The great fuffa (Italian version below ↓ )
A purely narrative poem which is having a great success in the UK (and across Europe): it focuses on seven characters, at times in the form of a monologue, at times in third person. The narrative pretext is actually quite fascinating: it's 4.18a.m., we are in a street in South London and in that street, at that time of the day, there are seven people who, for one reason or another, are still awake, each in their own flat. The spark which lights the fire, then, is in understanding why those people are not sleeping, but the aim of the poem is that of turning their existence inside out. Nonetheless, it's impossible not to remark how the whole thing is heavily unbalanced, sliding towards two aspects:
1) performative aspect: the text is meant to be declaimed, Tempest herself tells us at the beginning of the book: nice try, but if you don't want a solitary reading, you simply don't print it in book form; I mean, the performative aspect is not an unavoidable flaw, but when it is not controlled and overshadows the poetic dimension, what you are reading may be literature, but it's not good literature for sure. In this case the poetic dimension is weak to say the least: repetitive wording (clearly poorly polished), plain syntax (always!) and minimized figures of speech. The poet is that figure everlastingly working on his/her language: here, if any work has been made, it has been quite superficial.
2) sentimental aspect: namely, characters' feelings always come first, blackmailing the reader: there is no escaping the identification with those characters, not thanks to the qualities of the text, but because of a surplus of exhibited sentiments.
However, those are not the main flaws: teenage nihilism is. Everything is black, but this is explained to the reader with a slew of platitudes, clichés and stereotyped characters. All of them invariably bummed out, junkie, disappointed by life and society: a good deal of wannabe Kurt Cobain and wannabe Sarah Kane, endlessly; no one, in that residential street in London, who woke up just to piss, or to fuck, or whatever one could be awake for in his lousy petty bourgeois life without hating it.
Examples of platitudes:
---1st EXAMPLE---
Traffic keeps moving,
proving
there's nothing to do.
Coz it's a big business, baby,
and its smile is hideous.
---2nd EXAMPLE---
How is this something to cherish?
When the tribesmen are dead in their deserts
to make room for alien structures?
---3rd EXAMPLE---
It was our boats that sailed,
killed, stole and made frail
it was our boots that stamped it was our courts that jailed
and it was our fucking banks that got bailed.
Examples of clichés:
---1st EXAMPLE---
All that is meaningless rules
And we have learned nothing from history.
---2nd EXAMPLE---
No trace of love
in the hunt
for the
bigger buck.
Here
in the land
where nobody
gives a fuck.
---3rd EXAMPLE---
We die.
So others can be born.
We age
so others can be young.
The point of life is live.
Love if you can. Then pass it on.
---4th EXAMPLE---
I've walked these streets for all my life
they know me like no other.
But the streets have changed.
I no longer feel them
shudder.
---5th EXAMPLE---
Thinking we're engaged
when we're pacified
Staring at the screen so
we don't have to see the planet die.
Examples of stereotyped characters:
---1st EXAMPLE---
Before I was an adult, I was a
little wreck,
pedding whatever I could get
my grubby mitts on.
Ketamine for breakfast,
bad girls for drinking with.
---2nd EXAMPLE---
Across the street, above the green
in the flat with colorful curtains
Alicia's wrapped in her blankets
Had leant back on the wall
She's gripping her knees.
Looking for purpose.
Shaking and nervous.
---3rd EXAMPLE---
Woops.
I'm lying in my bed
and my brain is eating my head.
I got these demons that I can't shake
My past is a vast place.
Can't get away.
---4th EXAMPLE---
Bradley is awake.
He's watching notches on his clock face
Just lying there thinking.
Limbs like fallen buildings.
Feeling like every day he's ever lived
is out to kill him.
---5th EXAMPLE---
I hate to think I'll make it to seventy,
potentially
seventy-five,
And realize I've never been alive,
and spend the rest of my days
regretting,
wishing I could be
forgetting.
It will be noted that the platitudes/clichés elements awfully reminds of Fight Club's narrative manner (and I do not mean that as a compliment). A randomly selected well-known sentence:
We’re consumers. We are by-products of a lifestyle obsession. Murder, crime, poverty, these things don’t concern me. What concerns me are celebrity magazines, television with 500 channels, some guy’s name on my underwear. Rogaine, Viagra, Olestra.
Updated to a couple of decades later, with very little variation, and there you have it: a touch of predictable environmentalism, a touch of ready-to-wear socialism, a touch of criticism towards nowadays lifestyles (what's more banal, today, than taking the piss out of the selfie-mania?), a touch of no-sweat feminism so to make departments of gender studies happy (slightly less happy those who read poetry beyond publishing phenomena like this). In Italian we have a word, “fuffa”, to describe those products, persons, works presented as intriguing but then turning out to be nothing interesting. This poem is fuffa.
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La grande fuffa
Poema puramente narrativo, che sta avendo grande successo nel Regno Unito (e in tutta Europa); l'azione si concentra su sette personaggi, a volte sotto forma di monologo degli stessi a volte in terza persona. Il pretesto narrativo è in effetti interessante: sono le 4:18 del mattino, siamo in una strada nella zona sud di Londra e in quella strada, a quell'ora, ci sono sette persone che, per un motivo o per l'altro, sono ancora sveglie, ognuna nella propria abitazione. La scintilla che accende il poema, dunque, consisterebbe nel capire il motivo per cui quelle persone sono sveglie, ma il suo obiettivo è quello di sviscerare la loro esistenza. Non si può tuttavia non rimarcare come tutto sia pesantemente squilibrato su due fronti, o meglio due versanti:
1) versante performativo: il testo sarebbe pensato per la recitazione, ci informa anche la Tempest stessa a inizio libro, ma è un trucco, se non si vuole la lettura solitaria non si stampa un libro; non che la dimensione performativa sia necessariamente un difetto, ma quando non viene controllata e sovrasta la dimensione poetica, quello che si ha di fronte forse è letteratura, di sicuro non è buona letteratura. In questo caso la dimensione poetica è inconsistente, con un lessico ripetitivo su cui si è evidentemente poco lavorato, sintassi piana (sempre!) e figure retoriche ridotte al minimo. Il poeta è colui che lavora sempre, costantemente, sul suo linguaggio. Qui, se lavoro c'è stato, è stato approssimativo.
2) versante sentimentale: ovvero i sentimenti dei personaggi sono sempre in primo piano, ricattando così il lettore che è costretto giocoforza all'immedesimazione non per qualità del testo, ma per surplus di sentimenti esplicitati.
Ma il difetto principale è un altro: il nichilismo adolescenziale, quello per cui tutto è nero sì, ma ci viene spiegato con una sfilza di ovvietà, frasi fatte e personaggi stereotipati. Tutti immancabilmente depressi, drogati, delusi dalla vita e dalla società: tanti piccoli Kurt Cobain, tante piccole Sarah Kane, all'infinito, manco uno, in quella strada residenziale di Londra, che si sia svegliato semplicemente per pisciare, o che stia scopando, o viva una medissima mediocre vita piccolo-borghese senza odiare la vita stessa.
Esempi di ovvietà:
---ESEMPIO 1---
Traffic keeps moving,
proving
there's nothing to do.
Coz it's a big business, baby,
and its smile is hideous.
---ESEMPIO 2---
How is this something to cherish?
When the tribesmen are dead in their deserts
to make room for alien structures?
---ESEMPIO 3---
It was our boats that sailed,
killed, stole and made frail
it was our boots that stamped it was our courts that jailed
and it was our fucking banks that got bailed.
Esempi di frasi fatte:
---ESEMPIO 1---
All that is meaningless rules
And we have learned nothing from history.
---ESEMPIO 2---
No trace of love
in the hunt
for the
bigger buck.
Here
in the land
where nobody
gives a fuck.
---ESEMPIO 3---
We die.
So others can be born.
We age
so others can be young.
The point of life is live.
Love if you can. Then pass it on.
---ESEMPIO 4---
I've walked these streets for all my life
they know me like no other.
But the streets have changed.
I no longer feel them
shudder.
---ESEMPIO 5---
Thinking we're engaged
when we're pacified
Staring at the screen so
we don't have to see the planet die.
Esempi di personaggi stereotipati:
---ESEMPIO 1---
Before I was an adult, I was a
little wreck,
pedding whatever I could get
my grubby mitts on.
Ketamine for breakfast,
bad girls for drinking with.
---ESEMPIO 2---
Across the street, above the green
in the flat with colorful curtains
Alicia's wrapped in her blankets
Had leant back on the wall
She's gripping her knees.
Looking for purpose.
Shaking and nervous.
---ESEMPIO 3---
Woops.
I'm lying in my bed
and my brain is eating my head.
I got these demons that I can't shake
My past is a vast place.
Can't get away.
---ESEMPIO 4---
Bradley is awake.
He's watching notches on his clock face
Just lying there thinking.
Limbs like fallen buildings.
Feeling like every day he's ever lived
is out to kill him.
---ESEMPIO 5---
I hate to think I'll make it to seventy,
potentially
seventy-five,
And realize I've never been alive,
and spend the rest of my days
regretting,
wishing I could be
forgetting.
Il versante ovvietà/frasi fatte, si noterà, ricorda terribilmente la modalità narrativa di Fight Club (e non è un complimento). Una frase famosa a caso:
We’re consumers. We are by-products of a lifestyle obsession. Murder, crime, poverty, these things don’t concern me. What concerns me are celebrity magazines, television with 500 channels, some guy’s name on my underwear. Rogaine, Viagra, Olestra.
Aggiornamento a una ventina di anni dopo ma con pochissime variazioni e il gioco è fatto: un po' di ecologismo scontato, un po' di socialismo prêt-à-porter, un po' di critica ai costumi (cosa c'è di più ovvio, oggi, del prendere per il culo chi si fa i selfie?), un po' di femminismo facilotto così da far contenti i dipartimenti di gender studies (un po' meno chi legge poesia al di là di fenomeni editoriali come questo). Fuffa, insomma.