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A mysterious all-powerful being watches the unfolding stories of two alternative realities he has created. In one reality, an acquaintance of this being has placed himself in the world. His presence affects the story in the most significant of ways, though his motivations are only founded in love...
In both of these worlds, the beautiful but naive Herai has just reached adulthood. The underground stone city in which Herai lives is a dark network of torchlit tunnels, patrolled by guards. The city's residents are cocooned from the people Outside - savages they believe threaten their existence.
In one reality, Herai is tasked with navigating the Outside, with all its dangers, in a desperate attempt to save the city from an impending war. In the other reality, Herai is brutally attacked. Who is behind the violence and what was their intention? No one is beyond suspicion, and the entire fabric of life in the city is threatened.
In both of these worlds, the beautiful but naive Herai has just reached adulthood. The underground stone city in which Herai lives is a dark network of torchlit tunnels, patrolled by guards. The city's residents are cocooned from the people Outside - savages they believe threaten their existence.
In one reality, Herai is tasked with navigating the Outside, with all its dangers, in a desperate attempt to save the city from an impending war. In the other reality, Herai is brutally attacked. Who is behind the violence and what was their intention? No one is beyond suspicion, and the entire fabric of life in the city is threatened.
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September 20, 2021
HERAI is an intricately drawn dystopian tale featuring two different realities/parallel universes: “without” and “a better place.” An all-powerful being watches these two worlds unfold. Herai, daughter of the city’s ruler, is attacked and nearly killed in one parallel universe. In the other one, she isn’t. The characters live in an underground community with caves and torches. The descriptions and world building are exceptionally well done. This novel is well edited and it’s clear a lot of thought went into the detailed plotting of this dual-universe novel.
In “Without” Monta is from the outside. Glant, Herai’s father and leader of the city, shares the dystopian story of savages, the world being poisoned, and retreating into the city. Herai goes with Monta to meet with the savages and try to end the war. But Glant can’t be trusted—he’s already betrayed Monta before, and now is after Herai. I especially enjoyed the first scene with Herai and Endam. Perhaps all she has been told is not entirely true… The Better Place: In this version, Herai has been brutally attacked and the characters are trying to solve the mystery of who could have attacked her.
I really loved the amount of detail the author put into the story. The caves and intricacies of the underground world were well thought out and vividly described. I struggled somewhat with the split-universe format, which switched off in each chapter, because although the writing was sound, I was having a bit of trouble keeping the details of the story straight and remembering which plot points belonged in which universe. I’d recommend this book to readers who like interesting dystopian novels with a twist!
Please excuse typos/name misspellings. Entered on screen reader.
In “Without” Monta is from the outside. Glant, Herai’s father and leader of the city, shares the dystopian story of savages, the world being poisoned, and retreating into the city. Herai goes with Monta to meet with the savages and try to end the war. But Glant can’t be trusted—he’s already betrayed Monta before, and now is after Herai. I especially enjoyed the first scene with Herai and Endam. Perhaps all she has been told is not entirely true… The Better Place: In this version, Herai has been brutally attacked and the characters are trying to solve the mystery of who could have attacked her.
I really loved the amount of detail the author put into the story. The caves and intricacies of the underground world were well thought out and vividly described. I struggled somewhat with the split-universe format, which switched off in each chapter, because although the writing was sound, I was having a bit of trouble keeping the details of the story straight and remembering which plot points belonged in which universe. I’d recommend this book to readers who like interesting dystopian novels with a twist!
Please excuse typos/name misspellings. Entered on screen reader.
January 29, 2020
Herai is a fictional story that is quite different from the others. An immortal whose name was never mentioned is watching two realities play out. In both realities, Herai is seen to be in danger. The first world, which is called WITHOUT features Herai being sent to the 'outside', with Monta to negotiate their safety with the savages that live there. Things did not turn out as expected. In the BETTER PLACE world, Herai is attacked and stabbed waiting to die but the attackers were unsuccessful. Monta is given the task to investigate this act. Every one is considered a suspect and no one is safe while the attackers still roam free in the city. Will they attack again? Or will they be caught?
March 2, 2017
Herai is a debut novel by Aaron D. Key. The main character is Herai and her story unfolds in two different realities. One reality is called “WITHOUT” and one “THE BETTER PLACE” because an all-powerful being has entered one reality thereby greatly affecting it. It is not until the end that you know who this being is.
Since you are following two subplots and the book alternates between the two. It made for a slow and arduous read. The plot(s) were difficult to keep straight. I found myself constantly flipping back to see which reality I was reading about. I finally gave up and started making notes in an effort to keep track of everything going on. This is not my most favorite thing to do and made it hard for me to really get vested in the story.
Herai lives in an underground society that is ruled by her father Glant. Glant rules with an iron fist but he is getting older. Some see an opportunity to rise up against him and secretly meet to develop a plan to overthrow him. Meanwhile, Herai has taken her first steps into the unknown outside world of sun and danger. Herai is drawn to the outside and despite the peril she goes against her father and continues to explore the outside to the detriment of all.
The story is inventive and different. However, as I mentioned earlier, the story is hard to follow. In addition, the plot did not move along like it should. I felt like I was getting pushed from scene to scene without a real purpose. All-in-all it read more like a work in progress. I feel the story could benefit from some serious editing. That said, there is some really good ideas here and I had no quam with the prose.
I received a free copy from the author in exchange for my honest review.
See my other reviews on my blog at www.thespineview.com.
Since you are following two subplots and the book alternates between the two. It made for a slow and arduous read. The plot(s) were difficult to keep straight. I found myself constantly flipping back to see which reality I was reading about. I finally gave up and started making notes in an effort to keep track of everything going on. This is not my most favorite thing to do and made it hard for me to really get vested in the story.
Herai lives in an underground society that is ruled by her father Glant. Glant rules with an iron fist but he is getting older. Some see an opportunity to rise up against him and secretly meet to develop a plan to overthrow him. Meanwhile, Herai has taken her first steps into the unknown outside world of sun and danger. Herai is drawn to the outside and despite the peril she goes against her father and continues to explore the outside to the detriment of all.
The story is inventive and different. However, as I mentioned earlier, the story is hard to follow. In addition, the plot did not move along like it should. I felt like I was getting pushed from scene to scene without a real purpose. All-in-all it read more like a work in progress. I feel the story could benefit from some serious editing. That said, there is some really good ideas here and I had no quam with the prose.
I received a free copy from the author in exchange for my honest review.
See my other reviews on my blog at www.thespineview.com.
September 25, 2020
Interesting!!!
Such an interesting approach. A story within a story. Or is it a mystery in a romance. Either way you will be enthralled and delighted by the action and drama.
Such an interesting approach. A story within a story. Or is it a mystery in a romance. Either way you will be enthralled and delighted by the action and drama.
September 6, 2020
It took me a bit to fall into this world. The pacing is a bit slow. This a benefit as you progress and the mysteries begin to unravel in satisfyingly slow manner. The two versions of the microcosm are easy to mix up until the difference is revealed. At which point it is easier to keep track. I was reminded of the pacing of the Patrick Rothfuss book my friend gave me which I almost put down but was so glad I didn’t. Descriptions are lush. Characters feel real. Love is love and the bit at the end is a nice setup for more fun! Definitely recommend and recommend staying the course.
January 11, 2020
I enjoyed this book thoroughly, right from the start. A very captivating read, the goings on in the underground walled city will keep you well engaged. Although a science fiction story with alternate realities, the characters are very much human with subtle nuances and one grows to like the characters as the novel develops.
And even though the story is set in a dystopian society, it battles the human themes of good and evil, right and wrong, and the subtle complexities of human nature- something that is relevant and universal even today.
The writer's style of storytelling is very inventive and he masterfully weaves magic into both the alternative worlds.
The suspense is kept well alive in the book as the reader reaches the end.
What I really liked were the parts that began with the description of the forest (Onlooking)
"The evening breeze hummed with warm, damp grass and the scent of apple blossom."
The author builds up atmosphere wonderfully, in all the realities, and his language is clear and elegant. I would definitely recommend this book for scifi lovers looking for something different.
And even though the story is set in a dystopian society, it battles the human themes of good and evil, right and wrong, and the subtle complexities of human nature- something that is relevant and universal even today.
The writer's style of storytelling is very inventive and he masterfully weaves magic into both the alternative worlds.
The suspense is kept well alive in the book as the reader reaches the end.
What I really liked were the parts that began with the description of the forest (Onlooking)
"The evening breeze hummed with warm, damp grass and the scent of apple blossom."
The author builds up atmosphere wonderfully, in all the realities, and his language is clear and elegant. I would definitely recommend this book for scifi lovers looking for something different.
June 15, 2022
"Herai" was a very different read: different in a very good way. I thoroughly enjoyed the plot(s) and the way the story is set out makes this an addictive read. The writing was great (flows really well) and the setting was brilliant (I wouldn't mind visiting!). The characters had me involved with their stories, which is always a plus! Happy reader, right here!
My thanks to the author and BookTasters. This review was written voluntarily and is entirely my own, unbiased, opinion.
My thanks to the author and BookTasters. This review was written voluntarily and is entirely my own, unbiased, opinion.
September 23, 2019
A fun and different read!!!
If you like mind games and twists, then this is the book for you! Two timelines, one with a better outcome than the other. One timeline is a who done it story while the other is one of deception and war. Follow Herai as she traverses both. You wont be sorry!
If you like mind games and twists, then this is the book for you! Two timelines, one with a better outcome than the other. One timeline is a who done it story while the other is one of deception and war. Follow Herai as she traverses both. You wont be sorry!
December 4, 2025
I received this book in exchange for an honest review.
This book was such a surprising ride! At first, the story takes its time, slowly pulling you into Herai’s underground world—a stone city full of tunnels and torches, cut off from everything outside. It feels dark, mysterious, and a little claustrophobic, but that’s what makes Herai’s journey beyond those walls so exciting.
Herai herself is easy to root for. She starts out innocent and sheltered, but as the story unfolds, you really get to watch her grow and face challenges that push her way outside her comfort zone. I loved how the book mixes adventure with deeper, almost philosophical questions about love, destiny, and what it means to be human.
The dual realities can be a bit tricky to follow at times, but honestly, that’s part of the fun—it keeps you guessing and makes you think. And once the pieces start coming together, it’s super rewarding.
If you’re into fantasy that isn’t just about battles and magic, but also makes you reflect on bigger ideas, Herai is worth picking up. It’s imaginative, thoughtful, and has a unique vibe that sets it apart from typical fantasy reads.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ – A thoughtful fantasy adventure with heart and mystery.
This book was such a surprising ride! At first, the story takes its time, slowly pulling you into Herai’s underground world—a stone city full of tunnels and torches, cut off from everything outside. It feels dark, mysterious, and a little claustrophobic, but that’s what makes Herai’s journey beyond those walls so exciting.
Herai herself is easy to root for. She starts out innocent and sheltered, but as the story unfolds, you really get to watch her grow and face challenges that push her way outside her comfort zone. I loved how the book mixes adventure with deeper, almost philosophical questions about love, destiny, and what it means to be human.
The dual realities can be a bit tricky to follow at times, but honestly, that’s part of the fun—it keeps you guessing and makes you think. And once the pieces start coming together, it’s super rewarding.
If you’re into fantasy that isn’t just about battles and magic, but also makes you reflect on bigger ideas, Herai is worth picking up. It’s imaginative, thoughtful, and has a unique vibe that sets it apart from typical fantasy reads.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ – A thoughtful fantasy adventure with heart and mystery.
January 5, 2021
I began the book a little skeptical about the three forms of narration (Onlooking/Without/The better place) and apprehensive that the author might lose me in a too intricate world. But as the story unfolded everything fell into the right place and the confusion I felt at the start vanished.
Herai is a story about a city where people live underground under the rule of a master called Glant. We are following two parallel worlds at the same time, one where Herai the daughter of the ruler was savagely attacked and almost died and the one where no such thing happened. The two worlds contain the same places and characters but not the same events. We cleverly switch between the two worlds without them getting mixed up as the separation is always very clear.
The journey to discover Herai's attackers reads like some sort of thriller with a mystery to resolve, while the other world slowly becomes a dystopia with drastic changes from the first scenario. And the two are linked by the biggest question of what does really lie Outside ?
There is also a third point of view "Onlooking" which explains to us that a man called The Old One lives a life in this world as a game. In the world "Without" him he is dead while in "The better place" he stills live. Uncovering his identity and noticing the impact of his life on this world is part of the intrigue.
I love the world the author as created, it is very interesting to observe the characters adapt and survive underground almost without any light. It is a very rich and detailled world wich makes us think differently: the way work is organised, ideologies and the concept of "object of value" (I'm thinking about the doll) are smartly described.
The characters themselves feel real, they have strong personnalities and while they have complex train of thoughts they sometimes might sound illogical ? Especially Herai who is way too naive, almost incosistent. She's not reliable at all in the matter of reading other people's emotions or motives which makes her switch opinion too frequently so I found her a bit exasperating at times. My favorite character was Jakem, he is smart, loyal and kind.
The relationships between the various characters are really well-written especially the brotherly love between Koa and Monta that warmed my heart and the relation between Jakem and Monta wich was a pleasure to read and helped Monta become a better man so it was a win-win situation.
I recommend this great book and I will be happy to read the second volume.
Herai is a story about a city where people live underground under the rule of a master called Glant. We are following two parallel worlds at the same time, one where Herai the daughter of the ruler was savagely attacked and almost died and the one where no such thing happened. The two worlds contain the same places and characters but not the same events. We cleverly switch between the two worlds without them getting mixed up as the separation is always very clear.
The journey to discover Herai's attackers reads like some sort of thriller with a mystery to resolve, while the other world slowly becomes a dystopia with drastic changes from the first scenario. And the two are linked by the biggest question of what does really lie Outside ?
There is also a third point of view "Onlooking" which explains to us that a man called The Old One lives a life in this world as a game. In the world "Without" him he is dead while in "The better place" he stills live. Uncovering his identity and noticing the impact of his life on this world is part of the intrigue.
I love the world the author as created, it is very interesting to observe the characters adapt and survive underground almost without any light. It is a very rich and detailled world wich makes us think differently: the way work is organised, ideologies and the concept of "object of value" (I'm thinking about the doll) are smartly described.
The characters themselves feel real, they have strong personnalities and while they have complex train of thoughts they sometimes might sound illogical ? Especially Herai who is way too naive, almost incosistent. She's not reliable at all in the matter of reading other people's emotions or motives which makes her switch opinion too frequently so I found her a bit exasperating at times. My favorite character was Jakem, he is smart, loyal and kind.
The relationships between the various characters are really well-written especially the brotherly love between Koa and Monta that warmed my heart and the relation between Jakem and Monta wich was a pleasure to read and helped Monta become a better man so it was a win-win situation.
I recommend this great book and I will be happy to read the second volume.
September 22, 2020
I was kindly provided a copy of this book by the author in exchange for an honest review.
I enjoyed this book but was slightly confused by the overall story. The concept was incredibly interesting and I loved the switching between the two parallel stories and the fact that they explored the effect that one person could have on the story but the OVERLOOKING parts made me confused and sort of took me out of the plot a little.
The atmosphere and world building was very good and the contrast between The City and The Outside was done very well and the descriptions of The City was also wonderful. The plot building was also done very well and the characters were enjoyable, I really loved Herai and the fact that we could see the story through his eyes at certain points of the narrative.
However, the ending of the book had me confused and that might be me misunderstanding what was going on. Nevertheless, that didn't stop me really enjoying the story and getting very invested in the two very different but also slightly similar plot lines.
I enjoyed this book but was slightly confused by the overall story. The concept was incredibly interesting and I loved the switching between the two parallel stories and the fact that they explored the effect that one person could have on the story but the OVERLOOKING parts made me confused and sort of took me out of the plot a little.
The atmosphere and world building was very good and the contrast between The City and The Outside was done very well and the descriptions of The City was also wonderful. The plot building was also done very well and the characters were enjoyable, I really loved Herai and the fact that we could see the story through his eyes at certain points of the narrative.
However, the ending of the book had me confused and that might be me misunderstanding what was going on. Nevertheless, that didn't stop me really enjoying the story and getting very invested in the two very different but also slightly similar plot lines.
February 10, 2020
Somewhere beyond this reality, a man--who is perhaps not merely one man, nor human--tells himself two stories about an insular society on the brink of a coup. In one version, an Old One has taken on human existence, and his or her actions affect the personal and political lives of some of the society's key players. In the other, the Old One never existed. The stories quickly diverge as they follow Herai, the teenage daughter of the society's authoritarian leader. On one path, she finds love but soon falls from her father's favor; on the other, she's brutally attacked by someone eager to send him a message. As the storylines alternate, clues are revealed about the characters' crimes and other secrets, leading to a pair of explosive conclusions.
Herai is an excellent debut novel, and I look forward to the next installment in the Wheel of Eight series.
Herai is an excellent debut novel, and I look forward to the next installment in the Wheel of Eight series.
October 7, 2021
Although I found the alternate story lines challenging, this was a compelling read. I'd recommend reading without other distractions -- concentration required!
January 31, 2025
"The darkness accepts me as I am. The rock requires no pretense from me."
Herai by Aaron Key is a thought-provoking novel set in a secluded city, exploring identity, control, and rebellion. The story follows four individuals (Monta, Koa, Adrij, and Herai) as they challenge the oppressive rule of the city's enigmatic leader, Glant. As tensions rise, a brutal attack sparks an investigation, revealing hidden secrets and questioning the nature of free will and governance.
I loved it. It's a thought-provoking novel with a richly detailed world and deep philosophical themes. The writing is immersive, with poetic descriptions and introspective dialogues. Well-developed characters, particularly Monta and Koa, add depth to the story. However, the narrative can be dense and slow-paced at times, with overly abstract sections that may challenge readers.
I recommend this to those who enjoy dystopian fiction with intellectual and psychological depth.
Thanks to Booktasters for the ecopy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
Herai by Aaron Key is a thought-provoking novel set in a secluded city, exploring identity, control, and rebellion. The story follows four individuals (Monta, Koa, Adrij, and Herai) as they challenge the oppressive rule of the city's enigmatic leader, Glant. As tensions rise, a brutal attack sparks an investigation, revealing hidden secrets and questioning the nature of free will and governance.
I loved it. It's a thought-provoking novel with a richly detailed world and deep philosophical themes. The writing is immersive, with poetic descriptions and introspective dialogues. Well-developed characters, particularly Monta and Koa, add depth to the story. However, the narrative can be dense and slow-paced at times, with overly abstract sections that may challenge readers.
I recommend this to those who enjoy dystopian fiction with intellectual and psychological depth.
Thanks to Booktasters for the ecopy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
July 19, 2025
This story made me feel everything-fear, hope, confusion, awe. Herai’s pain was so real it hurt to read, especially in the timeline where she’s attacked. But in both versions of her life, she grows in such unexpected ways. I loved how nothing was black and white. The writing style has a lyrical flow that fits the mysterious, otherworldly tone.
August 2, 2025
'Just when things look perfect, a tiny trick of fate and a bit of time can make everything change.'
A mystery with a unique premise, intriguing characters, and a good dash of political plotting, 'Herai' is a wonderful debut.
With two timelines to follow, this was bound to be a tricky read. By halfway through I'd sort of got the hang of the differences between the two realities and went along for the ride. I was not disappointed.
Following multiple points of view (not just Herai), meant I got insight into the motivations and feelings of some key players in the story. My favourite of these was Monta. While Herai came off as a bit stilted or formal at times, Monta was mysterious, surprisingly hopeful if you looked close enough, and even funny at times. His friendships and other relationships were well-developed, reminding me of a character out of a Dostoevsky novel.
The setting was quite interesting. Though there wasn't much focus on the logistics of the City, one never knew who could be listening, watching, or hiding in the twisting tunnels and unlit corners.
The history of the people of the City reminded me of the video game, Stray, as well as the Fallout franchise. There was hope, but also fear and uncertainty.
Herai is tasked with preventing a war in one of the realities - a daunting task for one who is just out of the "Children's Cavern", but one she takes in her stride. In the other reality, she's attacked in what is believed to be a politically-motivated move. In this timeline Monta is asked by Glant (Herai's father) to solve the atrocious crime. The mystery was built up quite nicely here, one never knew who was to be trusted right to the very end.
Despite the plot(s) moving a bit slowly at times, I enjoyed the book and was quite invested in most of the characters' lives as the climax closed in. It was clearly a book that took quite a lot of planning.
Recommended to fans of mysteries, speculative fiction, LGBT+ stories, and games/TV series like Fallout.
Many thanks to Booktasters and the author for a free copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
A mystery with a unique premise, intriguing characters, and a good dash of political plotting, 'Herai' is a wonderful debut.
With two timelines to follow, this was bound to be a tricky read. By halfway through I'd sort of got the hang of the differences between the two realities and went along for the ride. I was not disappointed.
Following multiple points of view (not just Herai), meant I got insight into the motivations and feelings of some key players in the story. My favourite of these was Monta. While Herai came off as a bit stilted or formal at times, Monta was mysterious, surprisingly hopeful if you looked close enough, and even funny at times. His friendships and other relationships were well-developed, reminding me of a character out of a Dostoevsky novel.
The setting was quite interesting. Though there wasn't much focus on the logistics of the City, one never knew who could be listening, watching, or hiding in the twisting tunnels and unlit corners.
The history of the people of the City reminded me of the video game, Stray, as well as the Fallout franchise. There was hope, but also fear and uncertainty.
Herai is tasked with preventing a war in one of the realities - a daunting task for one who is just out of the "Children's Cavern", but one she takes in her stride. In the other reality, she's attacked in what is believed to be a politically-motivated move. In this timeline Monta is asked by Glant (Herai's father) to solve the atrocious crime. The mystery was built up quite nicely here, one never knew who was to be trusted right to the very end.
Despite the plot(s) moving a bit slowly at times, I enjoyed the book and was quite invested in most of the characters' lives as the climax closed in. It was clearly a book that took quite a lot of planning.
Recommended to fans of mysteries, speculative fiction, LGBT+ stories, and games/TV series like Fallout.
Many thanks to Booktasters and the author for a free copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
January 21, 2025
Herai by Aaron Key is an exquisite journey into a richly imagined world that captures the reader's heart and mind. The narrative masterfully weaves themes of loyalty, rebellion, and identity, all while painting a vivid picture of a society caught between light and darkness. The characters, particularly Koa and Herai, are so beautifully crafted that their struggles and growth linger long after the final page.
Aaron Key’s prose is both poetic and immersive, making each chapter feel like a cinematic experience. The philosophical undertones and intricate relationships add layers of depth that elevate this book beyond a mere story—it’s an exploration of human nature and the choices that define us.
This is a must-read for fans of fantasy with substance. It’s rare to find a debut novel so profound yet accessible. I can’t wait to see what Aaron Key writes next! Highly recommend!
Aaron Key’s prose is both poetic and immersive, making each chapter feel like a cinematic experience. The philosophical undertones and intricate relationships add layers of depth that elevate this book beyond a mere story—it’s an exploration of human nature and the choices that define us.
This is a must-read for fans of fantasy with substance. It’s rare to find a debut novel so profound yet accessible. I can’t wait to see what Aaron Key writes next! Highly recommend!
July 18, 2021
3 out of 5 stars for this perplexingly compulsive multi-genre debut.
Read my full, spoiler free, review on my website.
Read my full, spoiler free, review on my website.
May 1, 2024
ekkkk!
I absolutely love this book! I was pulled in from the start! I can not wait to read book two!!!
I absolutely love this book! I was pulled in from the start! I can not wait to read book two!!!
March 31, 2024
In an underground city secluded for its safety, the patriarch Glant rules and *almost* no one goes outside. Two mysterious figures begin each chapter of telling two parallel stories; one where Glant’s daughter Herai is stabbed by masked figures, and one where she rebels and visits the outside world, endangering her whole community. As Herai’s friends try to keep her alive in story #1, the would-be murderer starts poisoning people to cover their tracks. As she explores the outside in #2, she gets into peril she's never even contemplated before.
When I summarize it like that, it sounds pretty interesting, but unfortunately this book wasn’t for me. I wasn’t fascinated by the approach to underground living, and though Glant talks about the need for safety, I wasn’t 100% sure of the reason they’re down there in the first place. The setup sounds a lot like the TTRPG Earthdawn, except that the cave complex has a cavern that opens up to the sky for agricultural purposes (and, no doubt, fresh air). Given the number of torches mentioned, I wondered why the people outside had never discovered the city from smoke alone, or what Glant’s people grew and ate, exactly, but the logistics of cave living were not terribly important to the story.
As other reviewers mention, the pacing is slow. For me, it picked up around the 150-page point, but even then, I didn’t get a lot of emotional investment from Herai or her companions, who are alternately hunting for a murderer or being hunted by the authorities, which one would think would incite strong passions. The watching figures that start off each chapter seem as passive as the reader, and their opinions about the characters eventually sound like they’re just another audience instead of having their own story that reveals their character. I got about 350 pages in of 500 on Kindle, but I think I'm calling this one a DNF. I’m kind of curious to see how it all wraps up, but this is Book 1 of a series, so I’m not certain it will.
This should not discourage you, of course. The concept and plotting are original, and the structure of two parallel stories kind of works once you get used to the labels (though the “better world” being the one where Herai got stabbed threw me). There are some interesting touches; I’m pretty sure the reason the guards all have knives rather than swords is a lack of new metal, because no one mentions mining, they just repurpose and recycle. Check it out... you may find more joy in it than I.
When I summarize it like that, it sounds pretty interesting, but unfortunately this book wasn’t for me. I wasn’t fascinated by the approach to underground living, and though Glant talks about the need for safety, I wasn’t 100% sure of the reason they’re down there in the first place. The setup sounds a lot like the TTRPG Earthdawn, except that the cave complex has a cavern that opens up to the sky for agricultural purposes (and, no doubt, fresh air). Given the number of torches mentioned, I wondered why the people outside had never discovered the city from smoke alone, or what Glant’s people grew and ate, exactly, but the logistics of cave living were not terribly important to the story.
As other reviewers mention, the pacing is slow. For me, it picked up around the 150-page point, but even then, I didn’t get a lot of emotional investment from Herai or her companions, who are alternately hunting for a murderer or being hunted by the authorities, which one would think would incite strong passions. The watching figures that start off each chapter seem as passive as the reader, and their opinions about the characters eventually sound like they’re just another audience instead of having their own story that reveals their character. I got about 350 pages in of 500 on Kindle, but I think I'm calling this one a DNF. I’m kind of curious to see how it all wraps up, but this is Book 1 of a series, so I’m not certain it will.
This should not discourage you, of course. The concept and plotting are original, and the structure of two parallel stories kind of works once you get used to the labels (though the “better world” being the one where Herai got stabbed threw me). There are some interesting touches; I’m pretty sure the reason the guards all have knives rather than swords is a lack of new metal, because no one mentions mining, they just repurpose and recycle. Check it out... you may find more joy in it than I.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 6, 2020
I am always excited to learn new ways of telling a story, and this definitely explores a way of telling two stories at once. It starts of with these two beings finding an interesting world that has two versions of it. The Without world is where the Old One has long ago died, and the Better Place where the Old One has remain living despise its wish to die.
You start exploring these two worlds, and at the beginning they are very similar. It is about this hidden, dystopian city controlled by Grant who is a very strict person, and not everyone is happy with the way he is dictating things. As the stories progresses, you start to notice the difference not only in what happens, but how the people are also different from their other dimension.
In the Without place, Herai, daughter of Grant, she goes out looking for companionship and finds Koa, and has weeks of happiness with him. Koa wanted to use her relationship with Grant as a way to influence the decisions he makes upon the city. Unfortunately, this relationship has caused a riff between her and Grant, and he starts avoiding her. One day, she stumbles upon Monta who says he can take her Outside, an action strictly forbidden in the city, but the temptation to see it is bigger than her fear to be found out.
In the Better Place Herai is attacked on the night she is out looking for companionship. A political action with the intention of hurting Grant. Monta is given the job of finding out who are her attackers while Koa is helping her recover from her injuries. Once they find out that the guards where involved, and that a person is pulling the strings from the shadows, things get more complicated.
At the beginning you can't see why the Better Place is the better place of the two, but as the story develops and you find out what happens, what and who is the Old One and what sacrifice it has done, that you can see the changes that one person can make upon a world just by existing.
It is slow to build up, but I think that is overcome by the mystery, the romance, the exploration of the world, and so much more. I enjoyed this book very much, specially because it tries a new way to tell stories in a new, unique way. I can say that this is definitely a series worth reading. I can't wait to see what happens next.
You start exploring these two worlds, and at the beginning they are very similar. It is about this hidden, dystopian city controlled by Grant who is a very strict person, and not everyone is happy with the way he is dictating things. As the stories progresses, you start to notice the difference not only in what happens, but how the people are also different from their other dimension.
In the Without place, Herai, daughter of Grant, she goes out looking for companionship and finds Koa, and has weeks of happiness with him. Koa wanted to use her relationship with Grant as a way to influence the decisions he makes upon the city. Unfortunately, this relationship has caused a riff between her and Grant, and he starts avoiding her. One day, she stumbles upon Monta who says he can take her Outside, an action strictly forbidden in the city, but the temptation to see it is bigger than her fear to be found out.
In the Better Place Herai is attacked on the night she is out looking for companionship. A political action with the intention of hurting Grant. Monta is given the job of finding out who are her attackers while Koa is helping her recover from her injuries. Once they find out that the guards where involved, and that a person is pulling the strings from the shadows, things get more complicated.
At the beginning you can't see why the Better Place is the better place of the two, but as the story develops and you find out what happens, what and who is the Old One and what sacrifice it has done, that you can see the changes that one person can make upon a world just by existing.
It is slow to build up, but I think that is overcome by the mystery, the romance, the exploration of the world, and so much more. I enjoyed this book very much, specially because it tries a new way to tell stories in a new, unique way. I can say that this is definitely a series worth reading. I can't wait to see what happens next.
August 29, 2023
A Tale of two Worlds
Herai is the eponymous youngest daughter of Glant, aged self-appointed ruler of the City. It is thought that she will be his successor. Outside is forbidden, but rules are made to be broken, and the breakers conspire with one of her brothers to take control, by taking control of Herai. Or at least that is Koa’s excuse for taking her to be his bedmate.
Onlookers discuss a vision pivoting on Herai that one is showing the other, a story unfolding in two different worlds, alternate realities, due to the intervention of an "Old One" in one — the question is, who is the Old One using as avatar?
The world Without appears better, at least for Herai and Koa at the start. While the other world is the Better Place, at least in the present view of the Onlooking, Herai is attacked, while coconspirator Monta is tasked by Glant to discover the perpetrator.
The writing is very good, but the structure — jumping around between two worlds and the observers’ grassy noll — is highly confusing. There is an excellent concept around the premise of an Old One intervening and seeing the paths with and without the intervention, but in neither world is there a real plot, in neither world are their characters we can invest in: there is not much in the way of description; we are not shown who they are; there is none with a redeeming feature.
Each plot seems to meander downhill, with muted sex scenes of different kinds. Even the Onlooker shown the visit doesn’t like the story, and think’s it’s going too slow and has too much sex: Who am I to argue with an Onlooker?
So I gave up at around the 30% mark: in so many ways, it is not me; and I found it too much work trying to keep track of the two stories, with no real hook to hold me in to either the whodunnit of the Better Place or the whoisit of the Onlookers.
Others may enjoy the puzzles, and be more tolerant of the lack of plot and the paper thin characters, but I will award it 2 out of 5 stars for the intriguing idea with its lack of delivery on the promise of the premise.
Herai is the eponymous youngest daughter of Glant, aged self-appointed ruler of the City. It is thought that she will be his successor. Outside is forbidden, but rules are made to be broken, and the breakers conspire with one of her brothers to take control, by taking control of Herai. Or at least that is Koa’s excuse for taking her to be his bedmate.
Onlookers discuss a vision pivoting on Herai that one is showing the other, a story unfolding in two different worlds, alternate realities, due to the intervention of an "Old One" in one — the question is, who is the Old One using as avatar?
The world Without appears better, at least for Herai and Koa at the start. While the other world is the Better Place, at least in the present view of the Onlooking, Herai is attacked, while coconspirator Monta is tasked by Glant to discover the perpetrator.
The writing is very good, but the structure — jumping around between two worlds and the observers’ grassy noll — is highly confusing. There is an excellent concept around the premise of an Old One intervening and seeing the paths with and without the intervention, but in neither world is there a real plot, in neither world are their characters we can invest in: there is not much in the way of description; we are not shown who they are; there is none with a redeeming feature.
Each plot seems to meander downhill, with muted sex scenes of different kinds. Even the Onlooker shown the visit doesn’t like the story, and think’s it’s going too slow and has too much sex: Who am I to argue with an Onlooker?
So I gave up at around the 30% mark: in so many ways, it is not me; and I found it too much work trying to keep track of the two stories, with no real hook to hold me in to either the whodunnit of the Better Place or the whoisit of the Onlookers.
Others may enjoy the puzzles, and be more tolerant of the lack of plot and the paper thin characters, but I will award it 2 out of 5 stars for the intriguing idea with its lack of delivery on the promise of the premise.
October 3, 2025
Herai is ambitious.
It explores dual realities, parallel timelines, political scheming, and even godlike narrators known as “Onlookers.” The story follows Herai, the youngest daughter of Glant, the ruler of a subterranean city where going outside is forbidden. We follow her across two different realities, the WITHOUT and THE BETTER PLACE, as the Onlookers watch and discuss happenings in both worlds. There are many layers here, including dystopia, rebellion, romance, mystery, and philosophy, all while juggling multiple POV’s and timelines. There’s a lot going on in these 500 pages.
Perhaps due to the numerous elements at play, I found the execution difficult to follow. The dialogue felt stiff, making it hard to connect with the large cast of characters. I understand that specific sections of the cave system are named for their function, but I never felt that they were fully developed. I liked the idea of following two versions of events, but the POV shifts and timelines blurred for me, and I often had to go back and reread.
I also wasn’t a fan of some of the narrative devices. At the start of each chapter, the Onlookers have commentary, and sometimes they tell rather than show what’s happening. Also, some of the straightforward chapter titles, This Character Goes Outside or This Character’s Betrayal, spoiled moments before they happened. Instead of pulling me in, these choices kept me at arm’s length.
Overall, Herai felt more like an intellectual exercise than an immersive story. I appreciate the ambition, but the execution just wasn’t for me. Readers who enjoy experimental structures and puzzle-box storytelling may get more enjoyment from it.
Thanks to BookTasters for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.
It explores dual realities, parallel timelines, political scheming, and even godlike narrators known as “Onlookers.” The story follows Herai, the youngest daughter of Glant, the ruler of a subterranean city where going outside is forbidden. We follow her across two different realities, the WITHOUT and THE BETTER PLACE, as the Onlookers watch and discuss happenings in both worlds. There are many layers here, including dystopia, rebellion, romance, mystery, and philosophy, all while juggling multiple POV’s and timelines. There’s a lot going on in these 500 pages.
Perhaps due to the numerous elements at play, I found the execution difficult to follow. The dialogue felt stiff, making it hard to connect with the large cast of characters. I understand that specific sections of the cave system are named for their function, but I never felt that they were fully developed. I liked the idea of following two versions of events, but the POV shifts and timelines blurred for me, and I often had to go back and reread.
I also wasn’t a fan of some of the narrative devices. At the start of each chapter, the Onlookers have commentary, and sometimes they tell rather than show what’s happening. Also, some of the straightforward chapter titles, This Character Goes Outside or This Character’s Betrayal, spoiled moments before they happened. Instead of pulling me in, these choices kept me at arm’s length.
Overall, Herai felt more like an intellectual exercise than an immersive story. I appreciate the ambition, but the execution just wasn’t for me. Readers who enjoy experimental structures and puzzle-box storytelling may get more enjoyment from it.
Thanks to BookTasters for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.
May 2, 2021
‘Herai’ by Aaron D. Key was a very unique and innovative take on storytelling. The book is broken up into three major viewpoints. First there is Onlooking, in which a man (if he truly is a mere man) talks of the lives of people in alternative realities where the existence or lack of, of the Old One (not the titular character) vastly changes the lives of those around them. The other two viewpoints allow the reader to dive into both ‘worlds’ which are referred to as ‘The Better Place’ and ‘Without’.
It took me awhile to become accustomed to the changes, and keep track of the differences for the characters, but as the two versions furthered along my interest grew. How could the inclusion of one life (the Old One takes on the existence of one of the characters in one version) affect so many? It was an intriguing concept, and on top of this was the main storyline for each version of the world with Herai being at the center of both.
While all the characters were well thought out, my favorite was Monta. I found he had excellent character development in both versions, and especially enjoyed his journey in ‘The Better Place’.
It took me awhile to become accustomed to the changes, and keep track of the differences for the characters, but as the two versions furthered along my interest grew. How could the inclusion of one life (the Old One takes on the existence of one of the characters in one version) affect so many? It was an intriguing concept, and on top of this was the main storyline for each version of the world with Herai being at the center of both.
While all the characters were well thought out, my favorite was Monta. I found he had excellent character development in both versions, and especially enjoyed his journey in ‘The Better Place’.
May 31, 2025
Herai by Aaron D. Key is a unique and thought-provoking sci-fi novel that explores two timelines connected by a single life. The story is set in an underground city ruled by Glant, where rebellion is brewing. His daughter, Herai, gets caught in the middle of political conflict, raising questions about power, survival, and destiny.
The book blends fantasy, mystery, and political intrigue, making it an engaging read. At first, the two timelines can be confusing, but as the story unfolds, the differences become clear, adding depth to the plot. The writing is elegant, and the world-building is immersive. Monta’s journey, along with his love story with Jakem, is beautifully written and adds emotional depth.
With its rich storytelling, suspenseful twists, and deep themes, Herai is perfect for sci-fi fans who enjoy complex and layered narratives. If you’re looking for something fresh and intriguing, this book is worth reading!
The book blends fantasy, mystery, and political intrigue, making it an engaging read. At first, the two timelines can be confusing, but as the story unfolds, the differences become clear, adding depth to the plot. The writing is elegant, and the world-building is immersive. Monta’s journey, along with his love story with Jakem, is beautifully written and adds emotional depth.
With its rich storytelling, suspenseful twists, and deep themes, Herai is perfect for sci-fi fans who enjoy complex and layered narratives. If you’re looking for something fresh and intriguing, this book is worth reading!
May 19, 2025
Herai
So I was under the wrong impression about this book. It is very much a political drama with a subplot of a romance. Normally that would be fine for me as I am not much of a romance girly. As this book was recommended to me mainly an lgbtq+ story I was quite surprised by how this plot progressed.
In this case however the set up for the story drove me nuts! This is VERY much a me thing as I wasn’t able to figure out what was happening until about 200 pages in but once I did my enjoyment of the plot increased.
Overall I found this novel enjoyable even if I wished we had more information on the title character of Herai. I am giving this a high 3 stars and would recommend this book to others who are interested in an interesting political thriller with a solid lgbtq+ romance subplot.
So I was under the wrong impression about this book. It is very much a political drama with a subplot of a romance. Normally that would be fine for me as I am not much of a romance girly. As this book was recommended to me mainly an lgbtq+ story I was quite surprised by how this plot progressed.
In this case however the set up for the story drove me nuts! This is VERY much a me thing as I wasn’t able to figure out what was happening until about 200 pages in but once I did my enjoyment of the plot increased.
Overall I found this novel enjoyable even if I wished we had more information on the title character of Herai. I am giving this a high 3 stars and would recommend this book to others who are interested in an interesting political thriller with a solid lgbtq+ romance subplot.
January 28, 2025
Herai is the first book in the Wheel of Eight sci-fi/fantasy series. There are three narratives - Without, Onlooking, and The Better Place. The book alternates between two realities, with an unknown observer. I found it kind of a mind-boggling concept, but very interesting, though it was difficult to grasp and make sense of at first. For this reason, I think it's important to follow the story carefully, or readers might become confused.
I found that the more I carried on reading, the more I was drawn into this world created by the author. I found this challenging to read in some ways, but I enjoyed it, as it was compelling and very clever, and also different from anything else I've ever read.
I found that the more I carried on reading, the more I was drawn into this world created by the author. I found this challenging to read in some ways, but I enjoyed it, as it was compelling and very clever, and also different from anything else I've ever read.
June 12, 2020
4.5 Stars. For starters, pay attention to *where* events are taking place or else become completely confused as I was by the parallel storylines. In both, there is a murder mystery that the town drunk sets out to solve. In both, the youngest son of the city’s leader is the focus of another murder plot. In both, a tribe lives freely out in the open as opposed to the cavern life of the plot’s focus. But one storyline is almost dreamlike and the other is a harsh existence. Both stories converge at the end. Which was real?
February 27, 2025
This dystopian sci fi novel is good in core ideas. But it fails to deliver.
The two realities. Are being watched.
In one herai is an outsider. In the other he is being attacked. He is stabbed by unnamed assassins and left to die. He is bleeding. He's in the better world.
In the other reality he is just a outsider.
Now the thing is what happened? Who's doing that? It's philosophical or thriller or sci fi or investigation all these are confusing..
But the narration is good. Hope other books in the series are not confusing.
The two realities. Are being watched.
In one herai is an outsider. In the other he is being attacked. He is stabbed by unnamed assassins and left to die. He is bleeding. He's in the better world.
In the other reality he is just a outsider.
Now the thing is what happened? Who's doing that? It's philosophical or thriller or sci fi or investigation all these are confusing..
But the narration is good. Hope other books in the series are not confusing.
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REVIEW
Herai" appears to be a compelling fantasy novel. It has a unique setting, interesting characters, and a good mix of action and mystery. The author's writing style is quite engaging.
Herai" is about a man named Herai who lives in an underground city. He's tasked with venturing into the dangerous outside world to try and save his city from a war. Along the way, he encounters various characters and faces challenges that test his courage and resolve. The story explores themes of survival, sacrifice, and the struggle between tradition and change.
REVIEW
Herai" appears to be a compelling fantasy novel. It has a unique setting, interesting characters, and a good mix of action and mystery. The author's writing style is quite engaging.
Herai" is about a man named Herai who lives in an underground city. He's tasked with venturing into the dangerous outside world to try and save his city from a war. Along the way, he encounters various characters and faces challenges that test his courage and resolve. The story explores themes of survival, sacrifice, and the struggle between tradition and change.
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