Volume One, A Middle School fantasy novel about young love magic and faeries.
In the Land of the Fae, a young girl finds her first love....
When Alli runs away after her mother dies, a Faery Fire Sprite takes her to the Land of the Fae to protect her where she discovers she's a witch begins her journey into discovering her lost heritage and finding her destiny. Along the way, she begins to remember what she's forgotten and the heady beginnings of a first love. Now, she must face returning home--and leaving him behind. For he must remain in the Land of the Fae to fulfill his own destiny....
They delve deeper into the hidden world of magick and begin to unravel the long-hidden secret about their destiny, their heritage and the danger that surrounds them all. They must unravel the mystery of her destiny, or be forced apart forever....
My novels, novellas, and short stories tap into the magickal realm, a realm that brings to life the world of the Land of the Fae, where magickal beings really do exist, and you can come to visit for awhile...
I write stories placed in these various worlds of Witch Fantasy and Dark Fantasy. I also writes mystical Native American and Western Historical Romance.
I wanted to love this book, however magic being spelt magick 100 times, irritated me. The grammar was hit and miss and I didn't realise how much it bothered me. There were times I wanted to stop reading this and that rarely happens. Though 3 quarters through it became more interesting. Though coma was spelt comma.
You know how to keep a reader hooked.I didn't want to stop reading. It had me hooked from the beginning to end. When I can I want to get all of Daughters of the Circle books. I am hooked you are a heck of a writer.Thanks so much for sharing this story with me.
I loved the story, even though the final battle lacked a lot of detail and was rather short. What I did not enjoy was the author's lack of editing. It seemed to me that the book would have greatly benefitted from some type of editing, even if just from a program like Grammarly. This lack of editing lead to some passages that were rather jarring to my eye, and nearly made me stop reading on a few occasions.