- Quote: “Get some rest, everyone. We will keep waiting. Soon…the Endwar will come soon…”
- Thoughts: This is another "filler" book, as it doesn't really have any progression in the main storyline other than the rise in the Main Character social status among the Daofathers.
Besides that, it's a good book with a nice pacing and great battles
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These are my personal opinions, you may discord, my final rating of the book is not necessarily linked to this system and may diverge from it.
Book Storyline
- Originality: 4/5 stars
- Development: 4/5 stars
- Enjoyment: 4/5 stars
- Writing stile: 3/5 stars
- Funnyness: 3/5 stars
- Epicness: 4/5 stars
- Scaryness: 4/5 stars
- Smartness: 1/5 stars
- Addictiveness: 4/5 stars
- Plot twists: 2/5 stars
- Pace: 4/5 stars
- Storyline planning: 3/5 stars OR /5 negative stars
- Ending: 3/5 stars OR /5 negative stars
- Holes: 3/5 negative stars
- Self contained (Y/N): ×
- Cliffhanger (Y/N): ×
- Adult (Y/N): ×
- Mystery (Y/N): ×
- Treasure Hunting (Y/N): ×
- Violence level: only some kills and slavery
- Tech level: irrelevant
- Religion level: fictional daoism and Buddhism
- Main genre: xianxia
- Subgenre: Shounen
- Point of view: Main Character
- Aftertaste: good Arch, I'm enjoying it
World
- Originality: 4/5 stars
- Variety: 5/5 stars
- Consistency: 3/5 stars
- Impact on the story: 2/5 stars
- Maps: -/5 stars
- Real world (Y/N): ×
- Fantasy based on real world (Y/N): ×
- Journey (Y/N): ×
- Main scenario: Primordial Ruunworld
Characters
- Total amount: bot too many in this one
- Points of view: Main Character wirh interludes
- Main characters: Ji Ning
- Secondary: those whose power level is strong enough that Ji Ning still gives a $#!¥
- Ordinary: Some extras to increase death count
- Overall quality: 4/5 stars
- Main: 3/5 stars
- Secondary: 4/5 stars
- Consistency: 4/5 stars
- Connection: 3/5 stars
- Dialogs: 2/5 Stars
- Interactions: 3/5 Stars
- Underworld Crew (✓/×): ×
- Training (✓/×): ✓
- Romance: ×
- Notable best characters: ---
- Notable worse characters: Ji Ning
Setting
- Historical importance: 5/5 Stars
- Historical deep: 3/5 Stars
- Historical score: 4/5 Stars
- Geopolitical importance: 2/5 Stars
- Geopolitical variety: 3/5 Stars
- Geopolitical score: 2/5 Stars
- Setting overall score: 3/5 Stars
- Tension: 2/5 Stars
- Atmosphere: 2/5 Stars
- Classic Supernatural (✓/×): ×
- Superpowers (✓/×): ✓
- Non-human races (Y/N): ✓
- Virtual Reality (Y/N): ×
- Monsters (Y/N): ✓
- About the setting: very crude worldbuilding skills with a bad tendency to overcompensate with stupid measures, by now it's already accepted as part of the story
Rules
- Devised system: 3/5 stars
- System complexity: 3/5 stars
- System explanation: 3/5 stars
- Impact on storyline: 5/5 stars
- Rulebreaker (Y/N): × ( not in this book)
- Type of Rule: Xianxia
Xianxia
- Battle phase: 5/5 stars
- Skill innovation: 5/5 stars
- Treasure hunting phase: 1/5 stars
- Cultivation phase: 1/5 stars
Series Storyline
These are scored based on the series up to the end of this book:
- Impact of this book in storyline: 1/5 stars
- Originality: 5/5 stars
- Development: 4/5 stars
- Enjoyment: 5/5 stars
- Writing stile: 3/5 stars
- Funnyness: 1/5 stars
- Epicness: 3/5 stars
- Scaryness: 1/5 stars
- Smartness: 2/5 stars
- Addictiveness: 4/5 stars
- Plot twists: 3/5 stars
- Pace: 4/5 stars
- Storyline planning: 4/5 stars OR /5 negative stars
- Holes: 4/5 negative stars
- Can be read as a standalone (✓/×): ×