Redemption

by anondracomalfoy

Hermione works at St. Mungos, and the fourth floor has recently made a discovery and inadvertently retrieved her biggest regret-her lost and seemingly Obliviated husband, Draco Malfoy. Draco is forced to return to her, and strange things begin to occur.

Genres: Fan Fiction

305 pages, ebook

Published March 8, 2012

Reviews

[Ilona Haku · Rating 3 out of 5]

The rating of the story ranges from 2.5 to 3.2 depending on the part that I read. Things got much better around chapter 7/8 when Draco showed his real emotions, it also got much better towards the end.In conclusion, final rating 2.9* for me.

It wasnt bad but I expected something very different. For me the mystery behind Draco´s memory loss dragged for too long, I needed further details much sooner than the author did. Therefore the enjoyment from this story was on lower level especially during the beginning and there were parts which quite bored me or when I was thinking that I could appreciate them if only I had known more details. There were many parts when I felt that I was missing on this story, because I was still waiting for more details to be revealed.

This story wasnt very emotionally stimulating for me. It was quite raw, with naturalistic vibes, full of swearing. I was caught off guard how Draco behaved towards Hermione.
His outbursts were quite revolting. so when I read another mean cry such as
"What the fuck do you mean, what am I talking about?" for the third time in 1 segment, I was put off.
I dont know the vibes of this fanfic were cold, but on the other hand I enjoyed when Draco was affetionate and gentle. I really hated how mean they could in other times.

[Vera Margarida · Rating 3 out of 5]

Once again a book that had more potential for the end but didn't quite reach it.
This one I don't know what to say about, it reminded me a bit of manacled with the obliviation part I would have liked the parts when they remember the past to have a little bit of spice (them talking to each other about what they were seeing). I think there was a lot of suspense behind Hermione's motives to obliviate him so naturally I was expecting some greater motive and was given a bucket of disappointment.
Did not enjoy this as much as I was expecting, I was also going on a Dramione fanfic hiatus but tik tok recommended this one and it looked to good to resist.

[˗ˏˋNat´ˎ˗ · Rating 1 out of 5]

At first, I was intrigued by the mystery of what happened between the two of them but I feel like it dragged on for too long. I skipped several pages just to find out what happened. Not a fan of keeping secrets instead of saying the truth.

[Aimee Autumn · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5

[Steffie Asuncion · Rating 2 out of 5]

Interesting plot. However, due to the fact that the author dragged the reason why Hermione obliviated Draco made the story bland. I lost interest in the why.

[Paige Workman · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5⭐️
I enjoyed this short fanfic! Basically a dramoine novella so not much depth but a good plot with some passionate confessions.

[Yasmin Khaled · Rating 2 out of 5]

well it's kind of nice
i think there are some plot holes but it was kind of interesting at first and then i think it didn't turn out as i expected but nevertheless a nice read

[Alexzandra Pattinson · Rating 4 out of 5]

After an entire year, Hermione hears the one sentence she wished she never had to hear "Hermione we found your husband".
She knew this moment would come sooner or later and now here she is, staring right into those grey eyes she never stopped loving but knowing that nothing would be the same. He would never forgive her for what she did and she could never explain why she did it.

Draco on is pissed. Pissed at beeing back and pissed at his "wife" that he once was sure he loved.
Now the only thing he knows for sure is that she ruined his life and everything he build for himself when she obliviated him and left him wandering around Europe without even knowing his own name.

Now they're forced to live together for the remaining six months of the marriage contract they signed.

Can they overcome learn to forgive eachother and more importantly, can they manage to forgive themselves?

Other than it having my least favourite trope (the "I keep a unnecessary secret from you that only brings more trouble than if I told you the truth, for your own good")... I don't have anything negative to say about it.

It was very fast paced and the writing as well as the plot were great.
Both Draco and Hermione were really well written and they didn't stray too much from the original characters.