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The Keeper Chronicles
A Keeper's Tale: The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon
Nominated for Best Self-Published Novel in Booknest's Fantasy Awards
Tomkin Thornhewn, youngest son of the Duke of Marshwell, has a problem: he’s not heroic.
Regardless of his aspirations, the bookish, untrained young man is better suited to recording the deeds of heroes than being one himself.
Which becomes an obvious problem when he finds himself clinging to a ledge above a sleeping dragon. And instead of wielding his family’s great sword with valor and skill, he drops it—onto the dragon.
The problem grows immeasurably worse when Tomkin himself falls off the ledge—also onto the dragon.
And his problem reaches its peak when Tomkin, after being captured, discovers a maiden locked in a tower. But this is no sweet damsel. Not only does she refuse to be rescued, she refuses to even admit she’s in distress.
It’s too bad for the people of Marshwell that Tomkin is the only thing standing - or falling - in the dragon’s way.
JA Andrews introduced the world to the magic-wielding, world-saving, story-telling Keepers in A Threat of Shadows. Now you can enjoy one of the Keeper’s most beloved tales: The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon, in this engaging, lighthearted novel.
A Keeper's Tale: The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon is a standalone story. The Keepers in The Keeper Chronicles are, among other things, storytellers. This is the retelling of one of their favorite tales. It can be read at any time with respect to The Keeper Chronicles.
Tomkin Thornhewn, youngest son of the Duke of Marshwell, has a problem: he’s not heroic.
Regardless of his aspirations, the bookish, untrained young man is better suited to recording the deeds of heroes than being one himself.
Which becomes an obvious problem when he finds himself clinging to a ledge above a sleeping dragon. And instead of wielding his family’s great sword with valor and skill, he drops it—onto the dragon.
The problem grows immeasurably worse when Tomkin himself falls off the ledge—also onto the dragon.
And his problem reaches its peak when Tomkin, after being captured, discovers a maiden locked in a tower. But this is no sweet damsel. Not only does she refuse to be rescued, she refuses to even admit she’s in distress.
It’s too bad for the people of Marshwell that Tomkin is the only thing standing - or falling - in the dragon’s way.
JA Andrews introduced the world to the magic-wielding, world-saving, story-telling Keepers in A Threat of Shadows. Now you can enjoy one of the Keeper’s most beloved tales: The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon, in this engaging, lighthearted novel.
A Keeper's Tale: The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon is a standalone story. The Keepers in The Keeper Chronicles are, among other things, storytellers. This is the retelling of one of their favorite tales. It can be read at any time with respect to The Keeper Chronicles.
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First published December 10, 2016
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September 3, 2017
I received a free copy of A Keeper's Tale in exchange for an honest review. Thank you to JA Andrews.
Set in the world of The Keeper Chronicles which includes SPFBO semi-finalist A Threat of Shadows, this is an enjoyable fantasy fairy tale told to a crowded inn full of enthusiastic patrons, by a Keeper. The story progresses as follows. Tomkin is the youngest son of the Duke of Marshwell. He's a great strategist and administrator with a prompt, analytical mind. His hero brother, Elton, and the nation's armies are away doing typical military duty. Everything is in order and great until a dragon is witnessed hijacking and devouring local sheep. Tomkin, with his grandfathers sword Scalebreaker, decides to investigate the castle ruins at Colbreth where the dragon is reportedly residing.
Simply put, this is a very well written, positive fantasy drama that would be a great introduction to the scene for young teens. Perhaps the sort that you and your children could read at the same time and both love. It was similar to King's Eyes of the Dragon (that I loved when I was 11) and the main flashback from his The Wind Through the Keyhole. Although simple, the characters are engaging throughout. We only really follow Tomkin, the mysterious Mags, the purple hat flaunting creature Wink, and the dragon. The descriptions given to describe the dragon are beautiful. It was a pretty gripping and engrossing tale hence why I completed it within 24 hours. It is ultimately story focused so don't expect exquisite world building yet, that isn't a negative. This narrative is about Tomkin and the Dragon and 80-percent of the action takes place amongst the castle ruins. Common opinion, which I ignore, is that self-published books are second-rate compared to trad-published. This story is another reason of why I can argue against this point. It's really well edited and during its brisk 200-pages, I only noticed 2 minor grammatical errors. It isn't action packed with showdowns galore. Although Tomkin is often stubborn, the draw here is how he uses his mind, deals with Mags and analyses the grave scenarios to maybe escape the dragon-fuelled predicament. Just a quick review for a short fun tale. Andrews has a lot to offer. One of the plot twists was easy to work out for me but I don't think that will be the case for this tale's target audience. This is an excellent, well-written fantasy fairy-tale containing intriguing characters, interesting dilemmas, and a seemingly charming dragon. This is definitely worth picking up.
Set in the world of The Keeper Chronicles which includes SPFBO semi-finalist A Threat of Shadows, this is an enjoyable fantasy fairy tale told to a crowded inn full of enthusiastic patrons, by a Keeper. The story progresses as follows. Tomkin is the youngest son of the Duke of Marshwell. He's a great strategist and administrator with a prompt, analytical mind. His hero brother, Elton, and the nation's armies are away doing typical military duty. Everything is in order and great until a dragon is witnessed hijacking and devouring local sheep. Tomkin, with his grandfathers sword Scalebreaker, decides to investigate the castle ruins at Colbreth where the dragon is reportedly residing.
Simply put, this is a very well written, positive fantasy drama that would be a great introduction to the scene for young teens. Perhaps the sort that you and your children could read at the same time and both love. It was similar to King's Eyes of the Dragon (that I loved when I was 11) and the main flashback from his The Wind Through the Keyhole. Although simple, the characters are engaging throughout. We only really follow Tomkin, the mysterious Mags, the purple hat flaunting creature Wink, and the dragon. The descriptions given to describe the dragon are beautiful. It was a pretty gripping and engrossing tale hence why I completed it within 24 hours. It is ultimately story focused so don't expect exquisite world building yet, that isn't a negative. This narrative is about Tomkin and the Dragon and 80-percent of the action takes place amongst the castle ruins. Common opinion, which I ignore, is that self-published books are second-rate compared to trad-published. This story is another reason of why I can argue against this point. It's really well edited and during its brisk 200-pages, I only noticed 2 minor grammatical errors. It isn't action packed with showdowns galore. Although Tomkin is often stubborn, the draw here is how he uses his mind, deals with Mags and analyses the grave scenarios to maybe escape the dragon-fuelled predicament. Just a quick review for a short fun tale. Andrews has a lot to offer. One of the plot twists was easy to work out for me but I don't think that will be the case for this tale's target audience. This is an excellent, well-written fantasy fairy-tale containing intriguing characters, interesting dilemmas, and a seemingly charming dragon. This is definitely worth picking up.
August 9, 2018
3.5 stars
Picture a bustling inn. A figure sits by the fireside, a Keeper no less. Slowly, shyly young Lulu approaches him, desperate to know the truth about magic. What she discovers is the magic of words, the enchanting story of Tomkin and the Dragon, related by the Keeper to a cheering audience, and to us. It is easy to visualise the animated reactions of the crowd as this outrageously over the top comedy of errors and hurrahs races through to the finale. This tale is told to entertain, and entertain it does.
And so the story begins...
Enter Tomkin Thornhewn, second son of little importance, who dreams of the storied heroes of the past and follows the larger than life exploits of his brother, Elton, with a wistful sigh, jealous of the missed glory. Life sucks when you have an older brother like that, of the Prince Charming type, all bulging muscles and epic proportions of… heroism. Especially when you, on the other hand, like a good bit of organising, preferring a negotiation and a handshake to get things done. Suddenly Tomkin's chance appears in the form of a dragon, terrorising the area around Colbreth Castle, burning sheep and eating them in front of appalled villagers. Life being what it is, his brave brother is away on some military jaunt, and the responsibility for dealing with this evil beast is his. Grabbing the family sword, which, being named Scalebreaker, seemed like it might come in handy, he rushes off with little expectation in the truth of the stories, but prepared to be somewhat adventurous if the situation deems it necessary. Or maybe he might just dissuade it from murder and mayhem with a few pointed words… you know, whatever works. Either way, he must push onwards to yonder castle, this fearless son of Marshwell, his time has come to shine…
How big was the dragon?’ [asked Tomkin]
Gerrod spread his arms wide. ‘Dragon sized.’
‘As it should be,’ Tomkin answered him seriously.
First things first, the book is funny. Sometimes tongue in cheek, sometimes a bit slapstick, more often than not full of banter and silliness, but genuinely amusing throughout. Tomkin, in the start at least, is a wannabe with a heart of gold and a healthy dose of self depreciation. His repeated attempts to rescue a young lady, busy hiding from her former life and according to her, in no need of a rescue, is miscommunication at its finest. In traditional fashion, the events of the story allow him to grow significantly, though his path to heroism is fraught with self doubt and uncertainty. After all, what is a hero? It’s a question that runs throughout the book, with special mockery of the brawn over brains type of which his elder brother is a prime example. The author’s use of expectation and disappointment when it comes to gender roles and behaviour is excellently done, bearing a message, but one so nicely wrapped up in humour that it has no real sting. I imagined throughout the young girl, Lulu, listening raptly to this story and finding in it a rather different male hero, as well as someone just like her who’s brave and clever and has more than a little attitude. Despite being lightly sketched, it's possible to get a real sense of both main characters, and to like them more and more as the book goes on. Even the dragon gets his own backstory and justification for his actions- I wanted to keep him despite his bad attitude.
This would be a pretty good intro to fantasy, a traditional fairy tale style with a contemporary twist and some relevant themes done well. It’s really only about one boy, one girl, one creature, and one is-he-evil-or-not dragon. There’s some depth there but it’s mostly simple, wholesome fun- perhaps best for YA but a worthwhile read at any age.
ARC via Fantasy Book Review
Picture a bustling inn. A figure sits by the fireside, a Keeper no less. Slowly, shyly young Lulu approaches him, desperate to know the truth about magic. What she discovers is the magic of words, the enchanting story of Tomkin and the Dragon, related by the Keeper to a cheering audience, and to us. It is easy to visualise the animated reactions of the crowd as this outrageously over the top comedy of errors and hurrahs races through to the finale. This tale is told to entertain, and entertain it does.
And so the story begins...
Enter Tomkin Thornhewn, second son of little importance, who dreams of the storied heroes of the past and follows the larger than life exploits of his brother, Elton, with a wistful sigh, jealous of the missed glory. Life sucks when you have an older brother like that, of the Prince Charming type, all bulging muscles and epic proportions of… heroism. Especially when you, on the other hand, like a good bit of organising, preferring a negotiation and a handshake to get things done. Suddenly Tomkin's chance appears in the form of a dragon, terrorising the area around Colbreth Castle, burning sheep and eating them in front of appalled villagers. Life being what it is, his brave brother is away on some military jaunt, and the responsibility for dealing with this evil beast is his. Grabbing the family sword, which, being named Scalebreaker, seemed like it might come in handy, he rushes off with little expectation in the truth of the stories, but prepared to be somewhat adventurous if the situation deems it necessary. Or maybe he might just dissuade it from murder and mayhem with a few pointed words… you know, whatever works. Either way, he must push onwards to yonder castle, this fearless son of Marshwell, his time has come to shine…
How big was the dragon?’ [asked Tomkin]
Gerrod spread his arms wide. ‘Dragon sized.’
‘As it should be,’ Tomkin answered him seriously.
First things first, the book is funny. Sometimes tongue in cheek, sometimes a bit slapstick, more often than not full of banter and silliness, but genuinely amusing throughout. Tomkin, in the start at least, is a wannabe with a heart of gold and a healthy dose of self depreciation. His repeated attempts to rescue a young lady, busy hiding from her former life and according to her, in no need of a rescue, is miscommunication at its finest. In traditional fashion, the events of the story allow him to grow significantly, though his path to heroism is fraught with self doubt and uncertainty. After all, what is a hero? It’s a question that runs throughout the book, with special mockery of the brawn over brains type of which his elder brother is a prime example. The author’s use of expectation and disappointment when it comes to gender roles and behaviour is excellently done, bearing a message, but one so nicely wrapped up in humour that it has no real sting. I imagined throughout the young girl, Lulu, listening raptly to this story and finding in it a rather different male hero, as well as someone just like her who’s brave and clever and has more than a little attitude. Despite being lightly sketched, it's possible to get a real sense of both main characters, and to like them more and more as the book goes on. Even the dragon gets his own backstory and justification for his actions- I wanted to keep him despite his bad attitude.
This would be a pretty good intro to fantasy, a traditional fairy tale style with a contemporary twist and some relevant themes done well. It’s really only about one boy, one girl, one creature, and one is-he-evil-or-not dragon. There’s some depth there but it’s mostly simple, wholesome fun- perhaps best for YA but a worthwhile read at any age.
ARC via Fantasy Book Review
December 18, 2016
A Keeper's Tale: The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon by J.A. Andrews is a terrific story with dragons, mismatched couple, a castle, lots of action, humor, and loads of fun. This could not be a better, more creative, wittier novel if she tried! A young book worm duke, tries to appease a farmer who claims he saw a dragon by reluctantly going to the broken down castle to search for this "dragon". He certainly finds more than a dragon! But a girl also. He becomes the dragon's captive. It is a fun and sometimes suspense-filled journey to get to know each other, the boy and girl, and for the boy to escape. Great fantasy and fun. Loved it completely!!!
June 25, 2018
This is a fine read, a fairy tale style adventure featuring an interesting villain and some turning of tropes on their heads. Andrews’ writing is superb and I knew from nearly the first page that this was going to be a book I’d enjoy. Perhaps the best way to describe the tale is that it’s a fun jaunt in a fairy tale world. If you’re looking for epic battles and empires hanging in the balance, this likely isn’t for you. However, this perfectly scratched the “I need something light between epics” itch I was feeling.
A Keeper’s Tale is a quick read, but the pacing is spot on. Each chapter moves things along nicely, with never a feeling of filler or much downtime. Andrews has an excellent feel for keeping things moving, and it’s something I especially appreciate in a quick read of this nature. Well done. Although the book is not advertised as YA, I think it would be a great read for those who are looking for something different from typical YA fare. I loved the way Andrews turned the knight-after-a-damsel trope on its head.
The novel does have some weaknesses. I thought the characterization of the main character was somewhat juvenile. He is twenty but behaves more like a teenager. In addition, the first several chapters make him seem like a somewhat out-of-the-box thinker, but he quickly becomes a very in-the-box thinker, unable to see things from a different viewpoint. There is one point toward the end of the book where he suddenly snaps back into his out-of-the-box negotiator persona—and that works. I would have liked to have seen more stability in the characterization of the MC and less high school-ish behavior between the male and female leads. Correcting this would have taken the book from a solid, enjoyable read to something extraordinary.
While the characterization for the main character was weak, in my opinion, the rest of the book is strong enough that it certainly still deserves a read. Don’t let that single criticism keep you from enjoying a wonderful take on the dragon-slaying-knight-meets-damsel-in-distress trope.
Choosing an exact rating was a hard decision and Amazon and Goodreads allowing only “whole star” ratings made it even more difficult. In the end, I’ve given it 3.8/5 stars, though I don’t think this rating fully captures the enjoyment I received from the story.
A Keeper’s Tale is a quick read, but the pacing is spot on. Each chapter moves things along nicely, with never a feeling of filler or much downtime. Andrews has an excellent feel for keeping things moving, and it’s something I especially appreciate in a quick read of this nature. Well done. Although the book is not advertised as YA, I think it would be a great read for those who are looking for something different from typical YA fare. I loved the way Andrews turned the knight-after-a-damsel trope on its head.
The novel does have some weaknesses. I thought the characterization of the main character was somewhat juvenile. He is twenty but behaves more like a teenager. In addition, the first several chapters make him seem like a somewhat out-of-the-box thinker, but he quickly becomes a very in-the-box thinker, unable to see things from a different viewpoint. There is one point toward the end of the book where he suddenly snaps back into his out-of-the-box negotiator persona—and that works. I would have liked to have seen more stability in the characterization of the MC and less high school-ish behavior between the male and female leads. Correcting this would have taken the book from a solid, enjoyable read to something extraordinary.
While the characterization for the main character was weak, in my opinion, the rest of the book is strong enough that it certainly still deserves a read. Don’t let that single criticism keep you from enjoying a wonderful take on the dragon-slaying-knight-meets-damsel-in-distress trope.
Choosing an exact rating was a hard decision and Amazon and Goodreads allowing only “whole star” ratings made it even more difficult. In the end, I’ve given it 3.8/5 stars, though I don’t think this rating fully captures the enjoyment I received from the story.
October 15, 2020
"Keepers tell stories, because stories are the most powerful thing on earth. A good story can wiggle its way into the deepest part of your heart. It can shape your dreams or your fears. It can change how you see the world. It can even change - how you see yourself. And that is real magic."
Fun, lighthearted and engaging, this little story here is one that you'll find difficult to set down.
Tomkin Thornhewn, youngest son of the Duke of Marshwell, has a problem: he is about to be betrothed to 'Dragon Lady Lissa' - a girl whose temper was downright legendary. And to get out of the pickle and avoid getting saddled with a terror for a wife, he "needed something big, something worthy of a story. ... He needed something - something like a dragon."
And this is one particular something Tomkin tries very hard to remember when he finds himself clinging to a ledge above an actual sleeping dragon. One that he's supposed to vanquish, or at least chase away.
But instead of wielding his family’s great sword with valor and skill, Tomkin drops it, straight onto the dragon. And if that weren't a big enough disgrace, our lad ends up falling onto the dragon too!
Of course the dragon gets angry and locks Tomkin into a tower. But that isn't the only problem our poor bookish, untrained young man finds himself thrown into. Because he lands exactly on top of a young maiden. One that is locked in there with him too. And contrary to all expectations, the maiden is neither sweet nor charming. Not only does she refuse to be rescued, she refuses to even admit she’s in distress.
This is how Tomkin's story begins.
"One with a dragon who didn't eat people and a girl who collected pieces of shattered furniture.
A story so bizarre that Tomkin didn't even know where to begin fixing it."
Especially since Tomkin himself "wasn't a hero. He wasn't important, he was just helpless and more afraid than he'd imagined possible."
A story where our lad quickly learns that
"You can't become someone new without making peace with who you already are."
Fast paced, beautifully flowing and full of wit and humor, The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon will keep you turning pages till the very end and leave you wanting for more. I can't put my finger exactly on why this has been such an unputdownable read for me. Especially since I didn't particularly love Tomkin and his little Dragon Lady to begin with. But I finished it in one sitting and was rooting for both of them by the end.
I highly recommend this little page-turner here to every fantasy fan out there who's in the mood for something both light and fun, as well as meaningful.
This tale here is one bound to lighten any mood.
Happy reading everyone
and be kind!
"Kindness takes you a long way on the path to happiness."
Fun, lighthearted and engaging, this little story here is one that you'll find difficult to set down.
Tomkin Thornhewn, youngest son of the Duke of Marshwell, has a problem: he is about to be betrothed to 'Dragon Lady Lissa' - a girl whose temper was downright legendary. And to get out of the pickle and avoid getting saddled with a terror for a wife, he "needed something big, something worthy of a story. ... He needed something - something like a dragon."
And this is one particular something Tomkin tries very hard to remember when he finds himself clinging to a ledge above an actual sleeping dragon. One that he's supposed to vanquish, or at least chase away.
But instead of wielding his family’s great sword with valor and skill, Tomkin drops it, straight onto the dragon. And if that weren't a big enough disgrace, our lad ends up falling onto the dragon too!
Of course the dragon gets angry and locks Tomkin into a tower. But that isn't the only problem our poor bookish, untrained young man finds himself thrown into. Because he lands exactly on top of a young maiden. One that is locked in there with him too. And contrary to all expectations, the maiden is neither sweet nor charming. Not only does she refuse to be rescued, she refuses to even admit she’s in distress.
This is how Tomkin's story begins.
"One with a dragon who didn't eat people and a girl who collected pieces of shattered furniture.
A story so bizarre that Tomkin didn't even know where to begin fixing it."
Especially since Tomkin himself "wasn't a hero. He wasn't important, he was just helpless and more afraid than he'd imagined possible."
A story where our lad quickly learns that
"You can't become someone new without making peace with who you already are."
Fast paced, beautifully flowing and full of wit and humor, The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon will keep you turning pages till the very end and leave you wanting for more. I can't put my finger exactly on why this has been such an unputdownable read for me. Especially since I didn't particularly love Tomkin and his little Dragon Lady to begin with. But I finished it in one sitting and was rooting for both of them by the end.
I highly recommend this little page-turner here to every fantasy fan out there who's in the mood for something both light and fun, as well as meaningful.
This tale here is one bound to lighten any mood.
Happy reading everyone
and be kind!
"Kindness takes you a long way on the path to happiness."
May 17, 2017
3+ but not enough for rounding up to 4 ★ because of the TOO juvenile characters, although the male character is supposed to be at least twenty yo. Not sure what the intended age target is - I was thinking YA or NA because of the main character's age - but it reads more like a middle-grade than a YA fantasy novel..
It reminded me a lot of Patricia C. Wrede’s Dealing with Dragons, with humorous remarks and self irony, an intelligent and independent female character, and an interesting dragon.
The parts I liked most were the beginning and ending, hinting at a whole other story, which, strangely, seemed more interesting to me than the main one..
Additional: The first chapter of A Threat of Shadows is included at the end of the book, it seemed interesting enough that I'll probably check it out after the other books in the series are published.
Tags: middle-grade/YA, fantasy, dragons, magic, adventures
It reminded me a lot of Patricia C. Wrede’s Dealing with Dragons, with humorous remarks and self irony, an intelligent and independent female character, and an interesting dragon.
The parts I liked most were the beginning and ending, hinting at a whole other story, which, strangely, seemed more interesting to me than the main one..
Additional: The first chapter of A Threat of Shadows is included at the end of the book, it seemed interesting enough that I'll probably check it out after the other books in the series are published.
Tags: middle-grade/YA, fantasy, dragons, magic, adventures
June 14, 2024
I love stories with feisty young women. I love heroines who do not just sit around waiting to be saved. I also loved that Tomkin wasn't a great warrior. His strengths were negotiation and problem-solving. I have been sharing this with my granddaughter. It is exactly the kind of story I like to share with her. It is an easy read with enough action and risk to keep you interested. The characters did seem younger than they were, but I think that was more the book's tone. It was a fun read that I am very happy to share with some of the younger members of my family.
November 3, 2017
This was a fun little story with good character interactions. It didn't have the depth of worldbuilding or epic stakes I usually prefer in my fantasy, but it was good at what it set out to do. I may have to check out the author's main works.
Rating: 7/10
Rating: 7/10
December 16, 2025
I simply loved The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon! There was a long time I was actively avoiding short stories and novellas, because I was of the impression that it’s impossible to tell an impactful story in just a few pages. But in the past years, I have learned just how wrong my assumption was. And J.A. Andrews’ The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon is a perfect example – it simply is a wonderful story (within a story)!
Tomkin is the youngest son of a noble lord, but instead of being a warrior and leading armies against enemies or rescuing ladies in distress, he works in administration. But he loves stories about heroes and would love even more to be one himself. So, when a farmer brings a supposed dragon to his attention, he takes the opportunity to leave the castle and maybe even have a little adventure…
Tomkin and the other characters are very well done (Tomkin actually reminded me a little of Bastian, main character of The Neverending Story). J.A. Andrews does a magnificent job in playing with the readers’ expectations, not only, but especially regarding her characters – the story definitely has some surprises to offer. Then there is wonderful banter, slapstick and just a lot of good-natured humour, that had me smiling a lot while reading.
The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon is somewhere on the edge between fairytale and fantasy-book and might be a wonderful introduction to fantasy for readers of any age. For more seasoned readers, it is still a wonderful tale full of heart and laughter – something this world desperately needs.
Tomkin is the youngest son of a noble lord, but instead of being a warrior and leading armies against enemies or rescuing ladies in distress, he works in administration. But he loves stories about heroes and would love even more to be one himself. So, when a farmer brings a supposed dragon to his attention, he takes the opportunity to leave the castle and maybe even have a little adventure…
Tomkin and the other characters are very well done (Tomkin actually reminded me a little of Bastian, main character of The Neverending Story). J.A. Andrews does a magnificent job in playing with the readers’ expectations, not only, but especially regarding her characters – the story definitely has some surprises to offer. Then there is wonderful banter, slapstick and just a lot of good-natured humour, that had me smiling a lot while reading.
The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon is somewhere on the edge between fairytale and fantasy-book and might be a wonderful introduction to fantasy for readers of any age. For more seasoned readers, it is still a wonderful tale full of heart and laughter – something this world desperately needs.
November 20, 2018
This is a great fantasy story for all ages, I can't wait to read this author's series of books! Tomkin is not your usual hero, but I love him for it. It feels more like a real life fairytale with real heroes and real consequences.
As someone who likes fairytale retellings, I noticed what seemed like a few tropes you'll find in those stories, but this book turned them on their head and had them doing cartwheels. ;)
I want to say so much more, but it would be spoilers. I'll be reading this one again. And if you haven't read this one, you should.
As someone who likes fairytale retellings, I noticed what seemed like a few tropes you'll find in those stories, but this book turned them on their head and had them doing cartwheels. ;)
I want to say so much more, but it would be spoilers. I'll be reading this one again. And if you haven't read this one, you should.
April 6, 2024
2024 Reads #206/250
3.75⭐️
3.75⭐️
December 19, 2024
Sehr schöne, kleine Erzählung, die immer wieder in den Geschichten um die Keeper erwähnt wird - schön, sie mal lesen zu können, gefällt.
October 28, 2018
A beautiful tale told by a Keeper about Tomkin, who though the son of a Duke, was nothing like a hero. He was compared by everyone to his elder brother Elton and he always fell short. So when Tomkin Thornhewn ended up in a broken down castle where a dragon and a young girl had taken up residence he knew he had to save the girl even though she told him Vorath the dragon was her friend. Mags also had a kobold for a friend called Wink and of course he was a magical creature. Mags was headstrong, scowled a lot and had a sharp tongue which lashed out at poor Tomkin every chance she got, but Tomkin if nothing else was persistent. It turns out both the kids felt that they were a disappointment to their fathers hence Mags had run away and Tomkin was out to prove himself a hero, and though he thought himself just a bit character in someone else's story it turns out he really wasn't. Tomkins was small but good at bargaining, he was not strong and able to wield a sword and fight, so bargain he did and he in fact won more than he bargained for too! I loved this tale which was so much fun to read it put me in mind of a great favourite story of mine The Slow Regard of Silent Things by Patrick Rothfuss where the characters are young, witty, a bit eccentric but courageous. And in this tale even the dragon was nice even though he was meant to be evil!! Dying to read more of the Keeper's tales now!
September 26, 2017
Tomkin Thornhewn, the runt of the Duke of Marshwell's litter, has a problem: he’s not heroic. But he is extremely with figures and negotiation. Then comes a dragon eating local sheep, Tomkin goes down river to Colbreth Castle.
You will love the interaction between Mags and Tomkin. and both with Voerath the copper-colored dragon. I am putting a zipper to my lips, you must read this charming tale for yourself.
You will love the interaction between Mags and Tomkin. and both with Voerath the copper-colored dragon. I am putting a zipper to my lips, you must read this charming tale for yourself.
March 3, 2019
I really enjoyed reading this book. I love the humorous way of the story and enjoyed going with Tomkin to the Castle and finding Vorath the Dragon as well as Mags also known as Lissa. Now looking forward to reading more about the Keepers in the first book of the series.
March 23, 2022
A lovely story inside a story, set in the Keepers world.
I enjoyed both main characters a lot, and especially how the young princess decidedly didn't want to be saved.
The end was beautiful and left me with a smile in my face.
Couldn't ask for more!
I enjoyed both main characters a lot, and especially how the young princess decidedly didn't want to be saved.
The end was beautiful and left me with a smile in my face.
Couldn't ask for more!
July 13, 2018
What a fun story!
A sweet and fun tale about courage, love, and bravery in the places and people you least expect. Great story!
A sweet and fun tale about courage, love, and bravery in the places and people you least expect. Great story!
October 5, 2022
Wow, I love this author. She created a truly delightful story.
December 15, 2017
A Great Dragon's Tale
Fall into the adventure and spiraling tale of Tomkin, Mags and Volrath. A well told tale that keeps twisting and turning from beginning to end. A great example of wonderful epic fantasy.
Fall into the adventure and spiraling tale of Tomkin, Mags and Volrath. A well told tale that keeps twisting and turning from beginning to end. A great example of wonderful epic fantasy.
January 13, 2019
Rating
Review
*** This review originally appeared on Out of this World Reviews. ***
A Keeper’s Tale: The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon by JA Andrews begins in a tavern whose atmosphere harkens back to the The Inn of the Last Home of Dragonlance fame. Both stories involve dragons, so perhaps this is fitting. In any case, a homey tavern is the perfect setting for the fireside tale that is begun by a visiting Keeper when Lulu, young and full of wonder, asks him to tell them all a story. That story, as the title of the book suggests, involves a man named Tomkin Thornhewn and a dragon that we soon learn is actively terrorizing the countryside.
As the youngest son of the Duke of Marshwell, Tomkin stands in the shadow of his older brother. This isn’t necessarily a bad thing; Tomkin’s brother, Elton, is best suited to the role of dashing hero while Tomkin is made for running the family’s holdings. But when Elton is called away on hero’s business, Tomkin is the only one remaining who can respond to the danger posed by a dragon taken residence in the ruins of a nearby keep.
Tomkin considers waiting and letting his brother handle the situation upon his return, but he also can’t stand by while the people of his duchy have their property destroyed and their lives taken by the dragon, so he sets out to resolve the situation on his own. Tomkin makes an excellent reluctant hero and he seems likable enough on the surface. There’s only one problem: he’s not as likable as I would have wanted considering he’s the main character. The same can be said for the other characters in the story, though there are few enough of them. Mags is the proverbial damsel trapped in the dragon’s tower, though we come to find out she is not truly a prisoner, and there’s Wink, a kobold with some extraordinary abilities. Like Tomkin, I started out liking Mags, but her shallowness pushed me away the further I went with her. Wink is an interesting enough fellow, but he’s there as a supporting character, at best, so we never really spend much time with him.
A Keeper’s Tale is fairly short on purpose, I think, lending to the fairy tale aspect of the story. The writing is decent enough and the story, somewhat predictable. I’ll admit I didn’t know where the author was going with the dragon. Is he truly an enemy or is he simply looking for somewhere to lair in relative peace (stolen sheep notwithstanding)? The ending is satisfying enough, at least for Lulu since she gets her Keeper’s Tale.
I’m giving A Keeper’s Tale two rockets. As per my review policy, something rated two rockets isn’t going to blow you away, but it’s entertaining and so might be worth your time for that reason alone. I liked the story well enough, but it's not something I'd revisit.
Review
*** This review originally appeared on Out of this World Reviews. ***
A Keeper’s Tale: The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon by JA Andrews begins in a tavern whose atmosphere harkens back to the The Inn of the Last Home of Dragonlance fame. Both stories involve dragons, so perhaps this is fitting. In any case, a homey tavern is the perfect setting for the fireside tale that is begun by a visiting Keeper when Lulu, young and full of wonder, asks him to tell them all a story. That story, as the title of the book suggests, involves a man named Tomkin Thornhewn and a dragon that we soon learn is actively terrorizing the countryside.
As the youngest son of the Duke of Marshwell, Tomkin stands in the shadow of his older brother. This isn’t necessarily a bad thing; Tomkin’s brother, Elton, is best suited to the role of dashing hero while Tomkin is made for running the family’s holdings. But when Elton is called away on hero’s business, Tomkin is the only one remaining who can respond to the danger posed by a dragon taken residence in the ruins of a nearby keep.
Tomkin considers waiting and letting his brother handle the situation upon his return, but he also can’t stand by while the people of his duchy have their property destroyed and their lives taken by the dragon, so he sets out to resolve the situation on his own. Tomkin makes an excellent reluctant hero and he seems likable enough on the surface. There’s only one problem: he’s not as likable as I would have wanted considering he’s the main character. The same can be said for the other characters in the story, though there are few enough of them. Mags is the proverbial damsel trapped in the dragon’s tower, though we come to find out she is not truly a prisoner, and there’s Wink, a kobold with some extraordinary abilities. Like Tomkin, I started out liking Mags, but her shallowness pushed me away the further I went with her. Wink is an interesting enough fellow, but he’s there as a supporting character, at best, so we never really spend much time with him.
A Keeper’s Tale is fairly short on purpose, I think, lending to the fairy tale aspect of the story. The writing is decent enough and the story, somewhat predictable. I’ll admit I didn’t know where the author was going with the dragon. Is he truly an enemy or is he simply looking for somewhere to lair in relative peace (stolen sheep notwithstanding)? The ending is satisfying enough, at least for Lulu since she gets her Keeper’s Tale.
I’m giving A Keeper’s Tale two rockets. As per my review policy, something rated two rockets isn’t going to blow you away, but it’s entertaining and so might be worth your time for that reason alone. I liked the story well enough, but it's not something I'd revisit.
December 7, 2016
Lulu, 7 years old, made her way through the crowd at the inn to see the Keeper she heard was there. But this one, instead of being old, had dark black hair and a wonderful smile. She wanted to see his magic, so he made her a flower from a blade of grass stuck in her hair. Then he began to tell the story of Tomkin and the Dragon.
Tomkin Thornhewn dreamed of acts of heroism, like those performed by brave soldiers in battle. He wrote up the official records for the town and had been reading about his brother, Elton’s, exploits. When a messenger arrived with a letter for his father, the Duke, he opened it since his father was still at the border. It was a message from Lord Norton of Greentree, agreeing that a marriage between Lissa and the Duke’s son, Tomkin, was a good idea to show a united front. Tomkin was not pleased – he had heard of Lissa’s bad temper. He felt worthless and needed to do something important, if only to not be the least important son given away to Lissa.
A shepherd ran in to see Tomkin, telling him about a dragon that swooped down and grabbed one of his lambs. Tomkin figured it was really a copper eagle, but those were rare and he could perhaps find a feather quill for his pen if he investigated the dragon he knew did not exist. The shepherd looked at him as if he were a hero and he felt he had to go. Climbing up the steep cliff to the old castle was scary, but he pulled himself up onto a ledge. As he did so, the sun came out and he saw a glowing pile or orange below him – a sleeping orange DRAGON! Is this where he is going to die today? Can he sneak away before the dragon hears him?
Tomkin is sort of clumsy, which makes his antics very humorous. The reader is also given a perfect description of his character. He is kind and generous, but full of doubt about how he measures up to his illustrious father and brother. He doesn’t see the hero in himself. This is a wonderful book, like a fairy tale. I highly recommend it! I voluntarily reviewed this book and my comments reflect my honest opinion.
Tomkin Thornhewn dreamed of acts of heroism, like those performed by brave soldiers in battle. He wrote up the official records for the town and had been reading about his brother, Elton’s, exploits. When a messenger arrived with a letter for his father, the Duke, he opened it since his father was still at the border. It was a message from Lord Norton of Greentree, agreeing that a marriage between Lissa and the Duke’s son, Tomkin, was a good idea to show a united front. Tomkin was not pleased – he had heard of Lissa’s bad temper. He felt worthless and needed to do something important, if only to not be the least important son given away to Lissa.
A shepherd ran in to see Tomkin, telling him about a dragon that swooped down and grabbed one of his lambs. Tomkin figured it was really a copper eagle, but those were rare and he could perhaps find a feather quill for his pen if he investigated the dragon he knew did not exist. The shepherd looked at him as if he were a hero and he felt he had to go. Climbing up the steep cliff to the old castle was scary, but he pulled himself up onto a ledge. As he did so, the sun came out and he saw a glowing pile or orange below him – a sleeping orange DRAGON! Is this where he is going to die today? Can he sneak away before the dragon hears him?
Tomkin is sort of clumsy, which makes his antics very humorous. The reader is also given a perfect description of his character. He is kind and generous, but full of doubt about how he measures up to his illustrious father and brother. He doesn’t see the hero in himself. This is a wonderful book, like a fairy tale. I highly recommend it! I voluntarily reviewed this book and my comments reflect my honest opinion.
December 11, 2016
I don't think I can put into words how much I enjoyed this story of Tomkin and the Dragon! I was worried it would be one of those where the dialogue was stilted and old fashioned but it truly was fabulous. It's a sweet story about someone who considers himself the opposite of a hero but who is actually very brave. The descriptions of the dragon's scales and the colours make you imagine you know exactly what it looks like. It reminded me of all the best movies where flying dragons terrorise the neighbourhood. I was bummed when this ended and I'll definitely be seeking out some other books by this author, especially since this one made me laugh out loud a couple of times. This book was beautifully written and I was intrigued from the first page. I read an ARC copy of this book from the author in order to leave my honest opinion. Then I bought it too, since it was released at 99 cents! Bargain!
July 13, 2024
This was a surprising story. Tomkin, a scholarly second son who has just found out about a planned engagement to someone he doesn’t want, is advised of a dragon nearby. Wanting to live up to his elder brother he decides to check out the dragon and hopefully improve his marriage status.
This turns into a humorous adventure for Tomkin and a girl he found in the dragon’s lair – a falling down old castle.
This turns into a humorous adventure for Tomkin and a girl he found in the dragon’s lair – a falling down old castle.
September 18, 2017
A Keeper's Tale: The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon by J.A. Andrews is a story about Tomkin Thornhewn, and his boredom with his role in life. He decides to seek out a dragon he heard tale of.
This is a wonderful story of courage and romance. I loved the way Andrews told this story. I was sucked in from the start. I'll definitely be reading more of her work.
This is a wonderful story of courage and romance. I loved the way Andrews told this story. I was sucked in from the start. I'll definitely be reading more of her work.
December 14, 2016
Tomkin Thornhewn, youngest son of the Duke of Marshwell, is a lateral thinker. Fast on his metaphorical feet, he's as capable as his soldiering brother, just in different ways. Although, if he was speaking truthfully, his brother's many adventures seem to contain a great deal more fortune than those of Tomkin. In fact, the latest success his father and brother's company of soldiers achieved is largely owed to Tomkin's planning, regardless of whether Tomkin could've pulled them off with as much grace. Tomkin's retelling of events in his life show a significant writer's flair, as he recaps the events he hears and the rather mundane events he himself partakes of.
It is to Tomkin's thinking that if events were more interesting in his part of the world, that he'd be a very successful storyteller and the hero of many tales. As Tomkin receives his father's reply from a messenger of a neighbouring duchy, he reads that Duke's agreement to the proposed marriage his father suggests between himself and the Duke's daughter; a woman roughly his age with well known rumours of her fiery temper and bitter tongue. Although, if he were to only listen to the rumours concerning Tomkin Thornhewn, he'd hear only of cowardice and a boy who tried to fight a raging man with only his quill to defend him. Knowing only that an increase in perceived worth might save him from his terrible fate, a manservant enters his father's study, with the serendipitous word he needed to stave off such a fate; dragon.
From the weight of his great-uncle's sword he'll never be able to wield, to the near plummet to a death by drowning before he ever made a single step on the keep of the dragon's lair, its blatantly apparent that Tomkin's aspirations far outstrip his capabilities. The comedy of errors start before he even sets out, but the hero worship seen in the eyes of the shepherd reporting the dragon, stirs an imagination best left for a strenous workout with his quill. Indeed the only apparent capabilities are found in the young woman Tomkin names Mags, and her kobold called Wink. Fellow travellers with the dragon called Vorath.
If he were to pay better attention he'd quickly learn Mags is an intrepid soul. Not only is she fleeing a family with plans for her that don't match her own, her recounting has a flair as significant as his own. But neither young lord or lady truly knew what they were walking into. Vorath's memory, significantly larger than their own, created the plans a long time ago; even he's only now begun to set them in motion. Of the three companions not including the dragon, only two serve a longer goal, whilst one would be an example.
Comical and sentimental, the plot nonetheless includes revenge and retribution. Vorath's actions seek to show the strength and intelligence dragons are renowned for. Whilst the novella is A Keeper's Tale its essentially separate to A Threat of Shadows. You could read either of the books in any order and there'd be no cost from which comes first. I imagine this will hold true for any other Keepers Chronicles that might follow A Threat of Shadows too. I rated and reviewed book one of the chronicles and scored it five of five for the consistency of events that played out constantly.
Indeed there was barely a paragraph or two when something significant wasn't going on. Whilst I'm not suggesting any disappointment, and may be leaning toward an unfair evaluation based on a comparison between the two, the slight change in pace does tend to shift my rating back to a four. Its important to remember that depending on the story there are many reasons why events play out at differing paces; and therefore not all stories can jump from action to action in consecutive sequences throughout the full breadth of the story.
The novella's title gets a mention in A Threat of Shadows (The Keepers Chronicles Book 1) but is otherwise a standalone story. Throughout book one of the chronicles there are roughly a handful of occasions when characters talk of telling a story; and whilst it is never elaborated upon, it is nonetheless The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon that said characters want the Keepers to tell. The other link is that it is told via various Keeper retellings of Keepers named in A Threat of Shadows.
The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon is a very entertaining and enjoyable tale. With its lighthearted and meaningful components it is suitable for most ages. Its very fair pricing, like A Threat of Shadows too, makes for an even better score for it's downloading. I've certainly come across many examples where either the book is significantly shorter for the same price: or the price is significantly higher for the same length of a story. J.A. Andrews is an author worthy of following, and whilst there's a significant bunch of attributes readers of fantasy desire, there's also a number of hidden meanings for each reader to take away. This book had more humour than the other, with a slightly slower pace; but I'd be very surprised to see that any readers couldn't find a number of things that they liked. A recommended tale by a recommended author.
It is to Tomkin's thinking that if events were more interesting in his part of the world, that he'd be a very successful storyteller and the hero of many tales. As Tomkin receives his father's reply from a messenger of a neighbouring duchy, he reads that Duke's agreement to the proposed marriage his father suggests between himself and the Duke's daughter; a woman roughly his age with well known rumours of her fiery temper and bitter tongue. Although, if he were to only listen to the rumours concerning Tomkin Thornhewn, he'd hear only of cowardice and a boy who tried to fight a raging man with only his quill to defend him. Knowing only that an increase in perceived worth might save him from his terrible fate, a manservant enters his father's study, with the serendipitous word he needed to stave off such a fate; dragon.
From the weight of his great-uncle's sword he'll never be able to wield, to the near plummet to a death by drowning before he ever made a single step on the keep of the dragon's lair, its blatantly apparent that Tomkin's aspirations far outstrip his capabilities. The comedy of errors start before he even sets out, but the hero worship seen in the eyes of the shepherd reporting the dragon, stirs an imagination best left for a strenous workout with his quill. Indeed the only apparent capabilities are found in the young woman Tomkin names Mags, and her kobold called Wink. Fellow travellers with the dragon called Vorath.
If he were to pay better attention he'd quickly learn Mags is an intrepid soul. Not only is she fleeing a family with plans for her that don't match her own, her recounting has a flair as significant as his own. But neither young lord or lady truly knew what they were walking into. Vorath's memory, significantly larger than their own, created the plans a long time ago; even he's only now begun to set them in motion. Of the three companions not including the dragon, only two serve a longer goal, whilst one would be an example.
Comical and sentimental, the plot nonetheless includes revenge and retribution. Vorath's actions seek to show the strength and intelligence dragons are renowned for. Whilst the novella is A Keeper's Tale its essentially separate to A Threat of Shadows. You could read either of the books in any order and there'd be no cost from which comes first. I imagine this will hold true for any other Keepers Chronicles that might follow A Threat of Shadows too. I rated and reviewed book one of the chronicles and scored it five of five for the consistency of events that played out constantly.
Indeed there was barely a paragraph or two when something significant wasn't going on. Whilst I'm not suggesting any disappointment, and may be leaning toward an unfair evaluation based on a comparison between the two, the slight change in pace does tend to shift my rating back to a four. Its important to remember that depending on the story there are many reasons why events play out at differing paces; and therefore not all stories can jump from action to action in consecutive sequences throughout the full breadth of the story.
The novella's title gets a mention in A Threat of Shadows (The Keepers Chronicles Book 1) but is otherwise a standalone story. Throughout book one of the chronicles there are roughly a handful of occasions when characters talk of telling a story; and whilst it is never elaborated upon, it is nonetheless The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon that said characters want the Keepers to tell. The other link is that it is told via various Keeper retellings of Keepers named in A Threat of Shadows.
The Story of Tomkin and the Dragon is a very entertaining and enjoyable tale. With its lighthearted and meaningful components it is suitable for most ages. Its very fair pricing, like A Threat of Shadows too, makes for an even better score for it's downloading. I've certainly come across many examples where either the book is significantly shorter for the same price: or the price is significantly higher for the same length of a story. J.A. Andrews is an author worthy of following, and whilst there's a significant bunch of attributes readers of fantasy desire, there's also a number of hidden meanings for each reader to take away. This book had more humour than the other, with a slightly slower pace; but I'd be very surprised to see that any readers couldn't find a number of things that they liked. A recommended tale by a recommended author.
March 18, 2020
I normally don't read smaller novellas and sidestories within a series but given how much I loved The Keeper Chronicles trilogy that I decided to give this one a try especially since the story itself was mentioned at least several times in every book of the main trilogy. I must say I am certainly glad I did so because I found this a delightful and charming little story, I can see why it's so beloved by characters in universe. As always, this review will be broken up into sections based on what I like and what I had issues with. I'll try to avoid spoilers for the most part and in this case think I can.
What I Enjoyed:
The Prose:
I don't know about you but I always enjoy it whenever stories lampshade cliches and storytelling conventions, to me it's funny. There's a lot of gems in terms of analogies and word play such as Tomkin highlighted his home is the kind of place the hero would stay at for a night before moving on with his big quest or when he calls the voice of reason in his mind 'the bearded wise man telling him to shut up,' how his brother is the typical knight in shining armor type. Overall it's very amusing with him just talking about his overall situation in terms of conventions and tropes.
Characters:
This story within a story centers around two main characters: Tomkin Thornhewn, younger son of the Duke of Marshwell and his eventual companion whom he calls 'Mags.' Each of them is a distinct character and has their own set of issues. Tomkin feels inferior to his elder brother who is the ace in the family and is a total nerd being an avid reader and the guy who handles the less glamorous aspects of helping to run the duchy. In an interesting twist, he is actually appreciated for what he does by his family and colleagues and his work is acknowledged as important if not necessarily flashy like riding into glorious battle. Mags' story unfolds as the tale goes on along with her backstory and just why she ran away and took her chances on living with a dragon in a run down castle. I'd like to say more but that would really spoil the story but I will say she is quite sympathetic when you hear just what happened with her. Speaking of which there is the dragon in question Vorath. He's the main external 'obstacle' of the story but he's great as a character in his own right just so apathetic to Tomkin's attempts to get the better of him and also with a deep backstory of his own too. It's amazing how rich of a story one can tell with less major characters than you can count on one hand.
The Personal Nature of the Story:
At the end of the day, this story is about Tomkin and Mags growing as people and confronting their own shortcomings and fears. There may be a dragon involved but the real antagonists are their inner demons. Tomkin wishes to prove his worth and competence and Mags wishes to make a new life for herself. Some of the best stories are more internally focused and this is a prime example of that.
Issues:
I honestly cannot think of any major issues that really hurt the story in any significant way for me. The one thing is the fact it was short but it's a novella so that's the point of it.
Conclusion:
In case you can't tell from the review, I really enjoyed Tomkin and the Dragon and am so glad I bought it. I normally don't read novellas but after this I feel like I may be missing out with that mindset and have to reconsider.
What I Enjoyed:
The Prose:
I don't know about you but I always enjoy it whenever stories lampshade cliches and storytelling conventions, to me it's funny. There's a lot of gems in terms of analogies and word play such as Tomkin highlighted his home is the kind of place the hero would stay at for a night before moving on with his big quest or when he calls the voice of reason in his mind 'the bearded wise man telling him to shut up,' how his brother is the typical knight in shining armor type. Overall it's very amusing with him just talking about his overall situation in terms of conventions and tropes.
Characters:
This story within a story centers around two main characters: Tomkin Thornhewn, younger son of the Duke of Marshwell and his eventual companion whom he calls 'Mags.' Each of them is a distinct character and has their own set of issues. Tomkin feels inferior to his elder brother who is the ace in the family and is a total nerd being an avid reader and the guy who handles the less glamorous aspects of helping to run the duchy. In an interesting twist, he is actually appreciated for what he does by his family and colleagues and his work is acknowledged as important if not necessarily flashy like riding into glorious battle. Mags' story unfolds as the tale goes on along with her backstory and just why she ran away and took her chances on living with a dragon in a run down castle. I'd like to say more but that would really spoil the story but I will say she is quite sympathetic when you hear just what happened with her. Speaking of which there is the dragon in question Vorath. He's the main external 'obstacle' of the story but he's great as a character in his own right just so apathetic to Tomkin's attempts to get the better of him and also with a deep backstory of his own too. It's amazing how rich of a story one can tell with less major characters than you can count on one hand.
The Personal Nature of the Story:
At the end of the day, this story is about Tomkin and Mags growing as people and confronting their own shortcomings and fears. There may be a dragon involved but the real antagonists are their inner demons. Tomkin wishes to prove his worth and competence and Mags wishes to make a new life for herself. Some of the best stories are more internally focused and this is a prime example of that.
Issues:
I honestly cannot think of any major issues that really hurt the story in any significant way for me. The one thing is the fact it was short but it's a novella so that's the point of it.
Conclusion:
In case you can't tell from the review, I really enjoyed Tomkin and the Dragon and am so glad I bought it. I normally don't read novellas but after this I feel like I may be missing out with that mindset and have to reconsider.
June 30, 2017
Reader thoughts: Best book I've read all week (maybe all month, but my memory isn't so reliable that far back). After some disappointing stories, I was glad to read this one.
The book started with a little girl begging a keeper for the tale of Tomkin and the Dragon. The middle chunk is all about Tomkin and the dragon, and the last chapter (epilogue, really) is the keeper ending his tale.
I loved the moments that made Tomkin human. He's clumsy, he's hungry, he's irritated, and he's stubborn. Same with Mags. She was very human, too.
I did guess the end but I still enjoyed waiting for that moment and to see how it would happen.
I loved the underlying theme here that people shouldn't judge each other based on first impressions. You shouldn't judge based on rumors, and you especially shouldn't judge (nor trust) a dragon without knowing him. That's dangerous.
Favorite parts:
AND this scene
My only complaint would be the use of "ok" at location 1573. The book also had "okay," which I still find out of place in a medieval fantasy, but at least "okay" is better than "ok," and a book ought to be consistent.
Oh, and Tomkin lost all his dizziness halfway through the book. He's later straining to turn the gate winch, muscles in his arms aching. If this is so, wouldn't his heart be pumping really hard and making his head throb again? Maybe he had enough trouble without having to be dizzy on top of it.
Writer thoughts: The frame narrative serves several purposes that I saw, even though I don't always like frame narratives. Mostly, it helped to hold readers' interest.
1, It had a more interesting setting to start, and more immediately interesting characters. A curious little girl and a storyteller who can do magic? I'm hooked on page 2! Tomkin himself? Well, he took a little longer to grow on me.
2, It foreshadowed to the audience that Tomkin would have to deal with a real dragon. Yes, I could have read the title of the book itself, but I just didn't. I was glad to know there would be a dragon, because all Tomkin did for a few pages was read reports and daydream.
"Keepers tell stories, because stories are the most powerful thing on earth."
The book started with a little girl begging a keeper for the tale of Tomkin and the Dragon. The middle chunk is all about Tomkin and the dragon, and the last chapter (epilogue, really) is the keeper ending his tale.
I loved the moments that made Tomkin human. He's clumsy, he's hungry, he's irritated, and he's stubborn. Same with Mags. She was very human, too.
I did guess the end but I still enjoyed waiting for that moment and to see how it would happen.
I loved the underlying theme here that people shouldn't judge each other based on first impressions. You shouldn't judge based on rumors, and you especially shouldn't judge (nor trust) a dragon without knowing him. That's dangerous.
Favorite parts:
"Chinkless." Isn't that an awesome word to describe a dragon's scales?
"What was a word worse than hate? Nothing came to mind. He'd just capitalize it then. He Hated this girl."
Every time "the bearded voice" came on scene. This is how Tomkin imagines his conscience and prudence, I guess. Tomkin is rather imaginative.
"You denuded a dragon."
AND this scene
Mags, laughing: "I thought we were trying to sneak around. You're stomping like an ogre!"
Tomkin, dizzy: "I can't help it," he said, just as his other foot slammed down onto a stone that had seemed much farther away.
My only complaint would be the use of "ok" at location 1573. The book also had "okay," which I still find out of place in a medieval fantasy, but at least "okay" is better than "ok," and a book ought to be consistent.
Oh, and Tomkin lost all his dizziness halfway through the book. He's later straining to turn the gate winch, muscles in his arms aching. If this is so, wouldn't his heart be pumping really hard and making his head throb again? Maybe he had enough trouble without having to be dizzy on top of it.
Writer thoughts: The frame narrative serves several purposes that I saw, even though I don't always like frame narratives. Mostly, it helped to hold readers' interest.
1, It had a more interesting setting to start, and more immediately interesting characters. A curious little girl and a storyteller who can do magic? I'm hooked on page 2! Tomkin himself? Well, he took a little longer to grow on me.
2, It foreshadowed to the audience that Tomkin would have to deal with a real dragon. Yes, I could have read the title of the book itself, but I just didn't. I was glad to know there would be a dragon, because all Tomkin did for a few pages was read reports and daydream.
November 27, 2023
A hero. It calls up a certain image, and Tomkin has definitely decided he doesn’t match that vison at all. That’s why he’s stuck negotiating a deal for more candles rather than out fighting with his brother. So, when the chance comes to prove himself by dispatching a dragon by himself, he jumps at the chance. However, Tomkin falls flat on his face in the effort as he ends up needing to be rescued from the dragon. To further complicate matters, he finds a damsel inside the dragon’s castle that insists she’s not a prisoner but has made friends with the dragon.
Tomkin doesn’t measure up. At least not to the image he has constructed of what a hero looks like, and it doesn’t do him any favors in his current situation. Rather it binds him, puts him in his own prison. Yet he’s not the only one. The damsel in distress that doesn’t know she’s in distress has her own perception problems besides the obvious. She decided she didn’t measure up either on the internal checklist she had created, that she was just one huge disappointment to her family. Sadly that “I’m not good enough her” was so powerful in her spirit that she convinced herself she was better off as dragon’s company than with her own family.
So how do you slay the dragon? First you have to see the dragon. That means truly seeing it for what it is, the creature that has you trapped and eventually will be your death. The how you ended up in your dragon prison is of no importance; breaking loose is everything now. Then it’s time to be the hero. Not the one from before with all the blinders and blurred perceptions, but the one that has been waiting to emerge. Because in truth most dragons aren’t slain by swords or spears. Instead, it takes much tougher weapons to defeat our dragons. Yet it’s worth the struggle because the true hero that we uncover surpasses anyone we ever imagined as Tomkin and his damsel will tell you.
Tomkin doesn’t measure up. At least not to the image he has constructed of what a hero looks like, and it doesn’t do him any favors in his current situation. Rather it binds him, puts him in his own prison. Yet he’s not the only one. The damsel in distress that doesn’t know she’s in distress has her own perception problems besides the obvious. She decided she didn’t measure up either on the internal checklist she had created, that she was just one huge disappointment to her family. Sadly that “I’m not good enough her” was so powerful in her spirit that she convinced herself she was better off as dragon’s company than with her own family.
So how do you slay the dragon? First you have to see the dragon. That means truly seeing it for what it is, the creature that has you trapped and eventually will be your death. The how you ended up in your dragon prison is of no importance; breaking loose is everything now. Then it’s time to be the hero. Not the one from before with all the blinders and blurred perceptions, but the one that has been waiting to emerge. Because in truth most dragons aren’t slain by swords or spears. Instead, it takes much tougher weapons to defeat our dragons. Yet it’s worth the struggle because the true hero that we uncover surpasses anyone we ever imagined as Tomkin and his damsel will tell you.
November 5, 2018
You don’t want to miss out on this lighthearted tale!
A lighthearted tale that will make you smile at the same time recognizing the seriousness of Tomkin’s predicament. He wants to be a hero just like his older strong and stout brother. He is determined to do something better than sitting at a desk doing paperwork. He sets off to visit his family’s crumbling old castle to fulfill his dream of slaying the dragon there. I really like Tomkin’s character. I think he is one that we all could relate with. Most of us want to make our lives better. As I read this tale, I kept imagining Will, the Keeper at the beginning of this book and the main protagonist in Pursuit of Shadows, standing in front of a group or walking along with friends telling this story. I would love to have that audible! But I digress. The other main character in this tale is Mags, another strong character we all can relate with. She left her home and family to make her own way and make her own choices for her life and not be what her father chose for her. I loved the banter between her and Tomkin. Gradually we get to know each one better and understand their motives, but also, we get to see how they come to change their preconceived notions about one another. Have you ever done that? Judged someone before we know them and as we get to know them better, change our thinking? There are so many other things I could say about this tale. It was wonderful. I thoroughly enjoyed it. And btw, I couldn’t help but wipe away a few tears at the end. Ms Andrews does a great job of writing in depth characters and creating a great imaginative world. I highly recommend reading this tale. I can hardly wait for book three in this series. I certainly don’t want to miss out and neither would you once you started reading this series.
A lighthearted tale that will make you smile at the same time recognizing the seriousness of Tomkin’s predicament. He wants to be a hero just like his older strong and stout brother. He is determined to do something better than sitting at a desk doing paperwork. He sets off to visit his family’s crumbling old castle to fulfill his dream of slaying the dragon there. I really like Tomkin’s character. I think he is one that we all could relate with. Most of us want to make our lives better. As I read this tale, I kept imagining Will, the Keeper at the beginning of this book and the main protagonist in Pursuit of Shadows, standing in front of a group or walking along with friends telling this story. I would love to have that audible! But I digress. The other main character in this tale is Mags, another strong character we all can relate with. She left her home and family to make her own way and make her own choices for her life and not be what her father chose for her. I loved the banter between her and Tomkin. Gradually we get to know each one better and understand their motives, but also, we get to see how they come to change their preconceived notions about one another. Have you ever done that? Judged someone before we know them and as we get to know them better, change our thinking? There are so many other things I could say about this tale. It was wonderful. I thoroughly enjoyed it. And btw, I couldn’t help but wipe away a few tears at the end. Ms Andrews does a great job of writing in depth characters and creating a great imaginative world. I highly recommend reading this tale. I can hardly wait for book three in this series. I certainly don’t want to miss out and neither would you once you started reading this series.
October 29, 2022
This was a fun, hilariously funny, and creative tale that the Keepers from the Keepers Chronicles often tell. (If I remember correctly, it was Angeline’s favorite and Alaric told it on his first stay at her inn). And if you are looking for something that is going to keep three adults and four kids entertained this is exactly the book you should listen to.
In this story Tomkin is the 2nd son of the Duke of Marshwell. He loves books and negotiation and wants so badly to be the hero of his own story. Lucky for him, his chance is about to present itself. While his father and older brother are away defending the border and his mother is out of the stronghold his father receives a message from the Duke of Greentree, which he decides to read. To his dismay he discovers that his Father has arranged him a marriage to Lady Lissa the daughter of the Duke of Greentree. He is not happy and very unimpressed with the idea, especially since Lady Lissa has some nasty rumors being circulated about her. Lucky for him, a Shepard also appears that day and tells him a story of a dragon, Bright as Death, that has stolen his sheep and flown away to a rundown castle. This is just the heroic adventure Tomkin needs to show his father he does not need an arranged marriage. Or so he thinks.
I just loved both Tomkin and Mags in this story. They were both funny and extremely endearing characters. I enjoyed their snarky interactions and how they grew closer throughout the story.
All in all, this was a fantastic story! I really wish JA Andrews would write more of these Keepers tales because they are perfect to enjoy as a whole family! If you like humor, excitement, great characters, a little bossiness, and plenty of dragonly adventure then you would love this book!
In this story Tomkin is the 2nd son of the Duke of Marshwell. He loves books and negotiation and wants so badly to be the hero of his own story. Lucky for him, his chance is about to present itself. While his father and older brother are away defending the border and his mother is out of the stronghold his father receives a message from the Duke of Greentree, which he decides to read. To his dismay he discovers that his Father has arranged him a marriage to Lady Lissa the daughter of the Duke of Greentree. He is not happy and very unimpressed with the idea, especially since Lady Lissa has some nasty rumors being circulated about her. Lucky for him, a Shepard also appears that day and tells him a story of a dragon, Bright as Death, that has stolen his sheep and flown away to a rundown castle. This is just the heroic adventure Tomkin needs to show his father he does not need an arranged marriage. Or so he thinks.
I just loved both Tomkin and Mags in this story. They were both funny and extremely endearing characters. I enjoyed their snarky interactions and how they grew closer throughout the story.
All in all, this was a fantastic story! I really wish JA Andrews would write more of these Keepers tales because they are perfect to enjoy as a whole family! If you like humor, excitement, great characters, a little bossiness, and plenty of dragonly adventure then you would love this book!
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