MAEJIC D’HIVER, LE DEUXIÈME LIVRE DU CYCLE DE LA PROPHÉTIE DU DRAGON ROUGE Façonnée par une terre de peur et de chaos où la maejic est strictement interdite, une jeune fille découvre qu’elle possède des pouvoirs que l’on n’avait pas vus depuis des siècles… Là où la moindre action s’enveloppe de plusieurs couches de mystère, une conspiration millénaire menace d’éclater à tout moment. Attaquée soudainement par un traître, la jeune mage découvre que son pouvoir maejic est affaibli et qu’elle est réduite au silence – devrait-elle faire confiance au jeune homme qui se porte à son secours ? Le destin de Alloway repose entre les mains de la jeune fille, capable de parler au dragon rouge de la Prophétie. Alors qu’elle cherche à résoudre les énigmes, elle est amenée à découvrir un grand secret qu’elle porte en elle.
Donavah's training in maejic has hardly begun when her life is uprooted yet again. The Royal Guard is going after the mages, and everyone with maejic has to flee or risk death. But even their flight is full of hazard after hazard. Donavah ends up alone, stricken of power and the use of her hands. And even if she can rejoin the others, she doesn't know if she can recover.
This book was leaps and bounds ahead of AutumnQuest. The beginning explains a great deal about the end of AutumnQuest, particularly how the rescue at the end had actually worked. The description of maejic is only slightly better than AutumnQuest, but at least it comes up front.
The real meat of the book comes after Donavah has been cursed and abandoned in the forest. Her power gone, her voice silent, her hands nearly useless, she struggles to come to grips with her fear, her helplessness, and her rescuer. Grey is patient and kind, and nurses her to as much of a recovery as she can make. He's a big part of what makes the book enjoyable.
The story flows much better here than in AutumnQuest, although the beginning and end are still awkward. Donavah is overpowered when she has use of maejic; nothing seems to be a struggle for her, and she keeps accidently doing things that blow away everyone else. Maejic still seems to be mostly used for sensing the moods of people and talking to animals, but at least there was an attempt to show other ways it can be used. Maybe someday I'll figure out more of the things it can and can't do.
The between-chapter scenes have gotten more cohesive as well, but they've also gotten disturbing. Donavah is 15, and many of the inter-chapter sequences were about 80-year-old Yallik's agonizing over how much he's in love with her. Including the first one.
There were also places where the prose was jumpy; Grey's explanation of how he'd been abandoned shortly after birth felt very random. He could have told it in pieces, or in a way that didn't feel so awkward. And since most of Grey's section was so good, it stood out especially.
Overall this was head and shoulders above AutumnQuest, but still not something I would recommend friends pick up and read. For one, it won't stand alone very well, so that means reading AutumnQuest first. For another, I only particularly cared for the middle; the beginning and end didn't work so well. I would give this book a Neutral.