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Forbidden: Better Wear Your Flak Jacket
1. Forbidden is the recipient of Readers' Favorite International Book Contest's gold medal in the thriller/terrorist category.
2. Wishing Shelf Book Awards - Finalist
3. Canada Book Award
Gunfire echoes within the walls of a Middle East police compound. Screams of terror are brutally silenced. Police captain Hashim Sharif captures one survivor. Soon Eliza MacKay will wish she had died with her companions.
The vile act of terrorism is covered-up. Sharif becomes the reluctant keeper of his city's bloody secret - and the witness, MacKay. His corrupt superiors have a gun rammed against his skull. Disloyalty to the mayor will be rewarded with being buried alive.
Whatever the cost, his government’s honor must be restored. Secretly, Sharif hunts forensic evidence. Who is responsible for the murder of fifteen American volunteers? And, why did MacKay lie about her identity? He can’t trust her. Her mental illness is going to get both of them killed.
When he receives orders to dispose of MacKay, his Muslim faith is tested. Murder an innocent in cold blood? He will suffer Allah's eternal wrath.
CIA Agent Hutchinson has the lying Sharif in his cross hairs. Sharif dodges the agent’s traps almost as easily as the hitman on his tail. When Sharif discovers the shocking truth, he loses all hope of survival.
What is worth dying for? Perhaps it’s not bringing a madman to justice. Could it be saving the life of a woman who kick-started his numb heart? On the knife edge of risk, Sharif plots an act most forbidden and fatal.
2. Wishing Shelf Book Awards - Finalist
3. Canada Book Award
Gunfire echoes within the walls of a Middle East police compound. Screams of terror are brutally silenced. Police captain Hashim Sharif captures one survivor. Soon Eliza MacKay will wish she had died with her companions.
The vile act of terrorism is covered-up. Sharif becomes the reluctant keeper of his city's bloody secret - and the witness, MacKay. His corrupt superiors have a gun rammed against his skull. Disloyalty to the mayor will be rewarded with being buried alive.
Whatever the cost, his government’s honor must be restored. Secretly, Sharif hunts forensic evidence. Who is responsible for the murder of fifteen American volunteers? And, why did MacKay lie about her identity? He can’t trust her. Her mental illness is going to get both of them killed.
When he receives orders to dispose of MacKay, his Muslim faith is tested. Murder an innocent in cold blood? He will suffer Allah's eternal wrath.
CIA Agent Hutchinson has the lying Sharif in his cross hairs. Sharif dodges the agent’s traps almost as easily as the hitman on his tail. When Sharif discovers the shocking truth, he loses all hope of survival.
What is worth dying for? Perhaps it’s not bringing a madman to justice. Could it be saving the life of a woman who kick-started his numb heart? On the knife edge of risk, Sharif plots an act most forbidden and fatal.
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Published December 12, 2016
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June 9, 2017
What a thrill a minute ride this book takes you on. The characters are futuristic and totally awesome. I loved that times had allowed for more freedom for women. I kept following the story and each time I would think it was getting to the conclusion I drew, it would slam-bang me into another direction.
The love story part was really well told and I was happy with the relationship of these two different people. I found this to be a creative and unique storyline that kept me intrigued and on pins and needles.
The love story part was really well told and I was happy with the relationship of these two different people. I found this to be a creative and unique storyline that kept me intrigued and on pins and needles.
May 27, 2017
Spiritual Suspense
At a time when terrorists are perverting the tenets of Islam to pursue their sick agenda, it was welcome and interesting to read the life-affirming aspects of Islam in this story.
Eliza MacKay is a Canadian paramedic joining an American Habitat for Humanity mission to the Middle East. As she tries to calm down in a strange land, she tells herself,
"This is 2047. Women don't wear the burqa now. They even hold government positions."
I like this future! There has been a civil war and a realignment into the Republic of Islamic Provinces and Territories (RIPT).
When the Americans get ambushed and murdered, Eliza survives. Under orders to cover up the massacre, police captain Hashim Sharif wonders who this lovely blonde really is. Sharif grows to care for her, and he protects Eliza from those who want her dead.
Eliza has endured the pain of losing her family in a car accident--a trauma she can't fathom. She thinks the black-haired captain is gruff and untrustworthy at first, but she does admire his deep faith.
She listened as the ancient city of Samarra woke up. The haunting musical sound of the Muezzin called the devoted. With each of the four daily prayers, the city's ambiance shifted. An air of tranquility was palpable.
Even Eliza, who had no religious convictions, sat in quiet contemplation, deeply moved. She stilled her mind's chatter and waited.
Waited for a thread of wisdom to be shared by The One Most High. Waited for merciful revelation of why she had survived and her little boys had suffered and died.
She eavesdropped on Sharif's prayers. The change in his demeanor struck her. He became like a child singing songs of praise to an adoring father. His devotion to Islam and the teachings of the prophet Muhammad appeared to be based on genuine love, rather than fear of Allah's punishment.
Sharif is troubled himself. His ex-wife left him, and his children are with his father in order to keep them safe. He doesn't know which of his superiors to trust.
The slow burn of romance between Eliza and Sharif is just what each needs to heal and strengthen. I loved how Sharif incites Eliza's anger to help her confront her fear of driving again.
"Women shouldn't be allowed to drive anyway."
Eliza stared venomously into his face. "What did you say?"
"You heard me. Women shouldn't be allowed in the driver's seat. Haven't got the brains or the skill."
She glared at him. "You'll pay for this, I swear."
Sharif sneered. "And you call yourself a paramedic. A paramedic that can't drive! Do all your patients die waiting to get to the hospital?"
Hehe. But my favorite part of the story is the last third when the action kicks up. I thought the long buildup to the exciting action could have been tightened a bit.
I also enjoyed Feather Stone's debut novel, The Guardian's Wildchild, and I'm intrigued by similarities in characterization between these two novels: a feisty heroine who tests the patience of a stern, uniformed man (who is fighting for his children).
It's obvious that the author poured a great deal of love and research into this story. Bravo!
At a time when terrorists are perverting the tenets of Islam to pursue their sick agenda, it was welcome and interesting to read the life-affirming aspects of Islam in this story.
Eliza MacKay is a Canadian paramedic joining an American Habitat for Humanity mission to the Middle East. As she tries to calm down in a strange land, she tells herself,
"This is 2047. Women don't wear the burqa now. They even hold government positions."
I like this future! There has been a civil war and a realignment into the Republic of Islamic Provinces and Territories (RIPT).
When the Americans get ambushed and murdered, Eliza survives. Under orders to cover up the massacre, police captain Hashim Sharif wonders who this lovely blonde really is. Sharif grows to care for her, and he protects Eliza from those who want her dead.
Eliza has endured the pain of losing her family in a car accident--a trauma she can't fathom. She thinks the black-haired captain is gruff and untrustworthy at first, but she does admire his deep faith.
She listened as the ancient city of Samarra woke up. The haunting musical sound of the Muezzin called the devoted. With each of the four daily prayers, the city's ambiance shifted. An air of tranquility was palpable.
Even Eliza, who had no religious convictions, sat in quiet contemplation, deeply moved. She stilled her mind's chatter and waited.
Waited for a thread of wisdom to be shared by The One Most High. Waited for merciful revelation of why she had survived and her little boys had suffered and died.
She eavesdropped on Sharif's prayers. The change in his demeanor struck her. He became like a child singing songs of praise to an adoring father. His devotion to Islam and the teachings of the prophet Muhammad appeared to be based on genuine love, rather than fear of Allah's punishment.
Sharif is troubled himself. His ex-wife left him, and his children are with his father in order to keep them safe. He doesn't know which of his superiors to trust.
The slow burn of romance between Eliza and Sharif is just what each needs to heal and strengthen. I loved how Sharif incites Eliza's anger to help her confront her fear of driving again.
"Women shouldn't be allowed to drive anyway."
Eliza stared venomously into his face. "What did you say?"
"You heard me. Women shouldn't be allowed in the driver's seat. Haven't got the brains or the skill."
She glared at him. "You'll pay for this, I swear."
Sharif sneered. "And you call yourself a paramedic. A paramedic that can't drive! Do all your patients die waiting to get to the hospital?"
Hehe. But my favorite part of the story is the last third when the action kicks up. I thought the long buildup to the exciting action could have been tightened a bit.
I also enjoyed Feather Stone's debut novel, The Guardian's Wildchild, and I'm intrigued by similarities in characterization between these two novels: a feisty heroine who tests the patience of a stern, uniformed man (who is fighting for his children).
It's obvious that the author poured a great deal of love and research into this story. Bravo!
June 4, 2017
A suspense, action packed thriller that managed to keep me hooked right from the beginning, Forbidden by Feather Stone is one hell of a book. Feather Stone is a paramedic herself, the experiences of which she has duly referenced in the book. I am super excited to share my review, so here goes!
The year is 2047. Eliza Ramsay is a Canadian paramedic, waiting at an airport in The Republic of Islamic Provinces and Territories (RIPT), an amalgamation of Arabic nations. Her team from the Habitat office hadn't arrived yet. When they finally do, a couple of hours later, they all take a bus to go into the city of Samarra. But things take an ugly turn when all her colleagues are shot dead by a mysterious group who vanish from the spot soon after the massacre. Eliza is the only survivor, the only witness. Captain Hashim Sharif is furious that a massacre has taken place in his station compound and the inability to catch the killers. After the initial interrogation, he decides to keep Eliza under wraps and hides her in his apartment, as revealing her identity would undoubtedly lead to her execution. But Sharif and Eliza constantly face challenges politically and emotionally that pushes them to form a bond. The devout Muslim that he is, Sharif cannot imagine any relationship with the woman, especially since he is divorced and fathers two children. Eliza, on the other hand, fights her own demons everyday. She is a widower who lost her to children and husband in a car crash. As they fight against the corrupt political establishment, they discover feelings for themselves. Amidst bullets, criminals and inner demons, they decide to take the government head on. But what chance do two common and abandoned people have against the giant, corrupt beast of crime?
I totally loved this book! From the get go, I was hooked because there were no unnecessary details or lengthy explanations. The narrative is to the point, very precise. I love such books that do not waste any time getting into action. The book begins with a short background that is sufficient for an overall idea. The story is fantastic! Loads of action, suspense with romance thrown in always has my vote! The characters of Sharif and Eliza come off as strong and brave but with emotional baggage. I think that's what connects the both of them. All the characters are beautifully written and executed.
Forbidden is a fast paced book that is perfect for a rainy/stormy day when you are stuck inside a room. Actually, even otherwise it is great. The action and suspense will keep the readers on their toes, guaranteed. Overall, it is a fantastic thriller one must not miss, hence the rating!
Do I recommend it? Hell ya!
*** This book was sent to me by the author in exchange for an honest review. ***
The year is 2047. Eliza Ramsay is a Canadian paramedic, waiting at an airport in The Republic of Islamic Provinces and Territories (RIPT), an amalgamation of Arabic nations. Her team from the Habitat office hadn't arrived yet. When they finally do, a couple of hours later, they all take a bus to go into the city of Samarra. But things take an ugly turn when all her colleagues are shot dead by a mysterious group who vanish from the spot soon after the massacre. Eliza is the only survivor, the only witness. Captain Hashim Sharif is furious that a massacre has taken place in his station compound and the inability to catch the killers. After the initial interrogation, he decides to keep Eliza under wraps and hides her in his apartment, as revealing her identity would undoubtedly lead to her execution. But Sharif and Eliza constantly face challenges politically and emotionally that pushes them to form a bond. The devout Muslim that he is, Sharif cannot imagine any relationship with the woman, especially since he is divorced and fathers two children. Eliza, on the other hand, fights her own demons everyday. She is a widower who lost her to children and husband in a car crash. As they fight against the corrupt political establishment, they discover feelings for themselves. Amidst bullets, criminals and inner demons, they decide to take the government head on. But what chance do two common and abandoned people have against the giant, corrupt beast of crime?
I totally loved this book! From the get go, I was hooked because there were no unnecessary details or lengthy explanations. The narrative is to the point, very precise. I love such books that do not waste any time getting into action. The book begins with a short background that is sufficient for an overall idea. The story is fantastic! Loads of action, suspense with romance thrown in always has my vote! The characters of Sharif and Eliza come off as strong and brave but with emotional baggage. I think that's what connects the both of them. All the characters are beautifully written and executed.
Forbidden is a fast paced book that is perfect for a rainy/stormy day when you are stuck inside a room. Actually, even otherwise it is great. The action and suspense will keep the readers on their toes, guaranteed. Overall, it is a fantastic thriller one must not miss, hence the rating!
Do I recommend it? Hell ya!
*** This book was sent to me by the author in exchange for an honest review. ***
February 14, 2017
Forbidden by Feather Stone is a romantic suspense book that I consider simply excellent. It conquers you. I opened the book and started reading. By the time, I had reached the last sentence on the first page, my heart was saying, 'this is a winner.' You hear and feel the culture of the Middle East. My attention, captured, my curiosity grew. I forgot whatever I had planned to do and found myself walking deeper and deeper into the world Feather Stone had painted.
Her main protagonists had me sitting on the edge. I say, protagonists, because I saw Eliza MacKay and Captain Sharif both as main characters caught up in an intrigue that could take both of their lives.
Eliza MacKay, the paramedic, is the PTSD woman suffering from immeasurable loss and Captain Sharif, the devout Muslim who tries to keep them both alive. Both commit repeated centripetal actions which make them suspicious of each other before they realize only trust can save them both.
Forbidden is not one of those sloppy, soapy, unrealistic romantic suspense books that use bang, bang, boom in the bed to cover up for a weakly developed structure or plot. No, Forbidden is well-structured. I didn’t find any character situations that were unresolved. Think, Daphne Du Maurier, and you will see the same qualities in Stone’s Forbidden.
A writer’s ability to craft a story determines whether the reader will enter the writer’s world, and Feather Stone shows how well she masters her craft. She drew me in. She has woven together suspense and romance and has presented us with a well-written, well-structured and well-crafted story. Forbidden will keep you on edge until the last sentence in the epilogue.
Congratulations Ms. Feather Stone on an outstanding novel that kept my mind engaged. I enjoyed every reading minute. All the best for the future.
Shalom aleichem,
Pat Garcia
Her main protagonists had me sitting on the edge. I say, protagonists, because I saw Eliza MacKay and Captain Sharif both as main characters caught up in an intrigue that could take both of their lives.
Eliza MacKay, the paramedic, is the PTSD woman suffering from immeasurable loss and Captain Sharif, the devout Muslim who tries to keep them both alive. Both commit repeated centripetal actions which make them suspicious of each other before they realize only trust can save them both.
Forbidden is not one of those sloppy, soapy, unrealistic romantic suspense books that use bang, bang, boom in the bed to cover up for a weakly developed structure or plot. No, Forbidden is well-structured. I didn’t find any character situations that were unresolved. Think, Daphne Du Maurier, and you will see the same qualities in Stone’s Forbidden.
A writer’s ability to craft a story determines whether the reader will enter the writer’s world, and Feather Stone shows how well she masters her craft. She drew me in. She has woven together suspense and romance and has presented us with a well-written, well-structured and well-crafted story. Forbidden will keep you on edge until the last sentence in the epilogue.
Congratulations Ms. Feather Stone on an outstanding novel that kept my mind engaged. I enjoyed every reading minute. All the best for the future.
Shalom aleichem,
Pat Garcia
September 10, 2017
The main character in this book is Captain Hashim Sharif. The year is 2047. The story takes place in Samarra, Iraq. In the Middle East. The Middle East has joined together with one a mission of pease. There is still political unrest in this futuristic Republic of Islamic Provinces and Territories.
Eliza Ramsay, her preferred name at this time, is a Canadian Paramedic Supervisor there to join an American Habitat for Life group.
All does not go as planned. Disaster strikes. Leaving Eliza in an advisory relationship with Captain Shatif. Slowly they unite when faced with life or dead.
The CIA becomes involved due because of the disaster that united Eliza and Hashim. The CIA agent is a colorful character. Reminds me of Columbo. All of the characters are well defined.
Two broken people from different countries, each having serious baggage, find each other. I'm not a fan of romance but this is a great one.
Continuously building suspense. A page turner. I miss these characters and this story now that it's over for me.
Eliza Ramsay, her preferred name at this time, is a Canadian Paramedic Supervisor there to join an American Habitat for Life group.
All does not go as planned. Disaster strikes. Leaving Eliza in an advisory relationship with Captain Shatif. Slowly they unite when faced with life or dead.
The CIA becomes involved due because of the disaster that united Eliza and Hashim. The CIA agent is a colorful character. Reminds me of Columbo. All of the characters are well defined.
Two broken people from different countries, each having serious baggage, find each other. I'm not a fan of romance but this is a great one.
Continuously building suspense. A page turner. I miss these characters and this story now that it's over for me.
October 16, 2018
Forbidden Wins Gold: September 1, 2017 Readers' Favorite announced that Forbidden by F. Stone received the Gold Medal for Fiction / Thriller / Terrorisim.
Reviewed by Ruffina Oserio for Readers' Favorite
Suspenseful and beguiling, Forbidden: Better Wear Your Flak Jacket by F. Stone is a thriller that features terrorism and political intrigue, a story with breathtaking intricacies of plot and red herrings that will have readers guessing and leafing through the pages with excitement. After a gruesome terrorist attack, police captain Hashim Sharif captures one survivor, Eliza MacKay. There is a cover-up and the police captain has to live with the secret, but there is more to the story than meets the eye. Can he get the truth from the lying MacKay?
While working to keep the respect that his government requires, the police captain is determined to find out the truth and to uncover the brain behind the terror that has cost the lives of fifteen American volunteers. Things get complicated when he receives orders to kill MacKay, the only person who can lead him to the source of the terror. With a CIA agent on his heels and his life threatened, Hashim Sharif has to choose his path wisely and determine what is worth dying for.
F. Stone’s novel is an engrossing story, a page-turner that is masterfully written to keep the reader turning the pages. The plot is strong and has the potential for great entertainment. I loved the writing that features excellent prose, captivating descriptions, and great dialogues. The characters are rock-solid and the reader will enjoy navigating the complex political setting and the powerful conflict that drives the plot. Forbidden: Better Wear Your Flak Jacket is swiftly paced and masterfully crafted to offer readers the kind of entertainment they'll enjoy in a thriller. You won’t be able to put it down once started.
Reviewed by Ruffina Oserio for Readers' Favorite
Suspenseful and beguiling, Forbidden: Better Wear Your Flak Jacket by F. Stone is a thriller that features terrorism and political intrigue, a story with breathtaking intricacies of plot and red herrings that will have readers guessing and leafing through the pages with excitement. After a gruesome terrorist attack, police captain Hashim Sharif captures one survivor, Eliza MacKay. There is a cover-up and the police captain has to live with the secret, but there is more to the story than meets the eye. Can he get the truth from the lying MacKay?
While working to keep the respect that his government requires, the police captain is determined to find out the truth and to uncover the brain behind the terror that has cost the lives of fifteen American volunteers. Things get complicated when he receives orders to kill MacKay, the only person who can lead him to the source of the terror. With a CIA agent on his heels and his life threatened, Hashim Sharif has to choose his path wisely and determine what is worth dying for.
F. Stone’s novel is an engrossing story, a page-turner that is masterfully written to keep the reader turning the pages. The plot is strong and has the potential for great entertainment. I loved the writing that features excellent prose, captivating descriptions, and great dialogues. The characters are rock-solid and the reader will enjoy navigating the complex political setting and the powerful conflict that drives the plot. Forbidden: Better Wear Your Flak Jacket is swiftly paced and masterfully crafted to offer readers the kind of entertainment they'll enjoy in a thriller. You won’t be able to put it down once started.
February 11, 2017
If you’re looking for a story that will transport you, this is it. From the very first chapters, my heart thundered along with Eliza’s—the foreboding in her gut to what becomes an all-out crisis. The characters are well drawn and believable with intriguing depth. I got a clear sense of Eliza’s and Sharif’s backgrounds along the way, but the story stays focused on the moment. It takes talent to achieve that, and I’m sure a LOT of hard work.
Equally impressive is the research that went into this book. I’ve followed the author’s blog, so I know she did her homework and enlisted input from experts to create an authentic world. All that research paid off. The cultural elements as well as the legal intricacies feel so real.
Forbidden has twists and turns that’ll keep your mind whirring. Just when you think you have something figured out, a surprise awaits. The romance between the two leads builds up at a satisfying pace. These are two adults in dire circumstances, not insta-lovey teenagers, and Stone keeps them true to character throughout. There are beautifully written passages along the way to drive their intense emotions home.
Readers who like suspense with a strong element of romance will love this story.
Equally impressive is the research that went into this book. I’ve followed the author’s blog, so I know she did her homework and enlisted input from experts to create an authentic world. All that research paid off. The cultural elements as well as the legal intricacies feel so real.
Forbidden has twists and turns that’ll keep your mind whirring. Just when you think you have something figured out, a surprise awaits. The romance between the two leads builds up at a satisfying pace. These are two adults in dire circumstances, not insta-lovey teenagers, and Stone keeps them true to character throughout. There are beautifully written passages along the way to drive their intense emotions home.
Readers who like suspense with a strong element of romance will love this story.
February 15, 2017
Forbidden was one of the most interesting thrillers I've read in a great while. I loved the idea of a joined Muslim nation. The author's description of the created nation was so realistic and the characters so believable, I was utterly absorbed into the book's reality, forgetting my own for hours at a time. I burned with dislike of some of the characters and felt true empathy with and for others.
It's rare for an author to be able to so realistically create such a rich and believable environment outside of a fantasy world. I can still envision the "wall" that was referred to in the book and see the many people that must have been lined up before a firing squad in front of this wall for a speedy execution. This book beautifully portrays a world of corrupt politicians, the dangers of religious (or political) fanaticism, and the efforts of the majority, united under a wise leader, to unite a country by reminding them that its citizens are far more alike than different in their common beliefs.
It's rare for an author to be able to so realistically create such a rich and believable environment outside of a fantasy world. I can still envision the "wall" that was referred to in the book and see the many people that must have been lined up before a firing squad in front of this wall for a speedy execution. This book beautifully portrays a world of corrupt politicians, the dangers of religious (or political) fanaticism, and the efforts of the majority, united under a wise leader, to unite a country by reminding them that its citizens are far more alike than different in their common beliefs.
February 4, 2017
I loved this book! I love the
tight and precise writting, the multilayered storyline. and this is more than the book cover can even describe. It is a deeply complex and we'll developed set if characters, the world and story line range is wide, and being an American Muslim for over 30 years now and who travels a lot to Pakistan, I admit I have fears of being abducted every time I go there. this book was amazingly well written and I recommend it to anyone, and I have read it, I loved it, I reviewed it... YOUR TURN!
tight and precise writting, the multilayered storyline. and this is more than the book cover can even describe. It is a deeply complex and we'll developed set if characters, the world and story line range is wide, and being an American Muslim for over 30 years now and who travels a lot to Pakistan, I admit I have fears of being abducted every time I go there. this book was amazingly well written and I recommend it to anyone, and I have read it, I loved it, I reviewed it... YOUR TURN!
March 2, 2017
‘FORBIDDEN’ by F. Stone
Review by Anne Carmichael, Author
Had I not been asked to read ‘Forbidden’ by its author as part of a cooperative project among mystery writers (Mystery Thriller Week Annual Event), I would likely have missed the opportunity to step out of my comfort zone and allow myself to be transported to the year 2047 in a land called Samarra, an Islamic city. Sadly, I also would have forfeited my seat on a fantastic thrill ride.
I read these nearly 400 pages in two evenings. I was compelled to keep turning the pages by the life-threatening events experienced by paramedic, Eliza, as she sought to help others while recovering from the loss of her husband and children in a tragic accident that she should not have survived.
Scenes of mass murder, imprisonment, passion and a culture which both mystified and frightened me carried me breathlessly from beginning to end and left me feeling sorry to find that the story had reached its conclusion.
A great read that will make you hungry for more.
Review by Anne Carmichael, Author
Had I not been asked to read ‘Forbidden’ by its author as part of a cooperative project among mystery writers (Mystery Thriller Week Annual Event), I would likely have missed the opportunity to step out of my comfort zone and allow myself to be transported to the year 2047 in a land called Samarra, an Islamic city. Sadly, I also would have forfeited my seat on a fantastic thrill ride.
I read these nearly 400 pages in two evenings. I was compelled to keep turning the pages by the life-threatening events experienced by paramedic, Eliza, as she sought to help others while recovering from the loss of her husband and children in a tragic accident that she should not have survived.
Scenes of mass murder, imprisonment, passion and a culture which both mystified and frightened me carried me breathlessly from beginning to end and left me feeling sorry to find that the story had reached its conclusion.
A great read that will make you hungry for more.
March 2, 2017
I always love a book with a different premise. A complex plot and characters with complicated lives are of course very attractive. And that’s what we have here.
My own neighborhood is a real cultural mosaic. We have a lot of new immigrants, many of whom are Muslim. I know a lot of Muslim kids because I used to work in our public school. These are kids who learn English at school and then go home to teach it to their parents. They are–almost always–fantastic kids. And of course I meet their parents and grandparents up at the corner plaza. So phobias and prejudices against average people grieve me. Allah, God and Jehovah are the same God and so how could I hate someone who worships Him?
Of course, I’ve never understood people who hate others.
Here’s an interesting novel: a love story between a white woman and a Muslim man who’d give Jason Bourne a run for his money. Wow, the action and suspense are gripping. Ms. Stone has put a ton of research into this so the setting and mindset of the characters are credible. As well, they’re extremely likeable and heroic. Impressive work. I look forward to reading more of this author’s books. Five stars.
My own neighborhood is a real cultural mosaic. We have a lot of new immigrants, many of whom are Muslim. I know a lot of Muslim kids because I used to work in our public school. These are kids who learn English at school and then go home to teach it to their parents. They are–almost always–fantastic kids. And of course I meet their parents and grandparents up at the corner plaza. So phobias and prejudices against average people grieve me. Allah, God and Jehovah are the same God and so how could I hate someone who worships Him?
Of course, I’ve never understood people who hate others.
Here’s an interesting novel: a love story between a white woman and a Muslim man who’d give Jason Bourne a run for his money. Wow, the action and suspense are gripping. Ms. Stone has put a ton of research into this so the setting and mindset of the characters are credible. As well, they’re extremely likeable and heroic. Impressive work. I look forward to reading more of this author’s books. Five stars.
February 6, 2017
This is a gripping, page turner!
Eliza, a Canadian paramedic, traveled to the City of Samara to work with an American Habitat team. Eliza struggles with crippling PTSD episodes as she tries to recover from a traumatic loss a few years past. The Habitat convoy is diverted to a police compound where they are massacred. The real police engage the terrorists at the last minute, rescuing a terrified Eliza. Captain Sharif, a devout Muslin, takes Eliza into custody, first to confirm she wasn’t part of the attack and then to keep her safe.
Sharif’s superiors threaten his family if he doesn’t cover-up the killings and silence the sole surviving witness. Sharif struggles to find a way to save Eliza, even acting behind her back. Eliza respects Sharif’s dedication to his faith and to his duties as an officer of the law. She knows that he is trying to protect her but she doesn’t appreciate not being privy to the plans to hide her away.
Sharif is forced to lie to the CIA agent who arrives to find the bodies of the Americans and bring in the killers. Sharif must intensify his efforts to obtain proof of the corruption in his own government as the CIA agent holds him under suspicion.
Sharif and Eliza grow in friendship as they share close spaces and learn of each other’s vulnerabilities. Eliza knows that she does not fit in Sharif’s world and any relationship between them is forbidden. Sharif, who has convinced himself that he is not worthy of love, struggles to maintain his strict code of honor even as he is drawn to the brave, impetuous Eliza. Can they find the strength to acknowledge their love, assuming they can survive the multiplying threats to their freedoms and their very lives?
The plot is wonderfully crafted with well-developed characters, nonstop suspense and a good twist to the ending. The setting and political environment make an effective backdrop and I found the Muslim elements very interesting. Ms. Stone adds to this an improbable but beautiful romance.
The primary characters are real, flawed and courageous. It was natural to root for them to beat the enemy and accept their love for one another. I also liked the secondary characters and would like to read more about all of them. There were some typographical errors but the story is well worth reading. I hope to try more of Ms. Stone’s work very soon. I highly recommend this story to readers who like action packed suspense with romance.
I received this title for an honest review. My rating 4.75.
Eliza, a Canadian paramedic, traveled to the City of Samara to work with an American Habitat team. Eliza struggles with crippling PTSD episodes as she tries to recover from a traumatic loss a few years past. The Habitat convoy is diverted to a police compound where they are massacred. The real police engage the terrorists at the last minute, rescuing a terrified Eliza. Captain Sharif, a devout Muslin, takes Eliza into custody, first to confirm she wasn’t part of the attack and then to keep her safe.
Sharif’s superiors threaten his family if he doesn’t cover-up the killings and silence the sole surviving witness. Sharif struggles to find a way to save Eliza, even acting behind her back. Eliza respects Sharif’s dedication to his faith and to his duties as an officer of the law. She knows that he is trying to protect her but she doesn’t appreciate not being privy to the plans to hide her away.
Sharif is forced to lie to the CIA agent who arrives to find the bodies of the Americans and bring in the killers. Sharif must intensify his efforts to obtain proof of the corruption in his own government as the CIA agent holds him under suspicion.
Sharif and Eliza grow in friendship as they share close spaces and learn of each other’s vulnerabilities. Eliza knows that she does not fit in Sharif’s world and any relationship between them is forbidden. Sharif, who has convinced himself that he is not worthy of love, struggles to maintain his strict code of honor even as he is drawn to the brave, impetuous Eliza. Can they find the strength to acknowledge their love, assuming they can survive the multiplying threats to their freedoms and their very lives?
The plot is wonderfully crafted with well-developed characters, nonstop suspense and a good twist to the ending. The setting and political environment make an effective backdrop and I found the Muslim elements very interesting. Ms. Stone adds to this an improbable but beautiful romance.
The primary characters are real, flawed and courageous. It was natural to root for them to beat the enemy and accept their love for one another. I also liked the secondary characters and would like to read more about all of them. There were some typographical errors but the story is well worth reading. I hope to try more of Ms. Stone’s work very soon. I highly recommend this story to readers who like action packed suspense with romance.
I received this title for an honest review. My rating 4.75.
February 17, 2017
This is an engrossing story that sucks you in from the first pages. It’s intense, living up to the “word” thriller. It was like watching an action-thriller movie in my head, which is the way books play out for me if I can really fall into the pages living the story through the characters. The writing is that good.
The blurb tells you about the story so I am not going to try to do that. It gives you a good idea of the story without giving away the exciting parts that keep you turning the pages.
The thing that fascinated me about the character Eliza MacKay was her PTSD and seeing how the author used it to push the story forward, create conflict, obstacles and weave a character that I cared about. The authors use of deep point of was wonderful giving me enough so I related to the character in some sense as I read.
I did not like Captain Sharif at first but he grew on me, making me care just as Eliza had from the first page. I understood him immediately due to the author’s skillful writing. That beginning feeling of dislike and then changing my feelings made that character arc relatable and powerful for me in the story.
These characters are forced to make choices in situation’s created and orchestrated by others that challenge the very core of who they are, what they believe and their own survival in a political-religious arena that has you holding your breath with all the intrigue surrounding them.
I felt the story tension, the sense of unease that permeated the air. It is that fear you don’t want to acknowledge or admit to yourself. It is when you know, at your core, that things are going get much worse despite the horror you’ve already experienced. It is a sort of self-denial that allows you to act through horrendous, high-stress events, crisis after crisis, despite the deep terror within. That is the feeling that the author captured making Eliza’s PTSD all the more engaging.
I would give this book a five-star rating plus. F. Stone is a skillful writer garnering my admiration and fandom. I received this book as an ARC copy free for an honest review and part of the Mystery Thriller Week. However, I could not resist going back to buy her first book, The Guardian’s Wild Child, craving to experience that same sense of adventure and character development again. (Pssst–the first book is .99 cents, right now!
The blurb tells you about the story so I am not going to try to do that. It gives you a good idea of the story without giving away the exciting parts that keep you turning the pages.
The thing that fascinated me about the character Eliza MacKay was her PTSD and seeing how the author used it to push the story forward, create conflict, obstacles and weave a character that I cared about. The authors use of deep point of was wonderful giving me enough so I related to the character in some sense as I read.
I did not like Captain Sharif at first but he grew on me, making me care just as Eliza had from the first page. I understood him immediately due to the author’s skillful writing. That beginning feeling of dislike and then changing my feelings made that character arc relatable and powerful for me in the story.
These characters are forced to make choices in situation’s created and orchestrated by others that challenge the very core of who they are, what they believe and their own survival in a political-religious arena that has you holding your breath with all the intrigue surrounding them.
I felt the story tension, the sense of unease that permeated the air. It is that fear you don’t want to acknowledge or admit to yourself. It is when you know, at your core, that things are going get much worse despite the horror you’ve already experienced. It is a sort of self-denial that allows you to act through horrendous, high-stress events, crisis after crisis, despite the deep terror within. That is the feeling that the author captured making Eliza’s PTSD all the more engaging.
I would give this book a five-star rating plus. F. Stone is a skillful writer garnering my admiration and fandom. I received this book as an ARC copy free for an honest review and part of the Mystery Thriller Week. However, I could not resist going back to buy her first book, The Guardian’s Wild Child, craving to experience that same sense of adventure and character development again. (Pssst–the first book is .99 cents, right now!
February 22, 2017
This book deserves, five stars! It defiantly left an impression. Fast paced, lots of action, gripping, at times, strong characters..This author has a gift. Feather Stone brings her characters to life and paints such detail. Amazing, action packed story. I would highly recommend this book. Pauline Holyoak.
May 12, 2017
October 2047. Eliza Ramsey is a paramedic, and although she has never been to the Republic of Islamic Provinces and Territories (RIPT), she is excited when she is asked to accompany a group of Americans traveling for Habitat for Humanity. At first, she doesn’t feel comfortable waiting at Samarra’s International Airport for the others to arrive and, unfortunately, as time passes she catches the attention of Security and spends a nerve-wracking time being questioned. Finally, she is informed that the rest of the team will arrive that evening.
After waiting for hours, she spots fifteen Americans. She introduces herself and they all toss their luggage into the back of a large truck and climb aboard their waiting bus. After her ordeal with Security and her long wait, she is exhausted and looks forward to a relaxing two-hour ride to their camp. She is jolted awake when the bus pulls into a gas station; time for snacks, drinks, and restroom breaks. Knowing this is a break in their expected schedule, Eliza feels uneasy and moves into the truck holding their belongings, hoping to calm her anxiety.
As the vehicles travel through Samarra, Eliza’s nervousness increases, noting they are off track. She is confused when they pull into the local police compound and soon after she hears loud voices and screaming. Deafening gunfire drowns out the screams and just when she thinks it is over, more shouting ensues and she realizes the police are in the middle of a gun fight. Racing from her hiding spot, she notes that none of the Americans have survived. It is in the midst of this chaos and fear that Eliza meets Captain Hashim Shariff, the police commander, and the one person who can ensure she survives her trip to RIPT.
This is a story of a Canadian woman and a Muslim man carefully feeling their way into a relationship in a tale ripe with action, loyalty, love, treason, and murder. I enjoyed this book immensely and it is definitely not a run of the mill romance. I remained on high alert throughout, watching for the next betrayal, murder, or finally the first kiss. The author presents a well-informed story of the morals, beliefs, and dress code of this Arabic society. It was utterly engrossing!
The grading:
Genre and general reading age – As I said, it’s not just a romance. This book is more suspense than anything else. The age is geared towards adults and there is a political aspect, many characters to juggle, and the need to understand how religion can engulf a people and their society, making this a more mature read.
Level of sexuality – Mild.
Is there graphic language? I think I have read too many books that have graphic language as a given, so I didn’t really notice it. However, the author warns of the violence and vulgar language, so I’m pretty sure she’s spot on. Therefore, she recommends 18+ and I agree.
Did I cry? No.
Did I laugh? No. Far too much suspense for that!
Is this part of a series? I have not heard of a sequel, but it does have a cliffhanger at the end, so I hope to see more.
Level of character development – These characters were highly developed and never let the story down.
It is with great pleasure that I give this book ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ stars.
After waiting for hours, she spots fifteen Americans. She introduces herself and they all toss their luggage into the back of a large truck and climb aboard their waiting bus. After her ordeal with Security and her long wait, she is exhausted and looks forward to a relaxing two-hour ride to their camp. She is jolted awake when the bus pulls into a gas station; time for snacks, drinks, and restroom breaks. Knowing this is a break in their expected schedule, Eliza feels uneasy and moves into the truck holding their belongings, hoping to calm her anxiety.
As the vehicles travel through Samarra, Eliza’s nervousness increases, noting they are off track. She is confused when they pull into the local police compound and soon after she hears loud voices and screaming. Deafening gunfire drowns out the screams and just when she thinks it is over, more shouting ensues and she realizes the police are in the middle of a gun fight. Racing from her hiding spot, she notes that none of the Americans have survived. It is in the midst of this chaos and fear that Eliza meets Captain Hashim Shariff, the police commander, and the one person who can ensure she survives her trip to RIPT.
This is a story of a Canadian woman and a Muslim man carefully feeling their way into a relationship in a tale ripe with action, loyalty, love, treason, and murder. I enjoyed this book immensely and it is definitely not a run of the mill romance. I remained on high alert throughout, watching for the next betrayal, murder, or finally the first kiss. The author presents a well-informed story of the morals, beliefs, and dress code of this Arabic society. It was utterly engrossing!
The grading:
Genre and general reading age – As I said, it’s not just a romance. This book is more suspense than anything else. The age is geared towards adults and there is a political aspect, many characters to juggle, and the need to understand how religion can engulf a people and their society, making this a more mature read.
Level of sexuality – Mild.
Is there graphic language? I think I have read too many books that have graphic language as a given, so I didn’t really notice it. However, the author warns of the violence and vulgar language, so I’m pretty sure she’s spot on. Therefore, she recommends 18+ and I agree.
Did I cry? No.
Did I laugh? No. Far too much suspense for that!
Is this part of a series? I have not heard of a sequel, but it does have a cliffhanger at the end, so I hope to see more.
Level of character development – These characters were highly developed and never let the story down.
It is with great pleasure that I give this book ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ stars.
December 13, 2017
Forbidden by F. Stone REVIEW
A shocking massacre. One witness. A complicated conspiracy.
This next incredible book I had the pleasure of reading is a high octane action-adventure story set in a future where the middle east has united under one nation, and one woman learns that the lines between friend and foe blur easily. This novel is called Forbidden by F. Stone and here is the synopsis:
Year 2047, City of Samarra, capital of the Republic of Islamic Provinces & Territories
Fifteen American travelers have vanished. Surrendering to Mayor Aamir's demands, a devout Muslim and police captain becomes the reluctant keeper of his city’s bloody secret – and the witness, Eliza MacKay. Captain Sharif is horrified to discover that if he exposes the cover-up, his family will suffer dire consequences.
The CIA has the lying Sharif in their cross hairs. Sharif’s only hope is to prove his country's government is free of guilt. Secretly, he hunts forensic evidence. Cryptic messages, backstabbing informants, and corruption threaten Sharif’s resolve to see justice served. When he discovers the shocking truth, he and MacKay become the targets of a ruthless killer.
Sharif is tortured by his attraction to the impetuous Eliza MacKay. In spite of her struggle with PTSD, he’s drawn to her vivacious personality. Islam forbids the intimacy he craves. In desperation to save Eliza, Sharif plots an act most forbidden and fatal.
This was a fantastic thriller! The story was incredibly unique, as we got an in-depth glance at the influence and power that the Muslim faith has on people. Not only that, we got to see how the religion is incorporated and infused into society as a whole, and the complications that arise in both social and political situations as a result of that faith. We also got an incredible cast of characters, venturing into the complicated lives of a police captain at war with a complicated conspiracy and with himself and his beliefs, as well as the tormented past of Canadian paramedic trapped in a country fraught with danger. The unlikely duo must look for clues to help save themselves and the captain's family, who are put in the cross-hairs of the conspirators in mysterious ways.
The story was well written, with little grammatical mistakes and an even paced narrative that made the story gripping and engaging. The cover promised intrigue and mystery, and the unique setting gives a glimpse into the world of the middle east respectively and showcases how every religion and nation is filled with complications and hardships.
Overall this was a fantastic read that fans of the thriller genre will not want to miss. Author F. Stone is a fantastic writer with a firm grasp on the genre, and the story ends in a way where you as the reader feels an overwhelming need to read yet another installment. If you haven't yet, be sure to pick up your copy of F. Stone's Forbidden today!
A shocking massacre. One witness. A complicated conspiracy.
This next incredible book I had the pleasure of reading is a high octane action-adventure story set in a future where the middle east has united under one nation, and one woman learns that the lines between friend and foe blur easily. This novel is called Forbidden by F. Stone and here is the synopsis:
Year 2047, City of Samarra, capital of the Republic of Islamic Provinces & Territories
Fifteen American travelers have vanished. Surrendering to Mayor Aamir's demands, a devout Muslim and police captain becomes the reluctant keeper of his city’s bloody secret – and the witness, Eliza MacKay. Captain Sharif is horrified to discover that if he exposes the cover-up, his family will suffer dire consequences.
The CIA has the lying Sharif in their cross hairs. Sharif’s only hope is to prove his country's government is free of guilt. Secretly, he hunts forensic evidence. Cryptic messages, backstabbing informants, and corruption threaten Sharif’s resolve to see justice served. When he discovers the shocking truth, he and MacKay become the targets of a ruthless killer.
Sharif is tortured by his attraction to the impetuous Eliza MacKay. In spite of her struggle with PTSD, he’s drawn to her vivacious personality. Islam forbids the intimacy he craves. In desperation to save Eliza, Sharif plots an act most forbidden and fatal.
This was a fantastic thriller! The story was incredibly unique, as we got an in-depth glance at the influence and power that the Muslim faith has on people. Not only that, we got to see how the religion is incorporated and infused into society as a whole, and the complications that arise in both social and political situations as a result of that faith. We also got an incredible cast of characters, venturing into the complicated lives of a police captain at war with a complicated conspiracy and with himself and his beliefs, as well as the tormented past of Canadian paramedic trapped in a country fraught with danger. The unlikely duo must look for clues to help save themselves and the captain's family, who are put in the cross-hairs of the conspirators in mysterious ways.
The story was well written, with little grammatical mistakes and an even paced narrative that made the story gripping and engaging. The cover promised intrigue and mystery, and the unique setting gives a glimpse into the world of the middle east respectively and showcases how every religion and nation is filled with complications and hardships.
Overall this was a fantastic read that fans of the thriller genre will not want to miss. Author F. Stone is a fantastic writer with a firm grasp on the genre, and the story ends in a way where you as the reader feels an overwhelming need to read yet another installment. If you haven't yet, be sure to pick up your copy of F. Stone's Forbidden today!
July 17, 2017
Forbidden: F Stone
Within this world there are many who would destroy our hopes and dreams for a better life and freedom. Within the hush comes the gunfire and sounds of people silenced. Beyond the screams comes the truth behind the slaying of 15 people coming to help others from Habitat of Humanity. Americans with a mission to help those less fortunate. So, who wanted them dead? Terrorized, brutalized, silenced and the hush becomes a silent whisper. When Police Captain Hashim Sharif is enlisted to find out what happened to the others he meets the one person hiding in the right place and not executed Eliza Mackay who becomes his captive. Wishing at first and wondering why she was spared links her up in an unholy alliance with Sharif. The heads of his government wants the entire situation buried along with Eliza. He becomes her jailer, keeper and boss you might say in order to keep the city’s secret and the failure of his force to protect the Americans. When Sharif tries to remember that Allah forbids murder, yet we hear about those that worship Allah killing all the time, Sharif has not choice but to at least appear to be following the orders of the Chief of Police and the Mayor to bury Eliza or his family and him will permanently disappear and pay the ultimate price. It’s not about justice and fairness it’s about restoring the dignity of their government for failing to protect these innocent victims. Learning more about the murders, trying to find forensic evidence, and wonders whom ordered that these 15 American volunteers be slaughtered. As Eliza and Sharif begin to bond and develop a steady rhythm and pattern something changes it all when he learns her real name, about the loss of her family and realizing she might not be trusted either. PTSD is what she suffers from and the people assigned to watch over her hear her scream in her sleep. Hearing the voices of the Mayor and Chief, learning what the others did to her to prove she is nobody special and Sharif coming to her defense we wonder whether he will dispose of her while testing his beliefs. Murder an innocent person for no reason will he?
Things spiral out of control and Sharif immediately goes into action and moves not only Eliza but his family hoping to keep them away from harm. Added in a CIA agent is being brought in to investigate the murders and find out who was behind them and bring them to his brand of justice. He is thinking Sharif is guilty but the true killers have yet to be identified and who were these men driving the truck with the volunteers?
Things take on a different turn when the CIA agent sets his sites on hoping to take down Sharif. But, Sharif is smart and when he learns that Eliza purloined her own cell phone that he confiscated why does he allow her to keep it? She is confined to a small space and knowing that she has PTSD and is still dealing with the fatal car accident of her own family, husband and two children, you can understand why she panics when Sharif places her, for her own good in a small room. Added in he takes chance and calls her boss hoping to leave subtle clues as to wanting him to begin a search to find her.
A meeting reveals to the representative from Habitat for Humanity that the Americans are dead, how will the President of this country and others proceed to find out who was behind the massacre and why take down Eliza in the interim? Thinking they were home free and the CIA was not going to track them down again, think again as agent Hutchinson turns up, turns on the heat and Eliza has the chance to go home but decides to remain with Sharif but why? Thinking that too many have died because of her the author gives us an insight as to how the investigation will proceed, where the bodies of the victims and killers were found but no one knows who was behind it and why?
Just the title alone is expressive as there are so many meanings in this novel of the title Forbidden. As Sharif is forbidden to kill in cold blood, to fall for Eliza, to fail in his mission, not to worship Allah and to stay true to who he is except what secrets is he hiding and what will happen when they investigate? Did he have anything to do with the massacre? Why are they investigating his station and his men?
Chief Ganem and the Mayor Aamir were both involved in the massacre but someone higher called Black Ice and Omega were running the show but their identities have not been revealed.
Sharif still is being threatened and if he reveals what he knows and the plot to the CIA his family will be killed. But, someone close to him that has remained behind the scenes is pulling other strings and his children, his son and daughter are the pawns in this plan. Using his contacts in other departments and with his faithful Sergeant Omar, Sharif hopes to foil whatever is planned next. But, things go deadly, more bodies fall and the end result is more powerful people are killed but who will pay the ultimate price?
Dealing with the Mayor and knowing the Chief is dead and his connection to the hit man that tried to take out Eliza and Sharif, let’s them know that things are hot and then his children are kidnapped.
Confronting the Mayor and letting him know that Khalid and his intent to cause havoc in RIPT. The mayor was a pawn on Khalid and failed to carry out his orders to kill Sharif and now things get more volatile. Captain Khizar has his own agenda and wants to take Eliza out and roughing her up, trying to attack her in anyway possible is his way of letting Sharif know that she is not immune to torture and torment as the author flashes back to how she lost her husband and two children and the reasons why William was not anyone that she might still lose sleep over.
Being locked up so to speak in close quarters and having to keep her emotions in check she and Sharif play their own kind of love/hate game until it might become too hard to resist the chemistry between them. Meeting his children was okay but his parents are set against her will that change it all and will he get rid of her? Each time she has a chance to leave she backs out and when things seem to be settling down and she can leave what happens next will shock readers as she prays to Allah for strength, starts to pray along with Sharif during his daily prayers. Using his power of reasoning and some cunning planning Sharif manages to alert just the right people that might help save them both and his family. But, everything blows up and just when you think things are going to calm down and the killers are identified and hopefully everyone might be brought to justice the author throws a powerful curve letting us know that what you think you see and hear just might not be what really is. The ending lets you know that some live, some die and some might need to watch their backs for a little longer or more. The author relates on the last page: This is the ending or IS IT!
Characters that are sharp, crisp, devious, alert, loyal, disloyal, traitors, cunning and quite clever as Eliza MacKay learns the true meaning of understanding, tolerance, hope, justice, injustice, love, friendship and survival in this outstanding novel between two different worlds where so many rules and customs are spelled out and how dare you go against what is FORBIDDEN.
Fran Lewis: Just reviews/MJ magazine
Within this world there are many who would destroy our hopes and dreams for a better life and freedom. Within the hush comes the gunfire and sounds of people silenced. Beyond the screams comes the truth behind the slaying of 15 people coming to help others from Habitat of Humanity. Americans with a mission to help those less fortunate. So, who wanted them dead? Terrorized, brutalized, silenced and the hush becomes a silent whisper. When Police Captain Hashim Sharif is enlisted to find out what happened to the others he meets the one person hiding in the right place and not executed Eliza Mackay who becomes his captive. Wishing at first and wondering why she was spared links her up in an unholy alliance with Sharif. The heads of his government wants the entire situation buried along with Eliza. He becomes her jailer, keeper and boss you might say in order to keep the city’s secret and the failure of his force to protect the Americans. When Sharif tries to remember that Allah forbids murder, yet we hear about those that worship Allah killing all the time, Sharif has not choice but to at least appear to be following the orders of the Chief of Police and the Mayor to bury Eliza or his family and him will permanently disappear and pay the ultimate price. It’s not about justice and fairness it’s about restoring the dignity of their government for failing to protect these innocent victims. Learning more about the murders, trying to find forensic evidence, and wonders whom ordered that these 15 American volunteers be slaughtered. As Eliza and Sharif begin to bond and develop a steady rhythm and pattern something changes it all when he learns her real name, about the loss of her family and realizing she might not be trusted either. PTSD is what she suffers from and the people assigned to watch over her hear her scream in her sleep. Hearing the voices of the Mayor and Chief, learning what the others did to her to prove she is nobody special and Sharif coming to her defense we wonder whether he will dispose of her while testing his beliefs. Murder an innocent person for no reason will he?
Things spiral out of control and Sharif immediately goes into action and moves not only Eliza but his family hoping to keep them away from harm. Added in a CIA agent is being brought in to investigate the murders and find out who was behind them and bring them to his brand of justice. He is thinking Sharif is guilty but the true killers have yet to be identified and who were these men driving the truck with the volunteers?
Things take on a different turn when the CIA agent sets his sites on hoping to take down Sharif. But, Sharif is smart and when he learns that Eliza purloined her own cell phone that he confiscated why does he allow her to keep it? She is confined to a small space and knowing that she has PTSD and is still dealing with the fatal car accident of her own family, husband and two children, you can understand why she panics when Sharif places her, for her own good in a small room. Added in he takes chance and calls her boss hoping to leave subtle clues as to wanting him to begin a search to find her.
A meeting reveals to the representative from Habitat for Humanity that the Americans are dead, how will the President of this country and others proceed to find out who was behind the massacre and why take down Eliza in the interim? Thinking they were home free and the CIA was not going to track them down again, think again as agent Hutchinson turns up, turns on the heat and Eliza has the chance to go home but decides to remain with Sharif but why? Thinking that too many have died because of her the author gives us an insight as to how the investigation will proceed, where the bodies of the victims and killers were found but no one knows who was behind it and why?
Just the title alone is expressive as there are so many meanings in this novel of the title Forbidden. As Sharif is forbidden to kill in cold blood, to fall for Eliza, to fail in his mission, not to worship Allah and to stay true to who he is except what secrets is he hiding and what will happen when they investigate? Did he have anything to do with the massacre? Why are they investigating his station and his men?
Chief Ganem and the Mayor Aamir were both involved in the massacre but someone higher called Black Ice and Omega were running the show but their identities have not been revealed.
Sharif still is being threatened and if he reveals what he knows and the plot to the CIA his family will be killed. But, someone close to him that has remained behind the scenes is pulling other strings and his children, his son and daughter are the pawns in this plan. Using his contacts in other departments and with his faithful Sergeant Omar, Sharif hopes to foil whatever is planned next. But, things go deadly, more bodies fall and the end result is more powerful people are killed but who will pay the ultimate price?
Dealing with the Mayor and knowing the Chief is dead and his connection to the hit man that tried to take out Eliza and Sharif, let’s them know that things are hot and then his children are kidnapped.
Confronting the Mayor and letting him know that Khalid and his intent to cause havoc in RIPT. The mayor was a pawn on Khalid and failed to carry out his orders to kill Sharif and now things get more volatile. Captain Khizar has his own agenda and wants to take Eliza out and roughing her up, trying to attack her in anyway possible is his way of letting Sharif know that she is not immune to torture and torment as the author flashes back to how she lost her husband and two children and the reasons why William was not anyone that she might still lose sleep over.
Being locked up so to speak in close quarters and having to keep her emotions in check she and Sharif play their own kind of love/hate game until it might become too hard to resist the chemistry between them. Meeting his children was okay but his parents are set against her will that change it all and will he get rid of her? Each time she has a chance to leave she backs out and when things seem to be settling down and she can leave what happens next will shock readers as she prays to Allah for strength, starts to pray along with Sharif during his daily prayers. Using his power of reasoning and some cunning planning Sharif manages to alert just the right people that might help save them both and his family. But, everything blows up and just when you think things are going to calm down and the killers are identified and hopefully everyone might be brought to justice the author throws a powerful curve letting us know that what you think you see and hear just might not be what really is. The ending lets you know that some live, some die and some might need to watch their backs for a little longer or more. The author relates on the last page: This is the ending or IS IT!
Characters that are sharp, crisp, devious, alert, loyal, disloyal, traitors, cunning and quite clever as Eliza MacKay learns the true meaning of understanding, tolerance, hope, justice, injustice, love, friendship and survival in this outstanding novel between two different worlds where so many rules and customs are spelled out and how dare you go against what is FORBIDDEN.
Fran Lewis: Just reviews/MJ magazine
October 19, 2018
This book was entered in The Wishing Shelf Book Awards. This is what our readers thought:
Title: Forbidden
Author: F. Stone
Star Rating: 5 Stars
Number of Readers: 19
Stats
Editing: 9/10
Writing Style: 9/10
Content: 9/10
Cover: 8/10
Of the 19 readers:
18 would read another book by this author.
15 thought the cover was good or excellent.
19 felt it was easy to follow.
19 would recommend this story to another reader to try.
13 felt the author’s strongest skill was ‘plotting a story’.
6 felt the author’s strongest skill was ‘developing the characters’.
19 felt the pacing was good or excellent.
19 thought the author understood the readership and what they wanted.
Readers’ Comments
‘Plenty of political intrigue in this exciting thriller. I enjoyed it very much. The important thing with a book of this nature is pace. Well, I’m happy to tell you, this has a ton of it.’ Male reader, aged 53
‘Hashim is a pretty cool character. Good to see a Muslim character in the driving seat.’ Female reader, aged 48
‘The author has delivered a superbly interwoven plot inhabited by memorable characters. Disturbing and, I must say, a rather exciting read. This is an author to watch.’ Female reader. aged 41
‘Packed full of murder and betrayal and written with a simple but effective writing style. The plot will keep you guessing until the very last page. Also, good to read a thriller that spends a little time on culture/customs too.’ Female reader, aged 60
To Sum It Up:
‘A gripping thriller packed full of twists and turns. A finalist and highly recommended.’ The Wishing Shelf Book Awards
Title: Forbidden
Author: F. Stone
Star Rating: 5 Stars
Number of Readers: 19
Stats
Editing: 9/10
Writing Style: 9/10
Content: 9/10
Cover: 8/10
Of the 19 readers:
18 would read another book by this author.
15 thought the cover was good or excellent.
19 felt it was easy to follow.
19 would recommend this story to another reader to try.
13 felt the author’s strongest skill was ‘plotting a story’.
6 felt the author’s strongest skill was ‘developing the characters’.
19 felt the pacing was good or excellent.
19 thought the author understood the readership and what they wanted.
Readers’ Comments
‘Plenty of political intrigue in this exciting thriller. I enjoyed it very much. The important thing with a book of this nature is pace. Well, I’m happy to tell you, this has a ton of it.’ Male reader, aged 53
‘Hashim is a pretty cool character. Good to see a Muslim character in the driving seat.’ Female reader, aged 48
‘The author has delivered a superbly interwoven plot inhabited by memorable characters. Disturbing and, I must say, a rather exciting read. This is an author to watch.’ Female reader. aged 41
‘Packed full of murder and betrayal and written with a simple but effective writing style. The plot will keep you guessing until the very last page. Also, good to read a thriller that spends a little time on culture/customs too.’ Female reader, aged 60
To Sum It Up:
‘A gripping thriller packed full of twists and turns. A finalist and highly recommended.’ The Wishing Shelf Book Awards
July 5, 2017
It is 2047 and in the City of Samarra which is the capital of the Republic of Islamic Provinces & Territories (RIPT). Eliza MacKay has come to be part of an American Habitat team. But the team is abused and everyone except Eliza is killed. Captain Hashim Sharif keeps Eliza safe but then finds his family threatened if he doesn’t kill her. Sharif has to walk a balancing line to keep his family safe, Eliza safe, and find those that killed the Habitat team. But the more that Sharif and Eliza are together they find themselves becoming attracted to each other. But Sharif is a devout Muslin and loving this white woman is forbidden.
This story starts out with a bang and just keeps going. Eliza arrive in a different flight from the Habitat team and ends up being questioned. After that things seem odd to her and her sense of danger keeps increasing until she finds herself in the middle of a shootout. Thankfully Sharif is there to protect her but he finds himself in a bad position doing so. I think Sharif is a great character. He wants to protect those that need it and finds himself torn between his love for Eliza and his religion.
This is a great story that is filled with action and a great romance. This is one book that I normally would have just flipped by but it is definitely worth the read.
I received Forbidden from Partners in Crime Virtual Book Tours for free. This has in no way influenced my opinion of this book.
This story starts out with a bang and just keeps going. Eliza arrive in a different flight from the Habitat team and ends up being questioned. After that things seem odd to her and her sense of danger keeps increasing until she finds herself in the middle of a shootout. Thankfully Sharif is there to protect her but he finds himself in a bad position doing so. I think Sharif is a great character. He wants to protect those that need it and finds himself torn between his love for Eliza and his religion.
This is a great story that is filled with action and a great romance. This is one book that I normally would have just flipped by but it is definitely worth the read.
I received Forbidden from Partners in Crime Virtual Book Tours for free. This has in no way influenced my opinion of this book.
October 8, 2017
I put off reviewing this book for a long time because I knew Islam played a large part in the story and I was worried about promoting a book that could potentially have controversial content. I finally was able to put aside my fears in that regard when I read some of the reviews and discovered that this book deals with the religion in a very fair manner, so I decided to take the plunge.
The story is engaging and the pace is well-balanced. Fast enough to hold the reader's interest but slow enough to give you time to get to know the characters. The romance is believable and the suspense is palpable. I applaud the author for pulling off both of these things.
However, this book will unfortunately be another four star read for me. The main issue is the typos. I've said in the past that I can often look past these, but when there are so many that they start to distract from the story, I can't ignore them. This book had at least a couple of typos per chapter, and I can't write an honest review without mentioning them.
I was also left hungry for a little more detail. Considering that this book takes place in a part of the world I have never visited, within a culture I know very little about, I was hoping to be taken on a beautiful journey into another world. I wanted more vivid descriptions, more explanations of Muslim teachings, more history of the area. I wanted to feel like I was right there with the characters, and I didn't feel that reading this book.
The story is engaging and the pace is well-balanced. Fast enough to hold the reader's interest but slow enough to give you time to get to know the characters. The romance is believable and the suspense is palpable. I applaud the author for pulling off both of these things.
However, this book will unfortunately be another four star read for me. The main issue is the typos. I've said in the past that I can often look past these, but when there are so many that they start to distract from the story, I can't ignore them. This book had at least a couple of typos per chapter, and I can't write an honest review without mentioning them.
I was also left hungry for a little more detail. Considering that this book takes place in a part of the world I have never visited, within a culture I know very little about, I was hoping to be taken on a beautiful journey into another world. I wanted more vivid descriptions, more explanations of Muslim teachings, more history of the area. I wanted to feel like I was right there with the characters, and I didn't feel that reading this book.
May 29, 2017
Excellent. Deserves more than 5 stars
When reading FORBIDDEN by Feather Stone I was taken on an exciting journey of sights and sounds, culture and customs of a country I knew nothing about until I read this story.
Her writing was so descriptive I followed in the footprints of the two main characters, Eliza Mackay and Hashim Shariff, as they fought for truth and their lives, amongst endless corruption and deceit. The author pulls you into every detail of the cruel tragedy that brings them together. You experience every moment of anxiety and fear that Eliza and Hashim face and can't help being touched by the feelings they keep locked away fearing rejection.
Throughout this story you are kept on the edge of your seat.
A fast paced story where every word on the page comes to life as if you're watching a film, a film that I would be biting my nails with my heart racing.
I was amazed when reading the acknowledgements to see how much research went into writing this story and although fiction the author has included factual descriptions in her scenes involving weapons, culture and traditions.
After reading The Guardians Wildchild by Feather Stone I had no doubt that Forbidden would be an exceptional story too and I was not dissapointed. Feather Stone is an author I will be following and looking forward to reading her next book.
When reading FORBIDDEN by Feather Stone I was taken on an exciting journey of sights and sounds, culture and customs of a country I knew nothing about until I read this story.
Her writing was so descriptive I followed in the footprints of the two main characters, Eliza Mackay and Hashim Shariff, as they fought for truth and their lives, amongst endless corruption and deceit. The author pulls you into every detail of the cruel tragedy that brings them together. You experience every moment of anxiety and fear that Eliza and Hashim face and can't help being touched by the feelings they keep locked away fearing rejection.
Throughout this story you are kept on the edge of your seat.
A fast paced story where every word on the page comes to life as if you're watching a film, a film that I would be biting my nails with my heart racing.
I was amazed when reading the acknowledgements to see how much research went into writing this story and although fiction the author has included factual descriptions in her scenes involving weapons, culture and traditions.
After reading The Guardians Wildchild by Feather Stone I had no doubt that Forbidden would be an exceptional story too and I was not dissapointed. Feather Stone is an author I will be following and looking forward to reading her next book.
June 20, 2017
This novel got off to a bit of a rough start for me with choppy writing and unclear scenes. About a quarter of the way into the book, however, the writing became smooth and the scenes well developed. The narrative is action packed and full of suspense to the end.
The characters are larger than life. I had difficulty liking them. Eliza is a widow suffering from debilitating PTSD. Stone describes the PTSD graphically and it gave me a new appreciation for those who suffer from it. Eliza is a survivor and it seemed out of character for her to quickly develop affectionate feelings for her captor. And I did not like Sharif. He is a conflicted character, rough one moment and tender the next. He becomes a more tender man as the novel progresses but is someone I would never trust, unlike Eliza.
Potential readers need to know that there is a graphically portrayed attempted rape scene included. Those having survived a similar experience may have difficulty reading this book. There is also vulgar language and swearing by many characters.
Those interested in one possible future of Muslim countries might like this book. Stone portrays well the mixed messages of potential unity verses the intense desire for power by some leaders.
I received a complimentary digital copy of this book through Partners in Crime Virtual Book Tours. My comments are an independent and honest review.
The characters are larger than life. I had difficulty liking them. Eliza is a widow suffering from debilitating PTSD. Stone describes the PTSD graphically and it gave me a new appreciation for those who suffer from it. Eliza is a survivor and it seemed out of character for her to quickly develop affectionate feelings for her captor. And I did not like Sharif. He is a conflicted character, rough one moment and tender the next. He becomes a more tender man as the novel progresses but is someone I would never trust, unlike Eliza.
Potential readers need to know that there is a graphically portrayed attempted rape scene included. Those having survived a similar experience may have difficulty reading this book. There is also vulgar language and swearing by many characters.
Those interested in one possible future of Muslim countries might like this book. Stone portrays well the mixed messages of potential unity verses the intense desire for power by some leaders.
I received a complimentary digital copy of this book through Partners in Crime Virtual Book Tours. My comments are an independent and honest review.
July 6, 2017
I chose to read this book after receiving a free copy. All opinions in this review are my own and completely unbiased.
Forbidden starts out with a bang, literally, and takes the reader on a wild ride throughout. Eliza McKay is the last minute replacement as a paramedic for a group of American volunteers. All of the other volunteers are massacred within a police compound in the Middle East, and that's just the beginning of the story.
Hashim Sharif is ordered to keep Eliza with him until they figure out what to do with her. If it wasn't for Sharif, she would have been executed immediately so that there was no witness to the massacre. Sharif is a devout Muslim and can't kill an innocent woman but at the same time, his faith is being tested in other ways. Even though they have trouble trusting each other in the beginning, Eliza and Sharif start to care for each other.
The characters are complex and interesting. Eliza has PTSD because of an accident that killed her family and she shouldn't have survived. Sharif is a devout Muslim who wants to do what is right, something that can be difficult in his position as police chief in a Middle East country.
Forbidden is full of twists and has one of those plots that is almost impossible to figure out...you just have to read it. If you like an international thriller, this is a must read with a good ending.
Forbidden starts out with a bang, literally, and takes the reader on a wild ride throughout. Eliza McKay is the last minute replacement as a paramedic for a group of American volunteers. All of the other volunteers are massacred within a police compound in the Middle East, and that's just the beginning of the story.
Hashim Sharif is ordered to keep Eliza with him until they figure out what to do with her. If it wasn't for Sharif, she would have been executed immediately so that there was no witness to the massacre. Sharif is a devout Muslim and can't kill an innocent woman but at the same time, his faith is being tested in other ways. Even though they have trouble trusting each other in the beginning, Eliza and Sharif start to care for each other.
The characters are complex and interesting. Eliza has PTSD because of an accident that killed her family and she shouldn't have survived. Sharif is a devout Muslim who wants to do what is right, something that can be difficult in his position as police chief in a Middle East country.
Forbidden is full of twists and has one of those plots that is almost impossible to figure out...you just have to read it. If you like an international thriller, this is a must read with a good ending.
July 13, 2018
What didn't this book have? This was and had everything good and bad in a mystery suspense drama. I couldn't stop reading it seems so real, all the details the characters were very authentic. I'm glad the author did his research on Islamic religion and Muslim culture. The story was set from early past to way in the future, that's why the story held so much to look forward to. The author really captured the reality of some of events our present time, it was cohesive with the storyline and relationship between Hashim and Eliza. I'm so proud to read a story that didn't taint the morality of the characters emotional and romantic issues. I get tired of reading sex and religion with a kink thrown around it's fictional but really takes away from the more interesting parts of the dialogue. The author steered away from that but kept it classy and morally acceptable and not that forbidden. I don't want a sequel this story is a full length thoroughly well written craft. I recommend it to all my followers and Goodreads friends!
June 19, 2017
This book is more heavy on the "suspense" then on the "romance". Yet, I am not complaining. I don't like then a suspense romance novel is more about the romance then the storyline itself. The chemistry between Eliza and Sharif was good and believable.
Eliza did grow stronger. However, she did not start out that way. To be honest, she did step into a war zone; where the men were rough. Sharif may have been set up and had the odds stacked against him but he did not take things lying down.
As much as I did like this book, it was not an easy road in the beginning. In fact, for the first ten chapters, I was actually liking this book a lot but then after that, my excitement started going down. A shift in the story some with the excitement of the first dangerous situation gone; the story became conversation. I put the book down for a break. I came back to it. The middle gets better again with the action and stays that way till the end.
Eliza did grow stronger. However, she did not start out that way. To be honest, she did step into a war zone; where the men were rough. Sharif may have been set up and had the odds stacked against him but he did not take things lying down.
As much as I did like this book, it was not an easy road in the beginning. In fact, for the first ten chapters, I was actually liking this book a lot but then after that, my excitement started going down. A shift in the story some with the excitement of the first dangerous situation gone; the story became conversation. I put the book down for a break. I came back to it. The middle gets better again with the action and stays that way till the end.
December 27, 2017
Set in the year 2047 in the fictitious Republic of Islamic Provinces and Territories, Forbidden is an interesting study in paradoxes. Captain Sharif, a devout and obedient Muslim, must deal with the corruption of his superiors when ordered to cover up the murder of fifteen Habitat for Humanity Workers. He must also wrestle with his attraction to Eliza MacCay, a feisty Canadian paramedic who is the soul survivor of the massacre. (Sharia Law does not permit a Muslim to become intimate with non-Muslims.) Finally, he must protect his family members from government hit men who will wipe them out if he fails to tow the line. Forbidden is filled with violence that is well choreographed and realistic (perhaps because of F. Stone’s background as a paramedic), but above all it is a love story. The exchanges between Captain Sharif and Eliza MacCay are touching and unforgettable. Five stars!
February 23, 2017
I loved this story. It was a great non stop roller-coaster ride and defiantly a page turner. The plot was excellent and although it is based in the future I could relate to the corruption, political problems and the every changing who done it ideas. Eliza proves herself over and over again that she is strong woman and a survivor a trait not often found in suspense/thriller books. And Captain Sharif does his best to protect and help her while sticking to his strong faith. The story if well written and F.Stone makes everything come alive with her writing style. I definitely recommend you checking out this book.
March 21, 2017
Forbidden is set in the near future, in the fictitious Republic of Islamic Provinces & Territories (RIPT). While the countries of the Middle East have unified, they haven't escaped terrorism. The book reminded me that the tragedy of this region is never-ending.
The story is largely told through 2 main characters: Eliza, a Canadian paramedic suffering from PTSD caused by a heartbreaking loss and Sharif, a RIPT police captain and devout Muslim whose religious views place him at odds with his police duties and growing attraction to Eliza. I found that both of their back stories made them sympathetic characters. Their romantic tension along with plot developments and twists keep the story rolling.
From the author acknowledgments at the end, the book seems solidly researched. I felt I could trust the story details.
Forbidden is an engaging read for those who enjoy thrillers with considerable action and a Middle East setting.
The story is largely told through 2 main characters: Eliza, a Canadian paramedic suffering from PTSD caused by a heartbreaking loss and Sharif, a RIPT police captain and devout Muslim whose religious views place him at odds with his police duties and growing attraction to Eliza. I found that both of their back stories made them sympathetic characters. Their romantic tension along with plot developments and twists keep the story rolling.
From the author acknowledgments at the end, the book seems solidly researched. I felt I could trust the story details.
Forbidden is an engaging read for those who enjoy thrillers with considerable action and a Middle East setting.
July 3, 2017
This book was absolutely amazing. Action packed, on the edge of your seat kind of book. To watch two people go from hatred to love the way Shariff & MacKay do is just indescribably. MacKay has a lot of issues from her past that get brought up during her capitive time. Her mental illness comes into play. So much happens and just when you think you have figured it out. BAM! This is def a worth while book to get in your hands!
April 20, 2017
This book was absolutely fantastic! I was totally glued to this story every page of the way. Let me start by saying that I love the cover - it draws you in. Once you start reading you will not want to stop until you are finished! This is the very definition of suspense, it was riveting. To be honest I was never all that interested in reading about the middle east. I never would have thought I would have enjoyed one as much as I did this one. It was just so interesting.
Excellent character development. I really loved Eliza. I think I would have really liked her in real life. She was tough, strong, yet real and sensitive. And - Hashim Sharif, holy cow! There is some depth to that man's character. You start out trying desperately not wanting to like him, because of who and what he is, but you just can't help yourself. I mean after all he is only human too and has feelings, and thank God (Allah to him) he does! There is this part I loved where Sharif is trying to get Eliza to drive (she hasn't driven in years because her family died in an accident). She is terrified and he is so good with her -forceful but fun and it was what she so needed. It was a wonderful scene.
Eliza parked and sat back. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She covered her face with her hands and wiped tears from her eyes. “Hashim,” she said softly while her eyes were still closed, “do you have any idea that you’ve performed a miracle this afternoon?” She turned to him. “People who care about me, others who are professionals, failed to do what you did.” Sharif smiled.
I know that the author did extensive research for this novel but seriously! Wow, this was just so expertly written. I felt like I was watching CNN half the time. That's how real it was.
Near the supply truck, she heard the ping, ping of a cell phone, then the trembling voice of a woman crying, "Ralph, pick up the phone. Please. Oh God ...." The woman screamed. With a blast of gunfire, her cries stopped. Bullets pierced the canvas and shattered a suitcase in front of Eliza. Her body trembled violently. In minutes she would be killed.
The luggage offered no protection. Terrified to make any sound, yet frantic to hide, she pressed her backpack to her chest. She gasped as if starved for oxygen. Tears ran down her cheeks as she heard the terrified people and Charlie beg for their lives.
Warning - this book is very graphic! Not for people who can't read about bloodshed.
If you are up for some excellent edge-of-your-seat suspense you will love this book.
I voluntarily posted this review after receiving a copy of this book from the author, F. Stone - Thank You!
Excellent character development. I really loved Eliza. I think I would have really liked her in real life. She was tough, strong, yet real and sensitive. And - Hashim Sharif, holy cow! There is some depth to that man's character. You start out trying desperately not wanting to like him, because of who and what he is, but you just can't help yourself. I mean after all he is only human too and has feelings, and thank God (Allah to him) he does! There is this part I loved where Sharif is trying to get Eliza to drive (she hasn't driven in years because her family died in an accident). She is terrified and he is so good with her -forceful but fun and it was what she so needed. It was a wonderful scene.
Eliza parked and sat back. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She covered her face with her hands and wiped tears from her eyes. “Hashim,” she said softly while her eyes were still closed, “do you have any idea that you’ve performed a miracle this afternoon?” She turned to him. “People who care about me, others who are professionals, failed to do what you did.” Sharif smiled.
I know that the author did extensive research for this novel but seriously! Wow, this was just so expertly written. I felt like I was watching CNN half the time. That's how real it was.
Near the supply truck, she heard the ping, ping of a cell phone, then the trembling voice of a woman crying, "Ralph, pick up the phone. Please. Oh God ...." The woman screamed. With a blast of gunfire, her cries stopped. Bullets pierced the canvas and shattered a suitcase in front of Eliza. Her body trembled violently. In minutes she would be killed.
The luggage offered no protection. Terrified to make any sound, yet frantic to hide, she pressed her backpack to her chest. She gasped as if starved for oxygen. Tears ran down her cheeks as she heard the terrified people and Charlie beg for their lives.
Warning - this book is very graphic! Not for people who can't read about bloodshed.
If you are up for some excellent edge-of-your-seat suspense you will love this book.
I voluntarily posted this review after receiving a copy of this book from the author, F. Stone - Thank You!
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