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What do you do when you’re kidnapped and have no way to use your powers? You give up. But not me. I know my guys will come for me I just have to wait for them.
Starved and tortured, all Evie has to do is wait to be rescued but when circumstances change can she risk waiting for a rescue that may come too soon? Or will she find a way to rescue herself?
*Ends on a cliffhanger…..
Starved and tortured, all Evie has to do is wait to be rescued but when circumstances change can she risk waiting for a rescue that may come too soon? Or will she find a way to rescue herself?
*Ends on a cliffhanger…..
152 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 20, 2016
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Tamara White
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March 23, 2017
2.5 stars
February 19, 2018
*sighhhhh*
and just like that my hopes come crashing down...
this book was a real shitshow and considering the last one was a minor shitshow thats saying something.
first of all this is spoilery af so dont read any furthur.
okay so some real sick torture shit happens
theres lot of stupid weird issues and infighting i mean like reaaaaaallll stupid.
the sort of stupid people usually grow out of when they are teenagers and while they technically still are their all parents to be not to mention closer to college/uni age. so really should be far more mature and less prone to tantrums. i mean especially given that their elementals and they legit bearly lost their bonded i mean usually the person you love nearly dying puts shit in perspective also elementals and emotions are connected so how the effing eff of effs can they all be considered like the ultra cool 4 whatever when they are all acting like whiny little boys well thats a generalisation as there are some DANE who are greatly moreso than others DANE also what dumb fuck ignores not only the intincts of the chosen one blah blah blah but also a mothers instincts and the fact that she literally had a vision about it? like excuse me can we see a grown arse woman up in here because that shit wouldnt happen around estrogen lemme tell you.
OH AND LETS NOT EVEN GET STARTED ON THE FACT that there was like zero nice relationship stuff i mean im not pissed over lack of sexy because obvi she was tortured malnourished etc but not even like some cute family fun like the pool in the last book or cooking together i mean WHHHY is the first cute thing they do all together the ultrasound and then they just DONT SAY THE GENDER i mean fuck me give me that at least or some time spent talking about names? literally it was like they all just completely forgot aboit there relationship and this book was all about danes drama and treating evie like a invalid/idiot/walking baby maker i mean sure she has idiot moments and you wont see me calling her a genius especially not after the multiple TRUST MY INSTINCTS THEY NEVER LET ME DOWN then getting weird vibes from her dad more than once and the vision and yet still trusting him? are you fucking kidding me. well besides that she showed how strong she was in this book you know holding up under torture like a champ etc and not giving them what they wanted and what not only protecting herself her babies her bonded for what a month but then doing some exorcist shit yeah good girl im proud. WHAT REALLY fucks me off the planet is that dane who fucked me off the last book when he broke evies trust so fucking horribly is that in this book he literally cant take the thought that his previously established arsehole of a father might be a threat to his bonded pregnant person without demon influence WHAT A SHOCKER considering he knows how shit his father is to his mother in the first place im starting to imagine dane as a knuckle dragger tbh like protruding jaw drool lice the whole shebang. so what does he do literally endangers her life on purpose because fuck off if your bonded can endure 3 weeks of torture and morning sickness without giving in you sure as shit keep ONE ONE god damn thing that you were specifically told not to say to anyone to yourself even in a hissy fit. FUCK. ah i'm angry and you know what the cliffhanger where said moron gets stabbed was i surprised yes did i have much sympathy no. because tbh i kinda wanted mike to give him a beatdown and the fact that mike was the only one who actually seemed to have an ounce of a clue to danes fuckery really pisses me off especially when the whole book is legit aboit protecting her and the babies YOU HAD ONE JOB.
THERE ARE FOUR OF YOU. FOUR!
like thats not even counting the good dads and the unbonded bonded and her grandpa ... yeah you guys suck. like A LOT.
fuck now thats over with lets hope the 3rd and im assuming final book is more about them getting there act together and less about an even bigger demon shit show... i dont have high hopes anymore... if i were her id probs just tell them all to fuck off and come find me when they grew a brain and a set of balls. ones that did more than knock bitches up. also thank god the virgin girl no virgin guys trope was addressed in the last book. it shits me to no end when the guys are all manwhores with no reprecussions but if the girl kissed a guy when she was 4 they want to track him down for the kill and then keep her isolated from anything with a dick and a pulse like. fuck. not okay. good job to teddy for keeping it in his pants and also thank god evie appreciated that and the other pricks felt bad they should itd be different if it were evie not knowing what she was etc but all thise fuckers knew they had a bonded and according to info tend to meet theirs pretty young anyway considering christian at 23 is basically considered a spinster btw is their a male word for that cause i feel some serious sexisim from that shit if the word is bachelor which is made to be all cool and lucky and not an equally dried up grouchity old unloveable husk term then fuck that. i dont trust men who know they had a fated soulmate who theyd meet when they were young and what they couldnt wait a few years i mean shit at the very least if you know your chick is most likely keeping herself for her fated why the fuck arent you you ball bag. wahhh you see when i read books im usually too immersed in the story to feel much more than minor annoyance or what the fuckery but when i sit down afterwards and think about i realised how messed up it is. like your literal would die without soulmate is out there and instead of idk focusing on bettering yourself or preparing like ways to take care of them or be a good partner or ya know LOOKING for her you decide fuck it ill find some hot humans to fuck. whats worse is one of the guys at least thought that if he hadnt found his bonded aka evie which he had and knew at the time her evil bitch nemisis cheerleader was hot enough that hed probably do her even knoeing shes satan and his soulmate is there and bullied by her. EXCUSE ME THE FUCK. like ??? you know what theres heaps more little things that arent addressed like the shitty art teacher who doesnt turn in her abusive parents and the fact that some gross neighbour abused her im assuming sexually in some way because its eluded but never mentioned again... ah i feel like i need to eat chocolate and lie down to make me not want to jump inside this book and kick some arses. you know when your so pissed/frustrated that you feel like youll explode if you dont talk out the anger or scream into a pillow yeah im there needing a pillow to scream into.
this book it has a 3 because babies and its technically RH even though this book was not really...otherwise it probably would gotten a two MAYBE even a 1 idk im feeling like a moody hoe atm so no mercy. especially when i just know the story could have been GREAT like just imagining how it could be with more mature characters and more in depth stuff cut up some of the unneeded bs focus more on the 'harem' and less on one or two individuals like fuck as much as i like multiple pov we didnt need to be flicking between each person every 5 seconds. i felt like i was getting whiplash. ugh okay im actually going to stop being a stroppy cow now and attempt to read the next book with that out of my system so i dont have a total determined to hate you grudge going in.
and just like that my hopes come crashing down...
this book was a real shitshow and considering the last one was a minor shitshow thats saying something.
first of all this is spoilery af so dont read any furthur.
okay so some real sick torture shit happens
theres lot of stupid weird issues and infighting i mean like reaaaaaallll stupid.
the sort of stupid people usually grow out of when they are teenagers and while they technically still are their all parents to be not to mention closer to college/uni age. so really should be far more mature and less prone to tantrums. i mean especially given that their elementals and they legit bearly lost their bonded i mean usually the person you love nearly dying puts shit in perspective also elementals and emotions are connected so how the effing eff of effs can they all be considered like the ultra cool 4 whatever when they are all acting like whiny little boys well thats a generalisation as there are some DANE who are greatly moreso than others DANE also what dumb fuck ignores not only the intincts of the chosen one blah blah blah but also a mothers instincts and the fact that she literally had a vision about it? like excuse me can we see a grown arse woman up in here because that shit wouldnt happen around estrogen lemme tell you.
OH AND LETS NOT EVEN GET STARTED ON THE FACT that there was like zero nice relationship stuff i mean im not pissed over lack of sexy because obvi she was tortured malnourished etc but not even like some cute family fun like the pool in the last book or cooking together i mean WHHHY is the first cute thing they do all together the ultrasound and then they just DONT SAY THE GENDER i mean fuck me give me that at least or some time spent talking about names? literally it was like they all just completely forgot aboit there relationship and this book was all about danes drama and treating evie like a invalid/idiot/walking baby maker i mean sure she has idiot moments and you wont see me calling her a genius especially not after the multiple TRUST MY INSTINCTS THEY NEVER LET ME DOWN then getting weird vibes from her dad more than once and the vision and yet still trusting him? are you fucking kidding me. well besides that she showed how strong she was in this book you know holding up under torture like a champ etc and not giving them what they wanted and what not only protecting herself her babies her bonded for what a month but then doing some exorcist shit yeah good girl im proud. WHAT REALLY fucks me off the planet is that dane who fucked me off the last book when he broke evies trust so fucking horribly is that in this book he literally cant take the thought that his previously established arsehole of a father might be a threat to his bonded pregnant person without demon influence WHAT A SHOCKER considering he knows how shit his father is to his mother in the first place im starting to imagine dane as a knuckle dragger tbh like protruding jaw drool lice the whole shebang. so what does he do literally endangers her life on purpose because fuck off if your bonded can endure 3 weeks of torture and morning sickness without giving in you sure as shit keep ONE ONE god damn thing that you were specifically told not to say to anyone to yourself even in a hissy fit. FUCK. ah i'm angry and you know what the cliffhanger where said moron gets stabbed was i surprised yes did i have much sympathy no. because tbh i kinda wanted mike to give him a beatdown and the fact that mike was the only one who actually seemed to have an ounce of a clue to danes fuckery really pisses me off especially when the whole book is legit aboit protecting her and the babies YOU HAD ONE JOB.
THERE ARE FOUR OF YOU. FOUR!
like thats not even counting the good dads and the unbonded bonded and her grandpa ... yeah you guys suck. like A LOT.
fuck now thats over with lets hope the 3rd and im assuming final book is more about them getting there act together and less about an even bigger demon shit show... i dont have high hopes anymore... if i were her id probs just tell them all to fuck off and come find me when they grew a brain and a set of balls. ones that did more than knock bitches up. also thank god the virgin girl no virgin guys trope was addressed in the last book. it shits me to no end when the guys are all manwhores with no reprecussions but if the girl kissed a guy when she was 4 they want to track him down for the kill and then keep her isolated from anything with a dick and a pulse like. fuck. not okay. good job to teddy for keeping it in his pants and also thank god evie appreciated that and the other pricks felt bad they should itd be different if it were evie not knowing what she was etc but all thise fuckers knew they had a bonded and according to info tend to meet theirs pretty young anyway considering christian at 23 is basically considered a spinster btw is their a male word for that cause i feel some serious sexisim from that shit if the word is bachelor which is made to be all cool and lucky and not an equally dried up grouchity old unloveable husk term then fuck that. i dont trust men who know they had a fated soulmate who theyd meet when they were young and what they couldnt wait a few years i mean shit at the very least if you know your chick is most likely keeping herself for her fated why the fuck arent you you ball bag. wahhh you see when i read books im usually too immersed in the story to feel much more than minor annoyance or what the fuckery but when i sit down afterwards and think about i realised how messed up it is. like your literal would die without soulmate is out there and instead of idk focusing on bettering yourself or preparing like ways to take care of them or be a good partner or ya know LOOKING for her you decide fuck it ill find some hot humans to fuck. whats worse is one of the guys at least thought that if he hadnt found his bonded aka evie which he had and knew at the time her evil bitch nemisis cheerleader was hot enough that hed probably do her even knoeing shes satan and his soulmate is there and bullied by her. EXCUSE ME THE FUCK. like ??? you know what theres heaps more little things that arent addressed like the shitty art teacher who doesnt turn in her abusive parents and the fact that some gross neighbour abused her im assuming sexually in some way because its eluded but never mentioned again... ah i feel like i need to eat chocolate and lie down to make me not want to jump inside this book and kick some arses. you know when your so pissed/frustrated that you feel like youll explode if you dont talk out the anger or scream into a pillow yeah im there needing a pillow to scream into.
this book it has a 3 because babies and its technically RH even though this book was not really...otherwise it probably would gotten a two MAYBE even a 1 idk im feeling like a moody hoe atm so no mercy. especially when i just know the story could have been GREAT like just imagining how it could be with more mature characters and more in depth stuff cut up some of the unneeded bs focus more on the 'harem' and less on one or two individuals like fuck as much as i like multiple pov we didnt need to be flicking between each person every 5 seconds. i felt like i was getting whiplash. ugh okay im actually going to stop being a stroppy cow now and attempt to read the next book with that out of my system so i dont have a total determined to hate you grudge going in.
March 22, 2017
So, the story picks up right where the last one left off. The guys trying to figure out how to save Evie, and Evie being held captive and tortured.
It was all fine and dandy but man. This book is like the ultimate drama queen among all other books out there. The drama just kept building and building. And normally that might have been okey, if it wasn't so damn predictable.
And again, it would have been so much better if someone just took the time to edit it properly.
And why does it always end the same way?
Story -3.5
Execution- 2
It was all fine and dandy but man. This book is like the ultimate drama queen among all other books out there. The drama just kept building and building. And normally that might have been okey, if it wasn't so damn predictable.
And again, it would have been so much better if someone just took the time to edit it properly.
And why does it always end the same way?
Story -3.5
Execution- 2
October 31, 2017
Not Again.....
Poor Evie! Things don't ever stay smooth and safe for long. Terrible cliffhanger, but it keeps you on the edge of your seat. Good cliffhangers leave you panting for more ♡ I'm dying to know what gender her little ones are. I love the addiction of Christian! Thinking that now I have a clear favorite ♡♡♡ Book 3... here I come 😉
Poor Evie! Things don't ever stay smooth and safe for long. Terrible cliffhanger, but it keeps you on the edge of your seat. Good cliffhangers leave you panting for more ♡ I'm dying to know what gender her little ones are. I love the addiction of Christian! Thinking that now I have a clear favorite ♡♡♡ Book 3... here I come 😉
January 10, 2017
Once again I have a mixed review. I enjoyed book 2 of the Evelyn Storm series more than book 1. The story progression is nice, the spacing is good, and I appreciated the original character development as well as the addition of new, critical characters. However, there are still too many editing issues. The writing is choppy/jumpy at times and there are still way too many typos or incorrect word usages. I would have given this a 4 star if it had been edited better. Still improved from the first draft of book 1!!
This is an action packed booked full of danger and intrigue. There's less time for romance between Evelyn and her guys which was a shame. It was nice to get to know some of Evelyn's family. Evelyn and all of the guys make for great characters. The guys are equal measure frustration and perfection.
The book ended on a cliffhanger very similar to the first one. With so much left uncertain I am eager for book 3. It looks like we could get a mix of heartache and happiness mingled in with the adventure. I still have high hopes for this series.
This is an action packed booked full of danger and intrigue. There's less time for romance between Evelyn and her guys which was a shame. It was nice to get to know some of Evelyn's family. Evelyn and all of the guys make for great characters. The guys are equal measure frustration and perfection.
The book ended on a cliffhanger very similar to the first one. With so much left uncertain I am eager for book 3. It looks like we could get a mix of heartache and happiness mingled in with the adventure. I still have high hopes for this series.
July 16, 2017
Ack. POV swaps all over the place
Ok. The writing remains choppy. The flow of thoughts remain bumpy and scattered. POV changes every couple paragraphs and it is very distracting.
The father drama is the main focal point of this book in the series, as is the surprise bees of little ones. I understand that the characters are late teens but they're also supposed to be high ranking elementals with super powers. Yet they all bicker like children and defer much too easily to the very people they were just opposed to. I think I'm going to break from the series before I try to read book 3. Come at it with fresh eyes because while the mystery interests me the style still reads more as YA and the romance element doesn't flow as well in it.
Ok. The writing remains choppy. The flow of thoughts remain bumpy and scattered. POV changes every couple paragraphs and it is very distracting.
The father drama is the main focal point of this book in the series, as is the surprise bees of little ones. I understand that the characters are late teens but they're also supposed to be high ranking elementals with super powers. Yet they all bicker like children and defer much too easily to the very people they were just opposed to. I think I'm going to break from the series before I try to read book 3. Come at it with fresh eyes because while the mystery interests me the style still reads more as YA and the romance element doesn't flow as well in it.
May 8, 2017
This reverse harem sequel was good. I really love the evolution of the paranormal aspect. Lots of sad issues in this book and I cried a bunch. My only complaint is that the romance was really steamy in the first book and this one had practically nothing. But the story is still great and kept my interest. Grabbed the third book right away so I could see what was going to happen! Five glittery stars!
June 14, 2017
Entertaining read.
I've enjoyed this series so far. The reverse harem genre is new to me and definitely entertaining. My main issue with this book is the somewhat whiny inner dialogue. It seems someone's feelings are getting hurt every few pages and it became irritating. Regardless, I still liked the story and I'm curious to see what happens in the next book.
I've enjoyed this series so far. The reverse harem genre is new to me and definitely entertaining. My main issue with this book is the somewhat whiny inner dialogue. It seems someone's feelings are getting hurt every few pages and it became irritating. Regardless, I still liked the story and I'm curious to see what happens in the next book.
May 12, 2017
Love this series!
I do see the editing and plot holes but I still love this series so far. The characters and story line are awesome! Can't wait t read the next one.
I do see the editing and plot holes but I still love this series so far. The characters and story line are awesome! Can't wait t read the next one.
September 15, 2017
I have really enjoyed the series so far.
This series has been amazing. Ive binge read books 1 and 2, and am excited to see what book 3 brings.
This series has been amazing. Ive binge read books 1 and 2, and am excited to see what book 3 brings.
September 27, 2017
Wow
Omg this book flowed from the first nicely and the emotional rollercoaster really puts you through the ringer. I cant wait to see how book 3 goes
Omg this book flowed from the first nicely and the emotional rollercoaster really puts you through the ringer. I cant wait to see how book 3 goes
February 3, 2018
Emotional
Ok so I didn’t put this one down until I was finished reading it!!! Some parts were emotional for me. Great read.
Ok so I didn’t put this one down until I was finished reading it!!! Some parts were emotional for me. Great read.
April 16, 2021
The idea to this series is GOOD, but the writing style is so strange... everything is hurried but what really makes it strange is the dialogue... no one talks like that?!
March 19, 2017
Dnf for me but will give it a try at another time.
March 10, 2017
Love this series
This book was fantastic.. I love the story line and the boys just melt your heart!! The series has been great so far.. Can't wait for the next book x
This book was fantastic.. I love the story line and the boys just melt your heart!! The series has been great so far.. Can't wait for the next book x
March 8, 2017
I read it only because it was on KU, still didn't like the writing, and I read it in fast forward mode (and not enjoing it in the process)
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February 18, 2017I got through most this book and finally set it aside. I may go back later.
November 23, 2018
In the second book in the series, Evie is kidnapped, and her boys are doing everything they can to find her. But, as secrets come to light, an Evie learns some things she can do it gets a lot more complicated.
I don't want to say much more because it will give things away, so I ended up liking this book, but not loving it. I felt like it was very short, which that isn't really a problem, but to me it gave little information and had the reading asking a lot of questions that are going unanswered for now. And to top it all off it almost ends exactly like the first one, which was a little bit annoying.
Other than that though I'm looking forward to more, and finding out more about Evie's power, and how she's going to handle everything.
I don't want to say much more because it will give things away, so I ended up liking this book, but not loving it. I felt like it was very short, which that isn't really a problem, but to me it gave little information and had the reading asking a lot of questions that are going unanswered for now. And to top it all off it almost ends exactly like the first one, which was a little bit annoying.
Other than that though I'm looking forward to more, and finding out more about Evie's power, and how she's going to handle everything.
December 30, 2016
Saved elemental
I really enjoyed this book. For a newer author the character development is good and I am able to feel like part of the book. The style of writing is getting better but there are still a few minor errors that are easily overlooked. I recommend this book and can not wait until the next one and her new series!!
I really enjoyed this book. For a newer author the character development is good and I am able to feel like part of the book. The style of writing is getting better but there are still a few minor errors that are easily overlooked. I recommend this book and can not wait until the next one and her new series!!
January 3, 2017
Good storyline but needs professional editor
Both books 1 and 2 have a decent plotline going, however in book 2, there are some serious grammar and punctuation mistakes going on that detract from the story. While I love hearing from several of the characters on what's happening, there are now too many characters narrating by the Middle of the book.
Both books 1 and 2 have a decent plotline going, however in book 2, there are some serious grammar and punctuation mistakes going on that detract from the story. While I love hearing from several of the characters on what's happening, there are now too many characters narrating by the Middle of the book.
January 17, 2017
I enjoy reading RH books! This book has multiple POV's which helped dive into all their minds. I gave the book 3.5 stars because it had a great concept of a storyline but the grammar wasn't great, needs a lot of editing. It does end in a cliffhanger the series is full of suspense, supernatural, and some hot goodlooking guys!
January 8, 2017
This is the second one in the series and is one of my favourite books
I cannot recommend this highly enough, I am impatiently awaiting the next in the series and Tamara white is an awesomely Amazing writer
I cannot recommend this highly enough, I am impatiently awaiting the next in the series and Tamara white is an awesomely Amazing writer
December 30, 2016
But why with all the extra drama though!?
The premise of the first book was fine like why do the most?
The premise of the first book was fine like why do the most?
December 19, 2019
I wish I could give more than 5 stars. So amazing so well written and the characters are very well developed. I cannot speak more highly of this series and I believe everyone should read it!
April 21, 2017
Pretty good follow-up to book 1. I liked the addition of Zach and Christian's characters. I did miss some of the romance that was in book 1. I felt like Evie and her four were apart a lot of the book and the length seemed short to me. I am still excited to see what book 3 brings though.
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