3.5 stars
So I know a lot of people weren’t so keen on this but I liked it. It was no earth-shattering masterpiece but it was enjoyable and fast-paced, despite being set over a period of just 6 days.
Concentr8 is set during an outbreak of rioting, much like the London riots of 2011, but these riots were triggered by the withdrawal of a drug called Concentr8, used to treat schoolchildren with ADHD. The book follows 5 teenagers, as well as a few other characters, who all take turns narrating. Throughout the book, we follow the events that unfold when the teenagers take advantage of the chaos of the rioting to kidnap and hold captive a man they see leaving the building where the mayor works. I quite liked the plot but I’m not entirely sure what the author was trying to say with it – does he think ADHD isn’t real or is he just saying that the measures taken in his fictional world are too extreme? I was just rather confused by that whole aspect of the novel.
I liked the characters – especially the contrast between Troy and Femi, two boys who may initially be viewed as very similar, but who we come to see have had very different lives, and very different feelings on their situation. Then we have Karen, who only seems to care about the consequences for her, and Lee, who doesn’t really seem to realise there are consequences at all, or at least he chooses not to think about them. That only leaves Blaze, and I do think the way he was written was very clever and interesting – we mostly learn about him from the viewpoints of other characters and we really do seem to get to know him this way, to the extent that, despite him only having one chapter, he definitely feels like one of the most major characters. I really did like the way the book was written so that you see all these contrasting views, different people with different opinions and motives, all reflecting on the same situation – it was definitely my favourite thing about Concentr8.
Though I did like getting the viewpoints of the journalist and the mayor (I’m not sure about the hostage and the negotiator was completely pointless in my opinion), I think it may have been more interesting to only follow the kids, and have more of a chance to go in depth with them, learn more about their lives and what led them to their situation and their feelings on it – a little more character development. I do feel that, although I came to like the characters, none of them were as developed as I would have liked. Lee, especially, only has 3 chapters, in which all we seem to learn about his character is what we’ve learned from the other characters’ assessments of him – that he’s not so clever. I do think this was done quite well, to be fair, with his focus on other things and a lack of ability to seem to understand the gravity of the situation he’s in, but there must be more to his character and background than him being a bit thick.
I did think the book was quite good but it just had the potential to be so much more, to give that view of different people who have ended up in this situation, how they came to be there, their feelings on it, how they’re such vastly different people despite how society – and the reader at first – kind of views them as all the same. I also think it would have been interesting if Sutcliffe had pulled more on the idea of seeing one character from the point of view of the others i.e. how everyone views Blaze, kind of making the whole book about him without him narrating until the very end. This was kind of done a little bit but a stronger focus on it could have made for a more intriguing read.
I know some people gave up on the book very early on because they were annoyed by the way some of the characters speak in bad English but this wasn’t a problem for me, though it takes a little while to get the hang of it. It would have really bothered me if, say, there were apostrophes in the wrong place or words were spelled wrong but it wasn’t like that, it was written how the characters would speak and I think that helps some to help you get to know the character a little quicker, plus it helps you to separate them in your head even before you learn enough about them to distinguish them by their character traits.
This is definitely a book where you need to stick with it for a little bit to really get into it but, if you do manage that, and don’t let prejudices about bad English get in the way, it is an enjoyable and interesting read.