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The Watcher
A Text-based suspense story found on Hooked.
Read Part one here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6d2jP...
Read Part one here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6d2jP...
25 pages, Unknown Binding
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March 18, 2017
Well, damn, this was actually pretty good. I love the writing style—or text style? The writing is very good in itself. The syntax goes from simple to compound and complex, etc.
The story is pretty gripping, too, and I can't wait for the third part/book.
I watched the first 7/8 episodes on YouTube—well, read.
The grammar got increasingly bad through the episodes, though. By the 5th episode of the second book, I was seeing typo after typo. One includes "battel" instead of battle.
The author would benefit a lot from the use of a serial comma. I recommend they search it up and incorporate it into their writing.
The story is pretty gripping, too, and I can't wait for the third part/book.
I watched the first 7/8 episodes on YouTube—well, read.
The grammar got increasingly bad through the episodes, though. By the 5th episode of the second book, I was seeing typo after typo. One includes "battel" instead of battle.
The author would benefit a lot from the use of a serial comma. I recommend they search it up and incorporate it into their writing.
April 20, 2017
Very creepy and gripping. The text style story telling will definitely appeal to teenage readers. Since teens are pretty much glued to their phones and electronics, having a scary story told through this kind of media would be particularly terrifying. :) especially when read on an actual cellphone, I like I did. :) honestly, I was a little creepy out at times, since I read part of it late at night with all the lights off. >:) nothing's more fun than horror stories late at night!
Since it's so short and told through texts, there's little room for actually characterization, but the formatting and pacing is so excellent that it definitely makes up for that. Super creepy edge of the seat thriller. :)
I'd definitely recommend this to fans of horror stories & short stories. :) particularly teens.
Since it's so short and told through texts, there's little room for actually characterization, but the formatting and pacing is so excellent that it definitely makes up for that. Super creepy edge of the seat thriller. :)
I'd definitely recommend this to fans of horror stories & short stories. :) particularly teens.
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