I had read a couple of these stories previously in other magazines so I had high hopes for this collection. The stories were not as compelling as I had hoped. But, as I will say in these cases, the stories might well be written well and just not be of a subject matter I clicked with. Still, I have read so much great writing of our modern deployments such as Phil Klay and the fellow who wrote The Yellow Birds I do t think it's subject matter so much as style that does not click as well for me.
Some brief synopses. " To the Lake " introduces us to a veteran who has had his wife leave him. He calls her parents house daily to talk to her but she will not. Evidently there had been some violent incidents, not at her, but enough to scare her. His wife's Father, a veteran of an earlier war, is patient with him, wanting him to get some help, but finally tells him the daily calls need to stop. In a bad decision he decides to go to the lake house where they are staying and we, as a reader, get nervous. This cannot end well. Fortunately, though it does not seem so to him, his truck goes off the road during a sleet storm. He is arrested for OUI, and held while they sort out the loaded gun that was in his truck. He ends up being bailed out by a fellow veteran who was in a cell with him. This man too had been arrested at throwing a hammer at his wife. She does not press charges though. Spending the night with this couple he ends up taking the man out on an improvised sled ( this veteran has lost his legs ). The man and he go out to an isolated lake to shoot rabbits. The man sAys it is so peaceful, " will he leave him for a bit to enjoy it?" Our man goes back to the cabin and ears a hearty breakfast made by the wife. They hear a gunshot out by the lake, his wife says " It sounds like he got something " and we are left to wonder.....
In " Sea Bass " our narrator recalls his relationship with his Father. A veteran who has been erratic he now is divorced from our narrators mother. He remembers spending time with his Father, an accident with a saw that almost cost him a finger. Then after 9/11 his Father was recharged, his life had purpose, he reenlisted. Having dinner with his Father at a restaurant his Dad tells him of a restaurant he will take him to when he visits him. They have a special he will love...a house recipe for " Sea Bass." Our narrator never saw his Father again.
" New Guidance " relates the experience of an Afghan American, a member of the diaspora if you will, who enlists to serve as a translator during the Afghan war. While he is accepted by his fellow soldiers he is conflicted a bit by his relationship with the Afghan soldiers who are fighting with the United States, and they too of him. Also related is the experience of a divorced middle school teacher who joined the service when the age limit was raised and proceeds to be totally unfit for military service.
The story titled " Peacetime " was one I had previously read. Telling the story of a veteran who has not adjusted to life back in the States well. He is secretly living at the armory, working during the day as an EMT. He has some bad habits. He drinks every night. He has cured hangovers however, he hooks himself up to an IV while he sleeps so that he stays hydrated. He also, on each of his met calls, has made a habit of stealing some small item in each house. A refrigerator magnet, a snow globe, one elderly lady who had died, her false teeth. It is a compulsion his partner, a soon to be police academy student, tells him he will need to get help for before he gets in trouble. Told he must leave the armory he goes to visit his wife. His neighbor tells him she had left months ago with her boyfriend for parts unknown. Finally, at a call for an oxy overdose, a repeat customer in fact, they Discover on the way back to the station that he has left behind the drug box. This, is a major problem.
In " A Beautiful Country " we follow a man delivering payroll to an outlying base. To try to be nondescript they are in a Corolla and unarmed. It does not go as hoped.
" Visitors " describes Jean a Mother of a returned soldier who spends one day a week visiting her son in prison. Sentenced to single digit years for manslaughter from a bar fight which killed a friend he had grown up with she finds herself secretly glad he is in prison, safe, as opposed to at war. She sees the father of the boy that was killed, their family and his were friends growing up, and it is awkward. Finally one day the man comes into the store she works and says that " the letters have to stop. ". Not because he minds but because his wife is very upset. She does not know what he is talking about, but learns her son, who is very non talkative on her visits has been writing letter after letter to this family. Expressing remorse and guilt by the buckets. This story visits again the subject of unwashed guilt many returning soldiers deal with.
" Kids " follows a unit as they deal with a young boy who leaves an object outside their compound each day. It is dutifully blown up each time but they do not know what is. Eventually the boy is killed but their is still concern over what exactly he had been doing. Story centers on the hardship of decision making in war when it is impossible to know who is on your side and who is not.
A returning soldier has found his way by taking a job on a fishing boat with a cantankerous old man in " The Port is Near ". The haul is down, the man wants to retire but no one would buy his boat. He resolves to have an accident and claim the insurance. Our soldier tries to talk him out of it, when that does not work, feeling a sense of duty he aids in the plan.
In " A Human Cry " Tom Mayheux is the caretaker, jack of all trades , at a pig farm. He, at the behest of the woman he works for, tracks a group that is night hunting.on the property. As the story develops we learn that those same poachers were men he had been involved in a dope growing project. His employer/ landlord had lost her husband in an accident with the industrial mower, as we learn late in the story Tom had a role in that as well. If " Tom " is his name at all.
The final story " Total Solar " was featured last year in TNY. It follows a soldier who is in a building that is bombed and attacked. Pretending to be dead he escapes only to be found later by security forces which make him sign a confession of aggression before releasing him. As the story ends he sees a man taking into a phone and fears he is about to be captured again