Spoilers ahead
I didn’t particularly like either of these stories. I feel like they should be titled “How to get yourself attacked, killed or mentally abused by aggressive men 101”.
Both stories are pretty much identical as far as plot. Random handsome guy very aggressively approaches girl and convinces her to do something/go somewhere with him. In real life those dudes would probably get punched or maced, but I digress. In the second even her grandfather, someone who is typically wise and a voice of reason, is like yeah, go out to dinner with some dude you never met. Go ahead, get into his car. What? Do women really do this? Both men are continually aggressive, grabbing the women by their hair (maybe it’s the way she wrote it but another big no from me. Unless you’re looking for how to get a woman to kick a man in the balls, run away and never talk to him again) and randomly freaking out on the women in both stories. You know those Facebook memes about toxic relationships and red flags? Bingo! These men have it all. Then there’s the constant pull of they are so sexually attracted to each other but the women keep getting pissed off at the men for one reason or another yet keep going back for more. The men basically just play head games with the women. They’re constantly being stopped for whatever reason from “hooking up”, and then in the end the utterly clueless and hopeless woman finally finds out the mental case of a man actually loves her, they kiss, fanfare ensues, the man proposes (BARF) no matter that they’ve only known each other a few days/weeks. I found myself rolling my eyes so much during reading I’m surprised they didn’t roll clean out of my head.
If potentially abusive men are your bag then give it a go. It’s a quick, easy read with a sappy happy ending. The writing is mostly good. Found a few parts here and there that really bothered me (like in the second...why did her work in progress of a sculpted bust of the man suddenly disappear when he was in her studio but reappeared for his sister. There was no mention of her moving it or hiding it.) I hate head-hopping and there was plenty of that. I really hated when the author took an otherwise short and important phrase a character said and broke it up into pieces. (I would use an actual example but the book is no longer with me) Like, rather than saying something like “he’s right you know” she would write it out as “he’s right” she said with tight lips “you know”. Just don’t. Don’t break it up like that. It loses the tone and meaning. I’m sure there’s more but I’ve already given this book more time than it deserves.