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Veiled Magic #2
Veiled Menace
From the author of Veiled Magic and the Baba Yaga novels, comes an exciting new paranormal romance...
Since Witches came out of the broom-closet in the early 21st century, they have worked alongside humans as police officers, healers, stock traders, and more. But they aren’t the only paranormal entities in our world...
Witch and police officer Donata Santori is no stranger to magical mayhem, but lately her life has been unexpectedly charmed. Her job as a Ghost Yanker now includes the occasional paranormal investigation, and she’s advancing her magical abilities with the help of an ancestor’s treasured spell book. And while both of her former love interests—reclusive half-Dragon art forger Peter Casaventi and disgraced Shapechanger Magnus Torvald—are nowhere to be found, she’s not averse to being wined and dined by wealthy businessman Anton Eastman.
But Eastman isn’t what he seems, and what he wants from Donata is far more than she’s willing to give. When a mysterious relic, the Pentacle Pentimento, resurfaces, along with Peter’s Dragon father and a shocking Santori family secret, Donata must fight to save herself, her friends, and just maybe the fate of the world from a magic as old as it is dangerous…
Since Witches came out of the broom-closet in the early 21st century, they have worked alongside humans as police officers, healers, stock traders, and more. But they aren’t the only paranormal entities in our world...
Witch and police officer Donata Santori is no stranger to magical mayhem, but lately her life has been unexpectedly charmed. Her job as a Ghost Yanker now includes the occasional paranormal investigation, and she’s advancing her magical abilities with the help of an ancestor’s treasured spell book. And while both of her former love interests—reclusive half-Dragon art forger Peter Casaventi and disgraced Shapechanger Magnus Torvald—are nowhere to be found, she’s not averse to being wined and dined by wealthy businessman Anton Eastman.
But Eastman isn’t what he seems, and what he wants from Donata is far more than she’s willing to give. When a mysterious relic, the Pentacle Pentimento, resurfaces, along with Peter’s Dragon father and a shocking Santori family secret, Donata must fight to save herself, her friends, and just maybe the fate of the world from a magic as old as it is dangerous…
285 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 18, 2017
About the author
Deborah Blake
86 books1,798 followersDeborah is the author of over a dozen non-fiction books on modern witchcraft and a tarot and oracle decks from Llewellyn. Her fiction includes the Baba Yaga series, The Broken Rider series, and the Veiled Magic series, and her cozy mysteries The Catskill Pet Rescue series (mostly from Berkley) as well as a few stand-alone novels.
Deborah lives in a 130 year old farmhouse in upstate NY with multiple cats. She believes in magic, laughter, chocolate, and wine. The order may change depending on the day.
Deborah lives in a 130 year old farmhouse in upstate NY with multiple cats. She believes in magic, laughter, chocolate, and wine. The order may change depending on the day.
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April 17, 2017
Veiled Menace
is a follow-up to Deborah Blake’s Veiled Magic where Donata discovered a rare Pentacle Pentimento painting that can reveal the identity of the lost sixth paranormal races. In this book, Donata finds out more about the sixth race and what her Santori bloodline’s role is in the disappearance.
While I liked the progress about the lost race – and learning how they disappeared, why they disappeared, and what the future might hold among the paranormal entities and humans overall – I was frustrated over Donata’s drama with the men in her life, either present or off screen, which took too much page time and distracted from the story (and Donata herself) and what I would like to think of as the main arc.
I like romance in urban fantasy, but to me, this felt more like the heroine paid more attention to the men – and I didn’t think any of them were worthy enough – rather than the problem looming over the sixth race as well as honing her magic talent. It was like Donata was being ruled by her heart rather than her head, which was too bad because I thought she could be very good in her job.
All of Donata’s pouting and whining on why Peter and Magnus were missing (and not contacting her) and later with Donata dismissing her friend’s concern over the new boyfriend, Anton, made me want to put her aside and knocked some sense into her head. It wasn’t what I wanted to read from the sequel; so while it was good, I wasn’t completely satisfied.
A Guest Review for The Blogger Girls
The ARC is provided by the publisher via Netgalley for an exchange of fair and honest review. No high rating is required for any ARC received.
While I liked the progress about the lost race – and learning how they disappeared, why they disappeared, and what the future might hold among the paranormal entities and humans overall – I was frustrated over Donata’s drama with the men in her life, either present or off screen, which took too much page time and distracted from the story (and Donata herself) and what I would like to think of as the main arc.
I like romance in urban fantasy, but to me, this felt more like the heroine paid more attention to the men – and I didn’t think any of them were worthy enough – rather than the problem looming over the sixth race as well as honing her magic talent. It was like Donata was being ruled by her heart rather than her head, which was too bad because I thought she could be very good in her job.
All of Donata’s pouting and whining on why Peter and Magnus were missing (and not contacting her) and later with Donata dismissing her friend’s concern over the new boyfriend, Anton, made me want to put her aside and knocked some sense into her head. It wasn’t what I wanted to read from the sequel; so while it was good, I wasn’t completely satisfied.
A Guest Review for The Blogger Girls
The ARC is provided by the publisher via Netgalley for an exchange of fair and honest review. No high rating is required for any ARC received.
May 17, 2017
Be careful what you wish for. Donata used to find her job with the police as a Witness Retrieval Specialist boring, but after saving her Chief’s granddaughter he now throws her the more “unusual” cases that seem to have Paranormal involvement. And the amount of cases seems to be increasing dramatically, putting all the five Paranormal races in danger of another inquisition. Donata needs to find who is stirring up unrest in the Paranormal community and whether this may be connected to the mysterious forgotten sixth Paranormal race.
The first book in the series was one of my favourites of the year…in 2015. I was beginning to doubt that I would ever read a second. But here it is and yet again it becomes one of my favourite books of the year. It has some action, some romance, some magic, a kobold house mate and a sassy best friend, all the kind of things that have me gripped to the page. And gripped I was.
As an urban fantasy, one of my favourites, this doesn’t actually add anything new to the genre. It has all the things you would expect, a kick ass, yet underestimated heroine, lots of magic and mystery and a few potential love interests. But, although none of these things alone are particularly unique, I really enjoyed the way they were thrown together. Even though the events in the book were predictable I enjoyed the journey. I especially didn’t mind because all the characters that Blake has created are likeable and I wanted to see what would happen with them next.
This isn’t a dark and gritty urban fantasy, but fairly light easy reading. I am a fan of both types and everything in between, but if you are in the mood for a book that offers you some action and some romance without dragging you in to something dark and twisted, this is something you should pick up and give a try. Now, I am waiting for the next book, hopefully I won’t have to wait another 2 years
April 4, 2017
A new status for the once largely ignored witch-cop, grisly murders, a cry for help, a former lover, a new love interest, and that cursed painting all turn up in a new adventure for Donata Santori in the Veiled Magic Series.
Veiled Menace is the second book following the events of Veiled Magic so needs to be read in order for certain ongoing series plot points and characters to make sense.
About six months after the events of Veiled Magic, Donata is trying to find her new normal. She hasn't heard from either Magnus or Peter so had moved on with Anton Eastman. Oh boy, this gal sure can pick them was my first thought. And that crazy cursed painting shows up again and trouble follows. I was all set to see if the clues dropped in the last book about bigger problems coming at everybody would put us at apocalyptic excitement.
As things progressed, I realized that this second book was just not nearly as engaging as book one. Oh, yes, it continued with those threads that left me eager for more, but they were subdued and upstaged by Donata's personal issues, her daily activities, and her need to scratch her itch. The first book was edgy and suspenseful throughout while this one's forward progress offered little in the way of tension even when new things like murder and mounting trouble brought by that hidden race were introduced. Donata's life was more drama-ed up than exciting for me.
I'm going to admit that the multiple love interests angle was not my cuppa. I knew it would be there going in because both Peter and Magnus were vying for her attention in book one. However, now we have Magnus off page, and now Anton in the picture with Peter. Peter and Donata take turns losing their tempers and storming off between long bouts of sex. No emotional connections made and yeah, I could care less about her love life at this point.
The most exciting and intriguing parts were Donata's spell practice sessions with her great aunt and that Santori family dinner that was full of tension and crackle. The three Santori sisters get together and the witch claws come out. Donata is still coming into her own and figuring out she's not exactly the ugly duckling anymore, but she struggles to believe she's a swan at the same time.
The inclusion of the lost sixth race was pretty cool though I wish there was more done with that.
There was a quick big action scene at the end that was pretty great and oh my, the last sentence dangling a lot of promise with a surprise on Donata's doorstep.
I was glad to get some answers and some forward progress, but was also a bit disappointed with the lack of edge and tension that was peppered throughout book one. I am going to keep going to see if things go better for me with book three. I do really hope Donata figures out her love life and also grows a bit of maturity with her temper so she'll pause, listen, and think when someone's trying to tell her something. It's hard to respect her as a cop and mature witch when she leads with her temper and emotions instead of her brains, but I can see she is growing and recognizing this, too.
This series offers a strong paranormal world and I love the carefully crafted witch culture in particular. I enjoy that Donata is a witch-cop and works the murder cases for a human boss. While this one wasn't a favorite, I love the author's work and can easily recommend this Urban Fantasy series particularly if you love witches and spell-casting with a paranormal adventure.
My thanks to Penguin Group in exchange for an honest review.
Veiled Menace is the second book following the events of Veiled Magic so needs to be read in order for certain ongoing series plot points and characters to make sense.
About six months after the events of Veiled Magic, Donata is trying to find her new normal. She hasn't heard from either Magnus or Peter so had moved on with Anton Eastman. Oh boy, this gal sure can pick them was my first thought. And that crazy cursed painting shows up again and trouble follows. I was all set to see if the clues dropped in the last book about bigger problems coming at everybody would put us at apocalyptic excitement.
As things progressed, I realized that this second book was just not nearly as engaging as book one. Oh, yes, it continued with those threads that left me eager for more, but they were subdued and upstaged by Donata's personal issues, her daily activities, and her need to scratch her itch. The first book was edgy and suspenseful throughout while this one's forward progress offered little in the way of tension even when new things like murder and mounting trouble brought by that hidden race were introduced. Donata's life was more drama-ed up than exciting for me.
I'm going to admit that the multiple love interests angle was not my cuppa. I knew it would be there going in because both Peter and Magnus were vying for her attention in book one. However, now we have Magnus off page, and now Anton in the picture with Peter. Peter and Donata take turns losing their tempers and storming off between long bouts of sex. No emotional connections made and yeah, I could care less about her love life at this point.
The most exciting and intriguing parts were Donata's spell practice sessions with her great aunt and that Santori family dinner that was full of tension and crackle. The three Santori sisters get together and the witch claws come out. Donata is still coming into her own and figuring out she's not exactly the ugly duckling anymore, but she struggles to believe she's a swan at the same time.
The inclusion of the lost sixth race was pretty cool though I wish there was more done with that.
There was a quick big action scene at the end that was pretty great and oh my, the last sentence dangling a lot of promise with a surprise on Donata's doorstep.
I was glad to get some answers and some forward progress, but was also a bit disappointed with the lack of edge and tension that was peppered throughout book one. I am going to keep going to see if things go better for me with book three. I do really hope Donata figures out her love life and also grows a bit of maturity with her temper so she'll pause, listen, and think when someone's trying to tell her something. It's hard to respect her as a cop and mature witch when she leads with her temper and emotions instead of her brains, but I can see she is growing and recognizing this, too.
This series offers a strong paranormal world and I love the carefully crafted witch culture in particular. I enjoy that Donata is a witch-cop and works the murder cases for a human boss. While this one wasn't a favorite, I love the author's work and can easily recommend this Urban Fantasy series particularly if you love witches and spell-casting with a paranormal adventure.
My thanks to Penguin Group in exchange for an honest review.
May 23, 2017
Donata is busy assisting the Cheif on cases and missing both Peter and Magnus. Neither has bothered to even drop her a postcard and she is both concerned and hurt. She has begun dating wealthy businessman Anton Eastman, and while being wined and dined is fun, she isn't feeling a connection and misses Peter. Meanwhile, there has been an increase in paranormal crimes against humans. This shocks her because most aren't willing to break the agreement with the Church. To do so would mean death by the Council. To complicate matters, she isn't sleeping well, and Ricky is about to tell her why. Oh and that painting that burned...it's still around. Yep. Things are about to get crazy for Donata.
I was excited to return to this world, and Blake rewarded us with progression in the overall arc and answers to questions. The world is well developed, and the introduction of Anton proved an interesting one. When the painting and dragons resurface Blake gives us a compelling case, but it didn't have the edge I loved from the first book. Middle book syndrome? Mayhaps.
Donata spends time with her great aunt practicing spells. This was perhaps my favorite part of VEILED MENACE. We learn about their family history, the Pentacle Pentimento and Donata herself. She wants to strength her skills as her job on the police department increases. The magic is familiar, but Blake adds her own uniqueness to it. We also spend time with the family and surprise, surprise they are impressed by the black sheep of the family.
The romantic threads are perhaps my least favorite. While it's not truly a love triangle or square, it's messy, and I prefer no romance or one suitor. While Magnus isn't present, we have Anton and Peter. One is dismissed rather quickly, but the resulting tumble in the sheets lacked chemistry or an emotional connection leaving me unsatisfied.
Copy provided by the publisher, This review was originally posted at Caffeinated Book Reviewer
I was excited to return to this world, and Blake rewarded us with progression in the overall arc and answers to questions. The world is well developed, and the introduction of Anton proved an interesting one. When the painting and dragons resurface Blake gives us a compelling case, but it didn't have the edge I loved from the first book. Middle book syndrome? Mayhaps.
Donata spends time with her great aunt practicing spells. This was perhaps my favorite part of VEILED MENACE. We learn about their family history, the Pentacle Pentimento and Donata herself. She wants to strength her skills as her job on the police department increases. The magic is familiar, but Blake adds her own uniqueness to it. We also spend time with the family and surprise, surprise they are impressed by the black sheep of the family.
The romantic threads are perhaps my least favorite. While it's not truly a love triangle or square, it's messy, and I prefer no romance or one suitor. While Magnus isn't present, we have Anton and Peter. One is dismissed rather quickly, but the resulting tumble in the sheets lacked chemistry or an emotional connection leaving me unsatisfied.
Copy provided by the publisher, This review was originally posted at Caffeinated Book Reviewer
September 6, 2017
Be careful what you wish for. Donata used to find her job with the police as a Witness Retrieval Specialist boring, but after saving her Chief’s granddaughter he now throws her the more “unusual” cases that seem to have Paranormal involvement. And the amount of cases seems to be increasing dramatically, putting all the five Paranormal races in danger of another inquisition. Donata needs to find who is stirring up unrest in the Paranormal community and whether this may be connected to the mysterious forgotten sixth Paranormal race.The first book in the series was one of my favourites of the year…in 2015. I was beginning to doubt that I would ever read a second. But here it is and yet again it becomes one of my favourite books of the year. It has some action, some romance, some magic, a kobold house mate and a sassy best friend, all the kind of things that have me gripped to the page. And gripped I was.
As an urban fantasy, one of my favourites, this doesn’t actually add anything new to the genre. It has all the things you would expect, a kick ass, yet underestimated heroine, lots of magic and mystery and a few potential love interests. But, although none of these things alone are particularly unique, I really enjoyed the way they were thrown together. Even though the events in the book were predictable I enjoyed the journey. I especially didn’t mind because all the characters that Blake has created are likeable and I wanted to see what would happen with them next.
This isn’t a dark and gritty urban fantasy, but fairly light easy reading. I am a fan of both types and everything in between, but if you are in the mood for a book that offers you some action and some romance without dragging you in to something dark and twisted, this is something you should pick up and give a try. Now, I am waiting for the next book, hopefully I won’t have to wait another 2 years.
*ARC provided by publisher
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February 15, 2019
Veiled Magic: 2
It's been six months since the events of the last book and Donata has heard nothing from Peter or Magnus, and being uncharacteristically petulant, starts dating another man and continues to date him, even when she feels no chemistry. I had high hopes for this series. The first book ended with a huge gaping plothole but had a lot of promise. This one just falls flat. Smart, level-headed, competent Donata has turned into a needy, selfish idiot who keeps making bad decisions so that the author can make plot happen. Donata hemorrhages confidential information worse than a leaky faucet. She's unable to keep secrets, which is not realistic given her situation. I had to put the book down a few times and had no desire to pick it up again other than to finish the darn thing. Will not be continuing this series.
It's been six months since the events of the last book and Donata has heard nothing from Peter or Magnus, and being uncharacteristically petulant, starts dating another man and continues to date him, even when she feels no chemistry. I had high hopes for this series. The first book ended with a huge gaping plothole but had a lot of promise. This one just falls flat. Smart, level-headed, competent Donata has turned into a needy, selfish idiot who keeps making bad decisions so that the author can make plot happen. Donata hemorrhages confidential information worse than a leaky faucet. She's unable to keep secrets, which is not realistic given her situation. I had to put the book down a few times and had no desire to pick it up again other than to finish the darn thing. Will not be continuing this series.
February 19, 2021
Donata, the black sheep of her powerful witch family because of her profession just may get some respect as she is on the forefront of whatever is coming. Peter Casaventi, the half-dragon art forger, displays his less attractive dragon pride and ego in this book. Peter's father, a dragon, wants Peter with a nice dragon girl - not a witch. That's not what gets him murdered though. Anton Eastman, who is dating Donata acts superior and self-centered, but he has worse qualities that come to light. We get to see more of the police chief and the Medical Examiner in this outing, which I enjoyed. Donata's mother and two sisters are elitist and judgmental, which I keep wondering when Donata-the-cop will have enough of their treatment. Ricky, the Kobold Earth Spirit with a temper is her loyal friend and a star in his own right.
I still don't know what city this takes place in, but it is seaside as the mansion Peter's father owns overlooks the beach and ocean. That was used particularly well with weather patterns taking drastic changes.
Ms. Blake keeps the pacing just right and the reader engaged, the plot in parts seems easy but then a little twist comes along putting everything in a new light. Donata's face off with the villain is deliciously suspenseful and the last paragraph leaves you anxious for the next book.
I like where Ms. Blake is going with this series, playing a longer game around a situation. That said, each can be read independently so far. I can easily see team Peter and team Magnus forming to cheer for the favorite guy to win Donata's heart. I must say that it isn't the typical love triangle, rather the guys come in and out of her life and each has his issues and baggage.
Rating: Excellent - Loved it, it had a good grip on me! Buy it now and put this author on your watch list
I still don't know what city this takes place in, but it is seaside as the mansion Peter's father owns overlooks the beach and ocean. That was used particularly well with weather patterns taking drastic changes.
Ms. Blake keeps the pacing just right and the reader engaged, the plot in parts seems easy but then a little twist comes along putting everything in a new light. Donata's face off with the villain is deliciously suspenseful and the last paragraph leaves you anxious for the next book.
I like where Ms. Blake is going with this series, playing a longer game around a situation. That said, each can be read independently so far. I can easily see team Peter and team Magnus forming to cheer for the favorite guy to win Donata's heart. I must say that it isn't the typical love triangle, rather the guys come in and out of her life and each has his issues and baggage.
Rating: Excellent - Loved it, it had a good grip on me! Buy it now and put this author on your watch list
January 4, 2023
This was good, but I didn't like this second book in the series *quite* as much as I did the first one.
First, be warned that this ends on a cliff-hanger. Most of the book's plot gets resolved but then we're left hanging with an obvious next book set-up. I understand why authors do this, but it's not my favourite thing. Meh.
Second, I found Donata a bit less . . . I don't quite know. Less strong? Less determined? Less, something. She just didn't have quite the ass-kicking chutzpa she had in the first book and I missed that. There was just - for me - too much hand-wringing and navel-gazing about the choices she knew she needed to make in this book. It got on my nerves by the end.
The story was very exciting and the world-building here is really engaging. I will probably read the next book, to find out what happens next, because I like Donata and the supporting characters and the world is really interesting to me, and because my library gets the books so I can read them for free. But truthfully, I'm hoping Donata gets over her angst for the next book and goes back to being a strong and capable woman who trusts herself and her judgement about what to do in the crazy world she lives in.
First, be warned that this ends on a cliff-hanger. Most of the book's plot gets resolved but then we're left hanging with an obvious next book set-up. I understand why authors do this, but it's not my favourite thing. Meh.
Second, I found Donata a bit less . . . I don't quite know. Less strong? Less determined? Less, something. She just didn't have quite the ass-kicking chutzpa she had in the first book and I missed that. There was just - for me - too much hand-wringing and navel-gazing about the choices she knew she needed to make in this book. It got on my nerves by the end.
The story was very exciting and the world-building here is really engaging. I will probably read the next book, to find out what happens next, because I like Donata and the supporting characters and the world is really interesting to me, and because my library gets the books so I can read them for free. But truthfully, I'm hoping Donata gets over her angst for the next book and goes back to being a strong and capable woman who trusts herself and her judgement about what to do in the crazy world she lives in.
April 20, 2017
Well-written
If you like Charlaine Harris and Kim Harrison, you'll also really like Deborah Blake. There is with and action, but also a real understanding of how a paranormal person thinks and what one values. I read it quickly because I could identify with the main character.
If you like Charlaine Harris and Kim Harrison, you'll also really like Deborah Blake. There is with and action, but also a real understanding of how a paranormal person thinks and what one values. I read it quickly because I could identify with the main character.
April 20, 2017
Great story
Excitement, danger, and romance. Finding someone you thought you lost. Finding out a truth you were searching for. Having a true friend to see you through a lot.
Excitement, danger, and romance. Finding someone you thought you lost. Finding out a truth you were searching for. Having a true friend to see you through a lot.
June 21, 2023
Another interesting installment but damn this girl has bad luck in life and definitely with men. Kinda hoping she gets a happy ending in the next book.
May 22, 2017
I have been dying to get back to urban fantasy for a while now, it's what got me back into reading after college, so it has a big piece of my heart. I wanted a book that had to do with witches, because I don't have enough books with witches in them. I picked up this book thinking it was the first book in the series (its not) and when I realized it wasn't I was slightly worried I would feel like I missed out, but the author did a great job of recapping in a way that wasn't overwhelming and I never felt like I was lost of confused, so if you happen upon this book without reading the first you will still be good to go.
Okay first off, I liked this book, I feel like over the past couple of years Urban Fantasy is kind of dying out, or being seriously reduced, so I was so happy to find a book recently released that was of pretty good quality. I liked the law enforcement angle, especially since in this world the supernatural races seem to really kind of stick to their own, this way Donata has a reason to interact with all kinds and it much more fun story. Donata by herself though is pretty interesting, she is kind of low-key, especially compared to the people in her family. She may come from well of snobby people, but she is totally cool drinking a dive bar, living in an apartment with second hand furniture, and working a job that she loves for not a lot of money. She's clearly a strong witch, but perhaps is missing some necessary confidence, I think over the course of the series we are really going to see her powers get stronger, and her get stronger.
So a lot of this book has some elements of mystery in them, trying to unlock the secrets of a painting and discover who the sixth race is. But the mystery is also wrapped up in the everyday mundane things, family dinners, going to work, wondering where the guy you like has disappeared to and why he never called, and figuring out why the guy you are kind of seeing is so boring and bland. There's a lot I don't want to give away about the book, so I'm gonna do my best not to. Anton, the bland guy, realy came off as super bland, and worse there is no kind of chemistry between Donata and him. I mean I kept wanting to shake her and tell her to find a guy who actually likes her fire. Of course everyone around her hates the guy, so maybe she should listen to those people. Of course the guy who doesn't call finally shows up, its filed with misunderstandings and tragedy, but these two have more chemistry then they know what to do with. I'm not sure if Peter the half-dragon is the guy for her, yeah they sure know how to heat things up, and they work well together, but I'm not sure their personalities will sustain something more meaningful, plus I keep hearing about this ex of Donata's and I really want to know how those two are together before I make any decisions about who I'm pulling for.
Overall, this was a really fun ride, and the world was just complex enough to be want to know more, but not so much that it was overwhelming. I loved some of the cop procedural elements, and how awesome Donata's boss is. There is a great cast of secondary characters that really add a lot to the book and to Donata's life overall. After reading this book I really want to go back and read the first book in this series, and then rather impatiently wait for book three to come out.
May 14, 2017
ARC provided by netgally for an honest review
While I haven't read book one in this series and this is my first book by this author I found this one was engaging and the paranormal elements were really intriguing. Book 1's events were recapped so I wasn't confused. Every new bit of information about the paranormal kept me wanting to learn more.
And then i stumble on this: a character being described as having "Exotic slanted eyes..." and the longest of siiiighs. NOPE NO. plz authors for the love of everything do not describe people or any of their body parts as exotic. it's very othering. And is something done to POC. It's not a compliment. and this felt so unnecessary to me. There are ways to describe eyes without being offensive, please employ them. i beg of you.
Now another thing: Donata, the MC, frustrated me so damn much!
Especially when it came to dealing with Anton.
Donata believes she owes hearing her boyfriend out cuz they’d been dating some months even though he drugged her wine with a potent herb!! WTF woman! Why would she feel like she owes him anything. He has been repeatedly drugging her wine to lower her defenses so he can manipulate her dreams. Then he tells her his kind needs her to save them by having their children. How is she still allowing this guy to be in her apt to hear him out? You are a cop what are you thinking!!! SMH
And she kept trying to explain away his despicable behaviour. Which was maddening to me. Anton could have just explained it all to her. Not slip stuff into her drink.
So of course when she finallyyyy learns Anton’s been lying—what a shocker—I just had to shake my head.
Also why TF would she even entertain the idea of birthing a child for the Major Anemoi. because you ffeel guilty about them dying out and you're apparently their only hope??? You just got together with Peter, even if he was being an annoying idiot at the moment, how can she really think she’d just tell him oh BTW I’m thinking of having a kid with this here Anemoi.
Listen Peter acted a fool. when Donata figured out the symbols on Anton’s neck by seeing Peter’s bare neck which triggered Donata to recall the symbols and Peter basically flips out thinking Donata had sex with Anton. Which Peter my dude you vanished from her life, ya’ll weren’t even together. He’s insinuating all sorts of things when he doesn’t even have the right to be acting up like this. I'll admit Peter was a douce in this situation. BUT even I’d side with Peter on this, her even considering this being downright nonsense.
Have I mentioned that Donata frustrated me right through?
One of the main reasons i like D's bestie, Doc, a lot though? because she tried to talk some sense into Donata! lol
I think what really kept me hooked was the paranormal elements, and well the plot too with the unexpected twists, more so than the characters themselves since as I said Donata just annoyed me right through, but I kept wanting to read on. Even as pissed off as she made me. and that ending??? Made me want to know what happens next. Darn it!
This book had some good pacing I have to say. I was never bored, not once (just supremely side eyeing Donata the entire time and that use of "exotic" grrr).
While I haven't read book one in this series and this is my first book by this author I found this one was engaging and the paranormal elements were really intriguing. Book 1's events were recapped so I wasn't confused. Every new bit of information about the paranormal kept me wanting to learn more.
And then i stumble on this: a character being described as having "Exotic slanted eyes..." and the longest of siiiighs. NOPE NO. plz authors for the love of everything do not describe people or any of their body parts as exotic. it's very othering. And is something done to POC. It's not a compliment. and this felt so unnecessary to me. There are ways to describe eyes without being offensive, please employ them. i beg of you.
Now another thing: Donata, the MC, frustrated me so damn much!
Especially when it came to dealing with Anton.
Donata believes she owes hearing her boyfriend out cuz they’d been dating some months even though he drugged her wine with a potent herb!! WTF woman! Why would she feel like she owes him anything. He has been repeatedly drugging her wine to lower her defenses so he can manipulate her dreams. Then he tells her his kind needs her to save them by having their children. How is she still allowing this guy to be in her apt to hear him out? You are a cop what are you thinking!!! SMH
And she kept trying to explain away his despicable behaviour. Which was maddening to me. Anton could have just explained it all to her. Not slip stuff into her drink.
So of course when she finallyyyy learns Anton’s been lying—what a shocker—I just had to shake my head.
Also why TF would she even entertain the idea of birthing a child for the Major Anemoi. because you ffeel guilty about them dying out and you're apparently their only hope??? You just got together with Peter, even if he was being an annoying idiot at the moment, how can she really think she’d just tell him oh BTW I’m thinking of having a kid with this here Anemoi.
Listen Peter acted a fool. when Donata figured out the symbols on Anton’s neck by seeing Peter’s bare neck which triggered Donata to recall the symbols and Peter basically flips out thinking Donata had sex with Anton. Which Peter my dude you vanished from her life, ya’ll weren’t even together. He’s insinuating all sorts of things when he doesn’t even have the right to be acting up like this. I'll admit Peter was a douce in this situation. BUT even I’d side with Peter on this, her even considering this being downright nonsense.
Have I mentioned that Donata frustrated me right through?
One of the main reasons i like D's bestie, Doc, a lot though? because she tried to talk some sense into Donata! lol
I think what really kept me hooked was the paranormal elements, and well the plot too with the unexpected twists, more so than the characters themselves since as I said Donata just annoyed me right through, but I kept wanting to read on. Even as pissed off as she made me. and that ending??? Made me want to know what happens next. Darn it!
This book had some good pacing I have to say. I was never bored, not once (just supremely side eyeing Donata the entire time and that use of "exotic" grrr).
September 7, 2019
Well crap. I was hoping the series would improve with book two. Instead, the whole thing fell apart. The main problem is...the main character. Donata is a self-centered, man-hungry idiot. She is the world's WORST cop. With a serious case of diarrhea of the mouth, she can't help but spill everything to everyone. Letting a human know anything about paranormals would endanger the human's life? No problem! Donata just tells every damn little detail to her boss AND her friend the medical examiner. Not supposed to talk about the evil painting that people have been killed over? No prob! Just blather on about it everywhere she goes in front of anyone with no thought at all! And Anton. UGH. The "man" drugs her and dream rapes her with the intention of manipulating her into having his child (which could kill her), but she's totally willing to forgive and forget and maybe even have his kids because it's "the right thing to do". No! No, it is NOT! Does she listen to Ricky who tries to tell her the guy is bad news? Of course not! MORON! She believes the ancient monster who has shown her he can't be trusted over her FRIEND! Then there's the word "complicated". It appeared in the first half of this book approximately 74 million times. What really killed this book for me was the last 15% or so. The entire ending sucked so bad I was in awe of it. She suddenly realizes that she's told the BAD GUY that Peter has the painting (and that he's her lover) and rushes off to save him...with a freaking letter opener. OK...Her "research" into Jewish golems (why? Aren't the major Anemoi "gods" who predate the golems? or did the golem part come about after the compact? Still...why Jewish golems with hebrew characters?) says that giving the monster a little poke/scratch on one of the marks on his neck will kill him. How convenient. Then she goes all mopey and whiny because she did such a horrible thing killing the ancient murderous monster who wanted to make her his brood mare. She yells at her supposed friend for being nice and is just an all around b!&ch and then is sad when the pretty dragon man gets mad. UGH. Never occurs to the moron that the church and the alliance wanted everyone to forget the major Anemoi for a REASON. Oh no! The great cop Donata knows better. Wow is that character stupid.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 4, 2017
I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
I adored Veiled Magic, the first in this series and was quite excited to get my hands on Veiled Menace. While book two didn’t quite live up to the expectations set by the first in the series, it ultimately delivered a solid urban fantasy with great momentum.
Donata Santori is a witch on police payroll. Dead men tell no tales, except to Donata who has the ability to talk to the departed. Through these spiritual visits, Donata is able to gather evidence for the good guys. She likes her work and is slowly gaining the respect and notice of her colleagues. And while witches are ‘out of the broom closet’ other paranormal races prefer to be hidden. As such, Donata must do double duty protecting the public, but also the best interests of the paranormal community. Recently, Donata finds, her dual role is becoming increasingly difficult to manage. Crimes are being uncharacteristically committed by paranormals, raising suspicion of law enforcement. Donata must race against the clock to uncover the uprising all the while navigating her particularly complicated personal life.
I like a strong female mains and Dontata is no exception. She’s a talented, self-assured, witch who enjoys the occasional stiff drink. As a bit of a family black sheep, Donata is use to standing alone and is quite comfortable in her role as an independent woman. Ricky the Kobold and Cassandra Havens, the buxom coroner, are back for book two and serve as a nice compliment to Donata’s character.
In the end, while I enjoyed this read, I wasn’t quite as hooked on this second installment. The plot was fairly predictable and I wasn’t really shocked by the story’s revelations. But I like the cast of characters and the direction of Donata’s story, particularly her romantic entanglements. Nothing is too neatly woven together at the end of book two and I’m definitely anticipating the third in the series.
Reviewed for ismellsheep.com
I adored Veiled Magic, the first in this series and was quite excited to get my hands on Veiled Menace. While book two didn’t quite live up to the expectations set by the first in the series, it ultimately delivered a solid urban fantasy with great momentum.
Donata Santori is a witch on police payroll. Dead men tell no tales, except to Donata who has the ability to talk to the departed. Through these spiritual visits, Donata is able to gather evidence for the good guys. She likes her work and is slowly gaining the respect and notice of her colleagues. And while witches are ‘out of the broom closet’ other paranormal races prefer to be hidden. As such, Donata must do double duty protecting the public, but also the best interests of the paranormal community. Recently, Donata finds, her dual role is becoming increasingly difficult to manage. Crimes are being uncharacteristically committed by paranormals, raising suspicion of law enforcement. Donata must race against the clock to uncover the uprising all the while navigating her particularly complicated personal life.
I like a strong female mains and Dontata is no exception. She’s a talented, self-assured, witch who enjoys the occasional stiff drink. As a bit of a family black sheep, Donata is use to standing alone and is quite comfortable in her role as an independent woman. Ricky the Kobold and Cassandra Havens, the buxom coroner, are back for book two and serve as a nice compliment to Donata’s character.
In the end, while I enjoyed this read, I wasn’t quite as hooked on this second installment. The plot was fairly predictable and I wasn’t really shocked by the story’s revelations. But I like the cast of characters and the direction of Donata’s story, particularly her romantic entanglements. Nothing is too neatly woven together at the end of book two and I’m definitely anticipating the third in the series.
Reviewed for ismellsheep.com
June 18, 2018
I didn’t enjoy this as thoroughly as the first book in Veiled Magic. I think because the relationships were a little off, and her best friend Doc just appeared… there were just a few holes that made the continuity from Veiled Magic a little clunkier than I’m used to from Blake. That’s not to say that I didn’t still thoroughly enjoy this story, but I did take a lot longer to read this than I did the first novel.
Although Veiled Magic features a love triangle, Veiled Menace focuses solely on Donata’s relationship with Pete. Again, the continuity of this was a little disjointed. They had the off again, on again drama going on. Which was a fun driver, but when they were off, Pete wasn’t even mentioned. For the amount of passion in their on moments, it was weird to have such a lack in their off moments.
I liked that we finally discovered who the sixth race was in this and how they fit into the scheme of things. I had formed a number of opinions as to who and what this race could be throughout both Veiled Magic and Veiled Menace, but it still completely swept me away. Donata’s connection to this further surprised me, and I can’t wait to see how all of this unfolds in Veiled Enchantment. That, and how the relationship with Pete is going to evolve (if it does).
Although Veiled Magic features a love triangle, Veiled Menace focuses solely on Donata’s relationship with Pete. Again, the continuity of this was a little disjointed. They had the off again, on again drama going on. Which was a fun driver, but when they were off, Pete wasn’t even mentioned. For the amount of passion in their on moments, it was weird to have such a lack in their off moments.
I liked that we finally discovered who the sixth race was in this and how they fit into the scheme of things. I had formed a number of opinions as to who and what this race could be throughout both Veiled Magic and Veiled Menace, but it still completely swept me away. Donata’s connection to this further surprised me, and I can’t wait to see how all of this unfolds in Veiled Enchantment. That, and how the relationship with Pete is going to evolve (if it does).
December 14, 2024
I don't understand why none of my local libraries carry this series. It seems once an author starts self-publishing, she is off the radar in library acquisitions.
There are some unanswered questions about the sixth race, but overall, this is just as fast-paced as the first title. All of our favorite characters are back, even if only for a brief appearance. A great addition to the series, only one more yet to read. And could it be that Donata is beginning to feel her body clock start ticking?
There are some unanswered questions about the sixth race, but overall, this is just as fast-paced as the first title. All of our favorite characters are back, even if only for a brief appearance. A great addition to the series, only one more yet to read. And could it be that Donata is beginning to feel her body clock start ticking?
September 10, 2019
Almost gave this one 2 stars. She has a well paced story with a good mix of action and personal life, but the characters are a bit to cardboard. Far worse is the constant reference to pepper stuffed olives and sea creatures. Ok, I know it's not pimientos and anemones, but her abuse to the real words, it often seems two to three times a page, annoys as much as verbal pauses (ummmh, uh…) in speeches annoy. Plus the plot seemed a bit trite.
August 22, 2018
Second in the Veiled Magic series, this takes pretty much where the first one ended. Peter and Magnus are missing and Donata is working on becoming a more important part of the police force. People are starting to worry about witches causing weather problems, and Donata needs to solve that problem before the Grand Inquisition can start again.
I've already started number three in the series.
I've already started number three in the series.
September 6, 2017
3.5 stars- a fun bit of urban fantasy fluff. Pleasant, enjoyable, but no great classic of literature. Just a bit of escapist junk that doesn't try to be more than it is.
February 10, 2018
Solid installment in the series.
August 23, 2018
Fun read
I chose the 5 star rating because it was an entertaining and fun read. This was the 1st book I have read by this author.
I chose the 5 star rating because it was an entertaining and fun read. This was the 1st book I have read by this author.
August 3, 2021
Really enjoying this series. This one may even be just a little bit better than the last. Really interesting story arc between the books. I definitely recommend reading them in order.
July 28, 2022
Ouch
So much stuff happening! Yikes Donata. Lots of things. I liked Doc. And her Chief is trumps. Poor Peter. And wow what a ride.
So much stuff happening! Yikes Donata. Lots of things. I liked Doc. And her Chief is trumps. Poor Peter. And wow what a ride.
May 10, 2017
Review originally posted on A Book Obsession
VEILED MENACE was an enjoyable followup to the first book in the series. I admit I had a little bit of a struggle at first to remember what happened in the previous book, but the author did a good job at easing readers back into this world. I really enjoy how rich the entire world is and how the author masterfully crafts her reveals with all the twists and turns in-between. The characters, Donata in particular, are utterly fabulous as well.
I have to admit that the romance in this series is one place where things just aren't quite up to par. At least not in comparison to Deborah's Baba Yaga series. There's just something about the romance arcs in this one that aren't working for me. First off there's two potential love interests, which in itself isn't the problem as I don't mind a love triangle when it's handled well. It's that there's too much back and forth of will they or won't they. Too many misconceptions and misunderstandings. And then when the tide seemed to fully turn to one of the men, immediately after a ridiculous fight happens and things are back to will they won't they status. I guess it was just too much of a tennis match for this romance lover's heart.
All in all this was an enjoyable installment in a series that I hope to see plenty more books from. I feel like we've only scratched the surface, and I want to see more.
VEILED MENACE was an enjoyable followup to the first book in the series. I admit I had a little bit of a struggle at first to remember what happened in the previous book, but the author did a good job at easing readers back into this world. I really enjoy how rich the entire world is and how the author masterfully crafts her reveals with all the twists and turns in-between. The characters, Donata in particular, are utterly fabulous as well.
I have to admit that the romance in this series is one place where things just aren't quite up to par. At least not in comparison to Deborah's Baba Yaga series. There's just something about the romance arcs in this one that aren't working for me. First off there's two potential love interests, which in itself isn't the problem as I don't mind a love triangle when it's handled well. It's that there's too much back and forth of will they or won't they. Too many misconceptions and misunderstandings. And then when the tide seemed to fully turn to one of the men, immediately after a ridiculous fight happens and things are back to will they won't they status. I guess it was just too much of a tennis match for this romance lover's heart.
All in all this was an enjoyable installment in a series that I hope to see plenty more books from. I feel like we've only scratched the surface, and I want to see more.
April 5, 2017
3.5 stars
Review coming soon
Review coming soon
April 18, 2017
I didn't feel like VEILED MENACE was as strong as VEILED MAGIC, but there was still some good and I had no trouble reading until the end.
I was happy with the answers that were revealed in VEILED MENACE, but the storyline wasn't as action packed and exciting as book one. One of my favorite parts of VEILED MENACE had to do with what happened between Donata and her family. There was some breakthrough with how they treat her in regards to her job and I think it brought them a bit closer. One of her brother in laws even came to her for help with a problem. Now having written that, I wish I would have been more excited about the conflict of the book instead of that. VEILED MENACE would have been better with some more suspense and tension thrown in.
Let's talk about the romance. This series is urban fantasy, so romance isn't a must, but there was a lot of stuff going on in book one that I expected more out of the romance for VEILED MENACE. I was very disappointed in both Peter and Magnus in VEILED MENACE. One wasn't even present and the other was just a jerk at every turn it seemed. Then there was Anton. Not everything is what it seems with him and he rubbed me—and others—wrong from the get-go. The romance—or lack of— in VEILED MENACE was all around disappointing.
The world of the Veiled Magic series still interests me and I am keeping my fingers crossed that things will pick up in book three.
* This book was provided free of charge from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
I was happy with the answers that were revealed in VEILED MENACE, but the storyline wasn't as action packed and exciting as book one. One of my favorite parts of VEILED MENACE had to do with what happened between Donata and her family. There was some breakthrough with how they treat her in regards to her job and I think it brought them a bit closer. One of her brother in laws even came to her for help with a problem. Now having written that, I wish I would have been more excited about the conflict of the book instead of that. VEILED MENACE would have been better with some more suspense and tension thrown in.
Let's talk about the romance. This series is urban fantasy, so romance isn't a must, but there was a lot of stuff going on in book one that I expected more out of the romance for VEILED MENACE. I was very disappointed in both Peter and Magnus in VEILED MENACE. One wasn't even present and the other was just a jerk at every turn it seemed. Then there was Anton. Not everything is what it seems with him and he rubbed me—and others—wrong from the get-go. The romance—or lack of— in VEILED MENACE was all around disappointing.
The world of the Veiled Magic series still interests me and I am keeping my fingers crossed that things will pick up in book three.
* This book was provided free of charge from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
July 2, 2017
Extra 1/2 star
April 19, 2017
Veiled Menace by Deborah Blake is the second book in her Veiled Magic series. Veiled Menace picks up a few months after Veiled Magic ended. Donata Santori , our heroine, is a witch & police officer, who has been elevated from working in the basement talking to the dead, to her own desk upstairs and helping the Captain on cases involving the paranormal. In this world, Supernaturals are known to the Humans, but they must also fight the prejudice of the Cabal against them.
Donata has also been working with her aunt to learn and enhance her magical abilities. During her off time, Donata has been dating Anton Eastman, as her former boyfriends from the 1st book, Peter and Magnus have not contacted her in 6 months. Donata has been having strange dreams, which have become more sexual, and she soon discovers that Anton has been drugging her wine.
When Peter resurfaces after the death of his father, Donata will help him try to find out who killed him, as well as trying to find out clues in the painting that Peter still has, which played a major part of the previous story. The weird weather, causing deaths; Anton’s desperate attempt to win Donata to be his wife; and the discovery of a new 6th species will force Donata to find the truth about the new species and stop them before all their lives will be in danger.
This was a nice, at times exciting story line, with a very good tough heroine. I did like Donata, and many of the other secondary characters, such as Doc, Chief, her cat and Ricky, the 3 foot kobold. I liked Peter, but he annoyed me a bit with his quick anger. I look forward to the next book of this series, as it has a lot of promises for Donata to become more powerful, and the return of Magnus.
Barb
The Reading Cafe
Donata has also been working with her aunt to learn and enhance her magical abilities. During her off time, Donata has been dating Anton Eastman, as her former boyfriends from the 1st book, Peter and Magnus have not contacted her in 6 months. Donata has been having strange dreams, which have become more sexual, and she soon discovers that Anton has been drugging her wine.
When Peter resurfaces after the death of his father, Donata will help him try to find out who killed him, as well as trying to find out clues in the painting that Peter still has, which played a major part of the previous story. The weird weather, causing deaths; Anton’s desperate attempt to win Donata to be his wife; and the discovery of a new 6th species will force Donata to find the truth about the new species and stop them before all their lives will be in danger.
This was a nice, at times exciting story line, with a very good tough heroine. I did like Donata, and many of the other secondary characters, such as Doc, Chief, her cat and Ricky, the 3 foot kobold. I liked Peter, but he annoyed me a bit with his quick anger. I look forward to the next book of this series, as it has a lot of promises for Donata to become more powerful, and the return of Magnus.
Barb
The Reading Cafe
April 26, 2017
Donata has not heard from Peter or Magnus in six months and has finally moved on with her life, even beginning dating billionaire Anton Eastman. Her job has been looking up since her boss has involved her in more special cases, although it does seem as if paranormal crime is on the upswing. And she is even learning to get better at her magic, thanks to lessons from Aunt Tatiana. But after contact from Raphael, Peter's dragon father, Donata once again finds herself caught up in the dangerous drama of the Pentacle Pentimento painting. This is a sequel to Veiled Magic and is full of magic, action and even some romance. I enjoyed the relationship between Donata and her friends, Doc and Ricky, as well as her on again/off again relationship with Peter. This story helps explain a little more about the mystique of the painting and the missing sixth race. I look forward to reading more of Donata's adventures.
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