5 stars because it was a great book, but I have a whole host of criticisms nonetheless. Overall, a thoroughly entertaining and quirky book that told a great story and had a great resolution to the crime. I appreciate that this book left me guessing and guessing and I did not have the murderer figured out. I honestly thought the murderer was numerous people other than who it ended up being. I appreciate the red herrings, suspense and the way the book kept me guessing in a very powerful way. And I like how Krissy’s ex-boyfriend was thrown right at the center of the madness since he’s usually only a side character with a lack of purpose. Also loved the progression of the characters and character relationships. Glad to see some growth in Krissy’s relationship with Eleanor Winthrop and the progression of Vicki and Mason.
What’s going on with the timelines between the books in this series. Several discrepancies in the passages of this particular book indicate the author isn’t paying much mind to keeping things in an orderly timeline. The events from the third book of this series, Death by Pumpkin Spice, were said to have taken place on Halloween, which is the very end of October. The events from the fourth book of the series, Death by Vanilla Latte, in which Krissy’s father visited had to have taken place throughout November, the month immediately preceding Christmas. The events in this book, Death By Eggnog, are said clearly to have taken place from mid to late December during the Christmas holiday. That said, several passages from Death by Eggnog describe the events from Death by Vanilla Latte as happening “a few months ago.” Logically speaking, it could have only been a month ago. However, on page 248 of Death by Egg Nog it reads: “It had been a few months since I last visited my doctor.” Krissy of course visits Paige, her doctor, in Death by Vanilla Latte, which logically speaking was again in November. Somehow the events from a month ago in Death By Vanilla Latte were up to a few months ago. Unless the Krissy character is intended just scatterbrained and gets her dates mixed up (as she mentally narrates this book), the author is making no sense of the order.
Was appalled by Krissy’s father. I said to myself ‘did he really just cancel Christmas last minute on his daughter to be with a new girlfriend?!’ Daughter had bought tickets for a flight and everything, bunch of presents bought and set up, cancelled work and Dad calls and says he’ll be spending it with a NEW girl he found. This is how he introduces a new girl into his daughter’s life with a mother who has passed. O......k!
The book lost me with the whole theme of director regularly abuses entire cast of play in which no one is being compensated for their time—beyond physical aches and pains and sexual harassment from a perverted Santa of course. Where’s the part where everyone quits and does something more self-respecting or advantageous with their time? If the director were a paying boss or manager and these were high paying, high end jobs, it would make more sense of the cast to sit idly by and withstand all of the director’s abuse and sexual harassment from a Santa. But what’s the incentive of the cast to stick around forbearing of all this aggravation when this play amounts to nothing more than a temporary burdensome volunteer activity?! Cast and crew biting their lips and pouting behind director’s back after he regularly excoriates them made little sense to me. The author made everyone besides the director look like they have no shred of self-respect, no backbone and no lives. If you are so desperate to have something to do with your life, you’re willing to take all the verbal abuse of a draconian director and sexual harassment and you aren’t even being paid squat, you have serious issues.
Even Krissy’s motives for staying in the play and taking abuse from the director were pointless. It’s mentioned that none of the cast or crew can mingle or socialize at rehearsals, let alone discuss the murder because of the strict rules of the director. Then after rehearsal no one is even in the mood to talk or socialize. Why not get in touch with everyone outside of the play rehearsals and stop with the goofy pointless play escapades.
Although, I didn’t think the play setup was well thought out, the author made it quirky and fun. It was definitely entertaining, amusing and fun the way the author described Krissy as spinning, gyrating and boogying randomly in every chapter, be it in the privacy of her own home for practice or at rehearsals. At one point her cat looks at her like she’s crazy. It also added entertainment as far as cast and crew involved and all the different players, but I would have liked the incentives and motives for even being at this play set up better otherwise make the director far less of a louse.
The lascivious antics out of Chuck (aka Santa) during the play rehearsal segments and how the predominately female-run play crew turned a blind eye to it all was wildly unrealistic. In any real life setting, ole’ Chuck would have been charged with sexual harassment, strewn all over the news as a predator and carted off to prison like that. I guess this book isn’t set in the present Me Too Movement era. (Although it does mention various elements of the present-day, like Facebook, Instagram, etc). No attempts at complaints or reports were made by anyone despite how open and overt it was. Apparently, he did it to every woman there overtly. The biggest resistance it got was a mild expression of disapproval from Prudence in a gossiping moment in describing him to Krissy. Lawrence, “the drill sergeant” director, throws a hissy fit when Krissy spins in the wrong direction; he’s not mentioned at all in the description of Chuck’s regular sexual harassment DURING auditions right in front of everyone. I guess it’s up to us as readers to assume he’s sitting back like a pervert dog just delighting in it all and taking it all in, while screaming about everything else less serious and criminal. Great cast and crew of people we have here!
It wasn’t just the Dad though, this book pretty much made men look like vile creatures as a whole. In the Me Too Movement era where men are being eaten alive left and right for various offenses, all the open displays of sexual harassment of women by men that went on unchallenged WAS NOT realistic. All the men preying on women in the book was creepy. At one point, Krissy becomes something akin to a misandrist, taking up for Trisha and jumping to the conclusion that Brad has sexually harassed Trisha without even knowing what has happened and without being present with them, mouthing off at Brad. The way they had the men acting and portrayed in this book, you could scare off all women into become lesbians.
As if the turning of a blind eye to Chuck’s sexual harassment by everyone wasn’t shocking, they then set up a memorial for the guy. Now the memorial was of course said to be more of an attempt at a party by Asia, which would have made a little more sense of things if everyone were on board to passive aggressively celebrate his death while painting the occasion as a memorial service. What came as a shock, however, was that most of the characters responded rather offendedly by her treating his death so flippantly and facetiously. Prudence, Krissy and Violet were described Asia’s actions as disrespectful to the deceased. They seemed far more displeased with that than all the open sexual harassment going on. Krissy who didn’t even know the deceased beyond the fact he freely sexually harassed all the woman somehow seemed it was disrespectful of Asia to be flippant of Chuck’s death as well.
None of the cast is at all worried or creeped out in chapter 11 when they return to the theater. One of girls, Asia, even considers having a memorial at the theater of all things. All this instead of worry and concern and distrust between all of the actors, since they don’t really know thecmurder. I guess it could be passed off as though they think Robert did it and has been caught
Krissy getting out of her car late at night at dark and during a winter storm in chapter 12 to ask someone—who might have ended up being a stranger—if they were ok because it looked like their car stalled was a pretty foolhardy, outlandish and brainless. No telling who could be in that car ready to attack and in a town apparently full of murders. I thought we were all taught things like this at like 10 yrs old, things like don’t talk to strangers let alone in the middle of the night where no one else is around. Very weird moment. Then she just so happens to run into Paul and everything’s peachy keen. Only in a fairytale.
Disliked Krissy buying Paul a Christmas present and then deciding it on her mind that if Will didn’t like it, he had jealousy issues and didn’t deserve her. Anyone in their right mind would have a problem engaged in what Krissy is, cheating. She rolled around and wrestled with Paul in the snow and the only reason she didn’t kiss him was because Paul thought better of it because of her bf. Yet Krissy decides in her mind Will has serious jealousy problems if he sees anything wrong with her buying a gift for this guy she has regularly been flirting with and admiring romantically.
As another note on Krissy’s cheating. This is the same girl, mind you, who considers Robert scum for cheating on her. In one breath, she describes Robert as scum of the earth for cheating on her, and in another breath, regularly flirts with another man she went out on a date with outside of her relationship. She calls Robert every filthy thing in the book for the exact same behavior. Hypocrite much!
The part of the story where Lawrence, Randy and Rita are openly divulging info to Krissy about their plans was poorly written. Throughout the entirety of the book until that point, Lawrence is portrayed as a scalding curmudgeon but all of the sudden he spends an entire chapter meekly and submissively sharing all his plans for a secret investment in a new center with Krissy. Not even the slightest annoyance at the fact she has just stalked them all was shown. This “harsh curmudgeon” is now servilely asking all Krissy’s questions and sharing a plot they have going up against the owner of the community center. Thought it be more consistent if the author had him blowing up over her stalking and prying and have him scream for her to get out while Rita explains everything away to Krissy while Randy calms down Lawrence. It would have gone better with the rest of the story.
I can agree with the sentiment from another user here that the book ended abruptly. Would have been nice to get the thoughts and feelings of the rest of the play cast members about Greg ending up the murderer. It would have also been nice to get Trisha’s response. Also the result of Rita, Lawrence and Randy trying to get a new building.