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The Shy Girl Has a Gun

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Faith Mitchell was never confident. She was happy to blend into the background, much to the protest of her friends. At 16, her life was a normal teenage cliche. She was in love with Jace, the obnoxious player who she couldn't have, and her biggest worry was whether or not he would finally come to his senses and see that she really was the one for him.

That is until she is kidnapped and recruited by a secret agency of assassins. She is torn away from her normal teenage life and thrown into a world of guns, knifes and criminals. The agency mold her into the perfect killing machine, and at 19 she is no longer the shy girl that was snatched away from her uncomplicated life, but a ruthless killer who will stop at nothing to complete whatever mission she is on.

Then, the agency has a new mission which involves Faith returning to her hometown, and facing her friends, family and the very boy who broke her heart just before it turned into stone.

What will happen once Faith comes face to face with Jace?

Will the obnoxious player be able to reach out and get the old Faith back without pressing any of her wrong buttons, considering that the shy girl he once knew now has a gun.

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First published November 5, 2011

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1,093 reviews35 followers
March 14, 2020
I read this book a couple of years ago on Wattpad and it was good
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1 review
August 15, 2014
I think that the shy girl have a gun start pretty interesting, but then later after chapter 20 something I star getting bored, everything in this story is just to predictable for example holly is one of the drug dealer people yadda yadda stuff like that...
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12 reviews1 follower
March 19, 2013
This story is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, as well as general inconsistencies. Usually, those are pet peeves of mine as far as books are concerned. However, the story was good enough to keep me reading. In fact, I would say this is one of my favorites!
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152 reviews70 followers
May 30, 2020
I've been reading a lot of Wattpad books lately and gave them no more then 4 stars but this one just blew my mind! The Shy Girl has a Gun synopsis just caught my eye instantly, I mean, a secret agency of hot assassins? I do not regret picking it up at all. It was amazing! The main character was just so badass I mean come on, poking a guys eyeball out and also his hand just to get the pass to a door (that's the first one that I could think of), I mean freaking badass right? The action in this book is soooo freaking goood! The characters are just great, I loved Faith, Connor, Chris and Drake so much as a group they were amazing and just made laugh my ass off. Then again I cried, a lot. I was not expecting crying while reading this but the author just surprised me and I cried so so much it actually hurt (ha). For me the ending was perfect and VERY satisfatory.
Although this book has some grammar errors (just ignore them) I seriously recommend this to you guys.
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40 reviews43 followers
October 5, 2015
0.5 star. if that is even possible...

Might have been an okay book but the plot turns for worse. The supposed to be intelligent, kick ass heroine turned into a stupid, blundering fool who never learns her lesson time and time again. The hero is a jerk who only thinks with the head between his legs. Did learn from his mistakes but his character development will make you want to shoot him in the head and be done with him.

Tried to put up with it despite the bits of mistakes here and there but I can take only as much. NO. MORE.

Now I am gonna go read somethins that is worth my time and forget that I wasted my precious time with this.

miss-bone
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263 reviews136 followers
December 4, 2024
*4.75
I loved this book! I loved Faith and she was such a strong female lead! This book made me laugh so hard at times and mourn so much at other times. I absolutely adored the characters! The only issue I had was that sometimes certain phrases were repeated numerous times and the plot was a bit predictable and the whole thing was bit cheesy. However this was still an amazing read. I loved how absolutely hilarious Chris was! Also I loved the scene with Josh, 😂😂 (Btw my ghost shall forever haunt this author because she shattered my heart when she freaking killed DRAKE and ended my life.) Also the epilogue has me dying 😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️
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15 reviews
June 7, 2017
if you want action with humor and really hot scenes then you gotta read this. i really like how fierce and feisty the characters are also the second chance romance. i really suck when it comes to that. really love it and yeah it is awesome
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7 reviews
December 25, 2017
This book sure kept me reading it till the very end. I would have made it a one go but lacked the actual time.
Overall the plot was very good. I loved the fact that I wasn't able to guess the ending. It wasn't your classic cliché story.
I also liked the fact that Faith matured and changed throughout the story, and along her everyone else, like in real life: shits happens, people lose contact, friends and priority changes, and so on.
I'll read it again in a couple of yeas without a doubt :)
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1,267 reviews
September 28, 2019
I decided to DNF this book. It is on Watt Pad which was new and a great experience. It started out great and exciting. I personally do not like crude sexual content, dialog, or suggestion. This is the main reason I stopped reading this title. The author is talented with their writing in imagery as well as the general plot being exciting. However, the sexual content was too much for me to continue reading. If this is not a problem for you it would be a great read.
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20 reviews
December 22, 2018
This novel is mind-shattering, I was completely blown away by how good this book turned out, I really loved the characters and felt bad for them when misfortunes occured, I felt happy when good things happened. The author did a fantastic job for this book. It left me inspired, happy and beyond touched.
10 reviews
January 25, 2017
I LOVED IT!! I personally couldn't believe what happened with Drake. i cried. it was so good, and suspenceful
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Profile Image for Carol.
329 reviews1 follower
August 22, 2017
It was soooooooooooooooooooo boring. Man i'm suprised i didn't die of boredom. I just couldn't take it anymore
45 reviews
December 10, 2018
Seemed like an interesting subject but the protagonist wasn't actually a shy girl based on her interactions. Initially her character was all over the place but yeah afterwards it was inline.
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258 reviews
June 5, 2021
When I read this at the age of 12 I thought it was amazing.
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194 reviews
August 16, 2019
4.5*- rating'
oh my godddd i loved this book so muchh. i seriously did not expect to like this book as much but boy did it blow my mind. i loved each bit of it the snarkiness, the sarcasm, the romance, the steaminess the friendship the action E-V-E-R-Y-T-H-I-N-G. i just gave it 4.5 because of the editing mistakes but the story was on point for me. It had everything. loved loved loved it. and i will always be thankful for my friend to have recommended this book to me. i recommend this story 100%.
P.S- i read this on wattpad.
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53 reviews
July 23, 2017
DNF Stopped at Chapter 26, then skipped to the epilogue.

WARNING: SLIGHT SPOILER ALERT. READ AT YOUR OWN PERIL! ;)

When I read the synopsis of this book and saw the ratings I was really excited to read it and thought that it was right up my alley; you know total badass chick killing bad guys - love it! I expected action, guns and some sexy guys to top it off. From what I read of the book it had all of those aspects, but I found it a bit lacking. It just didn't hold my attention, unfortunately. Which is a shame because it had lots of potential.

Few bad points for me on this book is that like other reviews I've seen there are a few grammatical and spelling errors, but that didn't bother me so much. What bothered me most was that it wasn't very relatable or realistic. (Not that we can all relate to being a secret agent assassin.) I love assassin films and books! But this book just didn't cut it for me.

Firstly, the characters didn't have much depth. What I read didn't tell me much about them and their family and where they lived blah blah. I felt there wasn't enough to set the scene and understand the characters.

Also, in the beginning when the girl gets recruited to The Agency I wanted to know the reasons as to why they recruited her. I wanted to know the process of picking the candidate and why they were chosen. And to add, I expected to read about how she was trained to be an assassin. However, after she gets kidnapped and told she was now an assassin it just skipped three years ahead. Erm okay.....

Then comes the action. I found it sloppy. The assassins were sloppy. They just killed the bad guys out in public, smashed up stuff and didn't bother cleaning up. I though assassins were supposed to be like silent death, the kind that creeps up on you when you least expect it. If not that then I thought at least they should call the clean up team. Also, the story goes that they have to kill the drug Lord and his many minions who are all in one town. I don't know about you but wouldn't it attract the attention of the authorities if people are just being killed left and right?

But enough about the bad. Let's talk about the good stuff. I love the characters most especially Faith, Connor, Chris and Drake. I found them hilarious and their banter was well written and witty. I didn't like Jace to be honest and still don't (sorry). But when I skipped to end of the book Faith and Jace where happy and that's good I guess. Also, from what I deduced of reading the epilogue one of the four agents died (not going to tell who) and it nearly made me to go back and find out how it happened... nearly.

All in all its not a bad book. It's just that it wasn't my cup of tea.

But anyway don't let me influence you. Everyone has their own opinion, this was mine.

Happy reading! :D
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April 8, 2016
So, what happens when one is plucked from their home and forced into a life they had no idea even existed? Faith Mitchell was a shy girl and a pushover. She allowed people to walk all over her for the sake of staying out of sight and away from the attention of people. But one fateful night would change all of that. "The Shy Girl Has A Gun" is a thrilling, funny, and a laid back quick read. The author doesn't have a name, but more of a username. Makeandoffer is the creator of this fun novel. They are a user on Wattpad, an app used for amateur writers to publish their works.
There is approximately 250 pages, but Makeandoffer is able to deliver a meaningful story, with characters that are easy to relate to, and also make you laugh out loud. The title alone suggests a huge character change in a character, internally as well as externally. The writing is very causal and comfortable. It doesn’t cause any serious thinking or reflecting from the reader, which is one of the reasons why I enjoyed it so much.
The author needed to do some research to create the book as well. She or he would need to be an expert with guns, hand-to-hand combat, and different fighting styles. And since I actually fight, it was very amusing to read about people fighting in detail. The characters were relatable and fathomable. They were dynamic but also human. They made mistakes and paid the price for them. At first, when I started reading it, it seemed kind of cliché. But within the first chapter, my impression had changed dramatically. Just by the dialogue of the characters I knew that it would be different.
The characters are the bread and butter of the book. They made me want to keep reading it. They are funny, witty, and sharp. Their presences are strong and dominant. They're likable, even with their imperfections. I liked them so much that I could easily look over any mistake they did. Dialogue also played a huge role in building the personality of the book. It was what they said and how they said it. You would be able to pick up on those things and create a profile for the character, without even realizing it. You learn these people as if they're real, and you make a connection.
This book will make you feel something. It will make you feel mad when someone hurts your favorite character. If something sad happens, you will feel sad. The people in the book are just so likable that you cant help but feel what they do. The dynamic between the characters fluctuates throughout the book. At some parts, they are cut off from all emotions, and in others, they're opening up to each other.
This book will, undoubtedly, make you laugh, make you feel sad, maybe even bring a tear to your eye, but above all, it will make you feel connected. The characters are realistic and fun. The plot is winding and entertaining. It's a witty, enjoyable beach read.
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683 reviews156 followers
June 23, 2016
Contains a few spoilers!

This book was definitely more violent than I had been expecting. So if you're no into a bit of gore, IO would stay away from this one. Other than that, I thought the idea of this book was really great. I loved that our protagonist didn't fit the norm. She's physically strong, intelligent, and isn't "innocent". She sleeps with Jace knowing that he has a girlfriend, knowing that he cheated on her once before, knowing what if feels like to be cheated on. And she doesn't give a shit. It's refreshing. The confidence Faith gains over the three years that she's "dead" made me really happy. Her character growth comes full circle when she maintains that confidence, yet also is able to let her emotions show. She's no longer just a stoic assassin. She's herself.
The only thing I'd criticize about this book is probably that Faith's parents are never really mentioned after the first chapter. So does she never tell them that she's alive? This part was just a bit unclear to me.
Makeandoffer has easily risen up to my favorite Wattpad author list, and this book just reaffirms this. Her books are always original and creative, in my opinion.
This is yet another entertaining read that I will definitely read again some day!
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415 reviews58 followers
January 2, 2015
This book had great action scenes and had great character development on Faith's part. I was all set on giving it a five star rating despite Faith having an affair with Jace, the guy who dumped her for another girl. But, unfortunately, I couldn't. You see the author decided this girl would have no self respect so she still pines after him three years later. When she meets him on a job and he has to come back to 'The Agency' with Chris and herself........ guess what happens? You couldn't guess? well it's so cliché it should have been a snap. Yes she gets back together with the cheating whore. This decreased the rating by 1-2 stars at least.

On top of this there isn't really a proper explanation as to why Faith is targeted as a recruit for 'The Agency'.

This book had so much potential but unfortunately that potential wasn't reached.

Overall a pretty crappy book that was only saved by the awesome action scenes.
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174 reviews42 followers
April 12, 2023
rating﹕★★★★★
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I read this on Wattpad a while ago, but I did a reread of this today! I didn't bring any books to today with me to school because I wanted to focus on my current reading for English, but I ended resorting to Wattpad instead...

This is one of my favourite books on Wattpad, when I first read the synopsis I was like "oh this is definitely something I like". There were grammatical errors in this, but I barely noticed them because I was so into the story. The twists in this was very unexpected as well: Drake, Holly + that drug dealer, all the revelations had me going "wow, that was unexpected".

There is the cheating trope involved in this, but it was in my opinion, done pretty well. Also the second chance romance between Faith and Jace. I honestly love all the characters in this.

reread (the day this review is written): 12/04/23
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12 reviews29 followers
November 30, 2019
This author certainly has a way of writing, so much so I read this book straight after 'Illegal My Ass'. The characters are so powerful and entertaining with a storyline that has you hooked the entire way through. With one specific scene that truly shocked me, I sat and cried as I finished the book, not being able to put it down afterwards. Every chapter really shows how a great book can have a bad-ass female lead, and you instantly fall in love with her strength and relationships with the other characters. The story is not particularly long, so you're definitely left wanting more detail and extra chapters, however I would happily recommend and re read this book.
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128 reviews18 followers
July 17, 2014
So, once again Makeandoffer has created characters with great chemistry. She has sent me down another emotional, snarky tunnel of love but this one has some splashes of kickassness. It has been over a year since I have read this and I still feel like it is one of my faves.

A lot of asskickery. Yes, this story has some writing errors and is a little cliche' but don't let that deter you from reading it. Makeandoffer has such a great wiseass, wittiness, humor that will draw you in and keep you reading!
1 review
September 12, 2014
This was one of my favorite books I've ever encountered. I loved this book because the beginning theme starts off in high school. It's relatable at some parts to other high schooler's, except obviously the kidnapping and killing part. My favorite part of the book was when Faith get's kidnapped. It made me think about how your life can change in minutes and you never know what's going to happen. I also thought about how they say to, "keep your eyes on the quiet ones." I don't usually like reading but I never wanted to put this book down.
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192 reviews23 followers
October 28, 2014
Good story and very creative. There were a lot of grammar errors, spelling errors, and some parts got too repetitive. Nevertheless, I thought it was well thought out and had a variety of character personalities. I loved the idea of a regular girl turned assassin, but the beginning was a bit rough and dull. However, after that part, the story came together very smoothly and kept the reader interested nearly the entire time. This was my first time reading a Wattpad story, and overall, I'm pretty pleased with my experience.
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22 reviews
July 6, 2013
I read this book in Wattpad a year and a half ago and I don't vaguely remember most of the stuff but here goes.. What struck me the most in this book was the fact that she was TOTALLY in love with the dude. And after her transformation.... HER FEELINGS FOE HIM COMPLETELY CHANGED. Maybe not that much but still. I admire her for containing the way she feels and locking them up deep inside her heart..
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3 reviews
March 29, 2014
Out of all the books on Wattpad this is one of my favorites! I can't tell you how much I would love it became published! I feel like if all the grammatical errors were fixed and some small parts were rewritten it would be amazing. I loved the characters and the plot. It always kept me on my toes and I loved it. It felt like I was watching a action movie play out through my head. It would make a awesome action movie actually! All I can say is it keeps me coming back. Loved it.
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28 reviews25 followers
May 26, 2015
Loved this story. The secret agency. The main character Faith is awesome in killing her targets. It was more violent than I thought it was going to be, which made this even more of an awesome read (well in my mind I like the gore so what). Drake, Chris, Connor, and Faith were more my fave, Jace what can I say even in the end I still did not like him but I did hate him a lot less in the end so yup.
53 reviews
December 27, 2022
For me the beginning was amazing and it really caught my attention , still don't understand how the girl was shy , a thing I did not like was the fact that she would talk shit about at that time his current girlfriend when she was doing the exact thing .
Later it all just was too predictable , didn't like the love interest then don't like him now. Came to the point were I couldn't read it all and just went to the end , as I predicted she ended with Jace ,found that disappointing .
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