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Revolutionary Temptation
1777 New York City
The American colonists are fighting for their independence, but the battlefield is not the only place to wage war. When General Washington’s head of intelligence asks Captain Jack West to spy on the British in New York, Jack agrees, despite reservations about this ungentlemanly pursuit.
Jack’s contact in the city recruits bookshop owner Elias Ashfield, an impeccably dressed sensualist who flaunts his desire for both men and women and seeks a place in high society. Jack longs for a simple life guided by clear principles. Eli is a risk-taker who knows how to get what he wants. And he wants Jack in his bed.
Events in Jack’s past have made him fearful of acting on his secret craving for a man’s touch, but Eli intrigues Jack as much as he infuriates him. As Jack and Eli search for the information the rebel army needs, they realize there’s more between them than mere lust. But finding a way to be together may prove more difficult than defeating the British Empire.
Words: 67,550.
The American colonists are fighting for their independence, but the battlefield is not the only place to wage war. When General Washington’s head of intelligence asks Captain Jack West to spy on the British in New York, Jack agrees, despite reservations about this ungentlemanly pursuit.
Jack’s contact in the city recruits bookshop owner Elias Ashfield, an impeccably dressed sensualist who flaunts his desire for both men and women and seeks a place in high society. Jack longs for a simple life guided by clear principles. Eli is a risk-taker who knows how to get what he wants. And he wants Jack in his bed.
Events in Jack’s past have made him fearful of acting on his secret craving for a man’s touch, but Eli intrigues Jack as much as he infuriates him. As Jack and Eli search for the information the rebel army needs, they realize there’s more between them than mere lust. But finding a way to be together may prove more difficult than defeating the British Empire.
Words: 67,550.
254 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 14, 2017
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February 25, 2017
Alright, let's do this thing!
There are a couple things that will be dealbreakers for some, so let's just get those out of the way so I can squeal, k?
Eli is bisexual. He makes no secret of enjoying both genders and he is a bit of a libertine. There is no MF on page sex but there are MF interactions. Readers who are sticklers for their MCs only sexing up the other MC will probably balk. I'm in the "they were on a break" camp in this Ross/Rachel debate or Eli/Jack, as it were, but there you have it.
Also, there is a considerable amount of push/pull between Jack and Eli which annoys me in contemporary reads, but when actual hanging is likely for one's sexual proclivities, I give latitude.
If I haven't lost you then let's get this party started!
This was my first experience with Silvia Violet and I am hooked! I've no idea if historicals are her usual fare, but this was SO GOOD and I tend to be persnickety when it comes to historicals. I get fussy if the verbiage and details get too lax. My goal is to immerse myself in the time period, in this case the American Revolutionary War and I did. If you're a fan of TURN, you should pick this up.
Eli is a dandy who owns a bookshop that also serves as a front for his smuggling business. Do not mistake him as superficial. There's more to him than meets the eye. He's an outgoing, genial, an opportunist, exceedingly observant and approaches life with gusto. Yes, he's a bit devil may care at times and once recruited as a rebel spy he plays the game fast and loose, but he's just so damn charming! It's hard to hold it against him. He's got any number of people willing to share his bed but relationships he shies away from. Until he meets Jack.
Jack is his opposite. Jack is honorable. He's honest to his core and the most basic, fundamental thing about himself he's forced to perpetually lie about, so he'd rather keep busy and to himself. He's harder to warm up to but his characterization was subtle, compelling and I ended up loving him and Eli equally. He's suffered a fairly severe leg injury which precludes him from the battlefield where he'd much rather be and puts him in New York under Constance Sullivan as a spy.
You catch the gender of that name? Yerp, Constance is at the top of the spy game food chain. She's sharp, canny and has a panache about her that draws people in-all the hallmarks of a master spy. Can I just say how much I love when women aren't portrayed as the catty/bitchy friend/ex/sibling/parent and/or shallow and vapid? Cuz I do. A lot.
Anywhat. Constance trains Jack who's a quick study and eventually they recruit Eli. The references to Washington, Hamilton, the rampant smuggling and how information was conveyed to the military were but part of why I loved this so much. I've said before how much I love thrillers but espionage and the inherent guessing game that brings gets my blood pumping and keeps me engaged. Marry that to historical accuracy, likeable characters and smart writing and I was glued to the kindle.
The character development was above reproach. They aren't infallible and that's what I like in my characters, makes them more relateable than the plastic people. The story is also nicely paced with a balanced division between the romance and espionage plot lines.
Lastly, THE SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*squeaks*
Eli and Jack like it rough. They also have dirty mouthes and are a little kinky. The frantic need they have for each other was something I found extremely sexy. Seriously, I'm glad I was not in public when I read this because the gasping, grunting, squealing and pancake eyes surely would've landed me in the ER by some benevolent soul had I been.
The conflict and resolution were both believable and irresistible. Even Constance got an HFN! The entire narrative was like butter and the next thing I knew it was over. I am holding out hope that there will be a sequel because this was so gorgeous and also because I want to know who was in those woods. Either way I can envision rereading this in the future.
Recommend to historical and espionage fans.
A review copy was provided.
There are a couple things that will be dealbreakers for some, so let's just get those out of the way so I can squeal, k?
Eli is bisexual. He makes no secret of enjoying both genders and he is a bit of a libertine. There is no MF on page sex but there are MF interactions. Readers who are sticklers for their MCs only sexing up the other MC will probably balk. I'm in the "they were on a break" camp in this Ross/Rachel debate or Eli/Jack, as it were, but there you have it.
Also, there is a considerable amount of push/pull between Jack and Eli which annoys me in contemporary reads, but when actual hanging is likely for one's sexual proclivities, I give latitude.
If I haven't lost you then let's get this party started!
This was my first experience with Silvia Violet and I am hooked! I've no idea if historicals are her usual fare, but this was SO GOOD and I tend to be persnickety when it comes to historicals. I get fussy if the verbiage and details get too lax. My goal is to immerse myself in the time period, in this case the American Revolutionary War and I did. If you're a fan of TURN, you should pick this up.
Eli is a dandy who owns a bookshop that also serves as a front for his smuggling business. Do not mistake him as superficial. There's more to him than meets the eye. He's an outgoing, genial, an opportunist, exceedingly observant and approaches life with gusto. Yes, he's a bit devil may care at times and once recruited as a rebel spy he plays the game fast and loose, but he's just so damn charming! It's hard to hold it against him. He's got any number of people willing to share his bed but relationships he shies away from. Until he meets Jack.
Jack is his opposite. Jack is honorable. He's honest to his core and the most basic, fundamental thing about himself he's forced to perpetually lie about, so he'd rather keep busy and to himself. He's harder to warm up to but his characterization was subtle, compelling and I ended up loving him and Eli equally. He's suffered a fairly severe leg injury which precludes him from the battlefield where he'd much rather be and puts him in New York under Constance Sullivan as a spy.
You catch the gender of that name? Yerp, Constance is at the top of the spy game food chain. She's sharp, canny and has a panache about her that draws people in-all the hallmarks of a master spy. Can I just say how much I love when women aren't portrayed as the catty/bitchy friend/ex/sibling/parent and/or shallow and vapid? Cuz I do. A lot.
Anywhat. Constance trains Jack who's a quick study and eventually they recruit Eli. The references to Washington, Hamilton, the rampant smuggling and how information was conveyed to the military were but part of why I loved this so much. I've said before how much I love thrillers but espionage and the inherent guessing game that brings gets my blood pumping and keeps me engaged. Marry that to historical accuracy, likeable characters and smart writing and I was glued to the kindle.
The character development was above reproach. They aren't infallible and that's what I like in my characters, makes them more relateable than the plastic people. The story is also nicely paced with a balanced division between the romance and espionage plot lines.
Lastly, THE SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"I want you to hold me down while you drive into me. I want you to wreck me."
*squeaks*
Eli and Jack like it rough. They also have dirty mouthes and are a little kinky. The frantic need they have for each other was something I found extremely sexy. Seriously, I'm glad I was not in public when I read this because the gasping, grunting, squealing and pancake eyes surely would've landed me in the ER by some benevolent soul had I been.
The conflict and resolution were both believable and irresistible. Even Constance got an HFN! The entire narrative was like butter and the next thing I knew it was over. I am holding out hope that there will be a sequel because this was so gorgeous and also because I want to know who was in those woods. Either way I can envision rereading this in the future.
Recommend to historical and espionage fans.
A review copy was provided.
January 13, 2017
The setting of this book intrigued me - a network of spies in NYC over the winter of 1776-1777 socializing with British officers to discover information on troop movements for General Washington. As Jack, Eli and wealthy widow Constance Sullivan set about unearthing information, each character deals with multiple layers of deception. Jack West is gay at a time in history when it was extremely dangerous (and his past serves as a horrible reminder of this) and while Jack keeps his desires close to the vest, he knows that his attraction to bisexual Elias Ashfield will not end well. Eli, on the other hand, is a risk taker and almost enjoys flaunting his sexual exploits but he, too, has a lot of emotional baggage. Constance Sullivan's husband was a British supporter while her allegiance lies with the Americans, but can she depend on her clandestine lover?
I liked the general plot but personally needed more than a few tidbits of information to frame the time period, and some scenes (especially in the first half of the book) seemed stilted as they are comprised of short conversations with little other details. Once Jack and Eli become lovers their relationship deepens as they slowly reveal their pasts and we get a better sense of what drives each man. Silvia Violet knows how to write a steamy sex scene (and this book contains several very hot ones), but at times I feel Jack and Eli were two contemporary characters placed into a historical rather than men of the era with beliefs and attitudes that reflected their time.
There were several similar scenes of parties with Jack, Eli and Constance teasing information out of British officers which slowed down the pace of the story a bit, but the ending was suspenseful as the spies race to save one of their own and make some unusual alliances. AND extra bonus points for Alexander Hamilton's brief cameo!
My rating is 3.5 stars but I realize that my comments about historical background and attitudes of the characters may not be a factor for other readers. Silvia Violet says she has more stories to tell about Jack, Eli and Constance and I'm looking forward to reading them to see how/if Jack and Eli craft their relationship in a dangerous time, and as all the characters work to help win the War for Independence.
I received an ARC from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Review also posted at Gay Book Reviews - check it out!
I liked the general plot but personally needed more than a few tidbits of information to frame the time period, and some scenes (especially in the first half of the book) seemed stilted as they are comprised of short conversations with little other details. Once Jack and Eli become lovers their relationship deepens as they slowly reveal their pasts and we get a better sense of what drives each man. Silvia Violet knows how to write a steamy sex scene (and this book contains several very hot ones), but at times I feel Jack and Eli were two contemporary characters placed into a historical rather than men of the era with beliefs and attitudes that reflected their time.
There were several similar scenes of parties with Jack, Eli and Constance teasing information out of British officers which slowed down the pace of the story a bit, but the ending was suspenseful as the spies race to save one of their own and make some unusual alliances. AND extra bonus points for Alexander Hamilton's brief cameo!
My rating is 3.5 stars but I realize that my comments about historical background and attitudes of the characters may not be a factor for other readers. Silvia Violet says she has more stories to tell about Jack, Eli and Constance and I'm looking forward to reading them to see how/if Jack and Eli craft their relationship in a dangerous time, and as all the characters work to help win the War for Independence.
I received an ARC from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Review also posted at Gay Book Reviews - check it out!
March 21, 2017
An MM romance set in the midst of the American Revolution.
Jack and Eli are complete opposites.
Jack is an officer in the Continental Army. He's reserved and suppresses his attraction to men.
Eli is an up-and-coming socialite and a patriot sympathizer. He's hedonistic and goes after who he wants, man or woman.
When the two are thrown together in a plot to gain intelligence on the British forces, they immediately clash. But there's also an immediate attraction between them.
Eli's seduction of Jack is slow and calculated. And when Jack finally gives in, it's hot.
While they're getting busy in the bedroom, the two also busy collecting intel for the patriots. I thought this aspect of the plot was very entertaining. There's a feeling of suspense throughout the book as Eli and Jack get closer to vital information.
Also, I really liked the spymaster, Constance Sullivan, a cunning upper-class widow. She was a total badass.
Eventually things come to a head, and it forces Jack and Eli to decide what they really want and what they're willing to give up. These two don't make it easy at all. Jack is afraid to commit for fear of being discovered, while Eli has a tendency to lash out when hurt.
But they do eventually get their happy ending. It takes a lot of work, but it's well deserved. By the end, I had no doubt that Eli and Jack would make it in the long-run.
If you're looking for a unique MM historical romance that delivers in romance, hot sex, and political intrigue, I'd definitely recommend 'Revolutionary Temptation'!
Jack and Eli are complete opposites.
Jack is an officer in the Continental Army. He's reserved and suppresses his attraction to men.
Eli is an up-and-coming socialite and a patriot sympathizer. He's hedonistic and goes after who he wants, man or woman.
When the two are thrown together in a plot to gain intelligence on the British forces, they immediately clash. But there's also an immediate attraction between them.
Eli's seduction of Jack is slow and calculated. And when Jack finally gives in, it's hot.
While they're getting busy in the bedroom, the two also busy collecting intel for the patriots. I thought this aspect of the plot was very entertaining. There's a feeling of suspense throughout the book as Eli and Jack get closer to vital information.
Also, I really liked the spymaster, Constance Sullivan, a cunning upper-class widow. She was a total badass.
Eventually things come to a head, and it forces Jack and Eli to decide what they really want and what they're willing to give up. These two don't make it easy at all. Jack is afraid to commit for fear of being discovered, while Eli has a tendency to lash out when hurt.
But they do eventually get their happy ending. It takes a lot of work, but it's well deserved. By the end, I had no doubt that Eli and Jack would make it in the long-run.
If you're looking for a unique MM historical romance that delivers in romance, hot sex, and political intrigue, I'd definitely recommend 'Revolutionary Temptation'!
February 7, 2018
This is a great historical which looks at the Culper Spy Ring established by Washington during the Revolutionary war in the late 1700s.
It very much reminded me of TURN: Washington's Spies, an excellent TV show which is also based on the same subject.
Although the characters in this are fictitious, the events they centre around were very much real in the turbulent time of the 13 Colonies trying to break free from British rule.
I liked that in this there are no good and bad, both sides act in the manner in which you'd expect in a time of war, with honour and cruelty alongside each other.
The characters are engaging and Jack and Elias are wonderfully drawn and fully fleshed out men with radically different morals and methods of behaviour. Their relationship is fraught with tensions but neither man can deny their passion either.
There are also wonderfully strong and resourceful female characters, again based on real life people, and it was a delight to read about how they were as important as their male counterparts in the Colonies efforts for independence.
The cover is absolutely beautiful, although Jack perhaps is drawn a little older than he is in the book, but it wonderfully depicts the strengths of each man.
#ARC kindly received from the author in return for an honest and unbiased review.
It very much reminded me of TURN: Washington's Spies, an excellent TV show which is also based on the same subject.
Although the characters in this are fictitious, the events they centre around were very much real in the turbulent time of the 13 Colonies trying to break free from British rule.
I liked that in this there are no good and bad, both sides act in the manner in which you'd expect in a time of war, with honour and cruelty alongside each other.
The characters are engaging and Jack and Elias are wonderfully drawn and fully fleshed out men with radically different morals and methods of behaviour. Their relationship is fraught with tensions but neither man can deny their passion either.
There are also wonderfully strong and resourceful female characters, again based on real life people, and it was a delight to read about how they were as important as their male counterparts in the Colonies efforts for independence.
The cover is absolutely beautiful, although Jack perhaps is drawn a little older than he is in the book, but it wonderfully depicts the strengths of each man.
#ARC kindly received from the author in return for an honest and unbiased review.
February 3, 2018
I really enjoyed that one. I'm not a huge fan of historicals but Silvia Violet definitely pulls it off. Eli and Jack are great together, and the way she handles the whole issue about being gay back in the 1700's was really well done.
The spying/war time part of the novel is very interesting and shares the spotlight with the gorgeous sex scenes I expect from Violet (you won't be disappointed, believe me).
Thankfully I didn't start this one till I had Of Hope and Anguish in my hot little hands. I wouldn't say that Revolutionary Temptation ends in a cliffy exactly but it is clear that the story continues from here. I've got an ARC and no moss will be growing on that one, that's for sure!
I wonder if Constance will get her own book...?
The spying/war time part of the novel is very interesting and shares the spotlight with the gorgeous sex scenes I expect from Violet (you won't be disappointed, believe me).
Thankfully I didn't start this one till I had Of Hope and Anguish in my hot little hands. I wouldn't say that Revolutionary Temptation ends in a cliffy exactly but it is clear that the story continues from here. I've got an ARC and no moss will be growing on that one, that's for sure!
I wonder if Constance will get her own book...?
February 7, 2017
As a lover of historicals, I can honestly say that I absolutely LOVED Revolutionary Temptation! The detail to the time really heightened an already great story of drama and love. Jack is wary of his inclination, with good reason, and Eli is not. Eli may not flaunt his lifestyle for all to see, it is a dangerous time to be gay afterall, but he also doesn't restrict his wants and he's certainly not as quiet as Jack thinks he should be. When they find themselves brought together for the cause of freedom from the British, well, lets just say nothing is ever the same for either of them again. Throw in Constance Sullivan, their boss in the New York spy ring, and you have an intriguing tale of love, espionage, freedom, that adds up to a wonderful read with just the right amount of angst and a little humor thrown in for good measure. A great addition to my historical library that I'm already looking forward to re-reading.
January 9, 2018
Historical romance has always been a favorite of mine since it was the first "naughty" reads I ever indulged in. I have to admit I did always want stories about gentlemen finding love with other gentlemen though I never found them when I was young and curious. As a queer woman, I love reading about love between people like myself throughout the ages; I don't need history to be compromised for the sake of my enjoyment which is why I am so glad Silvia Violet writes fiction where it's dangerous to be together yet the benefit is found to be worth the risk.
Revolutionary Temptation has a fantastic background in the American Revolution with plenty of intrigue to keep everything fascinating while the two main protagonists work out how they intend to work out their feelings for one another. I was captivated by the wickedness of Eli, charmed by the honor of Jack, and thoroughly thrilled by the unrepentant resourcefulness of Constance. I sincerely hope Constance gets a book or a short of her own because she and her Major Bradford completely deserve their own Happy-Ever-After.
There's lots of spying to go with the romantic entanglements. I enjoyed the addition of the details regarding the status of the troops of the rebel forces. I'd recommend Revolutionary Temptation to anyone who enjoys books written about Historical Americas, not only fans of M/M romance. If you ordinarily wouldn't take a chance on a historical yet are a fan of queer romance? I'd definitely say give this one a try. I doubt you'll regret it. To give the book credit where it's due, I borrowed the book through the Kindle lending program then bought it for my permanent collection because I know I'll read it again and I can't wait for the sequel to come out in February 2018!
Revolutionary Temptation has a fantastic background in the American Revolution with plenty of intrigue to keep everything fascinating while the two main protagonists work out how they intend to work out their feelings for one another. I was captivated by the wickedness of Eli, charmed by the honor of Jack, and thoroughly thrilled by the unrepentant resourcefulness of Constance. I sincerely hope Constance gets a book or a short of her own because she and her Major Bradford completely deserve their own Happy-Ever-After.
There's lots of spying to go with the romantic entanglements. I enjoyed the addition of the details regarding the status of the troops of the rebel forces. I'd recommend Revolutionary Temptation to anyone who enjoys books written about Historical Americas, not only fans of M/M romance. If you ordinarily wouldn't take a chance on a historical yet are a fan of queer romance? I'd definitely say give this one a try. I doubt you'll regret it. To give the book credit where it's due, I borrowed the book through the Kindle lending program then bought it for my permanent collection because I know I'll read it again and I can't wait for the sequel to come out in February 2018!
February 6, 2017
The only books I had read by Silvia Violet previously were her contemporary Thorne and Dash books, so I my interest was piqued when I saw this historical romance coming out. I was really pleased by what I got with Revolutionary Temptation, and I loved the mix of intrigue, romance and a bit of suspense. As an M/M story set during the fight for American independence, it also has the added tension of what might happen if our main characters are caught together.
Jack is more than willing to do what is needed for the rebel cause, even if what he must do is distasteful to him. He knows the importance of his mission, and is determined to do what is asked of him to help their cause. He's also very careful not to let his proclivities be known-even if that means denying himself. Thank goodness for Eli...who I absolutely loved. He's a bit flashier than Jack, more outgoing and has some secrets of his own. He's discreet-for the most part-but has no qualms about making his intentions known to Jack. The two can't help themselves around each other, and I liked watching them go basically from hookup to dalliance to falling for each other.
All of that is set against the backdrop of spying on the enemy during the revolution, making for a nice bit of tension and drama. There's also some society moments that balance out that drama, some of which can be a little tedious-but I find that to be the case in most every historical I read, mostly because I become impatient with all the proper manners and conversations.
I really enjoyed this story, and the last quarter of the book had me not wanting to put it down at all when the anxiety of what might happen to our rebel characters was heading for its peak. Revolutionary Temptation was a very solid 4-star read for me, and any fan of M/M historical romance will want to add this one to their library. This story is meant for readers 18+ for adult language (yes, even back then over 300 years ago) and M/M sexual content.
Jack is more than willing to do what is needed for the rebel cause, even if what he must do is distasteful to him. He knows the importance of his mission, and is determined to do what is asked of him to help their cause. He's also very careful not to let his proclivities be known-even if that means denying himself. Thank goodness for Eli...who I absolutely loved. He's a bit flashier than Jack, more outgoing and has some secrets of his own. He's discreet-for the most part-but has no qualms about making his intentions known to Jack. The two can't help themselves around each other, and I liked watching them go basically from hookup to dalliance to falling for each other.
All of that is set against the backdrop of spying on the enemy during the revolution, making for a nice bit of tension and drama. There's also some society moments that balance out that drama, some of which can be a little tedious-but I find that to be the case in most every historical I read, mostly because I become impatient with all the proper manners and conversations.
I really enjoyed this story, and the last quarter of the book had me not wanting to put it down at all when the anxiety of what might happen to our rebel characters was heading for its peak. Revolutionary Temptation was a very solid 4-star read for me, and any fan of M/M historical romance will want to add this one to their library. This story is meant for readers 18+ for adult language (yes, even back then over 300 years ago) and M/M sexual content.
February 4, 2017
This is a story about the honorable Captain Jack West and the scoundrel Elias Ashfield. When Jack got his leg injured he was task to spy on the British, which he deemed the assignment totally humiliating. He rather face the bullet in a battle like a gentleman rather than spying on the enemies for information.
While working as a reluctant spy/informant, Jack met Mrs Sullivan and Mr. Elias. Mrs. Sullivan is a woman he grow to admire, while Mr. Elias prove to be a sinful temptation.
On the romance part, I felt that Jack and Elias lack the emotional connection. They seems to be attracted to each other simply because they met their fellow sodomite. They even sense each other inclination during the first meeting. On the professional front, they doesn't seems to get along and Jack keep resisting Elias blatant flirtation. But too many times, Jack just flip a switch and succumb to his desire without any build up. I'm also rather disappointed that I didn't get to see them being committed to each other. Jack is too much of a coward to form a relationship, while Elias did try to fight for them, but in the end he also decided to move on.
On thing I didn't expect is for this book to have an unresolved ending. The couple got a rather unsatisfying HFN and the war is nowhere near done. It sounds like there is more to Mrs. Sullivan, but since I read this because is a m/m, I'm not really invested in her character.
While working as a reluctant spy/informant, Jack met Mrs Sullivan and Mr. Elias. Mrs. Sullivan is a woman he grow to admire, while Mr. Elias prove to be a sinful temptation.
On the romance part, I felt that Jack and Elias lack the emotional connection. They seems to be attracted to each other simply because they met their fellow sodomite. They even sense each other inclination during the first meeting. On the professional front, they doesn't seems to get along and Jack keep resisting Elias blatant flirtation. But too many times, Jack just flip a switch and succumb to his desire without any build up. I'm also rather disappointed that I didn't get to see them being committed to each other. Jack is too much of a coward to form a relationship, while Elias did try to fight for them, but in the end he also decided to move on.
On thing I didn't expect is for this book to have an unresolved ending. The couple got a rather unsatisfying HFN and the war is nowhere near done. It sounds like there is more to Mrs. Sullivan, but since I read this because is a m/m, I'm not really invested in her character.
June 27, 2017
Re-read June 2017
I think I liked it better the second time around. For certain I hope this comes out in an audio version.
4.5 Stars
I'm so glad I started reading more historical gay romance novels, otherwise I might have missed out on this gem. Color me beyond impressed with the tale and with the details. Also, fuckyeah for a strong, competent, amazing female spy leader; Constance was probably my favorite part.
SV also mentioned in the afterward that she has more stories to tell of Jack, Eli and Constance and I cannot WAIT to read them.
I think I liked it better the second time around. For certain I hope this comes out in an audio version.
4.5 Stars
I'm so glad I started reading more historical gay romance novels, otherwise I might have missed out on this gem. Color me beyond impressed with the tale and with the details. Also, fuckyeah for a strong, competent, amazing female spy leader; Constance was probably my favorite part.
SV also mentioned in the afterward that she has more stories to tell of Jack, Eli and Constance and I cannot WAIT to read them.
October 16, 2019
The story itself was good, with a nice spy plot. But...this isn't Hamilton, so when Eli said "wow," I was thrown so hard out of the book that I should have sprained something. At the very, least my suspension of disbelief was severely wrenched. I'm not sure if I'll be reading the other book in the set.
July 2, 2017
I really liked this. Can't wait for more of these characters.
March 24, 2019
DNF @ 28%.
While the Revolutionary War isn't a subject that interests me, I thought I would give this a go. Unfortunately, the subject is not improved by the writing, which can only be described as dull. On top of that Eli and Jack don't even meet until 20% into the story.
While the Revolutionary War isn't a subject that interests me, I thought I would give this a go. Unfortunately, the subject is not improved by the writing, which can only be described as dull. On top of that Eli and Jack don't even meet until 20% into the story.
June 29, 2017
Yes, I will admit... I love historicals! There, I have said it and I feel NO shame! *grin*
This was a story after my own heart! A "true" historical with a "true" gentlemen that just happens to desire men instead of women and a "not-so-true" scoundrel that will bed anything that moves if it will better his position in life... or, at least that is how it seems at the beginning of the story... but, things are not always what they seem! There are many tangents taken in Eli and Jack's relationship... duty to country, information to be gathered just to name a couple. Living in this time is such a hardship for our two heroes (but they are not the only heroes in this story... women were rocking this spy business also!) with the unrest of the Revolutionary War around them and their duty to their country and the fact that their being together was a hanging offense... not a good time at all! One thing we learned from this story is that evil wears many faces and that our enemies can sometimes be our greatest allies... hmmmm...
Even though I am in the minority when it comes to those of us that love historical M/M stories, I read them every chance I get and then run on and on about how great they are... I apologize for you having to suffer through my gushing comments... but such is life! *grin*
This was a story after my own heart! A "true" historical with a "true" gentlemen that just happens to desire men instead of women and a "not-so-true" scoundrel that will bed anything that moves if it will better his position in life... or, at least that is how it seems at the beginning of the story... but, things are not always what they seem! There are many tangents taken in Eli and Jack's relationship... duty to country, information to be gathered just to name a couple. Living in this time is such a hardship for our two heroes (but they are not the only heroes in this story... women were rocking this spy business also!) with the unrest of the Revolutionary War around them and their duty to their country and the fact that their being together was a hanging offense... not a good time at all! One thing we learned from this story is that evil wears many faces and that our enemies can sometimes be our greatest allies... hmmmm...
Even though I am in the minority when it comes to those of us that love historical M/M stories, I read them every chance I get and then run on and on about how great they are... I apologize for you having to suffer through my gushing comments... but such is life! *grin*
September 28, 2017
Well....
Thank god. I finished the book. That's not what I should be thinking at the end of a book. That's what you say at the end of a long race, a tough work week; not at the end of a book.
I admit that I truly and sincerely liked the first third of this book. This is the reason for the three star rating, otherwise I would have rated this a 2.5. I felt that the writing was good, and the spy plot was intriguing. I liked the tension between the two MCs. But once they got together, the plot fell away in favor of sex, sex, sex. I love sex in my romances as much as the next person, but when I find myself skimming through yet another melodramatic sex scene, well, then I know it's just a bit too much.
The balance of plot to sex was just way off. That's a pity, really, because this could have a very intriguing novel, and the author could have made the reader work for those lascivious scenes and then feel like the earned them. As it was, if felt like I was at the bargain bin tossing about one worthless item after another.
I'd heard many good things about this book, too bad they didn't prove true for me.
Thank god. I finished the book. That's not what I should be thinking at the end of a book. That's what you say at the end of a long race, a tough work week; not at the end of a book.
I admit that I truly and sincerely liked the first third of this book. This is the reason for the three star rating, otherwise I would have rated this a 2.5. I felt that the writing was good, and the spy plot was intriguing. I liked the tension between the two MCs. But once they got together, the plot fell away in favor of sex, sex, sex. I love sex in my romances as much as the next person, but when I find myself skimming through yet another melodramatic sex scene, well, then I know it's just a bit too much.
The balance of plot to sex was just way off. That's a pity, really, because this could have a very intriguing novel, and the author could have made the reader work for those lascivious scenes and then feel like the earned them. As it was, if felt like I was at the bargain bin tossing about one worthless item after another.
I'd heard many good things about this book, too bad they didn't prove true for me.
July 26, 2018
Im not always a fan of historical books, mostly because they get so boring. And it saddens me because I love history. But this was one hell of a book. Set in Washington's time when the rebels are trying to overcome the British. When sodomy was a hanging offense. It's got thrills add chills, betrayals, offenses. Keeps you interested on every page!
September 13, 2025
Enjoyable. This was engaging. There's not too many queer romances set during the American Revolution. However, I read it maybe two months ago and I've forgotten most of it, but I remember liking it.
January 30, 2017
Book & Author: Revolutionary Temptations by Silvia Violet
Rating: 4 Stars
As a lover of historical stories I was excited to find one that was set in the time of the Revolutionary war since I haven’t ever read one and I am kind of a lover of all things history. Added bonus was that it was written by Silvia Violet, who I love as an author. I liked the story but maybe there was just too much push and pull from the two main characters for me to fall too deep into the story or it could that my own mood affected how I viewed the story.
We meet Captain Jack West first in the story. He reminds me of the perfect historical character in how he speaks so formally and acts so politely and is in complete hate of his attraction to men. I found his idea of being a gentleman in all things, at all times intriguing since it was a character trait not seen often, but perfect for him on this path. He was hurt in the past because of his attraction for men and is really cautious when it came to his feelings for Eli. This was the major obstacle in their way. Yes, being a spy in that era wasn’t a piece of cake add being gay to that wasn’t ideal but Jack was the cause of their on again, off again relationship.
I immediately loved Eli Ashfield and his quick wit and charm and calculating behavior. He has this almost sly but quizzical way about him, like he’s always ferreting out little pieces normal people miss but with one wrong turn he could be an excellent bad guy. And he has secrets. His desires for Jack were fast and consuming but with Jack’s resistance to it he was constantly being hurt by him.
Both of these men backstories were not easy and were full of pain, which made it easy to want to see them happy. Which of course was not an easy task to had in this time period. I didn’t connect as much to them both as I can in a story, Eli was more the one that I warmed up to the most, but they were fleshed out characters that didn’t fall flat. But really, Jack’s constant “Yes, I want him.”, “No, I can’t.” grew a little tedious at times.
Constance Sullivan was an interesting character right from the moment she walked into Eli’s bookshop. She is the leader of their band of spies, as she says it, but the young widow of a loyalist. She is smart and fits perfectly in the world of spies since no one sees her as she truly is.
I never once questioned the time period and setting of the story and as a history buff it felt real and true to that era. The stories grim times of freedom from the British rule was accurately portrayed. The rebel army was willing to desperate enough to use spying as a way to get a heads up in the war against the enemy. The writing was well done along with the pace of the development of the overall storyline. The ending, in my opinion, is more HFN than HEA but that fits perfectly with the times and the terrible war. Even with all that going on the reader gets the “I love you’s” we desire for our men.
Like I mentioned in the earlier the tedious nature of the interactions between Jack and Eli were too much for this reader but all together it was a good read. You should definitely give it a whirl.
*I received a copy of this book through http://diversereader.blogspot.com/*
Rating: 4 Stars
As a lover of historical stories I was excited to find one that was set in the time of the Revolutionary war since I haven’t ever read one and I am kind of a lover of all things history. Added bonus was that it was written by Silvia Violet, who I love as an author. I liked the story but maybe there was just too much push and pull from the two main characters for me to fall too deep into the story or it could that my own mood affected how I viewed the story.
We meet Captain Jack West first in the story. He reminds me of the perfect historical character in how he speaks so formally and acts so politely and is in complete hate of his attraction to men. I found his idea of being a gentleman in all things, at all times intriguing since it was a character trait not seen often, but perfect for him on this path. He was hurt in the past because of his attraction for men and is really cautious when it came to his feelings for Eli. This was the major obstacle in their way. Yes, being a spy in that era wasn’t a piece of cake add being gay to that wasn’t ideal but Jack was the cause of their on again, off again relationship.
I immediately loved Eli Ashfield and his quick wit and charm and calculating behavior. He has this almost sly but quizzical way about him, like he’s always ferreting out little pieces normal people miss but with one wrong turn he could be an excellent bad guy. And he has secrets. His desires for Jack were fast and consuming but with Jack’s resistance to it he was constantly being hurt by him.
Both of these men backstories were not easy and were full of pain, which made it easy to want to see them happy. Which of course was not an easy task to had in this time period. I didn’t connect as much to them both as I can in a story, Eli was more the one that I warmed up to the most, but they were fleshed out characters that didn’t fall flat. But really, Jack’s constant “Yes, I want him.”, “No, I can’t.” grew a little tedious at times.
Constance Sullivan was an interesting character right from the moment she walked into Eli’s bookshop. She is the leader of their band of spies, as she says it, but the young widow of a loyalist. She is smart and fits perfectly in the world of spies since no one sees her as she truly is.
I never once questioned the time period and setting of the story and as a history buff it felt real and true to that era. The stories grim times of freedom from the British rule was accurately portrayed. The rebel army was willing to desperate enough to use spying as a way to get a heads up in the war against the enemy. The writing was well done along with the pace of the development of the overall storyline. The ending, in my opinion, is more HFN than HEA but that fits perfectly with the times and the terrible war. Even with all that going on the reader gets the “I love you’s” we desire for our men.
Like I mentioned in the earlier the tedious nature of the interactions between Jack and Eli were too much for this reader but all together it was a good read. You should definitely give it a whirl.
*I received a copy of this book through http://diversereader.blogspot.com/*
February 7, 2017
Wounded while fighting against the British, rebel captain Jack West, is given other orders while he recuperates in New York. To find out as much as he can about the British troops there. Soldier numbers, supply routes, plans for their next attack in the Spring. Jack is very reluctant at first, he feels like spying and gathering information in such an underhand way is not the work of a gentleman. And when he discovers his contact in New York is a woman, he feels even more appalled that the army would recruit a lady to do such work.
Elias Ashfield, outwardly a British Loyalist book shop owner, in his heart supports the rebels and anyone else who would take the opposite side of his cruel uncle. Eli enjoys life, enjoys pleasure, both of the male and female variety and wants to rise himself up in society so that he never has to ask his uncle for anything ever again.
Sparks fly when they first meet but Jack denies their mutual attraction for a long time. Jack is older, but not more experienced and his few encounters with men have been of the paid variety. He doesn't know what to make of Eli, who flirts openly and doesn't seem to care what other people think, despite the fact that if they were caught, it could be the hangman's noose for both of them. Can Eli ever make him see that what they could have together is worth the risk?
I've never read any books set in this time period before, so it was interesting to read about it. Jack and Eli are both wonderful characters, both different, but both damaged in different ways. It's quite a slow burn romance, as they don't really get together until about half-way through, but there is lots of pining from afar and the reader knows how much they really care about each other.
It's written well and the author hasn't fallen into the "gadzooks" trap. No "gadzooks" or "forsooths" here. The dialogue, while reading as historical, caters for the modern reader and the story flows well. All the characters are well rounded and I liked the fact that the women portrayed were strong in their own right Widow Constance Sullivan is their immediate contact in New York and I found it perfectly believable that she could work as a spy. There were real feisty women throughout history, so it didn't seem too incredulous here. Who better to spy than a woman who some men thought should be seen and not heard? She could listen where others could not.
The love scenes, while sensual and explicit, were not coarse and flowed well within the story. But the main part of the romance is emotional rather than physical. The physical aspects just add another dimension to their relationship. There is a lot of plot as well as the romantic aspects, it's a good beefy novel to get lost in. Just the thing for curling up on a Winter's day.
Danger, intrigue and romance. A very enjoyable tale.
Elias Ashfield, outwardly a British Loyalist book shop owner, in his heart supports the rebels and anyone else who would take the opposite side of his cruel uncle. Eli enjoys life, enjoys pleasure, both of the male and female variety and wants to rise himself up in society so that he never has to ask his uncle for anything ever again.
Sparks fly when they first meet but Jack denies their mutual attraction for a long time. Jack is older, but not more experienced and his few encounters with men have been of the paid variety. He doesn't know what to make of Eli, who flirts openly and doesn't seem to care what other people think, despite the fact that if they were caught, it could be the hangman's noose for both of them. Can Eli ever make him see that what they could have together is worth the risk?
I've never read any books set in this time period before, so it was interesting to read about it. Jack and Eli are both wonderful characters, both different, but both damaged in different ways. It's quite a slow burn romance, as they don't really get together until about half-way through, but there is lots of pining from afar and the reader knows how much they really care about each other.
It's written well and the author hasn't fallen into the "gadzooks" trap. No "gadzooks" or "forsooths" here. The dialogue, while reading as historical, caters for the modern reader and the story flows well. All the characters are well rounded and I liked the fact that the women portrayed were strong in their own right Widow Constance Sullivan is their immediate contact in New York and I found it perfectly believable that she could work as a spy. There were real feisty women throughout history, so it didn't seem too incredulous here. Who better to spy than a woman who some men thought should be seen and not heard? She could listen where others could not.
The love scenes, while sensual and explicit, were not coarse and flowed well within the story. But the main part of the romance is emotional rather than physical. The physical aspects just add another dimension to their relationship. There is a lot of plot as well as the romantic aspects, it's a good beefy novel to get lost in. Just the thing for curling up on a Winter's day.
Danger, intrigue and romance. A very enjoyable tale.
February 6, 2017
Independent reviewer for Archaeolibrarian, I was gifted my copy of this book.
Jack is sent to New York to spy on the British soldiers who have laid siege to the city. His orders are to find out as much as he can, and report back as soon as he can. He never expected to be faced with the most gorgeous man he had ever met, the one who might make Jack totally forget what happened to the last man he loved. Eli makes no bones about who he wants, and what he wants and he will go about getting both by any means necessary. Jack was not supposed to get into his heart!
Ok first up. The American Civil War is not taught in great detail in UK schools, and so, as such, some of the wording used to differentiate between the American side and the British side got a bit confusing, to me anyway. Once I decided to kind of ignore those words, I loved this book!
Jack and Eli have a powerful reaction to each other, and it does not let up all the way through the book. Even though Jack knows that their love could get them both hanged. Even though Eli will use whomever he needs to, to get what he wants. And to be fair, it was a little while for Eli to be totally honest about which side he was fighting for!
Set during the Civil War, 1777, it carries all the properness, the pomp and ritual that the Gentry of the time had, still do, to some extent. Including all the words and phrases used at the time. Which did make me giggle in places when Jack and Eli are talking about certain body parts. Has some of the modern day words too, but you know, made me chuckle in places where maybe I wasn't supposed to chuckle but I think you can gather what I mean! *message me, I'll explain if not!*
I really liked the supporting cast of characters too. Too many to mention off hand (and I have read other books since this and *whispers* I forgot their names!) But with twists I did NOT see coming. Really enjoyed them. Constance especially, surprised me and I wonder if Ms Violet has considered writing about Constance and her Major Bradford. Surprising chap, that one!
Really great read, just managed to read it in one sitting and I stayed up late to do so!
Solid 4 star read.
**same worded review will appear on Goodreads, Booklikes, Amazon.co.uk, Amazon.com, Kobo and Barnes and Noble**
Jack is sent to New York to spy on the British soldiers who have laid siege to the city. His orders are to find out as much as he can, and report back as soon as he can. He never expected to be faced with the most gorgeous man he had ever met, the one who might make Jack totally forget what happened to the last man he loved. Eli makes no bones about who he wants, and what he wants and he will go about getting both by any means necessary. Jack was not supposed to get into his heart!
Ok first up. The American Civil War is not taught in great detail in UK schools, and so, as such, some of the wording used to differentiate between the American side and the British side got a bit confusing, to me anyway. Once I decided to kind of ignore those words, I loved this book!
Jack and Eli have a powerful reaction to each other, and it does not let up all the way through the book. Even though Jack knows that their love could get them both hanged. Even though Eli will use whomever he needs to, to get what he wants. And to be fair, it was a little while for Eli to be totally honest about which side he was fighting for!
Set during the Civil War, 1777, it carries all the properness, the pomp and ritual that the Gentry of the time had, still do, to some extent. Including all the words and phrases used at the time. Which did make me giggle in places when Jack and Eli are talking about certain body parts. Has some of the modern day words too, but you know, made me chuckle in places where maybe I wasn't supposed to chuckle but I think you can gather what I mean! *message me, I'll explain if not!*
I really liked the supporting cast of characters too. Too many to mention off hand (and I have read other books since this and *whispers* I forgot their names!) But with twists I did NOT see coming. Really enjoyed them. Constance especially, surprised me and I wonder if Ms Violet has considered writing about Constance and her Major Bradford. Surprising chap, that one!
Really great read, just managed to read it in one sitting and I stayed up late to do so!
Solid 4 star read.
**same worded review will appear on Goodreads, Booklikes, Amazon.co.uk, Amazon.com, Kobo and Barnes and Noble**
February 26, 2017
Gay (well, one gay and one bi) spies in NYC during the American Revolution! This is definitely romance, and not super-researched historical fiction or anything, but I enjoyed it. I liked the characters, just would've preferred more history.
Also... you have Alexander Hamilton show up in your gay boy romance, and yet, he flirts with the woman? Whaaaaat?
Also... you have Alexander Hamilton show up in your gay boy romance, and yet, he flirts with the woman? Whaaaaat?
January 11, 2017
Rating: 3.75 stars
Review to follow at Scattered Thoughts and Rogue Words.
ARC provided by Silvia Violet Books in exchange for an honest review.
Review to follow at Scattered Thoughts and Rogue Words.
ARC provided by Silvia Violet Books in exchange for an honest review.
February 7, 2017
3.75 stars
“Revolutionary Temptation” gives an insider look in the efforts and sacrifices of the rebel army during the American Revolution. The romance here is mostly forbidden because at those times being a homosexual got people hanged. So, yeah this story is not your typical romance where the MCs meet, fall in love and live happily ever after. The MCs here continuously court danger and death to be with each other while also trying to free their country from the British Empire.
Captain Jack West is a young, honest and righteous soldier in the “second continental light dragons”, who would not hesitate to die for his cause. Jack is not cut out to be a spy; he would rather fight at the frontlines along with his fellow soldiers. But when he is selected by none other than General Washington himself to gather intel against the British army, Jack relents and moves to New York for his mission.
In New York Jack meets his contact/handler, Mrs. Constance Sullivan. She is the young widow of a wealthy loyalist who uses her connections and keen abilities to ferret out secrets from unsuspecting British army officers to assist the rebel army. Jack gets his lesson on “Spying 101” from Mrs. Sullivan. The whole cloak and dagger business of spying goes against his code of honor but Jack eventually understands the necessity of it.
Elias Ashfield is gorgeous and coveted by both men and women. He is cunning, resourceful and has an uncanny ability to read anyone. He pretends to be a loyalist while supporting the rebel army. When he is approached by Mrs. Sullivan to recruit him as a spy, Eli accepts.
Eli lusts after Jack from the moment their eyes meet and the feeling is mutual. Jack is determined to hide his true desires but Eli makes it his mission to get Jack in his bed. The temptation of Eli becomes too much for Jack and they engage in an affair that if exposed could get them both killed.
This story portrays the dire times when the entire country of America is trying to get free from under the British thumb. Lawlessness was rampant and the air rang with hopelessness and uncertainty. The rebel army was dwindling in numbers and they were desperate for any little advantage they can get on the British. That’s exactly where our MCs came in.
Eli and Jack’s relationship is a lot of push and pull. Not only are they spies, risking their necks for their country but also being in a homosexual relationship made them a big fat target waiting to be discovered. Jack has been burned before because of his sexuality and he is very cautious when it came to his desires. Eli, on the other hand is a little reckless and he knows how to get what he wants. They separate and then get back just to separate once again. I really felt the hopelessness of their situation. They were doomed for heartache even if they loved each other with their whole heart.
The climax is quite bloody and brutal and exactly the push Jack needed to stop pushing Eli away and wanting to go all-in for their love. The ending is more of an HFN than an HEA with the uncertainty of an impending war looming over them. But finally the couple says their ‘I Love You’s which was more than they could have hoped for.
*This review has been cross posted at GayBookReviews*
“Revolutionary Temptation” gives an insider look in the efforts and sacrifices of the rebel army during the American Revolution. The romance here is mostly forbidden because at those times being a homosexual got people hanged. So, yeah this story is not your typical romance where the MCs meet, fall in love and live happily ever after. The MCs here continuously court danger and death to be with each other while also trying to free their country from the British Empire.
Captain Jack West is a young, honest and righteous soldier in the “second continental light dragons”, who would not hesitate to die for his cause. Jack is not cut out to be a spy; he would rather fight at the frontlines along with his fellow soldiers. But when he is selected by none other than General Washington himself to gather intel against the British army, Jack relents and moves to New York for his mission.
In New York Jack meets his contact/handler, Mrs. Constance Sullivan. She is the young widow of a wealthy loyalist who uses her connections and keen abilities to ferret out secrets from unsuspecting British army officers to assist the rebel army. Jack gets his lesson on “Spying 101” from Mrs. Sullivan. The whole cloak and dagger business of spying goes against his code of honor but Jack eventually understands the necessity of it.
Elias Ashfield is gorgeous and coveted by both men and women. He is cunning, resourceful and has an uncanny ability to read anyone. He pretends to be a loyalist while supporting the rebel army. When he is approached by Mrs. Sullivan to recruit him as a spy, Eli accepts.
Eli lusts after Jack from the moment their eyes meet and the feeling is mutual. Jack is determined to hide his true desires but Eli makes it his mission to get Jack in his bed. The temptation of Eli becomes too much for Jack and they engage in an affair that if exposed could get them both killed.
This story portrays the dire times when the entire country of America is trying to get free from under the British thumb. Lawlessness was rampant and the air rang with hopelessness and uncertainty. The rebel army was dwindling in numbers and they were desperate for any little advantage they can get on the British. That’s exactly where our MCs came in.
Eli and Jack’s relationship is a lot of push and pull. Not only are they spies, risking their necks for their country but also being in a homosexual relationship made them a big fat target waiting to be discovered. Jack has been burned before because of his sexuality and he is very cautious when it came to his desires. Eli, on the other hand is a little reckless and he knows how to get what he wants. They separate and then get back just to separate once again. I really felt the hopelessness of their situation. They were doomed for heartache even if they loved each other with their whole heart.
The climax is quite bloody and brutal and exactly the push Jack needed to stop pushing Eli away and wanting to go all-in for their love. The ending is more of an HFN than an HEA with the uncertainty of an impending war looming over them. But finally the couple says their ‘I Love You’s which was more than they could have hoped for.
*This review has been cross posted at GayBookReviews*
October 5, 2020
4 stars
Jack is a Captain in the rebel army (picturing Star Wars, here) and has been injured. He is asked to head to New York and help gather information about the British that will inform the army of what to do next. Jack is a gentleman, and sneaking around and spying doesn't sit well with him, but he does it because he is asked to. And because the head of the spy ring is a woman, and Jack wants to be able to help if needed.
Eli runs a book shop, with a side of smuggling and writing seditious propaganda. His intention is to never be poor or in a vulnerable position again. To that end, he wants to make as much money as possible. He also has a honourable streak that he tries to hide. Eli is recruited to the spy ring by the spy master, and he and Jack have to work together, in spite of having completely different ideas as to what is acceptable in spying.
From the moment that they meet, Jack and Eli are intensely attracted to one another. Jack has issues from his past, and Eli also has his trailing behind him. It's funny how events that were traumatic shaped them into completely opposite personalities: Jack doesn't do anything risky, and Eli figures that you might as well do what you want because you're going to die anyway. (Within reason, of course. Eli doesn't actively court discovery.)
The characters, all of them, were well fleshed out, and the story drew me in.
Jack is a Captain in the rebel army (picturing Star Wars, here) and has been injured. He is asked to head to New York and help gather information about the British that will inform the army of what to do next. Jack is a gentleman, and sneaking around and spying doesn't sit well with him, but he does it because he is asked to. And because the head of the spy ring is a woman, and Jack wants to be able to help if needed.
Eli runs a book shop, with a side of smuggling and writing seditious propaganda. His intention is to never be poor or in a vulnerable position again. To that end, he wants to make as much money as possible. He also has a honourable streak that he tries to hide. Eli is recruited to the spy ring by the spy master, and he and Jack have to work together, in spite of having completely different ideas as to what is acceptable in spying.
From the moment that they meet, Jack and Eli are intensely attracted to one another. Jack has issues from his past, and Eli also has his trailing behind him. It's funny how events that were traumatic shaped them into completely opposite personalities: Jack doesn't do anything risky, and Eli figures that you might as well do what you want because you're going to die anyway. (Within reason, of course. Eli doesn't actively court discovery.)
The characters, all of them, were well fleshed out, and the story drew me in.
June 16, 2017
Well the Revolutionary War isn't my favorite historical period, still this integrated things into the heart of the war in an interesting way. I enjoyed that this wasn't all about the battles, but was more about a spying intrigue. The placement in time was well done, but focused on a story that could believably fit within the historical context without disrupting the history as we know it.
I liked that this wasn't a love at first sight sort of story. Sure there was a ton of attraction between these two right off the bat, but there was a lot of antagonism too. I appreciated that Jack didn't always appreciate Elias' way of dealing with things. Elias' moral ambiguity was a struggle for straight-laced Mr. Do Right Jack. Jack has such a strong belief in his cause, in the rebels right and need to stand up for their country. Elias and Jack are such opposites but I enjoyed them challenging each other and pushing each other, neither willing to just cave in. Their feelings developed into something stronger as each came to respect where the other came from.
I really enjoyed this read as a whole.
I liked that this wasn't a love at first sight sort of story. Sure there was a ton of attraction between these two right off the bat, but there was a lot of antagonism too. I appreciated that Jack didn't always appreciate Elias' way of dealing with things. Elias' moral ambiguity was a struggle for straight-laced Mr. Do Right Jack. Jack has such a strong belief in his cause, in the rebels right and need to stand up for their country. Elias and Jack are such opposites but I enjoyed them challenging each other and pushing each other, neither willing to just cave in. Their feelings developed into something stronger as each came to respect where the other came from.
I really enjoyed this read as a whole.
November 4, 2018
Terribly poor writing although the plot is decent
I was hoping for much more from this book. It has some good points: the plot is decent, and the love/sex scenes are fairly well done. But the writing goes beyond simple-minded to the almost unendurably cringe-worthy. It reads like a play written by middle school students, complete with trite and obvious stage directions. The author leaves no piece of dialogue or action without an accompanying, and annoying, explication, ensuring her tedious narration has e-v-e-r-y-t-h-i-n-g clearly s-p-e-l-l-e-d out. Did I say the writing is T-E-D-I-O-U-S? It's not just that the dialogue is stilted, but that it's composed of stilted platitudes as if the characters speak in a mash up of formulaic quotes cribbed from bad tv movies. Finally, non-descript, bland, and vague imagery fails to evoke mood, setting or time period. In short, the shockingly poor writing is a hindrance to drawing me into the story or engaging my imagination.
I was hoping for much more from this book. It has some good points: the plot is decent, and the love/sex scenes are fairly well done. But the writing goes beyond simple-minded to the almost unendurably cringe-worthy. It reads like a play written by middle school students, complete with trite and obvious stage directions. The author leaves no piece of dialogue or action without an accompanying, and annoying, explication, ensuring her tedious narration has e-v-e-r-y-t-h-i-n-g clearly s-p-e-l-l-e-d out. Did I say the writing is T-E-D-I-O-U-S? It's not just that the dialogue is stilted, but that it's composed of stilted platitudes as if the characters speak in a mash up of formulaic quotes cribbed from bad tv movies. Finally, non-descript, bland, and vague imagery fails to evoke mood, setting or time period. In short, the shockingly poor writing is a hindrance to drawing me into the story or engaging my imagination.
March 6, 2017
I don't like to write negative reviews, but I didn't enjoy this very much. I'm shocked the average rating is so high here.
It was pretty dull throughout with no real plot other than Jack and Eli's relationship and a lot of sex scenes. So many sex scenes. Then at like 75%, there was (what felt like) a sudden crisis, and Eli was in danger. Then, although I understand why it served the plot, we got two extra points of view, when up to that point it had been alternating between Jack and Eli. I don't mind extra points of view outside of the main pairing, but here it feels like clumsy structure. It would've been great to see Constance's point of view from the beginning - she has her own story in this book and is an interesting character - instead of only when the plot required it.
I really didn't feel Eli and Jack's love for each other for most of the book. They just seemed like they enjoyed having sex with each other, not that they admired or even liked each other all that much. We don't even learn about Eli's real motivations until very far into the story.
There's a happy ending, but the actual last scene really does not sit well with me. Warning for NSFW language behind spoiler tags (and spoilers).
I was originally happy about an openly and happily bisexual character (Eli), but on reflection, he fits some awful bisexual stereotypes - he's promiscuous in a way that seems unhealthy, using sex to hide from himself and to manipulate others. He is not using Jack; his feelings for Jack are genuine, or so he says. But it almost seems like he mostly wants to keep Jack because Jack won't really commit to him, since Jack is afraid of the possible consequences of having sex with men. I don't know how a relationship survives if it's mainly based on the thrill of conquest - what happens when you get what you want? I don't have faith that these two will be happy together.
It was pretty dull throughout with no real plot other than Jack and Eli's relationship and a lot of sex scenes. So many sex scenes. Then at like 75%, there was (what felt like) a sudden crisis, and Eli was in danger. Then, although I understand why it served the plot, we got two extra points of view, when up to that point it had been alternating between Jack and Eli. I don't mind extra points of view outside of the main pairing, but here it feels like clumsy structure. It would've been great to see Constance's point of view from the beginning - she has her own story in this book and is an interesting character - instead of only when the plot required it.
I really didn't feel Eli and Jack's love for each other for most of the book. They just seemed like they enjoyed having sex with each other, not that they admired or even liked each other all that much. We don't even learn about Eli's real motivations until very far into the story.
There's a happy ending, but the actual last scene really does not sit well with me. Warning for NSFW language behind spoiler tags (and spoilers).
I was originally happy about an openly and happily bisexual character (Eli), but on reflection, he fits some awful bisexual stereotypes - he's promiscuous in a way that seems unhealthy, using sex to hide from himself and to manipulate others. He is not using Jack; his feelings for Jack are genuine, or so he says. But it almost seems like he mostly wants to keep Jack because Jack won't really commit to him, since Jack is afraid of the possible consequences of having sex with men. I don't know how a relationship survives if it's mainly based on the thrill of conquest - what happens when you get what you want? I don't have faith that these two will be happy together.
January 25, 2018
Solid historical gay romance
This is a solid gay historical romance, set during the American Revolutionary War. The author weaves real historical events with fictional characters in a believable plot. It’s my opinion that the author consciously chose to focus on the conflict that Jack has when he meets Eli, who openly flaunts his flamboyancy much to the chagrin of the norms of the time. If Eli were a true historical character, his mannerisms and dress would’ve been muted for those times, but the writer never strives to make this story an authentic historical period piece. Instead the author has striven to tell a tale of romance when two men, united by a goal, with danger all around them as they struggle with their emotions for each other.
This is a solid gay historical romance, set during the American Revolutionary War. The author weaves real historical events with fictional characters in a believable plot. It’s my opinion that the author consciously chose to focus on the conflict that Jack has when he meets Eli, who openly flaunts his flamboyancy much to the chagrin of the norms of the time. If Eli were a true historical character, his mannerisms and dress would’ve been muted for those times, but the writer never strives to make this story an authentic historical period piece. Instead the author has striven to tell a tale of romance when two men, united by a goal, with danger all around them as they struggle with their emotions for each other.
May 29, 2018
Jack West is sent to spy on the British in New York during the Revolutionary War. His contact is Constance Sullivan, a rich widow. She is looking to bring Elias Ashfield, bookseller, into their group. Jack is not happy about spying nor is he happy about adding Elias to their group because the two men are attracted to one another. Lots of surprises await them all.
I enjoyed this book. It was well written. I liked the period which is not done much any more. I loved the characters and was surprised by how some activities were handled--both within the spying story and the love story. The story held me interest as I always wanted to know what would happen especially at the end. I look forward to reading the next book.
I enjoyed this book. It was well written. I liked the period which is not done much any more. I loved the characters and was surprised by how some activities were handled--both within the spying story and the love story. The story held me interest as I always wanted to know what would happen especially at the end. I look forward to reading the next book.
October 8, 2020
KU Read ~ Solid 3.5 Stars...
As a fan of MM romance, its fun to read about it in other timelines. This was the first Revolutionary period historical for me & I quite enjoyed.
Eli is a shop owner with rebel sympathies. Jack is a Revolutionary soldier on loan to the spy mistress, Constance Sullivan. Lots of plot twists and vivid secondary characters revolving around loyalty and honor.
Its Turn, the MM edition !
Unfortunately, there are some issues. I found Mrs. Sullivan's spy courses to be a bit implausible. While women in that period made the best spies, her candor on the procedure didn’t ring true. And too, the feelings between Jack & Eli felt false & forced..
I might give the next book a go later..
As a fan of MM romance, its fun to read about it in other timelines. This was the first Revolutionary period historical for me & I quite enjoyed.
Eli is a shop owner with rebel sympathies. Jack is a Revolutionary soldier on loan to the spy mistress, Constance Sullivan. Lots of plot twists and vivid secondary characters revolving around loyalty and honor.
Its Turn, the MM edition !
Unfortunately, there are some issues. I found Mrs. Sullivan's spy courses to be a bit implausible. While women in that period made the best spies, her candor on the procedure didn’t ring true. And too, the feelings between Jack & Eli felt false & forced..
I might give the next book a go later..
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