know it's just whenever I read these books I feel like there's something missing.
Cinderelliot is a good book with an emotional rollercoaster.
3 reviews
December 26, 2016
Today I had the honour of discovering the talent of Fury Evans.

It has been a while since I have found a book that drew me to tears, but Cinderelliot was a book that made me cry. It was such a realistic story and I loved it.

If you can only read one of his books, read Cinderelliot.
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75 reviews18 followers
March 10, 2017
Loved the style. Made me think I was reading a diary. Some parts were really dark and I didn't like the demonisation of Rania but it had such a real ending that was rather upsetting.
16 reviews
September 11, 2022
‘Cinderelliot’ is a masterpiece.

And I don’t say that about a lot of books, so that’s got to mean something.

I read this story on Wattpad.

Usually, Wattpad books aren’t the best, but this was an obvious exception.

I read this back in 2020 and I can’t remember much (hence the 4 stars) but from what I can remember, I cried reading this, and anything that makes me cry is an automatic favourite.

This book didn’t have an happy ending, but that was the best part about it. It wasn’t a book that needed one.

It was short and gut reaching and needs to be published.
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1 review
October 26, 2017
Cinderelliot was profound. That is one word I can use to describe it. It was raw, it was intense and it was written beautifully. It is a book that evokes emotion from beginning till end; a wonderfully crafted peice of art. Truly a fairytale worth reading and definitely one of my favourite books.
1 review
November 14, 2017
This book tells an amazing story about how a boy named Elliot discovers himself and finds him stuck between his Prince Charming and the "Next-Best-Thing". It deserves more recognition and I love his stories overall.
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19 reviews
April 14, 2018
I have really mixed feelings about this book. As I loved all the descriptions and feelings, I struggled a bit with the ending. Honestly, I think it was kind of rushed, but I loved it nonetheless. Definitely a recommend, though!
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69 reviews
May 28, 2019
the writing style was what kept me going through this mish-mash of a short story. combined with some good humor and well-plotted story. and you got right there a pretty good five star short story. props to fury evans for making cinderelliot a reality.
39 reviews1 follower
November 25, 2017
"Cinderelliot" is a book that makes you want to laugh cry and do everything in between; it really shows how everyone wants a happily ever after within this harsh reality called life.
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16 reviews
December 15, 2017
Cinderelliot by Fury Evans is hands down the greatest book I have ever read. Seeing the struggles from Elliot's mind are heart-breaking and tragic. As the main character Elliot struggles with his love for someone, others try to rip it away from him. HE suffers so clearly through the book, i could feel his pain. AS the story goes on and things happen, Elliot learns lessons and even blossoms a new love for someone, before they commit suicide. Elliot saves them both in this tragic tale of Cinderelliot.

In most fairy tales, there is a happy ending. This one had a devastation in the foundation of the end. I wanted so badly for Elliot to be happy after everything he had been through, but it left me in tears. I liked how I could feel Elliot's emotions and connect them to mine own experiences. I also loved how the characters developed through out the story, it was very incredible. I believe one of the main themes of the book was probably how you can't always have a happy ending.

My favorite quote from the book was "Maybe I could own the earth, the sky, and everything in between if I had him," said by Elliot. (this book doesn't really have page numbers so) I really like this quote because it sorta stuck with me. I feel like i do fell this way about someone at times. A lot of people feel this way too.

This is a great book and i would definitely read it a billion more times.
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300 reviews
December 19, 2021
This is honestly a masterpiece. I cried so much reading this, it was amazing.
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