What an up-and-down series this is proving to be !! Books 1 & 3 I gave 5*, books 2 & 4 only 2* and I packed book 2 in before the end, too. I almost did the same with this one as well as in places it became a real slog and I just wasn't enjoying it very much at all. A lot of it was all over the place or not written in the order of events occurring, making it none too cohesive and quite the chore to wade through, I felt.
Near the start, Daniel heads round to the first victim's home to trawl through it and says this in conclusion, "The woman had lived in terror." Well, I have no idea why he thought this in the least ! Then an ex-but-one of this victim had to take time off work for a few days after learning of her murder, which seemed a tad extreme when they'd been separated for more than a year. This passage left me confused, "We're aware of several parts of the harbor project, though the value of the land where you found her isn't important to us. We'll get back to that later, but first tell us how you found her".....my confusion being down to the mention of land value, which nobody had referred to in the first place, so why mention it ?? Then this paragraph, "You're going back to your cell, and you're going to do whatever it takes to remember what was on that card, or whatever it was." Again, it's a nonsense line as he had stated it was a business card already, so there was no need for the last few words. It's like the translator suddenly got bored and just started writing stuff down 'literally' without putting any thought into it. Yet it's the same translator as usual so I'm not sure why he's started writing in this fashion. Towards the end, the plot got more than a little farfetched and if an occurrence then had appeared earlier on in the story, I'd have given up on it as it just wasn't believable to me. This line was another that came across as nonsensical as well, "Lisa clutched her pants." Perhaps something was lost in translation there.
I also noticed throughout, that whenever a colour needed to be referenced, the author went with green....whether it was a car or a sweater or a jewellery gem !! A dead body full of tattoos was apparently going to be "tough to identify" whereas I'd have thought it pretty easy, an was used and not a a couple of times, odd words were dropped from sentences, speechmarks missed here and there along with fullstops. Then she did something that for me ALWAYS costs a book 1*-she spelt one of her character's names wrong !! So we had Sampson and then all of a sudden Samson.....I really think a lot of these mistakes shouldn't have managed to make it through to the finished article. Then this book actually ends on the Kindle at 84% and then we get a preview of another one by her. SEVEN chapters of it !!
I'll try the 5th book when it is available and that will be the decider for me as to whether I stick with this series or not.