One star from my, by far the worst in the series so far.
The last one was just boring as hell, this one is annoying as hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!
We start with a bit in Portugal, frankly is a bit uninteresting, but okay, this is just the setup to meet his old love interest Persephone. But then it derails.
Spoiler alert!!!
I know the Kydd randomly meeting his friends somewhere in the world in some random port where service gets him to be is quite overdone, previously it was always his friend Renzi, but this one tops it. He meets his ex in a port on Portugal, they later go their seperate ways through some misunderstanding and then meet again weeks later BY CHANCE in another port, in another country in so extremely unlikely a destination that it just makes me cringe. ARGH.... I was about to fling my ebook reader into the next corner!!!!!!!!!
The next problem it's more of a collection of items that Stockwin always wanted to do with his character than a book with a coherent plot and somewhat believable events.
The woman from his lowly past who tries to blackmail the hero with an illegitimate child. Which cases a tangle with his fiance.
A duel with the rival for the girl. The rival turns out is of course a total asshole the girl needs to be saving from.
Kydd's introduction into high society. He gets to meet the king's navy captain brother, they sing a few shanties and in 3.5 seconds they are best buddies, Kydd's lowly birth forgotten by everybody, no class prejudices by anyone, everyone fanboying over the protagonist because he is a successful frigate captain (hey, England had more of those!!).
The royal yacht, Kydd saves the day why? Because everyone else acts just so f--ing incompetent. BORING!!!!!!!!!
And then this Kydd wants to go into politics, erm WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why would he do that???????????? Totally out of character for him and out of nowhere!!!!!!!!!!!!
Then the parallel to the Dewey Lambdin`s A Fine Retribution. Captain after long life as a single marries a female artist. I don't know how this came to pass, I do know that art (painting, writing etc) was almost the only way a woman of gentle birth could earn money without disgracing herself. Lambdin did it so much better and having to read an artist chick marries sea captain plot again after a few weeks is just not so entertaining.
Kydd's Lieutennants and the other important figures aboard his ships get hardly a mention when one of the things I enjoy most about sea stories is the dynamic of the relationships of those characters. The ship as an emotional pressure cooker for those sailing on her. Since Kydd has become a frigate captain that part is totally missing. Midshipmen are introduced in one book only to never hear about them and to be replaced with others in the next book. A Lieutenant introduced as very taciturn and apparently hiding something and that fact is not picked up for several books, until getting some rather puzzling explanation in this book.
The time it takes for news to get from A to B seems generally sometimes very off in the Kydd series.
And the author is clearly fanboying over his main character and has turned him into a complete Gary Stu (a writing term for a character that just exists for wish fulfilment for the author, a phenomenon mainly found in bad fan fiction but not unknown in original writing). This has been apparent since Victory where he wrote Nelson and Kydd's relationship with him very much from his own overawed Nelson fanboy perspective, not from the character's. This problem popped up again here and there in the last couple of books. And in this one that problem goes into overdrive again, even worse than in Victory!