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Shearwater Ocean Depths #1
Shearwater
When my parents died in an accident, they left me like a piece of furniture to a grandfather I never knew existed. In Ireland. As if moving halfway around the world wasn't bad enough, I soon learned my mother had left behind some unresolved drama - dark secrets that were screaming to be uncovered. And then there are the things I can't explain. Strange things keep happening around me. Happening to me. Is it because of Sebastian, the golden-haired stranger who showed up in town at the same time as I did? Or Ethan, the kid locals whisper plays with dark magic?
Maybe both. Maybe neither. But someone is definitely out to get me, and I need to figure out why, and fast... because I'm discovering powers of my own. Powers that I can't contain. And no matter what I do or who is to blame, if I don't discover the real reason my mother fled Ireland, more people are going to die.
MERMAIDS ARE REAL.
And they're going to kill us all.
This is of the first FULL book of the Ocean Depths series; it includes parts One and Two and is almost 140,000 words long.
Shearwater is a young adult mermaid novel that will appeal to lovers of paranormal romance, urban fantasy, witches, Irish mythology, supernatural folklore and, of course, mermaids.
Maybe both. Maybe neither. But someone is definitely out to get me, and I need to figure out why, and fast... because I'm discovering powers of my own. Powers that I can't contain. And no matter what I do or who is to blame, if I don't discover the real reason my mother fled Ireland, more people are going to die.
MERMAIDS ARE REAL.
And they're going to kill us all.
This is of the first FULL book of the Ocean Depths series; it includes parts One and Two and is almost 140,000 words long.
Shearwater is a young adult mermaid novel that will appeal to lovers of paranormal romance, urban fantasy, witches, Irish mythology, supernatural folklore and, of course, mermaids.
436 pages, ebook
First published January 19, 2016
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November 2, 2018
I received this digital copy from Urban Epics via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of this book in any way.
Actual rating: 3.5
Obligatory Summary
Clara Clark (whose name makes her sound like a comic book character) is a 15 year old who self describes herself like this:
TL;DR she is ~so unique~
So Clara's overbearing mother (and her dad) die in a car accident one day as she's singing in a concert and she is sent to live with her Irish grandfather that she didn't know existed in a small town in Ireland. Once there, she tries to discover the mysteries her mother left behind, while also changing in ways she never imagined (like getting hot overnight and reading people's emotions).
She also meets a rude bad boy wiz kid and a blond stalker. She reasonably falls for the stalker.
But then strange things start happening in Ireland and it's up to Clara to save her new home!
The Writing and Worldbuilding
This book had a very interesting idea but a less than satisfactory execution. Honestly, the biggest problem was that it didn't seem to be...edited or proofread or beta read or anything. It felt like I was reading the first draft. There were inconsistencies and redundancies and random name changes. At one point, a character was speaking about themself in third person as if they weren't there. Also...it was painfully obvious that D.S. Murphy doesn't know basic dialogue formatting standards. He had innumerable instances of "...," he nodded. and quotation marks after monologue paragraphs, completely confusing who was speaking. These are dialogue rules I learned in the 6th grade. It's unforgivable to not know them.
The worldbuilding was also very expositiony, sometimes straight up technical info dumps that felt unrealistic and stilted. There were also way too many plotlines, and it felt rushed and slow at the same time because of that. The magic sometimes tried to use scientific explanations and then just went with magical justifications and that felt very inconsistent and annoying.
I did like the mystery though. And I found myself wanting to know how it ended and how it all came together. And some of the funnier lines were chuckle-worthy.
The Characters
Ariel: Clara is honestly so annoying. She claims to be someone who needs answers and won't forget anything important but constantly forgets super important things whenever merboi Sebastian looks at her. It was extremely tropey and cliche and made me feel super distant from her. She literally thinks about how attractive and cool people are like a week after her whole life gets uprooted. She's extremely status conscious but hates girls who act exactly like her (like mean girl Roisin) and that makes her someone I just don't particularly like.
She also has to (spoiler alert though it honestly doesn't amount to anything) "give up" singing 76% through the book despite not singing for three months before then (aka the majority of the book).
Sebastian: He's part mermaid part Wikipedia. Not much of a personality and not much of a sex appeal tbh. And I just couldn't stop seeing Sebastian the crab from The Little Mermaid. "You've got to pucker your lips like dis!"
Ethan: I couldn't find this guy attractive because he has the same name as my brother, but otherwise, I actually quite liked him. He's a douchebag but at least he has a personality.
The Squad: Jackie was nice but boring, Derry was fun (and gay so there's that), but Patricia was a straight up b a lot of the time and that made her really unlikable. I thought she was going to be the mean girl but then it was Raisin Bran instead.
Conclusion
I liked it enough. It has the skeleton of a good story but lacked any unique writing or characters and suffered from technical problems. With a good editor, it could be something great.
Actual rating: 3.5
Obligatory Summary
Clara Clark (whose name makes her sound like a comic book character) is a 15 year old who self describes herself like this:
I have a dark sense of humor that few people get, and a passive-aggressive sarcasm that comes from having an overbearing mother and a fear of any kind of conflict.
TL;DR she is ~so unique~
So Clara's overbearing mother (and her dad) die in a car accident one day as she's singing in a concert and she is sent to live with her Irish grandfather that she didn't know existed in a small town in Ireland. Once there, she tries to discover the mysteries her mother left behind, while also changing in ways she never imagined (like getting hot overnight and reading people's emotions).
She also meets a rude bad boy wiz kid and a blond stalker. She reasonably falls for the stalker.
But then strange things start happening in Ireland and it's up to Clara to save her new home!
The Writing and Worldbuilding
This book had a very interesting idea but a less than satisfactory execution. Honestly, the biggest problem was that it didn't seem to be...edited or proofread or beta read or anything. It felt like I was reading the first draft. There were inconsistencies and redundancies and random name changes. At one point, a character was speaking about themself in third person as if they weren't there. Also...it was painfully obvious that D.S. Murphy doesn't know basic dialogue formatting standards. He had innumerable instances of "...," he nodded. and quotation marks after monologue paragraphs, completely confusing who was speaking. These are dialogue rules I learned in the 6th grade. It's unforgivable to not know them.
The worldbuilding was also very expositiony, sometimes straight up technical info dumps that felt unrealistic and stilted. There were also way too many plotlines, and it felt rushed and slow at the same time because of that. The magic sometimes tried to use scientific explanations and then just went with magical justifications and that felt very inconsistent and annoying.
I did like the mystery though. And I found myself wanting to know how it ended and how it all came together. And some of the funnier lines were chuckle-worthy.
The Characters
Ariel: Clara is honestly so annoying. She claims to be someone who needs answers and won't forget anything important but constantly forgets super important things whenever merboi Sebastian looks at her. It was extremely tropey and cliche and made me feel super distant from her. She literally thinks about how attractive and cool people are like a week after her whole life gets uprooted. She's extremely status conscious but hates girls who act exactly like her (like mean girl Roisin) and that makes her someone I just don't particularly like.
She also has to (spoiler alert though it honestly doesn't amount to anything) "give up" singing 76% through the book despite not singing for three months before then (aka the majority of the book).
Sebastian: He's part mermaid part Wikipedia. Not much of a personality and not much of a sex appeal tbh. And I just couldn't stop seeing Sebastian the crab from The Little Mermaid. "You've got to pucker your lips like dis!"
Ethan: I couldn't find this guy attractive because he has the same name as my brother, but otherwise, I actually quite liked him. He's a douchebag but at least he has a personality.
The Squad: Jackie was nice but boring, Derry was fun (and gay so there's that), but Patricia was a straight up b a lot of the time and that made her really unlikable. I thought she was going to be the mean girl but then it was Raisin Bran instead.
Conclusion
I liked it enough. It has the skeleton of a good story but lacked any unique writing or characters and suffered from technical problems. With a good editor, it could be something great.
May 10, 2018
2.5 stars
Mermaids, Irish Folklore, Magical Arts, Teen Drama and Ireland. How could I not give this book a shot ? I'm glad I did, I see an author to watch here. There were flaws, but there was something alluring too. The story was interesting, the beginning started strong, with mysterious events, people, magic and a new location. The author spent a lot of time researching and detailing mythological stories to give us a history behind the beings involved. The imagery was well written and easily visualized. I was sitting on the edge of my seat when the first part ended. Sadly, I did not have the same felling through the second part.
The second part of the story dragged long and slow for me. it was over filled with detailing of these myths and magics, all dry and too long. I felt like I was reading a school text through some of it. The characters just went flat for me, they seemed very stereotypical in their teen roles. The mean girl, was a cut out replica from other books. The MC was emotionally stoic when we were to feel something for her character, then she'd be enthusiastic at odd times. Oh and she withheld information because it wasn't the right time to bring it up ? Oh I really hate that, it's a life or death situation and a character decides to talk about it later after dinner or party or...There was a stabbing that was just left out there, dead bodies with strangeness all around that was barely talked about. It was frustraiting, I felt like the author got lost in the story trying to check off all the must haves in a young adult read. Hot guys-check, Hot girls- check, Love triangle- check, Dead parents- check, Mary Sue MC- check, School bullies-check, Unfair teacher- check, Clothing drama-check, Feeling of inadequacy-check, Super duper powerful MC-check.
I am not sure if I want to read more in this series. I see talent but it need tuning, an editor, and some good beta readers.
Mermaids, Irish Folklore, Magical Arts, Teen Drama and Ireland. How could I not give this book a shot ? I'm glad I did, I see an author to watch here. There were flaws, but there was something alluring too. The story was interesting, the beginning started strong, with mysterious events, people, magic and a new location. The author spent a lot of time researching and detailing mythological stories to give us a history behind the beings involved. The imagery was well written and easily visualized. I was sitting on the edge of my seat when the first part ended. Sadly, I did not have the same felling through the second part.
The second part of the story dragged long and slow for me. it was over filled with detailing of these myths and magics, all dry and too long. I felt like I was reading a school text through some of it. The characters just went flat for me, they seemed very stereotypical in their teen roles. The mean girl, was a cut out replica from other books. The MC was emotionally stoic when we were to feel something for her character, then she'd be enthusiastic at odd times. Oh and she withheld information because it wasn't the right time to bring it up ? Oh I really hate that, it's a life or death situation and a character decides to talk about it later after dinner or party or...There was a stabbing that was just left out there, dead bodies with strangeness all around that was barely talked about. It was frustraiting, I felt like the author got lost in the story trying to check off all the must haves in a young adult read. Hot guys-check, Hot girls- check, Love triangle- check, Dead parents- check, Mary Sue MC- check, School bullies-check, Unfair teacher- check, Clothing drama-check, Feeling of inadequacy-check, Super duper powerful MC-check.
I am not sure if I want to read more in this series. I see talent but it need tuning, an editor, and some good beta readers.
May 10, 2018
I found this book to be enchanting. The author wrote this story very well with lots of research. The mythology of the mermaids was so interesting! The world building was amazing and captivating. The main character, Clara Clark, was very relatable and believable. I am definitely looking forward to the next book in this series!
Clara is a sophomore in high school and has the lead role in the school play. She's very antsy because her parents aren't there yet and they're never late. She realizes they were in an accident when she sees the uniformed men come into the auditorium and her life has changed forever. She has to move and live with her grandfather, Aeden Daly, in Portballintrae, Ireland and since she thought he was dead there is some major immediate adjusting for her.
She's always had a fascination with the ocean and her mother never let her near it, now she is finding out why. Her mother had lied about her past and she is going to figure out why. During her inquiries she finds out her mother had a difficult childhood. On Clara's sixteenth birthday things change dramatically. SHE changes, her appearance changes and she has weird powers. She is really a Fomori, or merrow which means she's a mermaid!
Sebastian, a super hot mysterious guy from school, teaches her about her heritage and how to hide her Meroe from humans but its not enough. She flees to the sea as it calls to her, only to find herself stuck in a centuries old war with no control. She's also stuck between two guys, one human an one merrow. I can't wait to find out more!
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for giving me a copy of this book for a fair and honest review.
Clara is a sophomore in high school and has the lead role in the school play. She's very antsy because her parents aren't there yet and they're never late. She realizes they were in an accident when she sees the uniformed men come into the auditorium and her life has changed forever. She has to move and live with her grandfather, Aeden Daly, in Portballintrae, Ireland and since she thought he was dead there is some major immediate adjusting for her.
She's always had a fascination with the ocean and her mother never let her near it, now she is finding out why. Her mother had lied about her past and she is going to figure out why. During her inquiries she finds out her mother had a difficult childhood. On Clara's sixteenth birthday things change dramatically. SHE changes, her appearance changes and she has weird powers. She is really a Fomori, or merrow which means she's a mermaid!
Sebastian, a super hot mysterious guy from school, teaches her about her heritage and how to hide her Meroe from humans but its not enough. She flees to the sea as it calls to her, only to find herself stuck in a centuries old war with no control. She's also stuck between two guys, one human an one merrow. I can't wait to find out more!
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for giving me a copy of this book for a fair and honest review.
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May 7, 2018When I began the book I was sucked right into it: there were strong characters, Ireland, fomoris and Tuatas De... But then, when I was at Part 2, it seemed like nothing happened. I mean, there was some action (basically siren attacks) but the plot kept stalling and repeating the same: sirens wanting to kill humanity because humanity misused their blood and contaminated the oceans; Tuatas wanting to kill sirens because they are monsters. Our main character debating whether she loves Sebastian or not, whether she loves Ethan or not; wanting to play a part on the war and wanting to know more about the conflict. And every time we get aaaall we know until now repeated before adding some new info (like weapons).
While the book was great at the beginning and has very strong points and characters, it would have benefited of less stalling and moving the story forward. And while the triangle between the two guys and her was interesting at first as they come from two different worlds and she has a feet in each, it soons become repetitive.
While the book was great at the beginning and has very strong points and characters, it would have benefited of less stalling and moving the story forward. And while the triangle between the two guys and her was interesting at first as they come from two different worlds and she has a feet in each, it soons become repetitive.
March 12, 2016
So, I'm trying very hard to be fair.
I'm always interested in stories about Mermaids - who isn't? In that respect this book almost had something going. But with so much set-up time where nothing happened, this never got to anything really interesting.
On top of that, the magical system was a bit hazy, even though there were large swaths of text devoted to it. The different groups of people were not explained well and their allegiances seemed random and capricious.
Though I did think it was interesting that the mermaids were crustacean-like, that's not the typical look one goes for. Also, that some mermaids were like: yeah, humans gotta go... I thought that was pretty realistic and I would have liked to learn more about that, but it never came up.
The characters were cardboard cutouts without feelings of their own. The two friends disappeared when they weren't necessary, and reappeared when useful. Same with the 'Mean Girl' whose name I've forgotten, and the two love interests. The two boys smirked a lot and didn't have a personality trait between them. I could not fathom why she chose one over the other - it just never came through in the writing. Feeling a 'mystical connection' is not really enough.
The main character was the same - I couldn't pick her out of a line-up of Mary Sues at this point, and that's because you never really got a feel for her. You never knew what she thought about anything besides being sad her parents were gone - which you have to assume because they had just died and she doesn't really go through it.
There was too much setup and not enough plot, as I said. Even if this is only the first part of the book - I read too many pages where nothing changed. The only thing that really happened was that the girl's parents died (BIGGEST YA CLICHE EVER) and she moved in with relatives in Ireland.
Were I an editor, I would suggest getting rid of the whole first part where she's in America, and starting it on her first day of school in Ireland.
This is, by the way, only the first part of the book you just paid for. At the end, the author says he released the book this way (selling the first part and waiting to release the second when he had 'more feedback') because this was his first novel and he's insecure about his writing.
A) that's what beta readers are for
B) that's what editors are for
C) this actually ISN'T his first book, as anyone with rudimentary interneting skills can see.
I started out giving a higher rating, but I'm dropping it now because I'm remembering how mad I was when I realized I just PAID to be someone's beta reader. When I buy a book, I expect a certain level of professionalism, even from self-published writers. This was bad form all around.
I'm always interested in stories about Mermaids - who isn't? In that respect this book almost had something going. But with so much set-up time where nothing happened, this never got to anything really interesting.
On top of that, the magical system was a bit hazy, even though there were large swaths of text devoted to it. The different groups of people were not explained well and their allegiances seemed random and capricious.
Though I did think it was interesting that the mermaids were crustacean-like, that's not the typical look one goes for. Also, that some mermaids were like: yeah, humans gotta go... I thought that was pretty realistic and I would have liked to learn more about that, but it never came up.
The characters were cardboard cutouts without feelings of their own. The two friends disappeared when they weren't necessary, and reappeared when useful. Same with the 'Mean Girl' whose name I've forgotten, and the two love interests. The two boys smirked a lot and didn't have a personality trait between them. I could not fathom why she chose one over the other - it just never came through in the writing. Feeling a 'mystical connection' is not really enough.
The main character was the same - I couldn't pick her out of a line-up of Mary Sues at this point, and that's because you never really got a feel for her. You never knew what she thought about anything besides being sad her parents were gone - which you have to assume because they had just died and she doesn't really go through it.
There was too much setup and not enough plot, as I said. Even if this is only the first part of the book - I read too many pages where nothing changed. The only thing that really happened was that the girl's parents died (BIGGEST YA CLICHE EVER) and she moved in with relatives in Ireland.
Were I an editor, I would suggest getting rid of the whole first part where she's in America, and starting it on her first day of school in Ireland.
This is, by the way, only the first part of the book you just paid for. At the end, the author says he released the book this way (selling the first part and waiting to release the second when he had 'more feedback') because this was his first novel and he's insecure about his writing.
A) that's what beta readers are for
B) that's what editors are for
C) this actually ISN'T his first book, as anyone with rudimentary interneting skills can see.
I started out giving a higher rating, but I'm dropping it now because I'm remembering how mad I was when I realized I just PAID to be someone's beta reader. When I buy a book, I expect a certain level of professionalism, even from self-published writers. This was bad form all around.
February 21, 2016
Fantastic book! I was drawn in from the beginning and kept turning the pages until the end. I loved Clara, the main character -- she was relatable. I don't read many mermaid books, but I loved the mermaids in this series. They were unique, and I've never read anything like it before. This book is definitely great for fans of Twilight. I can't wait to see what happens in part 2!
June 19, 2017
I thoroughly enjoyed Shearwater by Derek Murphy. The book opens with an intense prologue of a woman being stabbed by a man and then she grabs the knife and stabs him. Then they both plunge off the cliff and into the water. The first chapter jumps to thirty two years later and the main character, Clara Clark, is waiting for her parents to show up and watch her perform at her high school. While she's singing, police show up to tell her that her parents perished in a car accident. Her mother's will states that if something happens to her parents, guardianship goes to her grandfather in Ireland, her mother's father. The problem is, she didn't even know he existed. The longer she's in Ireland, the more mysterious and strange her surroundings become and she begins to learn piece by piece why her mother left Ireland behind all those years ago. On her sixteenth birthday, her looks become more defined, sleek and beautiful and now she truly resembles her mother. Her heritage is slowly revealed and the mystery around the killings grows deeper. The creative story and plot make this a very interesting read and complex characters, mythology and historical legends of mermaids, Atlantis and humans weave together for a fun fantasy read; 5 stars!
May 7, 2018
I wasn't expecting much but I got a really fun time out of this book!
June 14, 2018
***** 3.75 Stars *****
I love how Shearwater is about mysterious mermaids and myths. I enjoyed the story and adventure, but it was just missing something. I didn't love the characters and I thought certain things could have been elaborated.
Will I read the next book in the series? Probably.
I love how Shearwater is about mysterious mermaids and myths. I enjoyed the story and adventure, but it was just missing something. I didn't love the characters and I thought certain things could have been elaborated.
Will I read the next book in the series? Probably.
February 2, 2016
This was not my favorite book, but it is only the first part so, who knows, the story may pick up.
First off, I would just like to say that while I like where the plot is going, it felt WAY too much like Twilight for me. There were so many examples that I had to mark down in my copy of things that felt like they were taken directly from the Twilight universe.
Twilight crossovers:
-Girl leaves home (Arizona. Who else is from Arizona? Oh, yeah. Bella Swan) and moves to a completely different area
-Said girl almost gets hit by a moving vehicle
-Clara has read all of the classics and is now ahead in English class. Go figure
-dangerous boy meets unsuspecting girl and they fall in love immediately after introductions. They have never felt this way about anyone before, and never will again!
-Said boy follows said girl around because she is "interesting" and he has to "get to know more about her while also protecting her from outside threats" (he shows up AT HER HOUSE! They didn't even know each other! But, of course, Clara doesn't care)
-Girl can't stop thinking about boy; she just has to know what he is. Girl gets mopey when boy pushes her away
-supernatural creatures with sparkly skin
-Everyone is a supermodel and everyone they meet wants to get in their pants (but of course Sebastian only wants Clara).
-Other boys getting mad about the fact they can't have main girl
-Girl goes to bookstore to buy a book to learn more about boy and what he is. Girl almost dies very shortly after but, don't worry, boy is there to save her.
-Boy was watching girl because she is so interesting and needs protection. This clearly makes up for the fact he was stalking her
-Boy willing to risk everything he has just to be with girl
-Girl smells good. Boy likes smelling her (not even kidding. It was in the book)
-A different boy is also attractive, but he is on the opposite side of boy 1. Boy 2 is obsessed with girl as well, and hates boy 1
I have more, but that is a pretty good summary. It was just that these little similarities to Twilight, and multiple other ya novel that I have read, annoyed me.
There were other things in the book that threw me off.
The prologue didn't really fit with the story for me. It was beautiful, but I am confused with how it connected. Was the woman Clara's grandmother, and the girl her mom? I think that the boy would be Colin Blake, but I feel like he would be too old if he was that age at the time this event happened. Hopefully this will be explained in the second part of the book.
Clara's parents were killed while driving on the highway, which is why she had to move to Ireland and get involved in this whole mess. But the story really only focused on Clara's mother. I would have liked to see more about how her father was involved in everything; he must have known at least something. Also, Clara doesn't spend a lot of time grieving over their deaths. She jumps right into school and friends. She does cry at the wake held by her grandfather, but other than that, her thoughts about her parents were centered around the fact her mother was part-merrow. Clara is so into solving the mystery that the sense of grief and recovery was lost for me.
I did like how fast the book was paced, however. There weren't too many dragging descriptions, and the author was able to keep the plot moving at a nice pace. I just wish there was a little more development of the relationships among the characters. They all felt rushed; Clara became immediate best friends with Jackie and Derry, and it seemed like right after meeting Sebastian, she was in love.
There are plenty more things I would love to talk about, but alas, I do not have the time. Overall, I would like to say this is a good book. I find the author quite lovely; he is using this book to help with environmental problems, all out of the goodness of his heart. The book was also free, which was quite nice, as will the second half be.
If you enjoy supernatural romances, I would suggest this book. It wasn't for me, but that is because I usually don't read novels like this. I am a much bigger fan of action than romance. I can't wait to read the second part to see where this story ends up.
First off, I would just like to say that while I like where the plot is going, it felt WAY too much like Twilight for me. There were so many examples that I had to mark down in my copy of things that felt like they were taken directly from the Twilight universe.
Twilight crossovers:
-Girl leaves home (Arizona. Who else is from Arizona? Oh, yeah. Bella Swan) and moves to a completely different area
-Said girl almost gets hit by a moving vehicle
-Clara has read all of the classics and is now ahead in English class. Go figure
-dangerous boy meets unsuspecting girl and they fall in love immediately after introductions. They have never felt this way about anyone before, and never will again!
-Said boy follows said girl around because she is "interesting" and he has to "get to know more about her while also protecting her from outside threats" (he shows up AT HER HOUSE! They didn't even know each other! But, of course, Clara doesn't care)
-Girl can't stop thinking about boy; she just has to know what he is. Girl gets mopey when boy pushes her away
-supernatural creatures with sparkly skin
-Everyone is a supermodel and everyone they meet wants to get in their pants (but of course Sebastian only wants Clara).
-Other boys getting mad about the fact they can't have main girl
-Girl goes to bookstore to buy a book to learn more about boy and what he is. Girl almost dies very shortly after but, don't worry, boy is there to save her.
-Boy was watching girl because she is so interesting and needs protection. This clearly makes up for the fact he was stalking her
-Boy willing to risk everything he has just to be with girl
-Girl smells good. Boy likes smelling her (not even kidding. It was in the book)
-A different boy is also attractive, but he is on the opposite side of boy 1. Boy 2 is obsessed with girl as well, and hates boy 1
I have more, but that is a pretty good summary. It was just that these little similarities to Twilight, and multiple other ya novel that I have read, annoyed me.
There were other things in the book that threw me off.
The prologue didn't really fit with the story for me. It was beautiful, but I am confused with how it connected. Was the woman Clara's grandmother, and the girl her mom? I think that the boy would be Colin Blake, but I feel like he would be too old if he was that age at the time this event happened. Hopefully this will be explained in the second part of the book.
Clara's parents were killed while driving on the highway, which is why she had to move to Ireland and get involved in this whole mess. But the story really only focused on Clara's mother. I would have liked to see more about how her father was involved in everything; he must have known at least something. Also, Clara doesn't spend a lot of time grieving over their deaths. She jumps right into school and friends. She does cry at the wake held by her grandfather, but other than that, her thoughts about her parents were centered around the fact her mother was part-merrow. Clara is so into solving the mystery that the sense of grief and recovery was lost for me.
I did like how fast the book was paced, however. There weren't too many dragging descriptions, and the author was able to keep the plot moving at a nice pace. I just wish there was a little more development of the relationships among the characters. They all felt rushed; Clara became immediate best friends with Jackie and Derry, and it seemed like right after meeting Sebastian, she was in love.
There are plenty more things I would love to talk about, but alas, I do not have the time. Overall, I would like to say this is a good book. I find the author quite lovely; he is using this book to help with environmental problems, all out of the goodness of his heart. The book was also free, which was quite nice, as will the second half be.
If you enjoy supernatural romances, I would suggest this book. It wasn't for me, but that is because I usually don't read novels like this. I am a much bigger fan of action than romance. I can't wait to read the second part to see where this story ends up.
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February 28, 2016*I received an eARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.*
This was an enjoyable read with an original take on merfolk that I've never seen before. I loved how the author took aspects from various different undersea creatures and combined them in unique ways. The mythology and history surrounding the merfolk (or merrow) and the location was fun to learn about too.
I also thought Clara made a great protagonist. She seemed realistically a teenager without being annoying or immature, and I feel like my teen self could relate to her. And the other characters were likeable as well.
Some characters were a bit vague for a while, but eventually the answers came to light, as well as an explanation for why they were being vague in the first place, so don't worry, you won't be left hanging with no answers. There is a bit of a cliffhanger at the end since this is part one of the story, but I'm looking forward to the rest!
This was an enjoyable read with an original take on merfolk that I've never seen before. I loved how the author took aspects from various different undersea creatures and combined them in unique ways. The mythology and history surrounding the merfolk (or merrow) and the location was fun to learn about too.
I also thought Clara made a great protagonist. She seemed realistically a teenager without being annoying or immature, and I feel like my teen self could relate to her. And the other characters were likeable as well.
Some characters were a bit vague for a while, but eventually the answers came to light, as well as an explanation for why they were being vague in the first place, so don't worry, you won't be left hanging with no answers. There is a bit of a cliffhanger at the end since this is part one of the story, but I'm looking forward to the rest!
January 17, 2016
Shearwater is a Paranormal Fantasy novel that will appeal to lovers of paranormal romance, urban fantasy, witches, mermaids, mythology, and paranormal horror.
My rating,
Awesome or nah: ★★★★★
( 5 Merrows out of 5)
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Shearwater really allowed me to embrace the different emotions (of Clara) of grief, happiness and newness. There is enough mystery in this book to keep you keen but not make you confused. The prologue in Shearwater drew me to the characters and into the story.
Even though I'm not really a huge fan of mythology, history and the sorts, I think those back stories really supports the credibility of Clara's (main character) past.
I think that they were a little to dense, in my opinion. Unless there's going to be further actions that will be based on this mythology and sayings, I'm not a big fan of it, honestly speaking (: I do have to mention that I'm almost always skeptical about ARCs that aren't the hype yet, and nobody can tell you whether its good or not. I've read ARCs for reviews before, some of the same genre and some of others, and I'm not ashamed to say that I've not enjoyed some of them. BUT, I've throughly enjoyed this book
You do not need to worry about clichés, cause gurrrlll, this book exceeds my expectations. You have NO idea <3
CAN'T WAIT FOR PART TWO!
My rating,
Awesome or nah: ★★★★★
( 5 Merrows out of 5)
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Shearwater really allowed me to embrace the different emotions (of Clara) of grief, happiness and newness. There is enough mystery in this book to keep you keen but not make you confused. The prologue in Shearwater drew me to the characters and into the story.
Even though I'm not really a huge fan of mythology, history and the sorts, I think those back stories really supports the credibility of Clara's (main character) past.
I think that they were a little to dense, in my opinion. Unless there's going to be further actions that will be based on this mythology and sayings, I'm not a big fan of it, honestly speaking (: I do have to mention that I'm almost always skeptical about ARCs that aren't the hype yet, and nobody can tell you whether its good or not. I've read ARCs for reviews before, some of the same genre and some of others, and I'm not ashamed to say that I've not enjoyed some of them. BUT, I've throughly enjoyed this book
You do not need to worry about clichés, cause gurrrlll, this book exceeds my expectations. You have NO idea <3
CAN'T WAIT FOR PART TWO!
July 27, 2018
Overall I enjoyed this story. It was interesting learning about both sides. I'm interested in seeing how things will go in the next book. I was also happy that Sebastian and Clara were together in the end.
August 31, 2017
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this lovely mermaid fantasy novel, it is very well written full of the beautiful Irish landscape and seascapes, and more importantly full of Irish lore which deals with the Tautha de Danann, the Fomorians and the Marrow/mermaid lore. Apart from all this we get to meet the heroine Clara who prior to her parents untimely death in the USA she did not even know that she had kin in Ireland but she is shipped off to her next of kin who happens to be her grandfather and who lives in Ireland and the secrets her mother kept from her start to unravel. Clara is torn between Sebastian and Ethan and fears for her very life as she starts to receive threatening notes. A very interesting read, dying to read part two of this enticing novel.
February 23, 2018
What a beautiful book dipped in Irish mythology and a great twist on mermaids, but its the authors way of writing it is so beautiful it covers loss self questioning and having to grow up quickly.
The main story is about Clara after having lost her parents moves in with a grandfather she never knew existed to a life and roots she never knew she had ( mermaids).
I will definitely be reading next book, and more works by this author incredible, i also love how there is a romance but it doesn't take away from the fantastic story a book for all ages.
The main story is about Clara after having lost her parents moves in with a grandfather she never knew existed to a life and roots she never knew she had ( mermaids).
I will definitely be reading next book, and more works by this author incredible, i also love how there is a romance but it doesn't take away from the fantastic story a book for all ages.
January 28, 2016
I love mermaids. I’ve aways loved them. When I was a kid, my favourite Disney princess was Ariel. Hands down, The Little Mermaid was my favourite movie. I really don’t know what it was about mermaids that drew me in. I guess I was always drawn to the magical feeling of being able to explore the sea and live in a castle underwater and to play in shipwrecks. Funny how I’m now deathly afraid of the ocean huh?
And yes I am now listening to The Little Mermaid soundtrack. Don’t judge.
But anyway, I think mermaids would have to be one of my favourite supernatural creatures. Unfortunately, majority of supernatural books only really deal with vampires or wizards. Go figure. So when I heard that Derek was coming up with a book on mermaids that was comparable to Twilight, I immediately knew that I was going to absolutely love it.
Overview
The book started out and ended amazing. I absolutly loved the pace even though it was slower then I’m usually used to. There was this addictive feel to it that books either have or don’t. The writing was easy to follow yet complex enough to make me feel like I was really there. I flew through the book and I would have actually finished it much earlier if I didn’t have to put it down to review another book.
Characters
I loved Clara. I thought she was such a strong willed person and she wasn’t some little loser that suddenly got popular because of her looks and the guys she was hanging around. Instead, she got to town, made friends with the pretty people and then continued to stay grounded despite everything that happened. I don’t know if you get what I mean but it was very refreshing. The only thing I thought was bad was that she seemed to have very little sense of self-preservation. I mean you know Ethan is bad news and yet you let him take you out alone to an isolated place that is technically closed. And then you let him know that you know about the mermaid thing? I mean girl you need to get some sense!
Sebastian was not as strong a character as I wanted him to be. I kept getting these vibes like he was coddling Clara and making her out to be unable to function without him when in actual fact she obviously could. I don’t know. He was probably the most ‘Twilight’ character. He was basically Edward Cullen.
Ethan. I honestly don’t know what to make of him. He started out being your typical bad boy. Then he suddenly morphed into this cool guy who took Clara around and talked to her. Quite frankly I didn’t know what to make of him.
Bad Points
I probably only have two gripes with this book. Firstly it was marketed as comparable to Twilight. Unfortunately, I didn’t realise that this meant that it would pretty much copy Twilight. There were so many things in this book that were present in Twilight. And I am a huge twi-hard so yes, I did see every little thing that was done in reference to Twilight. So while I did enjoy the story overall, I really felt like there was no reason to copy Twilight. The story is strong enough enough to stand on its own two feet. The author himself is good enough to not be copying from anyone.
My second issue was with the history aspect of the book. Now I don’t know if this makes me dense but I feel like a lot of the history bits went right over my head. Now okay. I appreciate the fact that Derek is trying to weave actually history and mythology in the story. I respect that. But I think it could have been done in a much more engaging way. I felt like I was reading a history book and without meaning to, I found that I was skimming.
So yes. Only two major gripes with this book. Other then that, I just really wish that this was a complete novel. I mean I kind of understood why he chose to publish it in two parts but wanting feedback is not an excuse to release half a book. Derek, that’s what beta readers and editors and ARC copies are for. I will certainly be reading the second part of this but I am annoyed. I mean I read books like I drink water. I don’t want to have to wait for part two and then perhaps forget some little detail or part. It’s just frustrating. I mean you’re not Colleen Hoover bro. Calm down.
That said though, I think this book was an absolute gem and everyone should read it and go show him some support and love.
By the way, proceeds from this book will be going into oceanic conservation. How cool?
Buy the book here: http://amzn.to/1UsChmM
And yes I am now listening to The Little Mermaid soundtrack. Don’t judge.
But anyway, I think mermaids would have to be one of my favourite supernatural creatures. Unfortunately, majority of supernatural books only really deal with vampires or wizards. Go figure. So when I heard that Derek was coming up with a book on mermaids that was comparable to Twilight, I immediately knew that I was going to absolutely love it.
Overview
The book started out and ended amazing. I absolutly loved the pace even though it was slower then I’m usually used to. There was this addictive feel to it that books either have or don’t. The writing was easy to follow yet complex enough to make me feel like I was really there. I flew through the book and I would have actually finished it much earlier if I didn’t have to put it down to review another book.
Characters
I loved Clara. I thought she was such a strong willed person and she wasn’t some little loser that suddenly got popular because of her looks and the guys she was hanging around. Instead, she got to town, made friends with the pretty people and then continued to stay grounded despite everything that happened. I don’t know if you get what I mean but it was very refreshing. The only thing I thought was bad was that she seemed to have very little sense of self-preservation. I mean you know Ethan is bad news and yet you let him take you out alone to an isolated place that is technically closed. And then you let him know that you know about the mermaid thing? I mean girl you need to get some sense!
Sebastian was not as strong a character as I wanted him to be. I kept getting these vibes like he was coddling Clara and making her out to be unable to function without him when in actual fact she obviously could. I don’t know. He was probably the most ‘Twilight’ character. He was basically Edward Cullen.
Ethan. I honestly don’t know what to make of him. He started out being your typical bad boy. Then he suddenly morphed into this cool guy who took Clara around and talked to her. Quite frankly I didn’t know what to make of him.
Bad Points
I probably only have two gripes with this book. Firstly it was marketed as comparable to Twilight. Unfortunately, I didn’t realise that this meant that it would pretty much copy Twilight. There were so many things in this book that were present in Twilight. And I am a huge twi-hard so yes, I did see every little thing that was done in reference to Twilight. So while I did enjoy the story overall, I really felt like there was no reason to copy Twilight. The story is strong enough enough to stand on its own two feet. The author himself is good enough to not be copying from anyone.
My second issue was with the history aspect of the book. Now I don’t know if this makes me dense but I feel like a lot of the history bits went right over my head. Now okay. I appreciate the fact that Derek is trying to weave actually history and mythology in the story. I respect that. But I think it could have been done in a much more engaging way. I felt like I was reading a history book and without meaning to, I found that I was skimming.
So yes. Only two major gripes with this book. Other then that, I just really wish that this was a complete novel. I mean I kind of understood why he chose to publish it in two parts but wanting feedback is not an excuse to release half a book. Derek, that’s what beta readers and editors and ARC copies are for. I will certainly be reading the second part of this but I am annoyed. I mean I read books like I drink water. I don’t want to have to wait for part two and then perhaps forget some little detail or part. It’s just frustrating. I mean you’re not Colleen Hoover bro. Calm down.
That said though, I think this book was an absolute gem and everyone should read it and go show him some support and love.
By the way, proceeds from this book will be going into oceanic conservation. How cool?
Buy the book here: http://amzn.to/1UsChmM
December 27, 2024
Part 1: 3 / 5
Part 2 3.5 / 5 *
A fun free audiobook that the author released on YouTube.
I enjoyed the lore woven around the authors ideas of mermaids and how she drew inspiration from Ireland's culture with the myth.
This quote made me chuckle:
"she was cute, except for her posture which was hunched over her phone like a troll"... Damnnn
I liked our main character enough but she wasn't strong without the supporting cast of her school friends and Sebastian and Ethan. That's really when I became more intrigued by the story, otherwise she wouldn't have kept me entertained with it all alone.
I did find it a little odd how she kept saying things like "grief made people horny right?" And "death is an aphrodisiac". I know she's like 15/16 and a lot is happening but she seems so all consumed with boys... Like your parents have just died and you've just flown across to another country to live with a grandparent you never knew existed .. prioritize a little.
The second was well developed and really intrigued me as to where the story would go. I gained a great understanding and appreciation for the characters, The secret organizations that play and the politics of it all.
Head's up, messed up my stats a bit and deleted my progress etc on SG as I was confused with the listing on YouTube because I read it as two books, but I think it was quite literally 2 parts but one big book... I should have looked into it better, but what with the title on YouTube and the name change of the book, I think I was just easily confused! So on SG a user added part two (*so this review will be repeated on there and you will see an overall rating for he one book listed on GR and 2 ratings for the two parts on SG), but shouldn't make a difference on GR. Anyway, I might pick up another of this author's works as it was an easy listen over a few days.
Pick it up, give it a go & enjoy!
Part 2 3.5 / 5 *
A fun free audiobook that the author released on YouTube.
I enjoyed the lore woven around the authors ideas of mermaids and how she drew inspiration from Ireland's culture with the myth.
This quote made me chuckle:
"she was cute, except for her posture which was hunched over her phone like a troll"... Damnnn
I liked our main character enough but she wasn't strong without the supporting cast of her school friends and Sebastian and Ethan. That's really when I became more intrigued by the story, otherwise she wouldn't have kept me entertained with it all alone.
I did find it a little odd how she kept saying things like "grief made people horny right?" And "death is an aphrodisiac". I know she's like 15/16 and a lot is happening but she seems so all consumed with boys... Like your parents have just died and you've just flown across to another country to live with a grandparent you never knew existed .. prioritize a little.
The second was well developed and really intrigued me as to where the story would go. I gained a great understanding and appreciation for the characters, The secret organizations that play and the politics of it all.
Head's up, messed up my stats a bit and deleted my progress etc on SG as I was confused with the listing on YouTube because I read it as two books, but I think it was quite literally 2 parts but one big book... I should have looked into it better, but what with the title on YouTube and the name change of the book, I think I was just easily confused! So on SG a user added part two (*so this review will be repeated on there and you will see an overall rating for he one book listed on GR and 2 ratings for the two parts on SG), but shouldn't make a difference on GR. Anyway, I might pick up another of this author's works as it was an easy listen over a few days.
Pick it up, give it a go & enjoy!
January 19, 2016
'Shearwater: Part One' by Derek Murphy is a tale of teenage drama, centered around mysteries of the past and mermaids. There is also quite a bit of contemporary high school drama mixed in, which is what I tend to gravitate toward in a young adult novel.
Cara Blake, main character, finds herself thrown headfirst into a new life when her parents are killed in a car crash very early on in the novel. Even though she'd rather live with her best friend's family in America, she is told that her grandfather, a man named Aeden, lives in Ireland, and she is set to go live with him based on her mother's will and the fact that she is underage and cannot make her own decisions on living arrangements just yet. In typical teenager fashion, she is quite upset and frazzled by this turn of events, but she tries to make the most of it, if for no one else other than her grandfather. However, much of her new life lies in mystery, as she didn't even know her grandfather existed, let alone that her mother was from Ireland. Her mother had even changed her maiden name, so when Cara was told it, she thought they were speaking of someone else.
During the first few days in Ireland, Cara finds herself swept up in more and more mysteries, while at the same time making friends and enemies of her classmates. There are the typical “mean girls” who want nothing of Cara, as well as the typical friendly sorts who befriend her. It doesn't hurt that many remember her mother from when she was a child, so she fits in easier than she thought she might.
As a fan of mysteries, I really liked the way that Murphy kept readers on their toes, wondering just what would happen next based on notes Cara received, strange occurrences that Cara felt she may have caused to happen, etc. However, even though this is only Part One of the novel, I felt that it took way too long (more than 50% of the novel) to get to more of the unraveling of the mystery of who Cara really is. Readers still don't have all the answers, but more was given away after the halfway point of the novel. I also like mythology, but sometimes the mythological background about mermaids, warring forces, etc. seemed a bit much and made me a tad confused. I understand that the information is necessary as the novel goes on into Part 2, but those parts seemed more like a history lesson to me rather than part of the story. Maybe if more of it had been in dialogue or more of an action format, I would have been more entranced by the mythological notes that led Cara to a better understanding of mermaids and her own past.
I am intrigued to learn more about who exactly Cara's mother and grandmother were, as well as why her mother put it in her will for Cara to live in Ireland despite running away from her homeland herself all those years ago. I'm sure the unanswered questions will be resolved in Part 2 (or later, if there are even more parts to come), but my interest is piqued. Learning more about how much her grandfather, Aeden, actually knows, as well as how her friends will react to her newfound heritage, will provide the characters in the novel with a sort of transcendent quality that readers will be able to further identify with as they continue on with the plot in Part 2.
Derek Murphy has created an intriguing and mystical world in 'Shearwater: Part One,' and I hope that Part 2 will live up to the hype he has built for himself through the world he has so adeptly crafted.
Beth Rodgers, Author of 'Freshman Fourteen,' A Young Adult Novel
Cara Blake, main character, finds herself thrown headfirst into a new life when her parents are killed in a car crash very early on in the novel. Even though she'd rather live with her best friend's family in America, she is told that her grandfather, a man named Aeden, lives in Ireland, and she is set to go live with him based on her mother's will and the fact that she is underage and cannot make her own decisions on living arrangements just yet. In typical teenager fashion, she is quite upset and frazzled by this turn of events, but she tries to make the most of it, if for no one else other than her grandfather. However, much of her new life lies in mystery, as she didn't even know her grandfather existed, let alone that her mother was from Ireland. Her mother had even changed her maiden name, so when Cara was told it, she thought they were speaking of someone else.
During the first few days in Ireland, Cara finds herself swept up in more and more mysteries, while at the same time making friends and enemies of her classmates. There are the typical “mean girls” who want nothing of Cara, as well as the typical friendly sorts who befriend her. It doesn't hurt that many remember her mother from when she was a child, so she fits in easier than she thought she might.
As a fan of mysteries, I really liked the way that Murphy kept readers on their toes, wondering just what would happen next based on notes Cara received, strange occurrences that Cara felt she may have caused to happen, etc. However, even though this is only Part One of the novel, I felt that it took way too long (more than 50% of the novel) to get to more of the unraveling of the mystery of who Cara really is. Readers still don't have all the answers, but more was given away after the halfway point of the novel. I also like mythology, but sometimes the mythological background about mermaids, warring forces, etc. seemed a bit much and made me a tad confused. I understand that the information is necessary as the novel goes on into Part 2, but those parts seemed more like a history lesson to me rather than part of the story. Maybe if more of it had been in dialogue or more of an action format, I would have been more entranced by the mythological notes that led Cara to a better understanding of mermaids and her own past.
I am intrigued to learn more about who exactly Cara's mother and grandmother were, as well as why her mother put it in her will for Cara to live in Ireland despite running away from her homeland herself all those years ago. I'm sure the unanswered questions will be resolved in Part 2 (or later, if there are even more parts to come), but my interest is piqued. Learning more about how much her grandfather, Aeden, actually knows, as well as how her friends will react to her newfound heritage, will provide the characters in the novel with a sort of transcendent quality that readers will be able to further identify with as they continue on with the plot in Part 2.
Derek Murphy has created an intriguing and mystical world in 'Shearwater: Part One,' and I hope that Part 2 will live up to the hype he has built for himself through the world he has so adeptly crafted.
Beth Rodgers, Author of 'Freshman Fourteen,' A Young Adult Novel
January 21, 2016
When Clara loses both her parents in a tragic accident, she is sent to live in Ireland with a grandfather she never knew she had. Struggling to cope with loss and a totally new school system, she distracts herself by trying to find out more about her mother and why she left this little vacation town. But Branna Daly's secrets may be more dangerous than Clara suspects. They're reaching out to her from beyond the grave and Clara must find out what they are, if she is in danger, and if yes, and who from?
Shearwater Part One loses a star for a stupid, obvious reason: It's only part one
Derek Murphy plunges you into Clara Clark's world - a world that navigates loss, uncertainty, mystery and wonder - and just as you're hoping he'll take you further into the wonder, you look at the bottom of your kindle, see remaining time of 2 minutes, completion of like 99% and think "darnit... if I turn the page, this story is going to end and I'M GOING TO HAVE TO WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!"
Which you do, but at least you knew that before going in because the title blatantly states "Part One". Anyway.
To be honest, Shearwater is a classic coming-of-age story. Part of me totally enjoyed it, even whilst my writer-brain was going "and this will happen, and there- see, I knew it". If you're looking for an exceptionally new storyline, you won't get it. There's an element of predictability to the story, so readers will either love it (because they love YA anyway) or hate it (because it's the same ol' same ol'). Murphy plays with tropes and cliches - the budding love triangle, the mysterious bad boy that the girl can't resist, strange new powers she can't control, girl does stupid things she knows she shouldn't, girl gets saved, oh, and let's remake a mythical creature into something new and play around with mythology... an evil part of me says that it's almost Twilight minus annoying Bella.
But whilst I thought of Twilight as an extremely fascinating trainwreck, I'm curious to know where Murphy will take Clara in Part Two and what wonderful discovery - and dangers - awaits our lovely protagonist.
Note: I received an ARC from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Shearwater Part One loses a star for a stupid, obvious reason: It's only part one
Derek Murphy plunges you into Clara Clark's world - a world that navigates loss, uncertainty, mystery and wonder - and just as you're hoping he'll take you further into the wonder, you look at the bottom of your kindle, see remaining time of 2 minutes, completion of like 99% and think "darnit... if I turn the page, this story is going to end and I'M GOING TO HAVE TO WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!"
Which you do, but at least you knew that before going in because the title blatantly states "Part One". Anyway.
To be honest, Shearwater is a classic coming-of-age story. Part of me totally enjoyed it, even whilst my writer-brain was going "and this will happen, and there- see, I knew it". If you're looking for an exceptionally new storyline, you won't get it. There's an element of predictability to the story, so readers will either love it (because they love YA anyway) or hate it (because it's the same ol' same ol'). Murphy plays with tropes and cliches - the budding love triangle, the mysterious bad boy that the girl can't resist, strange new powers she can't control, girl does stupid things she knows she shouldn't, girl gets saved, oh, and let's remake a mythical creature into something new and play around with mythology... an evil part of me says that it's almost Twilight minus annoying Bella.
But whilst I thought of Twilight as an extremely fascinating trainwreck, I'm curious to know where Murphy will take Clara in Part Two and what wonderful discovery - and dangers - awaits our lovely protagonist.
Note: I received an ARC from the author in exchange for an honest review.
April 23, 2016
This is the first in a series of books by this author and by his own admission the ending is somewhat unfinished, as he wants us to keep on reading and giving feedback to help him develop.
For me mermaids are new, but I’m sure there are other writers out there. The Fomorians and the Tuatha De Danann are mythical creatures from Ireland and the writer appears to have done his research. There is a lot of time spent explaining the quite complex background, in order to set up the conflict between the two tribes. The opening prologue makes more sense when you know the background.
In common with a lot of YA novels this is written in the first person. For some reason writers are under the misapprehension that this is easy. This novel proves it is not. There is a lack of intimacy and emotional connection in the narrative, although there are interior monologues, which are good, it isn’t enough. Unfortunately this could be linked to the novels other major problem, we are told too much and not shown enough. This is partly due to the complex nature of the idea and needing to explain what the creatures are and their relationships.
The characters are a little one dimensional. The protagonist has lost her parents and had to move to Ireland to be with a grandfather she doesn’t know. Readers will have sympathy for her loss, as well as starting a new school, with the difficulties of fitting in, but we have little idea what her interests are. Very often people form bonds through shared interests, but does she read? Sci-fi, horror or romance? What music does she like? Does she play or watch a particular sport, support an American team? Does she play computer games? Watch movies, or is there an American TV programme she is going to miss?
I like the concept of the book and I think later novels will not need so much explanation and will develop the characters further. Further discussion of the language can be found at www.traceymadeley.com
For me mermaids are new, but I’m sure there are other writers out there. The Fomorians and the Tuatha De Danann are mythical creatures from Ireland and the writer appears to have done his research. There is a lot of time spent explaining the quite complex background, in order to set up the conflict between the two tribes. The opening prologue makes more sense when you know the background.
In common with a lot of YA novels this is written in the first person. For some reason writers are under the misapprehension that this is easy. This novel proves it is not. There is a lack of intimacy and emotional connection in the narrative, although there are interior monologues, which are good, it isn’t enough. Unfortunately this could be linked to the novels other major problem, we are told too much and not shown enough. This is partly due to the complex nature of the idea and needing to explain what the creatures are and their relationships.
The characters are a little one dimensional. The protagonist has lost her parents and had to move to Ireland to be with a grandfather she doesn’t know. Readers will have sympathy for her loss, as well as starting a new school, with the difficulties of fitting in, but we have little idea what her interests are. Very often people form bonds through shared interests, but does she read? Sci-fi, horror or romance? What music does she like? Does she play or watch a particular sport, support an American team? Does she play computer games? Watch movies, or is there an American TV programme she is going to miss?
I like the concept of the book and I think later novels will not need so much explanation and will develop the characters further. Further discussion of the language can be found at www.traceymadeley.com
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
dnf
April 11, 2016DNF @ 55%
I just couldn't continue reading this book. It seems like everything I hated on every paranormal book I've read lately has been combined in 1 book and was given a title Shearwater.
Let me just check my checklist...
Special Snowflake of a character
Everyone seems to love the main character - except maybe me, the reader. She can't do no wrong, I'm telling you.
Insta-love/Insta-cringe
A super hot guy appeared in town and transferred on their school, and he's so good looking and mysterious that the heroine can't help but get attracted to him. And of course, the hot-guy has his eyes to no one but our heroine despite the fact that everyone at school was "attractive".
Love triangle
When Insta-love isn't enough...
Mean girls
Oh, so the girl, have a lot of problem, but let's give her another unnecessary problem AKA mean girls to just get the story going... Brilliant.
I only read up to 55% of the book, and this is only the first part of the whole book. So technically, I've only read somewhere around 20% of the whole story but I don't think I can continue anymore. Everything's so cliched, I can't stand it. So I guess I'll pass up for now.
I just couldn't continue reading this book. It seems like everything I hated on every paranormal book I've read lately has been combined in 1 book and was given a title Shearwater.
Let me just check my checklist...
Special Snowflake of a character
Everyone seems to love the main character - except maybe me, the reader. She can't do no wrong, I'm telling you.
Insta-love/Insta-cringe
A super hot guy appeared in town and transferred on their school, and he's so good looking and mysterious that the heroine can't help but get attracted to him. And of course, the hot-guy has his eyes to no one but our heroine despite the fact that everyone at school was "attractive".
Love triangle
When Insta-love isn't enough...
Mean girls
Oh, so the girl, have a lot of problem, but let's give her another unnecessary problem AKA mean girls to just get the story going... Brilliant.
I only read up to 55% of the book, and this is only the first part of the whole book. So technically, I've only read somewhere around 20% of the whole story but I don't think I can continue anymore. Everything's so cliched, I can't stand it. So I guess I'll pass up for now.
August 26, 2017
Shearwater is the story of Clara Clark and how she became a stereotypical young adult female protagonist.
I mean, how she found out she was a mermaid. Or something.
While it wasn't awful by any means, there was nothing unique or interesting about this book either (and somewhere on here there's a review about how the writer literally lifted the folklore descriptions off of Wikipedia instead of, I dunno, writing it in his own words like we're taught in school, so there's that). It pretty much contains everything that your typical fantasy YA novel has, just with mermaids instead of something like vampires or werewolves, and it doesn't really add anything new to the genre to make it worth the while, especially if you've read a bunch already.
In short, Clara's your average, everyday teenage girl. She doesn't have a lot of friends and her lone talent is singing. Then, her parents die (going for the big guns and killing both instead of one, amazing). She's shipped off to live with a relative she's never met and discovers one of her parents (her mother in this case) has a mysterious past she never knew about. Turns out, Clara's not entirely human (big surprise). She meets a mysterious hot boy who happens to be the thing that she's not entirely human for and sparks fly but they can't be together (boohoo) because rules or something.
Etc, etc.
I've only read the first half of the book because for some reason the author decided to offer only half the book, but whatever, it was free. If it wasn't for that, I wouldn't have found it worth getting at all.
Not recommended due to the side-eyeing of the copy-and-paste that happened.
I mean, how she found out she was a mermaid. Or something.
While it wasn't awful by any means, there was nothing unique or interesting about this book either (and somewhere on here there's a review about how the writer literally lifted the folklore descriptions off of Wikipedia instead of, I dunno, writing it in his own words like we're taught in school, so there's that). It pretty much contains everything that your typical fantasy YA novel has, just with mermaids instead of something like vampires or werewolves, and it doesn't really add anything new to the genre to make it worth the while, especially if you've read a bunch already.
In short, Clara's your average, everyday teenage girl. She doesn't have a lot of friends and her lone talent is singing. Then, her parents die (going for the big guns and killing both instead of one, amazing). She's shipped off to live with a relative she's never met and discovers one of her parents (her mother in this case) has a mysterious past she never knew about. Turns out, Clara's not entirely human (big surprise). She meets a mysterious hot boy who happens to be the thing that she's not entirely human for and sparks fly but they can't be together (boohoo) because rules or something.
Etc, etc.
I've only read the first half of the book because for some reason the author decided to offer only half the book, but whatever, it was free. If it wasn't for that, I wouldn't have found it worth getting at all.
Not recommended due to the side-eyeing of the copy-and-paste that happened.
June 18, 2019
After reading other books from this author, it seems there is a lot of copy pasting going on, and this book in particular seems to have some strong vibes of plagiarism instead of researching and and writing, it's more researching and rewording. Both books I read of his were the exact same story, just names, and places, and keywords were changed. Disappointing to say the least.
Amazing!
Read this book! Super enjoyable, great storyline and so many places the author can go with it. Can't wait for book two, well written and well laid out. There was one part that I was like come on how much more do they need to throw her way (the black mail part) but it made sense way later. I love how well researched the story is, you can hear the work that went into it with each chapter.
Amazing!
Read this book! Super enjoyable, great storyline and so many places the author can go with it. Can't wait for book two, well written and well laid out. There was one part that I was like come on how much more do they need to throw her way (the black mail part) but it made sense way later. I love how well researched the story is, you can hear the work that went into it with each chapter.
January 31, 2016
Well written, interesting, and well-paced coming of age story. This story will carry you along as Clara discovers a fantastic new world. The setting and character make this a fascinating world to follow. The elements of fantasy and imagination makes for a good read. Try it, you'll enjoy it.
September 17, 2016
Totally different regarding mermaids. Mermen as well, really cool. Loved every bit. She has her work cut out for her, can she be the one to save everyone. Quick enjoyable reading
March 27, 2017
I'm struggling to know how to review this. Firstly, I should point out I didn't buy this version, I bought the version that is actually part one of the book (for 99p). Now the full book is released, I say a word of warning for others... Just buy the full book. There are two editions. One is half a book, one is the whole thing.
Now, I'm annoyed that I bought half a book because there is nothing that annoys me more than a cliffhanger. But I was mollified by the fact Derek offers to send part two free to anyone who signs up to his newsletter. I mean it's clearly to get you on his newsletter, but it's not like I'd have to fork out money for part two.
I'm also familiar with Derek's marketing plans and publishing resources(I've read some of his books on writing) and I find them very useful. So in that respect I can look on this particular marketing plan as an interesting experiment. But I have to admit that I don't really approve. If you want feedback on a book, get beta readers earlier on and read your reviews when the full book is published.
The book itself was not bad. The style was very readable, except for sections where our main character is researching mermaids, and the research and history is presented in quite an info dumpy way.
In terms of characters, Clara, our main character isn't very active. She is either finding out about history or her personal past or speculating about events that don't affect her directly - they affect the people around her. Again, it's stated at the back of the book that it's a set up book, but personally I prefer more meat from the start. I want more of a reason to root for Clara. It did improve towards what is effectively the middle, but I prefer characters to be more active from earlier on.
The premise I found interesting. I've not read a mermaid book before and it was a refreshing and unique take on what I suppose I'd call urban fantasy set in Ireland.
The romance was a bit insta-lovey for my personal taste. Beautiful people were attracted to each other's looks, and I prefer romance that grows more organically from friendship.
Will I get the full book to finish the story? Maybe.
Now, I'm annoyed that I bought half a book because there is nothing that annoys me more than a cliffhanger. But I was mollified by the fact Derek offers to send part two free to anyone who signs up to his newsletter. I mean it's clearly to get you on his newsletter, but it's not like I'd have to fork out money for part two.
I'm also familiar with Derek's marketing plans and publishing resources(I've read some of his books on writing) and I find them very useful. So in that respect I can look on this particular marketing plan as an interesting experiment. But I have to admit that I don't really approve. If you want feedback on a book, get beta readers earlier on and read your reviews when the full book is published.
The book itself was not bad. The style was very readable, except for sections where our main character is researching mermaids, and the research and history is presented in quite an info dumpy way.
In terms of characters, Clara, our main character isn't very active. She is either finding out about history or her personal past or speculating about events that don't affect her directly - they affect the people around her. Again, it's stated at the back of the book that it's a set up book, but personally I prefer more meat from the start. I want more of a reason to root for Clara. It did improve towards what is effectively the middle, but I prefer characters to be more active from earlier on.
The premise I found interesting. I've not read a mermaid book before and it was a refreshing and unique take on what I suppose I'd call urban fantasy set in Ireland.
The romance was a bit insta-lovey for my personal taste. Beautiful people were attracted to each other's looks, and I prefer romance that grows more organically from friendship.
Will I get the full book to finish the story? Maybe.
November 13, 2018
I love the portrayal of the races and the history that is woven into this plot so skillfully. There are legitimate reasons for every single twist and turn in this story that'll have you on the edge of your seat, wanting more... Clara is the main protagonist - she is not perfect, strong and wise, but she grows and improves a lot over the course of the plot. You will want her to succeed in her quest, one she did not ask for at all.
There is romance, of course, but this is not the driving force of the plot, which I appreciate so much. Clara and Sebastian is the epitome of a love that will transcend time. Ethan, bless his sweet heart, has a much bigger role to play than romantic - maybe a bit of a spoiler, but I have to mention this!
The rich history that is part of this plot will make you think about the world we currently live in and the horror of what we do to our world; this is such a subtle touching point in the overall plot, but will not make this big of an impact without it. The races in this world, fighting about land and wars that we never truly win. We are only visitors to this world that we are deliberately killing with our ambitions and views, selfishly and brutally even. The many versions of this history, each with small differences, told by different people with their own perspectives, is essential - since it shows that everyone's reflection of and reactions to things shape them and their interpretations differently.
While there are some small grammatical errors, they were few and far between (and will be straightened out for the version you'll get), so irrelevant that I didn't even stop to acknowledge them in my thirst for more words.
It is difficult to say anything about the plot because even small revelations will give one thing or another away, if I'm not careful. So, I'm leaving the spoilers for another time. What I can say is this: Go into this story, knowing as little as possible and fall in love with a fantastical world within our own, with magic and myth seamlessly blended to form a captivating plot you will not get enough of.
There is romance, of course, but this is not the driving force of the plot, which I appreciate so much. Clara and Sebastian is the epitome of a love that will transcend time. Ethan, bless his sweet heart, has a much bigger role to play than romantic - maybe a bit of a spoiler, but I have to mention this!
The rich history that is part of this plot will make you think about the world we currently live in and the horror of what we do to our world; this is such a subtle touching point in the overall plot, but will not make this big of an impact without it. The races in this world, fighting about land and wars that we never truly win. We are only visitors to this world that we are deliberately killing with our ambitions and views, selfishly and brutally even. The many versions of this history, each with small differences, told by different people with their own perspectives, is essential - since it shows that everyone's reflection of and reactions to things shape them and their interpretations differently.
While there are some small grammatical errors, they were few and far between (and will be straightened out for the version you'll get), so irrelevant that I didn't even stop to acknowledge them in my thirst for more words.
It is difficult to say anything about the plot because even small revelations will give one thing or another away, if I'm not careful. So, I'm leaving the spoilers for another time. What I can say is this: Go into this story, knowing as little as possible and fall in love with a fantastical world within our own, with magic and myth seamlessly blended to form a captivating plot you will not get enough of.
September 4, 2017
(3 stars)
What I liked:
- The setting: This book was set in my hometown, my favourite place on Earth. I'm so happy that an author finally discovered the beauty of that tiny little village and brought it to live through this book. Not sure if the author had visited Portballintrae prior to writing this book, but the descriptions of the area were pretty spot-on! Also, the use of Dunluce castle being a big part of the story was absolutely wonderful! It was so refreshing to read a story set in the places I grew up around.
- The mermaids: How could I not?! Admittedly, this is the first book on mermaids I've read, but it was interesting to see how they were written. I particularly loved how they shimmered in water and the vivid descriptions of their appearance and powers was great.
- The characters: I think this was the first time I actually liked both love interests (even though ).
- The cover: Such a beautiful cover, it really sets the tone for the whole book perfectly.
What I didn't like:
- Typos and grammatical errors: This one bugged me quite a bit seeing as I'm what they'd call a grammar Nazi. This book was littered with grammatical errors. Not sure if the author has an editor or not, but I sure as hell volunteer.
- Local slang and lifestyle inconsistencies: Having grown up in the area, I'm sure this bothered me much more than it might have bothered, say, American readers. Just little things like Clara's grandfather (who was Northern Irish) using the word 'semester' instead of 'term'. Or the fact that there was a school hurling game at night, that was entirely too American for me - not to mention that the particular high school Clara goes to doesn't having a hurling team.
- The lore: Even though I did enjoy the mermaids, I felt like the lore was a bit overwhelming and confusing at times. I feel like perhaps we should've been given sprinkles of information in this book and in future books as opposed to being swamped with huge walls of information in one book.
- The pacing: I was so disappointed with how insta-love Clara and Sebastian's relationship was. Yes, I know mermaids are explained as being irresistible to humans, but Clara isn't human. So that really doesn't explain away the way their 'love' felt so rushed.
All in all, I did enjoy this book. Might've been a bit biased thanks to the setting. However, I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for the second one!
What I liked:
- The setting: This book was set in my hometown, my favourite place on Earth. I'm so happy that an author finally discovered the beauty of that tiny little village and brought it to live through this book. Not sure if the author had visited Portballintrae prior to writing this book, but the descriptions of the area were pretty spot-on! Also, the use of Dunluce castle being a big part of the story was absolutely wonderful! It was so refreshing to read a story set in the places I grew up around.
- The mermaids: How could I not?! Admittedly, this is the first book on mermaids I've read, but it was interesting to see how they were written. I particularly loved how they shimmered in water and the vivid descriptions of their appearance and powers was great.
- The characters: I think this was the first time I actually liked both love interests (even though ).
- The cover: Such a beautiful cover, it really sets the tone for the whole book perfectly.
What I didn't like:
- Typos and grammatical errors: This one bugged me quite a bit seeing as I'm what they'd call a grammar Nazi. This book was littered with grammatical errors. Not sure if the author has an editor or not, but I sure as hell volunteer.
- Local slang and lifestyle inconsistencies: Having grown up in the area, I'm sure this bothered me much more than it might have bothered, say, American readers. Just little things like Clara's grandfather (who was Northern Irish) using the word 'semester' instead of 'term'. Or the fact that there was a school hurling game at night, that was entirely too American for me - not to mention that the particular high school Clara goes to doesn't having a hurling team.
- The lore: Even though I did enjoy the mermaids, I felt like the lore was a bit overwhelming and confusing at times. I feel like perhaps we should've been given sprinkles of information in this book and in future books as opposed to being swamped with huge walls of information in one book.
- The pacing: I was so disappointed with how insta-love Clara and Sebastian's relationship was. Yes, I know mermaids are explained as being irresistible to humans, but Clara isn't human. So that really doesn't explain away the way their 'love' felt so rushed.
All in all, I did enjoy this book. Might've been a bit biased thanks to the setting. However, I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for the second one!
June 22, 2017
This story is well written with well thought out characters, plot and details. It was easy to be pulled intothe story, though much of the history sections within the story needed to be read twice for me to follow. I don't know if this was a result of fatigue, complexity, or just a case of me getting all the foreign names and words tangled. I received a free copy of this book and was extremely disappointed when the story ended at part 1. This is when I realized I'd need to purchase the FULL version to get part 2. I also realized that it does state that you are getting one part or both parts on amazon.
Once I got over that, I was happy to see how Clara and her friends dealt with the issues thrown at them. There were twists. I liked the suspense. I wish Clara had more interactions with her grandfather, she kept dismissing him as though he had no clue.
The ending was expected and surprising. I was left with enough info to feel closure about some things, and anticipation for what looms ahead. I thought the story contained unique ideas about mermaids. I felt the author put extensive research time into this book idea.
There were a few places that used the wrong name or had minor errors, though not enough to make me put the book down. I look forward to the next book and hope it is not too long of a wait.
Once I got over that, I was happy to see how Clara and her friends dealt with the issues thrown at them. There were twists. I liked the suspense. I wish Clara had more interactions with her grandfather, she kept dismissing him as though he had no clue.
The ending was expected and surprising. I was left with enough info to feel closure about some things, and anticipation for what looms ahead. I thought the story contained unique ideas about mermaids. I felt the author put extensive research time into this book idea.
There were a few places that used the wrong name or had minor errors, though not enough to make me put the book down. I look forward to the next book and hope it is not too long of a wait.
August 26, 2024
this is the story of a young girl who doesn't know who or what she really is...16 years old and in Ireland with a grandfather she didn't know she had....on her 16th birthday she gets pretty and has the usual teen girl angst....While in Ireland she finds out she is not quite human she is Mermaid, and Witch....someone is trying to kill her and Clara can't figure out why or who...When she finds out Mermaids are real and she is at least a quarter she also finds magic is real and her father was a witch what's a girl to do Then she finds out she is the last in the Royal Family and the rightful Heiress to the Merrow Kingdom
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