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Their Virgin
This virgin needs, TWO hot alpha males to please her.
This is a menage romance with two alpha males possessing one sassy virgin. If you like your romance dirty with a bit of spanking then this book is for you.
Logan and Luke Armstrong are deliciously dirty twin brothers, that also happen to be working on Isabella's next door neighbor house.
Construction workers by trade their bodies are to die for. With ripped muscles and abs for days, Isabella finds it nearly impossible to avoid staring or watching them.
When both of the gorgeous Armstrong twins discover the shy, virgin, bookworm next door has been spying on them they offer her a deal she can't pass up.
One night. Unbridled passion. No strings attached. What does she have to lose, besides her virginity, and possibly her heart?
With two men awakening the need deep inside you, how can you say no to love?
-This is a standalone romance, with a HEA. No panties required reading so leave those at the door, and grab yourself a glass of wine. The Armstrong twins promise you more than one pleasureable orgasm.-
This is a menage romance with two alpha males possessing one sassy virgin. If you like your romance dirty with a bit of spanking then this book is for you.
Logan and Luke Armstrong are deliciously dirty twin brothers, that also happen to be working on Isabella's next door neighbor house.
Construction workers by trade their bodies are to die for. With ripped muscles and abs for days, Isabella finds it nearly impossible to avoid staring or watching them.
When both of the gorgeous Armstrong twins discover the shy, virgin, bookworm next door has been spying on them they offer her a deal she can't pass up.
One night. Unbridled passion. No strings attached. What does she have to lose, besides her virginity, and possibly her heart?
With two men awakening the need deep inside you, how can you say no to love?
-This is a standalone romance, with a HEA. No panties required reading so leave those at the door, and grab yourself a glass of wine. The Armstrong twins promise you more than one pleasureable orgasm.-
73 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 1, 2016
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J.L. Beck
237 books7,286 followersJ.L. Beck is the USA Today Best Selling author of unapologetic romance. She lives in WI with her husband, two kids, and four dogs. She enjoys writing and recently starting a literary agency to help represent authors in the industry.
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November 30, 2016
TITLE: Their Virgin
AUTHOR: J.L. Beck
CHAPTERS: 11
GENRE: CONTEMPORARY ROMANCE
RELEASE DATE: DECEMBER 05th, 2016
THEIR VIRGIN: What's better than one hot ripped male, but two. Add in the fact that they are neighbours and twins to boot, is nothing but a bonus. Throw in one night of sizzling hot passion with two hot gorgeous men, with no strings attached, what's a girl to do?
Urged by her mother to get out of the house and take a freshly squeezed pitcher of lemonade to the neighbours outside doing some sort of construction work, the last thing she expected to encounter were two out of this world gorgeous panty wetting godly creatures.
As soon as Logan laid eyes on Isabella he wanted to be her first, though he'd been around the block and back many a time he'd never seduced a virgin, telling his brother to back off Logan laid claim to her.
This is a fast paced short, sexy, steamy, read!! It may not be long but this author knows how to optimise her words. So much heat packed into such a short novella.
I'm not sure how to go about rating this one, the synopsis is very very misleading what I thought going into this was a no strings attached one night with BOTH brothers, that's not the case at all, it also falls under the insta love category too which I kind of try steering clear of, this wasn't a favourite of mine by this author. So at the moment I'm going to have to sit on my rating.
August 17, 2017
Steamy, passionate, enjoyable that's how i can describe this story!! It is a quick plot with a juicy blurb about a virgin and two brothers but not a triangle exactly neither a menage cause the heroine chooses her prince and honestly her decision really broke my heart for his twin brother who left out of the equation, i really wanted all three of them in relationship but i can understand the way the author approached the story and it didn't bother me.
I would love if there were more details and developing but either way it was very enjoyable, it had some fun dialogues and many hot scenes..!!
I connected with all the characters and felt many emotions throughout the story i was really happy about Isabella and her Prince i could see their chemistry and the "sad" part of the story was his brother who felt all the bad emotions like jealousy, sadness and even betrayal (I feel for you sweetie.. your time will come to find love and happiness).. So yeah as you can see i'm looking forward to read the next story of the series!!
December 2, 2016
ARC provided by author for an honest review.
Isabella Rodriguez is an 18 year old virgin who lives in the world of the books on her tablet. Luke and Logan are the 24 year old, sexy twins who live next door. When Isabella sets her sights on the brothers, they are soon in the middle of a triangle.
I need to preface my coming statements by saying I respect all authors for putting themselves out there and for bearing the brunt of others opinions. I am not a writer, I don't want to, or know if I could do better. I just know what I like when I read it.
That being said... there were a lot of holes in this story:
1. Why did Isabella not know the brothers and her mother seemed to know their reputation? Did they not live next door long?
2. Since they lived next door, why did the brothers need to get into their truck to drive to her house?
3. I don't really understand Luke being so upset that Logan and Isabella got close, other than the idea that he was under the impression they would share her forever, or he was more interested than he let on.
4. I saw it coming when her mother said she would be at work until 8:00 am and then showed up earlier. That was just common sense. She's been showing up unannounced from work since the girl first walked next door and met the brothers.
I realize that it's an ARC, but there were a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. The word 'Like' instead of 'Luke', 'started' instead of 'stared', along with others. I do get it, believe me I do. But that doesn't mean it didn't take me out of the story to try to adapt to what I thought the author meant instead of what was written. And since I didn't love the story to begin with, it was easy to pull me out of the flow because of the errors.
It was a short and quick read, so that was a plus. Again, I respect all authors and I wish Ms. Beck luck with this piece.
Isabella Rodriguez is an 18 year old virgin who lives in the world of the books on her tablet. Luke and Logan are the 24 year old, sexy twins who live next door. When Isabella sets her sights on the brothers, they are soon in the middle of a triangle.
I need to preface my coming statements by saying I respect all authors for putting themselves out there and for bearing the brunt of others opinions. I am not a writer, I don't want to, or know if I could do better. I just know what I like when I read it.
That being said... there were a lot of holes in this story:
1. Why did Isabella not know the brothers and her mother seemed to know their reputation? Did they not live next door long?
2. Since they lived next door, why did the brothers need to get into their truck to drive to her house?
3. I don't really understand Luke being so upset that Logan and Isabella got close, other than the idea that he was under the impression they would share her forever, or he was more interested than he let on.
4. I saw it coming when her mother said she would be at work until 8:00 am and then showed up earlier. That was just common sense. She's been showing up unannounced from work since the girl first walked next door and met the brothers.
I realize that it's an ARC, but there were a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. The word 'Like' instead of 'Luke', 'started' instead of 'stared', along with others. I do get it, believe me I do. But that doesn't mean it didn't take me out of the story to try to adapt to what I thought the author meant instead of what was written. And since I didn't love the story to begin with, it was easy to pull me out of the flow because of the errors.
It was a short and quick read, so that was a plus. Again, I respect all authors and I wish Ms. Beck luck with this piece.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 10, 2018
A quicky - a sexy threesome
October 26, 2019
Naive. It is filled with grammatical errors. Also, the writing. It is written as if by a fifteen year old.
November 30, 2016
This book started out with good potential, and I was really looking forward to reading it. At first I liked it. Luke, Logan, and Isabella were great, and I loved them together.
~~~ Spoiler~~~
However, the ending was horrible and ruined it for me. I expected this to be a menage, where Isabella, Logan, and Luke all ended up together in an HEA. That did not happen. The fact that Luke was left out was extremely sad, and I hated it. This would have been a four star book had it been an HEA for the three of them, but the end ruined it so horribly for me that it's only a one star now, and one I'll never reread.
I know the author says she's going to write a book for Luke, but that does nothing to fix this book, it's still ruined to me. It also breaks my trust in an author when they don't do an HEA for everyone, and makes me weary of reading their next book. I sincerely hope that the author does not try to do some cliche, horribly sad thing and kill Logan off or something in Luke's book, because there's a line in the end of this book that bothered me a great deal, about how Isabella 'would never be able to give herself to Luke while Logan was alive'. Please, please, don't go down that dark, horrible road of trying to kill Logan off. Doing that makes readers, like me, stop reading an author forever.
Also it makes me wonder just how good Luke's book can be. He was so heartbroken over Isabella going with Logan, it's going to take a LOT to believe that he can be over her and truly love whoever this other girl is the author is going to put him with, since this other girl is always going to be his second choice.
I was gifted a copy for an honest review.
~~~ Spoiler~~~
However, the ending was horrible and ruined it for me. I expected this to be a menage, where Isabella, Logan, and Luke all ended up together in an HEA. That did not happen. The fact that Luke was left out was extremely sad, and I hated it. This would have been a four star book had it been an HEA for the three of them, but the end ruined it so horribly for me that it's only a one star now, and one I'll never reread.
I know the author says she's going to write a book for Luke, but that does nothing to fix this book, it's still ruined to me. It also breaks my trust in an author when they don't do an HEA for everyone, and makes me weary of reading their next book. I sincerely hope that the author does not try to do some cliche, horribly sad thing and kill Logan off or something in Luke's book, because there's a line in the end of this book that bothered me a great deal, about how Isabella 'would never be able to give herself to Luke while Logan was alive'. Please, please, don't go down that dark, horrible road of trying to kill Logan off. Doing that makes readers, like me, stop reading an author forever.
Also it makes me wonder just how good Luke's book can be. He was so heartbroken over Isabella going with Logan, it's going to take a LOT to believe that he can be over her and truly love whoever this other girl is the author is going to put him with, since this other girl is always going to be his second choice.
I was gifted a copy for an honest review.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 1, 2016
***CAUTION MAY CONTAIN A HUGE SPOILER***but I"m sure you've already seen it...
This was an ok read. It was on the sexy side and had twins...and a virgin and a hot spanking. The story line was there, the writing was good as always, the characters just didn't cooperate. AND PLEASE STOP HERE IF YOU DON'T WANT A HUGE SPOILER....
Unfortunately it wasn't as described...and no offense to the author, but if you aren't writing the story as described..maybe change the description? On Amazon this STILL says a badboy menage...but it's not and THAT is what's really disappointing... well, that and the fact that since it was "too explicit" for Amazon and I had an unedited arc so it should have been really hot but wasn't..
I'm sorry, JL Beck, I understand your characters decided that sharing was out...so make up a dream...Isabella can dream of Luke and Logan taking her virginity...Logan can dream of him and Luke taking Isabella..then wake up an decide he doesn't want to share.. give us something menage...spanking and a bj...something... or be honest and take out the word menage from the description. The story was good on it's own, but just not what was expected or advertised.
This was an ok read. It was on the sexy side and had twins...and a virgin and a hot spanking. The story line was there, the writing was good as always, the characters just didn't cooperate. AND PLEASE STOP HERE IF YOU DON'T WANT A HUGE SPOILER....
Unfortunately it wasn't as described...and no offense to the author, but if you aren't writing the story as described..maybe change the description? On Amazon this STILL says a badboy menage...but it's not and THAT is what's really disappointing... well, that and the fact that since it was "too explicit" for Amazon and I had an unedited arc so it should have been really hot but wasn't..
I'm sorry, JL Beck, I understand your characters decided that sharing was out...so make up a dream...Isabella can dream of Luke and Logan taking her virginity...Logan can dream of him and Luke taking Isabella..then wake up an decide he doesn't want to share.. give us something menage...spanking and a bj...something... or be honest and take out the word menage from the description. The story was good on it's own, but just not what was expected or advertised.
December 2, 2016
THEIR VIRGIN: is a hot and steamy new book by author JL Beck. This book has so many twist that you thought you were going to read one story but end up reading something else and what a yummy surprise.
Shy virgin, bookworm next door neighbor Isabella ends up meeting her sexy, hot new neighbors -twin brothers Logan and Luke Armstrong and she finds she is hot for them both. She takes up spying on them. From spying on them to the twins deciding she was next on their buffet , what is a girl to do? I loved the chemistry between the threesome. But this isn’t your regular ménage…at first everything was on board for all involved but Logan decided he did not want to share Isabella. Luke does not take too kindly to this. There is angst and drama to deal with regarding Luke and then we have the relationship angst and drama with Logan and Isabella intermixed with passion and heat from the heat of their relationship – so it’s like two stories intertwined in one going on but what a wild ride. I enjoyed this book and I cannot wait to read Luke’s story next.
My Rating: 4.5 stars *****
"I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book in exchange for an honest review***
Shy virgin, bookworm next door neighbor Isabella ends up meeting her sexy, hot new neighbors -twin brothers Logan and Luke Armstrong and she finds she is hot for them both. She takes up spying on them. From spying on them to the twins deciding she was next on their buffet , what is a girl to do? I loved the chemistry between the threesome. But this isn’t your regular ménage…at first everything was on board for all involved but Logan decided he did not want to share Isabella. Luke does not take too kindly to this. There is angst and drama to deal with regarding Luke and then we have the relationship angst and drama with Logan and Isabella intermixed with passion and heat from the heat of their relationship – so it’s like two stories intertwined in one going on but what a wild ride. I enjoyed this book and I cannot wait to read Luke’s story next.
My Rating: 4.5 stars *****
"I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book in exchange for an honest review***
December 1, 2016
3.5 stars
Firstly, can I just say: the cover for this book is HOT. I enjoyed this book although I found it slow in the beginning but after the first few chapters, nothing was going to make me put the book down. I will admit that I wasn’t a fan of Luke, his attitude towards his brothers new relationship was disgusting! That being said, I cannot wait to read his book, I need to know why he was hurting so bad. This story was totally not what I was expecting! It was completely different from what I was expecting – I won’t say why as I don’t want to spoil this book for anyone that hasn’t yet read it. I will say good on Logan for making his feelings known and stepping up for what he wanted.
There were a handful of misspellings and i was expecting a menage romance (due to the title) so slightly disappointed.
Firstly, can I just say: the cover for this book is HOT. I enjoyed this book although I found it slow in the beginning but after the first few chapters, nothing was going to make me put the book down. I will admit that I wasn’t a fan of Luke, his attitude towards his brothers new relationship was disgusting! That being said, I cannot wait to read his book, I need to know why he was hurting so bad. This story was totally not what I was expecting! It was completely different from what I was expecting – I won’t say why as I don’t want to spoil this book for anyone that hasn’t yet read it. I will say good on Logan for making his feelings known and stepping up for what he wanted.
There were a handful of misspellings and i was expecting a menage romance (due to the title) so slightly disappointed.
December 3, 2016
Logan and Luke Armstrong are super hot twins that are total playboys, not adversed to sharing women. This all changes when they lay their eyes on the beautiful, shy, bookworm girl next door, who just happens to be a virgin. Yep, that's all I''m giving away folks. Their Virgin is short, but an oh so HOT HOT HOT read, that I don't want to ruin it for anyone. But I promise it will keep you warm in the winter! Like I'm talking about panty incinerating, fiery flames of HOT! To me, the story ended awesomely, and my only wish is that it was longer. So I'll just tell everyone that they should read this HOT HOT HOT (yes, it's so hot that I have no issues repeating myself) story asap, and I HIGHLY RECOMMEND!
December 2, 2016
A tale of instalust and more.....
I received this book from the author in exchange for a fair and honest review..... this short and steamy novella centres around Isabella, an 18 year old virgin with a dirty imagination fed by the books she loves to read and Luke and Logan two slightly older, sexy, filthy talking, alpha men who are identical twins....both Logan and Luke are players who like to share their women..... one night stands are all the brothers want and know but there is just something about Isabella that may change that dynamic ......Two ripped guys and one sexy girl.....this is a tale of instalust and more...
I received this book from the author in exchange for a fair and honest review..... this short and steamy novella centres around Isabella, an 18 year old virgin with a dirty imagination fed by the books she loves to read and Luke and Logan two slightly older, sexy, filthy talking, alpha men who are identical twins....both Logan and Luke are players who like to share their women..... one night stands are all the brothers want and know but there is just something about Isabella that may change that dynamic ......Two ripped guys and one sexy girl.....this is a tale of instalust and more...
December 3, 2016
*** I voluntarily read an ARC copy of this book ***
From the copy, I thought YES, a menage. I mean, I went into this book basically expecting a lot of stuff but it wasn't like that at all. That doesn't mean that this book wasn't absolutely SCORCHING HOT! Omg, I couldn't get enough. It's short, sweet and straight to the point. No messing around. Just an alpha male who knows what he wants and will stop at nothing to get it. Absolutely amazing. You'll need an extra pair of panties after this book.
From the copy, I thought YES, a menage. I mean, I went into this book basically expecting a lot of stuff but it wasn't like that at all. That doesn't mean that this book wasn't absolutely SCORCHING HOT! Omg, I couldn't get enough. It's short, sweet and straight to the point. No messing around. Just an alpha male who knows what he wants and will stop at nothing to get it. Absolutely amazing. You'll need an extra pair of panties after this book.
November 30, 2016
WOW!! I mean.... Fuck....Wooooooowee!! **fans myself**
That was hot as fuck that!!
I was consumed! I loved it! Loved the whole Thing! Logan & Luke Sexy indentical twins,that wanted to share & own Isabella... The sweet little virgin book nerd!! But turns out Logan had other ideas!
That hot and sizzling chemistry between Logan & Isabella...WOW! The Love & Lust at first sight!
Amazing read!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
That was hot as fuck that!!
I was consumed! I loved it! Loved the whole Thing! Logan & Luke Sexy indentical twins,that wanted to share & own Isabella... The sweet little virgin book nerd!! But turns out Logan had other ideas!
That hot and sizzling chemistry between Logan & Isabella...WOW! The Love & Lust at first sight!
Amazing read!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
December 1, 2016
3.5
This was great quick read.
Did you say twins? Well which one is going to win Isabella, Logan or Luke?
Both want the sweet innocent Isabella, but there can ultimately be only one winner between the the two hot brothers. And with Logan making his intentions known early, how will Luke react?
Well we have to wait until book 2 for Luke's story.
I was giving an arc in return for my honest opinion.
This was great quick read.
Did you say twins? Well which one is going to win Isabella, Logan or Luke?
Both want the sweet innocent Isabella, but there can ultimately be only one winner between the the two hot brothers. And with Logan making his intentions known early, how will Luke react?
Well we have to wait until book 2 for Luke's story.
I was giving an arc in return for my honest opinion.
December 2, 2016
This book is so freaking hot. 2 twin brothers claiming a virgin. Even though it's not all rainbows and unicorns this book had me from the beginning.
The ending was completely unexpected and I love a great surprise and the suspense behind what might happen next.
These characters have lots of potential for more and I can't wait to see what J.L. comes up with next for these 3.
Voluntarily read and reviewed this book for my honest opinion.
The ending was completely unexpected and I love a great surprise and the suspense behind what might happen next.
These characters have lots of potential for more and I can't wait to see what J.L. comes up with next for these 3.
Voluntarily read and reviewed this book for my honest opinion.
December 24, 2016
I recieved Their virgin from the author for an honest review. I was excited to read this book because the cover is sexy but the book itself fell flat.
the author has a good writing style by the story just didn't make much sense.
first, I thought the twins lived next door. why did they drive to her house?
2nd: are you kidding me? Isabella and Logan fell in love within a couple hours? oh come on!!
the author has a good writing style by the story just didn't make much sense.
first, I thought the twins lived next door. why did they drive to her house?
2nd: are you kidding me? Isabella and Logan fell in love within a couple hours? oh come on!!
November 30, 2016
Isabell is a bookworm and when twins are working next door she is upset the loud noises are making it hard to read. Once she meets the twins she changes her mind. Inviting Logan and Luke over to make repairs for her mom Isabell decides she wants to be naughty. The question is can Luke and Logan handle Isabell and still stay close
January 5, 2019
It's a false advertisement, you know? The book is listed under A Ménage Romance series, so I assumed there would be a ménage, right? Well, there was one, sort of, I don't think I would exactly call it a ménage but okay...
This issue aside, it was really, really steamy read and I had to fan myself. A lot.
This issue aside, it was really, really steamy read and I had to fan myself. A lot.
December 3, 2016
I was a bit thrown by this one. I went into it expecting a menage and MFM steamy scenes. There is one scene with all three players but I wouldn't consider that a menage. What I did find was a rather sweet romance between Logan and Isabella. The unresolved conflict at the end is what brought this one down to just ok for me
January 29, 2017
nope. sorry but hell no. poor luke. i felt so bad for him. i couldnt even like the H&h because my heart was breaking for luke. the ending made me want to slap them. 'oh look its luke, who is angry and in pain. why dont we add to it because we are in our own selfish love bubble and he should be happy for us' hell no.
January 7, 2017
4.5 stars
I loved this book. The only reason why I gave this book 4.5 stars is because it had some spelling issues other then that it was an amazing read. The characters were very well developed. I loved that I felt very connected to the characters. I cant wait to read more books by JL Beck
I loved this book. The only reason why I gave this book 4.5 stars is because it had some spelling issues other then that it was an amazing read. The characters were very well developed. I loved that I felt very connected to the characters. I cant wait to read more books by JL Beck
January 23, 2017
Holy crap
Definitely not what I was expecting, not at all, but still oh so good! I was routing for Logan from start to finish, Luke just seems like hard ass. I think Logan is perfect for her! I can't wait to hear about lukes story! Very curious.
Definitely not what I was expecting, not at all, but still oh so good! I was routing for Logan from start to finish, Luke just seems like hard ass. I think Logan is perfect for her! I can't wait to hear about lukes story! Very curious.
December 2, 2016
Oh yes this was a hot one. But sweet, too. Had the always popular instalove/lust. I look forward to Luke’s story and reading more about these two!
I received an arc of this book.
I received an arc of this book.
January 14, 2017
Not quite sure how she's their virgin when all Luke does it spank her one time. Then Logan claims Isabella and falls in love with her, and her with him. Then Luke gets all pouty and goes away.
February 9, 2017
What the fuck did I just read?? I'm confused is this a book or a random story that someone wrote on a napkin.
December 7, 2016
Title: Their Virgin
Author: Josi Beck
3 adorable stars
I really had high hopes for Their Virgin by Josi Beck. Especially after having had read Dirty Deeds, which I loved. But there was something about the storyline that got under my skin and it had nothing to do with the fact that twin brothers wanting the same girl. Isabella was what I would have expected from a girl who spends her time reading books, but nothing like the virgin girl you'd expect - she was outspoken on her likes, confident in her abilities, and yet, when it came to intimacy, she was a conundrum that I didn't know what to make of it. Her reactions were nothing like I would expect. Logan from the way he was introduced, I honestly thought he was older, and his ability to dominate a situation just solidified that though, yet nothing surprised me more when I found out his real age.
3 cuddle worthy dreams stars
I enjoy the instant love stories; I happen to believe in them, yet there was something in the way that it was told that left me with more questions than not. If the twins were Isabella's neightbour, how is it that the lemonade scene is the first time they meet? Especially considering Isabella often reads outside. The story had such potential and reading the blurb had piqued my interest and I really wanted to love it, but it fell short for me. Don't get me wrong, there were many strong points but as a whole, Their Virgin by Josi Beck wasn't enough. However, I look forward to reading more by her in the future.
*ARC provided by Author in exchange for an honest review.
Reviewed by Kathleen, The Small Girl from A small girl, her man and her books
Merged review:
Title: Their Virgin
Author: Josi Beck
3 adorable stars
I really had high hopes for Their Virgin by Josi Beck. Especially after having had read Dirty Deeds, which I loved. But there was something about the storyline that got under my skin and it had nothing to do with the fact that twin brothers wanting the same girl. Isabella was what I would have expected from a girl who spends her time reading books, but nothing like the virgin girl you'd expect - she was outspoken on her likes, confident in her abilities, and yet, when it came to intimacy, she was a conundrum that I didn't know what to make of it. Her reactions were nothing like I would expect. Logan from the way he was introduced, I honestly thought he was older, and his ability to dominate a situation just solidified that though, yet nothing surprised me more when I found out his real age.
3 cuddle worthy dreams stars
I enjoy the instant love stories; I happen to believe in them, yet there was something in the way that it was told that left me with more questions than not. If the twins were Isabella's neightbour, how is it that the lemonade scene is the first time they meet? Especially considering Isabella often reads outside. The story had such potential and reading the blurb had piqued my interest and I really wanted to love it, but it fell short for me. Don't get me wrong, there were many strong points but as a whole, Their Virgin by Josi Beck wasn't enough. However, I look forward to reading more by her in the future.
*ARC provided by Author in exchange for an honest review.
Reviewed by Kathleen, The Small Girl from A small girl, her man and her books
Author: Josi Beck
3 adorable stars
I really had high hopes for Their Virgin by Josi Beck. Especially after having had read Dirty Deeds, which I loved. But there was something about the storyline that got under my skin and it had nothing to do with the fact that twin brothers wanting the same girl. Isabella was what I would have expected from a girl who spends her time reading books, but nothing like the virgin girl you'd expect - she was outspoken on her likes, confident in her abilities, and yet, when it came to intimacy, she was a conundrum that I didn't know what to make of it. Her reactions were nothing like I would expect. Logan from the way he was introduced, I honestly thought he was older, and his ability to dominate a situation just solidified that though, yet nothing surprised me more when I found out his real age.
3 cuddle worthy dreams stars
I enjoy the instant love stories; I happen to believe in them, yet there was something in the way that it was told that left me with more questions than not. If the twins were Isabella's neightbour, how is it that the lemonade scene is the first time they meet? Especially considering Isabella often reads outside. The story had such potential and reading the blurb had piqued my interest and I really wanted to love it, but it fell short for me. Don't get me wrong, there were many strong points but as a whole, Their Virgin by Josi Beck wasn't enough. However, I look forward to reading more by her in the future.
*ARC provided by Author in exchange for an honest review.
Reviewed by Kathleen, The Small Girl from A small girl, her man and her books
Merged review:
Title: Their Virgin
Author: Josi Beck
3 adorable stars
I really had high hopes for Their Virgin by Josi Beck. Especially after having had read Dirty Deeds, which I loved. But there was something about the storyline that got under my skin and it had nothing to do with the fact that twin brothers wanting the same girl. Isabella was what I would have expected from a girl who spends her time reading books, but nothing like the virgin girl you'd expect - she was outspoken on her likes, confident in her abilities, and yet, when it came to intimacy, she was a conundrum that I didn't know what to make of it. Her reactions were nothing like I would expect. Logan from the way he was introduced, I honestly thought he was older, and his ability to dominate a situation just solidified that though, yet nothing surprised me more when I found out his real age.
3 cuddle worthy dreams stars
I enjoy the instant love stories; I happen to believe in them, yet there was something in the way that it was told that left me with more questions than not. If the twins were Isabella's neightbour, how is it that the lemonade scene is the first time they meet? Especially considering Isabella often reads outside. The story had such potential and reading the blurb had piqued my interest and I really wanted to love it, but it fell short for me. Don't get me wrong, there were many strong points but as a whole, Their Virgin by Josi Beck wasn't enough. However, I look forward to reading more by her in the future.
*ARC provided by Author in exchange for an honest review.
Reviewed by Kathleen, The Small Girl from A small girl, her man and her books
February 28, 2026
Where did Luke go??? Why did we throw him away?? This isn’t a why choose, she literally chooses. This was so strange and painfully insta love (which I usually like?). Idk this was weird and the ending was off.
May 12, 2023
- Main Couple: Logan/Isabella
- POVs Included: Dual POVs (Isabella, Logan)
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SUMMARY: (SPOILER WARNING)
The twins who live next door are making a lot of noise as they renovate and Isabella is getting annoyed. But when her mom asks her to take over some lemonade to them she finds herself less annoyed and more turned on by them up close.
But as her and Logan develop feelings for each other, his twin brother Luke is feeling pushed aside.
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REVIEW:
This was just terrible. This is the second book by this author that I’ve read that was marketed as a ménage and (in fact) is not a ménage at all. Just like Their Spoiled Stepsister, the title and description implies that she will have a relationship with both of them but she absolutely doesn’t in any way.
On top of the mis-marketing, there are grammar errors all over the place. This is really annoying and sloppy, but honestly not a surprise because all of this author’s books seem to be like that (at least the ones I’ve read).
But even if I approached this book as a regular m/f romance and I looked past the grammar errors, the story also sucks. They are “in love” after meeting the day before. The relationship is shallow, the characters are flat, and there’s just nothing good going on here.
And Logan is strangely possessive over a girl he just met. Weird especially considering he makes a point of letting us know that him and his brother Luke have shared girls in the past. But apparently Isabella is DIFFERENT. I don’t know how, she just IS. The book leaves off with us finding out Isabella is pregnant and Luke is hurt and angry still by their relationship. Fun ending! Not!
So yeah, overall it’s not good at all. Absolutely nothing enjoyable about it. This author is not good. I have actually removed all other books on my TBR from her, except a book I’ve already purchased on my Kindle. Depending on how that one goes will determine if I will read anything else by her.
- POVs Included: Dual POVs (Isabella, Logan)
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SUMMARY: (SPOILER WARNING)
The twins who live next door are making a lot of noise as they renovate and Isabella is getting annoyed. But when her mom asks her to take over some lemonade to them she finds herself less annoyed and more turned on by them up close.
But as her and Logan develop feelings for each other, his twin brother Luke is feeling pushed aside.
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REVIEW:
This was just terrible. This is the second book by this author that I’ve read that was marketed as a ménage and (in fact) is not a ménage at all. Just like Their Spoiled Stepsister, the title and description implies that she will have a relationship with both of them but she absolutely doesn’t in any way.
On top of the mis-marketing, there are grammar errors all over the place. This is really annoying and sloppy, but honestly not a surprise because all of this author’s books seem to be like that (at least the ones I’ve read).
But even if I approached this book as a regular m/f romance and I looked past the grammar errors, the story also sucks. They are “in love” after meeting the day before. The relationship is shallow, the characters are flat, and there’s just nothing good going on here.
And Logan is strangely possessive over a girl he just met. Weird especially considering he makes a point of letting us know that him and his brother Luke have shared girls in the past. But apparently Isabella is DIFFERENT. I don’t know how, she just IS. The book leaves off with us finding out Isabella is pregnant and Luke is hurt and angry still by their relationship. Fun ending! Not!
So yeah, overall it’s not good at all. Absolutely nothing enjoyable about it. This author is not good. I have actually removed all other books on my TBR from her, except a book I’ve already purchased on my Kindle. Depending on how that one goes will determine if I will read anything else by her.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 3, 2016
I got this book for an honest review and I regret to say this, but I was not as trilled as I though I would be.
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This is not a threesome story, we know that sometimes characters have a life of their own and change paths; so I have to warn you, if that's what you were looking for, then this is not the book for you.
That being said, the idea of the story had so much potential, unfortunately it fell short in my opinion. The characters were good and the writing was great too (not counting the spelling mistakes, since this was a pre release copy), but the development of the story and the characters just didn't work for me.
We are used to fast love in romance books but this one felt fake.
They have known each other for less than three days in which they have talked 15 minutes tops and they were professing eternal love to each other, it just didn't feel right.
They were definitely in lust, but I had a problem with Isabella saying she knew he was the one who she wanted to give her virginity to and loved him, since the moment she saw him, that was actually like two second ago.
The sex scenes were the best part of the book, he was really intense and she wasn't as Innocent as she looked which made the scenes really sexy and hot!
I think the book could be really good if the author decided whether its just a sex based book and kept the whole love part for some other time, or if she wants to give the characters a little bit more of a story and background on which we can base the love they supposedly feel for each other, otherwise it's just not working for me.
http://thesecretworldofbooklovers.blo...
This is not a threesome story, we know that sometimes characters have a life of their own and change paths; so I have to warn you, if that's what you were looking for, then this is not the book for you.
That being said, the idea of the story had so much potential, unfortunately it fell short in my opinion. The characters were good and the writing was great too (not counting the spelling mistakes, since this was a pre release copy), but the development of the story and the characters just didn't work for me.
We are used to fast love in romance books but this one felt fake.
They have known each other for less than three days in which they have talked 15 minutes tops and they were professing eternal love to each other, it just didn't feel right.
They were definitely in lust, but I had a problem with Isabella saying she knew he was the one who she wanted to give her virginity to and loved him, since the moment she saw him, that was actually like two second ago.
The sex scenes were the best part of the book, he was really intense and she wasn't as Innocent as she looked which made the scenes really sexy and hot!
I think the book could be really good if the author decided whether its just a sex based book and kept the whole love part for some other time, or if she wants to give the characters a little bit more of a story and background on which we can base the love they supposedly feel for each other, otherwise it's just not working for me.
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