When I realized partway through reading this arc that it was the eleventh book in the series and not the first, I should have listened to my gut and stopped reading. However, the mere fact that it was given to me through goodreads for a rating kept me going. I was hopeful it might be the type of book you could finish without needing to read the other books, but I was very wrong. This is not a standalone. So, my rating is not based on how much I understood the plotline, but rather on the writing, logic the characters displayed, etc.
Unfortunately, I could not connect with this author's writing. I was actually really surprised when I realized this was the eleventh book in the series, because the writing is extremely simplified and vague. It's very much like novice fanfiction. The characters are incredibly bland, especially Devon (who I'm not sure has been introduced in previous books, but she had zero personality and was so easily sucked into the cheesy messages on her laptop. What does she even do at Kyvor? Her work was never made clear). Anson seems like a typical macho alpha male. I had to laugh that he didn't care if the human they pulled into their scheme got hurt at Kyvor until he had sex with Devon and decided he was suddenly her protector. The sex itself was just silly. Who thinks having sex is a good idea when dark magical beings are trying to break into your house? Of course it's all insta-lust and insta-love anyway, which I despise. The logic they followed and the drama that unfolds seemed insipid rather than tense. On a side note, this is also the first time I've read a book where one of the characters has an accent. Anson's Scottish brogue was really hard to read and just did not resonate with me. It's a personal preference that I'm glad to discover, because while I love the sound of accents, apparently I really don't like reading them.
As the plot progresses we get side shots of various other characters who, I'm guessing, provide a bit more clarity into the plot, although to me it seemed like no one was really saying anything. It does seem to be quite convoluted, with a wide range of cast members. I am interested in the types of magical beings the author introduces, such as the warriors (who can apparently inhabit a god's spirit and be granted fearsome characteristics for battle). It seems like the dragons have a long history that has already been explained in previous books. The one thing I didn't particularly like about them was how they would constantly refer to the women as mates if they were in a relationship with a dragon king. For some reason it just rubbed me the wrong way. I was disappointed in how weak Anson seemed to be in dragon form as well. He doesn't accomplish anything in that form, so the action scenes were incredibly frustrating.
The last quarter of the book is very messy. The situation needs to be made more clear in the writing because I had trouble following along with what was happening. It seemed like something would happen and then suddenly something else was happening that made no sense. It just needs a firm hand in editing to make it more clear. The entire book needs a lot of editing, as there are errors on every single page. I realize what I read was an arc and probably not the final version, but for a book that I received in April to be published in June, I would have thought it would be in better shape editing-wise.