Fish Girl joins the talents of popular novelist Donna Jo Napoli and popular children’s picture book maker David Weisner. Neither had done graphic novels before, but clearly Napoli is as established a storyteller as Weisner is an illustrator. I think it’s okay on a kind of basic level, with a pretty bland theme of empowerment for the Fish Girl, who finally gets to stand (literally) on her own. But I have to say it has some creepy elements to it, and maybe it has a good point to make for middle grade girls in this respect. Maybe, too, I should say spoiler alert here since I can’t discuss the story much at all and say anything of significance about it without revealing the plot. So readon at your own risk!
Fish Girl is a mermaid who works (and this is the point, that she works for a living, as child/mermaid labor, with all the other creatures there) for Neptune at his seaside aquarium-for-profit. They’re not rich, but the Fish Girl is for some reason asked not to show herself very clearly to visitors; they look in the aquarium and sometimes think they spot her. I was never sure what the point of this hiding-the-main-feature-of-the-exhibit really is, actually.
Anyway, Fish Girl grows up, trusting Neptune, loving him as he also loves his “treasure” (her; and this is really true, financially, because he makes no money without her cooperation). He’s not her father, but a strong and somewhat overbearing father figure to her. At one point Neptune tells Fish Girl of her origins, as a reward for her working hard one day; when she doesn’t work hard she is ignored by him; he gets very angry when she does not do what he wants, when she violates his rules. Think of King Triton with his trident angrily keeping Ariel from the human world; Neptune’s trident operates as the same symbol here to separate Fish Girl from the human world.
Fish Girl has an octopus for a best friend, and she loves her home, under water in the tank. But one day a girl named Livia sees her and over time befriends her, in secret, until they are angrily discovered by Neptune. But the clandestine friendship continues. And, as with The Little Mermaid, this mermaid Fish Girl suddenly becomes interested in all things human and gradually ventures more and more into the human world; in the evenings she literally goes out, because she finds she can wear human clothes, and . . . uh, she discovers she has legs. There’a big ol’ world out there, she sees, and she wants her piece of it. Cue Mary Tyler Moore music here. "She's gonna make it after all . . ."
So Fish Girl finds that Neptune is not Neptune, but just a guy who has made her and kid visitors of the exhibit think he has mythological powers. "Neptune" has in fact abducted this young girl, binding her legs, and has imprisoned her. She is not a mermaid; she was lied to! The origin story he has told her is a lie! He is using her to make money. Are there echoes here of Pinocchio? Pygmalion? Maybe. Or maybe this is Brothers Grimm mean adult territory.
So if we see this story as a kind of parable for growing up, well, maybe it is okay--girls need to break from their fathers, make their own way, make their own friends; this can be seen as a coming of age story, of empowerment and connecting with friends instead of lovers (as with Ariel). And it's feminist, in the #metoo moment; girls need to break free from domineering men who use them for their own purposes. And it's not a romance, to get free from Dad to marry out of species, as with Little Mermaid, so that's different. And when the aquarium is finally destroyed, by a sudden convenient storm (?!) all the fish and sea animals also become free to live in their natural habitat, so free-to-be-you-and-me is the useful point, I guess; this dude is imprisoning sea creatures for his own profit!
We live in a time of true crime abductions and abuse of young girls by domineering men and this bears real resemblance for me to those stories. So I am glad she is free to live with her friend in the end, or I think that is what we are meant to think will happen, but. . . it feels pretty creepy for a middle grades book. There's no hint of sexual assault here, just to be clear, but the abduction, the lying, the imprisonment: It's got the creep factor here.
But another thing, how can she suddenly can talk in the end? If we see this as a coming of age myth, and this is allegory, well, okay, she "finds her voice," but how does it suddenly happen? Why couldn't she literally speak any time before this? We do see her trying, too. I guess the point is Fish Girl breaking free from her abductor, which frees her to speak and be the person she wants to be, be herself. So I have a few questions, and concerns. I liked the art a lot, of course, very much. But maybe the thing I seem to be objecting to in this book is the very point of it?