The Shadow Mark

Lords of Davenia #2

by Mason Thomas

Auraq Greystone, once a military officer with a promising future, exists on the fringe of society. Accused of murder, Auraq is on the run from the ax—until two fugitives crash into his solitary life. One is a young man named Kane. The glowing marks on his arm pulse with an otherworldly power, and they have made him the target of a sinister organization called the Order of the Jackal. When the old man protecting Kane dies in an ambush, Auraq swears an oath to take his place.

But the runes are far more significant than they realize. They are a message from the shadow realm, a dark memory of the past—one holding evidence of a bloody massacre and its savage architect; one that will shake the kingdom to its foundation. Risking arrest and execution, Auraq fights to get Kane to the capital city where the cryptic marking can be unlocked. And with assassins close on their trail, Auraq might never get the chance to show Kane what’s in his heart—or the way their journey together has changed him.

The Shadow Mark is an epic tale of magic, murder, conspiracy, betrayal, and—for the two men tasked with unraveling the mystery—love and redemption.

A Lords of Davenia Novel

Genres: Fantasy, M M Romance, Magic, Romance, Military Fiction, M M Fantasy, LGBT

312 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 13, 2017

Reviews

[SheReadsALot · Rating 4 out of 5]

It's a unicorn gang review! Sara and Fantasy Living join the Mason Thomas reading party! (My 2 cents below):

3.75- 4 HEARTS--I jumped at the chance to review The Shadow Mark without even reading the blurb. Why? Lord Mouse is one of my favorite reads last year (my review), and Mouse is hands down one of my fave characters written. What drew me in was the adventure, the fantasy based world Mason Thomas created, the snark and wit.

And of course, Mouse.

If you've read Lord Mouse first (it's not necessary, it can be read as a standalone), you know the snark is heavy. Mouse demands attention with his very being. He's just that type of personality.

That is not to be found in The Shadow Mark.

Auraq was a soldier with a lot of promise. Now he's living on edges of society due to being accused of murder. One night, his solitude is interrupted by a pair of small townsmen. The younger of the men, Kane has mysterious magical marks that attract the wrong attention, assassin attention. Upon a dying man's oath, Auraq ends up being Kane's protector and bodyguard while they try to search for answers to the mysterious marks.

It's a mostly fast paced adventure full of backstabbing characters, killers and fighting.

A captivating read from start to finish, though I'll have to say the second half outweighs the first half.

Where I find this author flourishes: action and suspense - Thomas is clearly a gamer and it shows. He knows how to set an action scene, make it impactful enough. I appreciate sword fights, especially well-written scenes. Thomas thinks out the swing, the lunges...it's great to read. Weaving a tale, keeping the suspense and action turned up high!

Where there is improvement: editing - Though I read an ARC, the tale in Shadow Mark is definitely more linear than Lord Mouse. Less time jumping which made a smoother read. Now as to a personal enjoyment, the fantasy is stepped up in Shadow Mark. The vocabulary read less modern compared to Lord Mouse (I don't mind either approach TBH)

Areas for improvement: The story is told mainly from Auraq POV, so his 'love' interest Kane and his attributes are told from Auraq. Auraq is tight-lipped and his 'romantic' feelings are definitely buried way, way, waaay deep. There wasn't much to go from since Kane was introduced as an annoyance and someone who was told to wait here and there, while Auraq took care of the grunt work. Kane could have been more even from Auraq's POV. He's introduced as young apprentice, didn't seem on much consequence. And he seemed like the means to an oath, not much a character with depth. Then the second half happened, where a romance sort of happens in between the mystery unfolds.

The romance is secondary in stories Thomas has presented so far. But I feel the initial reaction of Kane didn't wear off until way late. Just a glimpse or inkling more of Auraq's feelings would have made more of an impact for me. I'm fine with mere kisses, but the relationship goes from 0 to 100% and I'm still having difficulties buying it.

I live for tight-lipped heroes, especially ones that are not demonstrative. Auraq took that to an extreme. His protectiveness was palpable, it's what warmed me in the end. But the romance...it needed some work.

Readable? For sure.

But if you're a reader who needs sex in your romance or overly mushy displays, I wouldn't recommend The Shadow Mark. The novel is quieter than its predecessor, more of a tactical head game waiting to be played out.

The story and mystery are the main players, along with Auraq, the seemingly irredeemable criminal warrior with a heart of loyal gold. I loved the mystery, kinda guessed who was the culprit behind the treasonous crime. But how everything came together? That was fun.

Enjoyed the last chapter even more than the epilogue. Am I seeing a possible link between book #1 and #2's Lords? I really hope so.

Overall, great story stronger in all parts but romance than book #1. I'm definitely a fan of this series.



A copy provided for an honest review.

[Elena Rodríguez · Rating 3 out of 5]

“Finish what I could not”.

Ha sido un quiero, pero no puedo. La historia no ha estado nada mal. Un poco como el primer libro, personajes entrañables, carismáticos. Sin embargo, una parte de mi quería que esta novela estuviera conectada con los personajes/argumento del primer libro. Eso siento que ha sido un cubo de agua para mi lectura.

Independientemente de esto, ha sido una buena lectura, entretenida y entrañable.

[Richard Derus · Rating 4 out of 5]

Rating: 3.5* of five

It's never too early to plan for #Booksgiving! Start getting your bookish friends their read on...that gay fantasy reading man? Here's the sequel to Lord Mouse!

Note that Kindle note 19 is a total ending-giveaway spoiler.

What I liked best was that the gayness was incidental to the plot. What I wasn't expecting was the absence of sex. It wasn't *bad* it was simply unexpected. Completely in character, I fully acknowledge. But surprising. And as for set-ups for sequels, this can't be beat. I'll read 'em.

But somebody at Dreamspinner needs to get with the program vis-a-vis editing. Many fewer malapropisms than LORD MOUSE, but the copyeditor needs to keep a style sheet: Lendera PROVENCE or PROVINCE, not both.

[Sara]

5 Hearts

This book was amazing. Gods, was it ever.

I am going to get this out of the way and say while I had fun with Lord Mouse, I fell in love with The Shadow Mark and liked it… more. Auraq’s book is much different from Lord Mouse’s and it’s obvious from the first page. The writing is brilliant but Auraq is much quieter, much more melancholy, vulnerable and subdued with his internal action than our bouncing off the walls Mouse was. Though I adored Mouse, there is something about Auraq with his restless soul that tugged on my heart and made me crush on him in the first chapter. I marinated in Auraq’s POV until my fingers and toes were pruny and fell in love with him.

There are no limits to what certain men will do to keep a dark secret from reaching the light of day. Keep him safe.

We meet Auraq as he is settling in for the night, off the road and out of sight as he is a wanted man. When two men who are travelling to Har Diamante come up and ask if they can share with him what they have with Auraq and vice versa, he decides to oblige them. The men, an older man named Tan and his young apprentice Kane not only share their wine and a small story, with Auraq, but they share hired assassins who attack the trio and murder Tan. It’s as Tan lays dying that he makes Auraq promise to take care of Kane.

The meeting of Auraq and Kane happens quickly as does their being put together for the story but the story itself isn’t quick nor is the romance between the men. This is one hell of a slow burn and it was done so damn well. It’s almost as if you get the romance as you read between the lines because even Auraq, as brilliant as he is, doesn’t see what is happening right in front of him with Kane.

This is a layered story, one I like to refer to as an onion. What you see on the surface, is just that and it’s only as the layers are removed that we get to the meat of it all and some of it will bring your eyes to tears. Yup, there are parts of this that had me tearing up as we get down to it all.

So, Auraq meets Kane, promises Kane’s Master that he will protect him and deliver him safely but Auraq needs to know what’s up. When Kane shows him the marks on his arm, Auraq puts a plan into action to make sure they learn what the marks are and that Kane is safe, no matter what. Good lord. The lengths Auraq goes through to find a way out what the marks are and simply to keep Kane safe were amazing. This man, this exiled and wanted for murder soldier who ran away to save his own life repeatedly risks his life for Kane. It’s a damn good thing Auraq isn’t only smart, but skilled as a warrior and possess the intense need to protect Kane. Ack. This book just hit me in all the right places.

“This is a terrible idea.”

“You can trust him.”

“I don’t trust anybody. Except maybe you.”

I adored Kane. He is this man who is part of something he didn’t ask for. Every time he has to show the marks on his arm I felt for him. It was almost a level of shame attached and yet he had nothing to be ashamed of. How Kane instinctively trusts Auraq was lovely and how he is as fierce in his loyalty and protectiveness of Auraq just made my heart sing. I mean, just what he does with Auraq’s father is enough to want to put the man in my pocket! He gets Auraq in so many ways that he is the perfect match for Auraq, if only Auraq would take a moment and really notice him.

The fantasy was stepped up in this story and it was a joy to read. From visiting the Academy District with mages both vintage and brand new to learning about the runes, realms and ramifications of The Order of the Jackal to just… everything that we get made this story a gorgeous read. Getting the backstory of Auraq and why he carries two swords, why he is on the outs with his father, the whole deal with Bendo, the wolvern and how anyone who comes into contact with the mark on Kane’s arm comes to harm, made me irritated that I don’t read faster. I had to know it all, I needed to know what the Shadow Mark was and when we got it? Oh Nelly, was it ever good.

So yeah, this was good. The romance between Auraq and Kane is quiet yet fierce. The fantasy elements of the story were amazing, intriguing and detailed that they gave the story another element to fall in love with. The actions scenes were intense AF but really showed just how bad ass Auraq is and hey, don’t try to mess with Kane because it’s not going to end well. Just saying. At the end, this was one hell of a story that kept me glued to the page with excitement and want. That epilogue was beautiful and I cannot wait to read more from the author.

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[Joyfully Jay · Rating 5 out of 5]

A Joyfully Jay review.

4.75 stars

The Shadow Mark is the second in the Lords of Davenia series, following Lord Mouse, but this book is easily read as a standalone. The plot isn’t nearly as complex as my summary makes it seem, but it can be hard to sum up without revealing too many spoilers. This book offers a straightforward fantasy with a strong plot, great characters, and excellent pacing. It really hits all the right notes and I was never less than completely involved with the story. Right from the start, we’re exposed to a level of action that remains consistent and engaging, without ever seeming superfluous or like page filler. The tension during certain moments is credible and it was really hard to set The Shadow Mark down long enough to do things like sleep.

Kane and Auraq are rather “stock” fantasy characters – one a man on the run and the other an innocent trapped by dangerous magic. But they are written so well and given so much life that they never feel stale or boring. Auraq is slightly better developed than Kane and his struggle to make sense of both the situation he is in and the reality of his past are keenly rendered. Kane makes a good partner for the gruff Auraq, but for too much of the book he is forced to the sidelines because of the mark. So I didn’t feel as though his character got nearly the chance he deserved to shine. This is really my own gripe with the book and I considered it a minor one as a more involved Kane would have made a great story only better. In addition to the main characters, we’re given a well developed secondary cast that both has purpose and depth. Auraq’s father is an especially nice addition.

Read Sue’s review in its entirety here.

[Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~ · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars

There's no Lord Mouse in this one, not even a cameo. But we do meet Auraq, who has some ghosts from his past, and Kane, who has unwittingly stumbled on a problem way too big for him. Auraq swears to protect him and help him, and so the two are off to figure out what's going on.

You do need to check your disbelief at the door. Auraq gets hurt so many times in this and yet still keeps ticking, it got ridiculous pretty quickly, even with the benefits of magical healing. Kane even contributes to the fights from time to time, so he wasn't a complete damsel in distress. It was quick paced and the world building was pretty solid. I wasn't expecting this to be tied into the long-ago assassination plot of the king and his family, and it looks like there's still more on that for another book at least.

While I liked Kane and Auraq a lot, the romance was very much an afterthought, so don't go into this expecting much in that department. Given that this is longer than Lord Mouse and that the MCs spend a lot more time together than Mouse and Garron did, their "romance" was a lot more abrupt and less developed. This could have been a great slow burn, but alas, it never even got lukewarm.

[Ami · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars

I fell in love with Mason Thomas’ debut novel in 2015, Lord Mouse, and when I saw this being offered for review, I didn’t hesitate to request the review copy. I am not a big high-fantasy reader, but sometimes I find authors whose stories work for me. I believe Mason Thomas is one of them.

The premise of The Shadow Mark is pretty simple. Auraq Greystone, a once military officer now a deserter, is saddled with an oath that he makes to a dying old man. That he will protect the dying man’s protégé, a young man named Kane, who is being chased by assassins due to the strange mark that appears on his forearm. So Auraq goes with Kane to find answers while trying to evade a mysterious order with skilled assassins, as well as supernatural vicious creatures, known as Wolvren.

Overall, I liked it. It offers a good adventure fantasy. Since Auraq knows nothing about the strange mark, he pretty much takes us readers along his journey of discovery. When he gets new knowledge, we know it as well. Although I admit that at times, I also felt that this book went a bit too long. Like I kept waiting for something BIG to happen and it never really did.

I did, however, miss the snark of Lord Mouse . It was one of the most enjoyable elements from Thomas’ debut novel. The Shadow Mark has a more somber tone – probably because of Auraq’s self deprecation due to the events of his past. Auraq is also more guarded by nature – which frustrated me oftentimes since he keeps what he knows from Kane. I understand that Kane is not a soldier nor somebody with fighting skill – but it is his life that is on the line. I would prefer Kane comes to the journey with open eyes rather than just being strung along like a child.

On that note, I also wasn’t convinced with the romance. The book is written from Auraq’s perspective … and somehow I probably understand better why Kane might fall in love with his guardian. But I wasn’t really sure why and how Auraq developed his feeling for Kane. It felt underwhelming for me, sadly.

Taking everything into consideration, I would still like to recommend this if you like high-fantasy adventure books with modest romantic tone and the slowest of slow burn *lol*. Just don’t expect any steam – this book only has 2-3 kisses and that’s it.


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[Kazza · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5 Stars
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Thoughts:

There is plenty of action in the well named The Shadow Mark – swords, explosions, fighting, and I swear Auraq is the Terminator of Davenia, you cannot best that man.

It's a well written fantasy with excellent world building, it provides the reader with a great sense of life in another time and another world. The escapism is first rate. The journey from their initial camp to inns on to Har Tesera and it’s different districts, to the capital of Davenia is one big adventure where you can’t wait to see what’s going to happen next.

I liked the main characters – I thought Auraq was a man of his word and Kane kind and uncomplicated – although they both have difficult backstories and are attempting to deal with them and remain intact. The secondary characters have depth. Old Tan, for as little as he was in the book, loomed large over their quest/adventure. Malgar, Auraq’s father, and his (initially strained) relationship with Auraq was very well fleshed out. I felt Auraq was well developed, if not the most communicative at times. Kane was sweet but not as easy to get as close to throughout which impacted the romance and diluted chemistry. I would have liked this book better if Auraq and Kane simply became close friends.

There was no problem becoming completely involved in The Shadow Mark even though I did not read book #1, so for those who would like to know, it is a definite standalone book within a series.

I liked the backstories about both men and that they (mostly) come out bit by bit, especially in regards to Auraq. Kane is understandably guarded about the tattoo on his arm and his past, but once he shares he truly does come clean. Auraq was pretty tight lipped and extremely guarded with good reason.

Overall:

When I started this book I was really hoping for a good quality fantasy book, I’d DNFed three books just prior to picking this one up and I was nervous. As it turned out The Shadow Mark was just what I was looking for, a rollicking good fantasy/action/ adventure /suspense story. As for the romance aspect, I just didn’t feel any chemistry between the MCs, others may completely disagree on this point, but I wasn’t particularly worried because I felt a strong friendship and respect between Auraq and Kane and the rest of the book took care of itself, it was thoroughly enjoyable and engaging, and I was reading for the action and fantasy arcs.

Recommended for people who want to feel like they are truly reading fantasy – complete with a non-contemporary style to the language used, for those who enjoy being spirited away to another place and enjoy action, suspense, and characters who are eminently likeable all wrapped up in some very nice writing. Bring on book #3 in the series. 4.5 Stars!

[M'rella · Rating 4 out of 5]

Warning:
NO sex.
NO romantic relationship or indication thereof until the very end of the book.

Come to think of it, can't call it bromance either.

All of the above are perfect for me :p

***
Very good adventure/suspense.
My only disappointment, I never felt much for Kane. The character was pretty flat and never came to shine.

4 stars.

[JR · Rating 5 out of 5]

Ex military, accused of a heinous crime, Auraq Greystone is living and hiding among the fringes of society. His existence is threatened when he becomes the bodyguard to Kane, a young man with a mysterious mark on his arm.

Do I like this series, you bet. The world building is intelligent, complex, and fascinating. The characters are likable and well developed. This is fantasy at it's best with a wonderful fledgling romance. You can read this as a standalone, but having read the first, I can see how the author is weaving the threads of the first book into the second. Why would you not read the first one anyway?

I want more, more, more......

[Whit · Rating 5 out of 5]

I LOVED this! I did not want to put this one down. Action packed fantasy with a side of romance. Full review on release day at It's About the Book.

[WhatAStrangeDuck · Rating 4 out of 5]

Quite clearly better than the one before, and there were even some loose ends tied up (kind of). I enjoyed it very much and have high hopes for this author.

[Kimberly Gabriel · Rating 5 out of 5]

I was lucky enough to get my hands on an ARC. I loved Lord Mouse, Thomas's debut, so much, I was excited to read his next book in the Lords of Davenia series. This did not disappoint!

The tone is different than Lord Mouse. Mouse was a snarky character compared to Auraq's dark and brooding personality. But like Mouse, Auraq has a strong, compelling, voice. The action is intense and fast-paced, and I just loved the way Auraq and Kane complement each other out. Once I started this book, I couldn't put it down. I read this in a day and enjoyed everything about it.

[FantasyLiving · Rating 2 out of 5]

Tag Team review with SheReadsAlot and Sara
Written for Boy Meets Boy Reviews

2.5 Hears

Auraq is a pretty serious guy. He is on the run, still mourning his dead wife, and the loss of his life in the King’s Army, and has no interest in participating in the world with people.

Kane is young. He’s an orphan. And the man who took him under his wing has died.That’s pretty much all I really know about Kane. Oh, and he has a weird mystical mark on his arm that is burning him and is the cause of Assassin’s pursuing him.

While I got a fairly good picture of Auraq, there was no real character building with Kane, nor was there much relationship building between the two. Auraq spent most of his time avoiding conversation with Kane, and making remarks about handing him off and completing the task he promised a dying man. I am seriously underwhelmed when it comes to this pair.

I like broody damaged characters. I think they have a lot of potential, and can be awesomely complex. Unfortunately this missed the opportunity to be that for me.

The adventure story was a good concept, and I did enjoy the expansion on the world building in this book. I also found that it dragged and I was bogged down with minute details I didn’t care about and didn’t really add a great deal to my overall view of this AU. While the writing was good, and most of the editing was tight, it was the overlaying of inconsequential details about landscape or actions, that I did not enjoy and skimmed through. This is my issue really. I’m impatient and have a hard time concentrating on lots of descriptives. I like just enough to see a clear picture, but once it goes into the hues of flower petals I no longer care (this didn’t really happen in this story, but I don’t have the patience to get an exact quote).

Maybe I was just having an off week. And after the fast pace of Lord Mouse, I probably had something else in mind, which skewed my expectations. We were also experiencing a heatwave and my a/c was broken so this could have contributed to my foul mood and overall enjoyment.
I will never really know.

I’d like the author to focus on building secondary characters. This was a complaint in my review of Lord Mouse, and I think it would really boost the story if this angle was achieved.

For those who enjoy a more descriptive Fantasy universe, this is recommended. If you’re looking for something similar to Lord Mouse, you will not find it here. This is based on a reclusive fugitive and a young man he happens to get stuck with. The highlight of this book for me was at around 70% when everything started coming together. That part of the writing was mostly tight, with action, and plot twists. I enjoyed immensely and it enabled me to complete the story feeling somewhat satisfied.

I am not done giving this author my attention. There is a lot of talent and imagination, and this world intrigues me. I just may need to ensure optimal reading conditions to ensure I am receptive before I attempt another story.

[M · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars, rounded down. Set in the same world as Lord Mouse, but being entirely unrelated, this is definitely more action/fantasy than romance. In fact, there is so little romance that it would make no difference if it were absent entirely. As a work of fantasy, it was pretty compelling. Our protagonist, Auraq, is a disgraced soldier who accidentally ends up embroiled in a magical conspiracy involving an unwitting young man called Kane, who becomes the focus of a powerful secret society. Auraq swears an oath to protect Kane and the two of them embark on a journey to find out what the hell is going on. It was well-written, with good world-building, but pretty intense, with no respite or levity. I think Thomas has created an interesting fantasy universe and has written a very readable book, but it definitely felt like something was missing. And even though we get a clear resolution and a HEA, I finished this book feeling vaguely unsatisfied.

[Relly · Rating 5 out of 5]

Excellent

4.5 Stars

This was one of the best books I have read so far this year
I enjoyed the storyline with the intrigue of what happened and who was involved. I did pick the person close to when they were introduced, but it didn’t take away from my enjoyment one little bit as the storyline was well played out.
I also really liked both the MC’s in this one. I thought they worked off each other well and I actually understood the connection between the two of them, unlike the previous book.
I liked Auraq's backstory and how it was used throughout the book to show his character
Definitely recommended

[Kathleen · Rating 4 out of 5]

Really liked it. Didn't love it. Mr. Thomas is one of those authors who uses 100 words to describe something that could easily be described in under 50. And he can't quite add that thrilling edge to his prose that should make our hearts beat a little faster and move to the edge of our seats. Structurally, it was damn near perfect, with excellent editing. But that magical "something" was missing. I felt the same about his Lord Mouse. Still, as with Lord Mouse, I couldn't give it less than 4 stars.

[philip jarvis · Rating 5 out of 5]

Brilliant

Definitely another 5 star read had me hooked from the beginning can not wait for the next book from this author

[ItsAboutTheBook · Rating 5 out of 5]

Review can be read at It's About The Book

4.5 stars

I absolutely loved this book! It’s a full length action packed novel that I did not want to put down. This is book 2 in a series but I don’t think you need to read the first one to read this one. They each had a very different tone to them. Lord Mouse is the first book. It had a lot of humor and a stronger emphasis on the love story. Shadow Mark is a fantasy with a side of romance. There’s some amusing moments but the majority of the book is about the guys trying to stay alive. I adored both books but don’t expect a repeat of book one. Shadow Mark is about a new couple facing new dangers. It gets pretty intense. There’s curses, magic, power struggles and tons of awesome sword fighting. I loved every minute of this book.

Auraq is on the move hiding from his own demons one night when a pair of travelers come upon him. They’re attacked forcing Auraq to make a promise to protect the younger man named Kane. Kane has a curse of some kind making itself known on his skin. They make a plan to travel to a bigger city to ask mages what it is and can be done to remove the burden from Kane. Problem is there are highly trained assassins and creatures hunting their every step. Auraq has to protect Kane long enough to make it to the city where they think they’ll finally have answers. The answers just bring more questions. Through their time spent together Kane becomes more than just a duty to Auraq.

Auraq is amazing! Seriously I have no idea how was standing for most of the book. He was a well trained soldier back in the day. He’s running from his past and struggling with his guilt. Auraq is a wanted man. Showing his face puts himself at risk. He is brilliant and calculating. A master swordsman and a hero to Kane. Kane is an apprentice thrust into danger by an unknown source. He has no knowledge of what to do or any skills to protect himself. The men are total strangers when the voyage begins. Their journey is hard fought and emotional. This book had me on edge the entire time. The intrigue is fantastic. The battles are fierce. I loved the characters. The baddies are eeeevil. This book was fantastic! It’s the type of book you want to pick up a sword and join the battle. Anyone who loves fantasy and m/m should pick this one up. Loved it!

[Julie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another winner from Mason Thomas, who with just two books has become a standout in M/M Fantasy and an auto-buy author. This book has great characters, good world-building, and mystery elements that keep the book moving and make you want to keep reading.

[Ng · Rating 3 out of 5]

I came to this book without reading Lord Mouse. This is a standalone.
Auraq- is the main MC (if you can say so). He is quiet, feels he has committed an unpardonable sin and holds himself guilty for it, and is estranged from his dad.

This book is an action packed fantasy.

Kane, the other MC, who is the person in the middle of this action adventure- has things happen to him. I felt other than the fact that he needed to be saved, he did not feel like someone with even a secondary role. I would give that to Auraq's dad, who came midway through the book and made more of a presence.

Romance is incidental.

[Briony · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book was well written and on that alone I was expecting to give a higher rating but there were so many other frustrating elements.

The first half of the book drags, the protagonist is interesting but contradictory and melodramatic. And then the supporting character Kane...who knows...he doesn't say or do much for the entire book except for getting saved like a damsel in every scene . The antagonists were obvious, the relationship building lackluster and then eye-rolling.

Clearly my opinion isn't shared by others though. I really enjoyed the first book in this series so I'm still looking forward to future works by this author.

[Arshad Ahsanuddin · Rating 3 out of 5]

The follow up to Lord Mouse, set in the same world but with different characters. It was a decent fantasy novel, and the gay romance was not integral to the plot. There wasn’t much here that was really groundbreaking or new about this world, however, and the resolution of the major plot device was fairly anticlimactic. It was a well-crafted story, but I didn’t find it to be particularly gripping or exciting. All in all, I felt the writing was good from a technical standpoint, but lacking in the emotional intensity that would have drawn me deeper into the story. 3/5 stars.

[Susan Laine · Rating 5 out of 5]

5+. This one starts out with a bang. There's so many fascinating things happening here that the romance becomes secondary to the superbly written plot. Thomas is an excellent writer who paints vivid, visceral landscapes, characters, and events. Thomas's handling of battles, especially, shines as the reader can feel each and every punch, slash, and cut as if they themselves were on the receiving end. Top marks.

Another top mark comes from world-building. Though this is the second book in the Lords of Davenia series, it's a standalone. Details and background of the world around the characters is given in tiny increments and shown with subtle but short descriptions or through dialogue. Everything else is left to the imagination, and it's a wonderful choice of writing styles. It's captivating, luring and drawing the reader in without fail. Once begun, the story must be completed practically in one sitting.

Fair warning: It's worthy of note that this is far more a fantasy adventure than a romance. There's only a kiss or two, no more. No hanky-panky of any kind. I admit, I was hoping for some intimacy. But the pace of the plot is tense and unyielding. Once the events are set in motion, there is virtually no reprieve, no chance to pause and take a breath. The pace moves swiftly and efficiently, without any annoying lulls or boring dialogue. In fact, I could not leave a single word unread. Not a single one. This book is masterfully written.

The only POV given is Auriq's. It's intriguing because it keeps Kane's mystery, well, a mystery. Both men are still well described individuals, with their own ways of doing things. Auriq is the strong silent type while Kane is a pretty regular guy thrust into the thick of things because of strange magecraft by accident. Kane could have been a bit more fleshed out, I suppose, but his character as a steadfast young man was shown adequately.

In the beginning, the interaction between the two men was wonderful to follow, the dialogue snappy and witty, the chemistry hot and heavy. Toward the end, though, as Kane grows weaker and events spiral out of control, they had less chances to interact, and that was a real shame. Personally I would have preferred more scenes with these two alone, even just talking and getting to know each other. Nonetheless, this wasn't enough for me to lower my rating. Why? Because of the story and the plot which, like a storm, races toward the end at a breathless pace, urging the reader to continue until the very last word.

From forest and hamlets to palaces and cities, we get to see a lot. Thomas's writing brings us there, to travel alongside the (anti)heroes as they make their way through the kingdom in a desperate escape from monsters and assassins. Never was there a dull moment. There's plenty of action, sword-fighting and battles, narrow escapes and tense chases, magic and palace intrigue. We learn about the world through the people, through merchants, soldiers, mages, palace noblemen, and so on. I was drawn in, and I loved it.

The rest of the review would undoubtedly merely repeat what I've already stated, with a whole host of more glorifying adjectives. If you're not too hung up on expectations of sensuality with your gay romances and you appreciate the fantasy genre, I wholeheartedly recommend this book, and likely this series. I know I'll be checking out the first book, Lord Mouse, and whatever comes later.

[Lena Grey · Rating 5 out of 5]

“The knowledge of the past stays with us. To let go is to release the images and emotions, the grudges and fears, the clingings and disappointments of the past that bind our spirit.” ~ Jack Kornfield

After being betrayed, Auraq Greystone, of 'The Shadow Mark' by Mason Thomas, runs away from his distinguished career as a military officer, his home, and his family, in order to keep from being executed. Auraq knows the punishment for his crime and knows the futility of trying to be vindicated. He never tells anyone because he feels it's his sin to bear. Little does he know that several years later, he will meet a young man who will lead him back to the life he deserves.

Auraq has been wandering alone for a long time. He has almost forgotten how being with someone can feel. When a young man, Kane, and his elderly companion come wandering into his camp, Auraq is first cautious, then appreciates their company. Unfortunately, they are ambushed by a sinister group of well-trained assassins. Auraq manages to defeat them, but in the process, the elderly man is killed. His dying wish is that Auraq will get Kane to the safety of those who can help decipher the magical marks on his arm. Aruaq accepts the challenge.

The fact that trained assassins are coming after Kane tells Auraq that whatever the mark on Kane's arm means must be very important indeed. In his determination to keep his promise and get Kane to safety, it is necessary to come out of anonymity and risk his own life to save Kane's. The mission becomes more perilous than they first realized and the depth of deception and betrayal grows exponentially deeper. Reaching their goal seems almost impossible, particularly since they can't completely trust anyone.

Auraq and Kane end up at the king's court where he's granted an audience with the king's uncle. Auraq is constantly on guard, not only because he mistrusts everyone, but for fear of being recognized. Kane is taken away, presumably to be prepared for his meeting with the top mages in the kingdom while Auraq is identified as a murderer and placed under guard to await justice. Auraq surrenders at first, then realizes that instead of being safe, Kane has been delivered to the enemy who wants to kill him.

This book is brilliant. Also, it seems more organized and reads more smoothly than the first. Although I loved Lord Mouse and became truly emotionally invested in him, I admired Auraq as well. He is certainly a man of his word besides being an awesome fighter and protector. His devotion to Kane was touching. It took him a while to see that there was anything deeper there, but, in his own time, he did. Kane may not have been able to wield a sword the way Auraq did, but he had his own special strength that shined through. Both were loyal to a fault. Although I hoped for a happy ending, many times, that didn't seem like a certainty. Thanks, Mason, for the rip-roaring, intriguing tale. I look forward to more in the future.

NOTE: This book was provided by Dreamspinner Press for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.

[Sarah (Pergamentfalter) · Rating 4 out of 5]

Die Geschichte von Mason Thomas‘ zweitem Lords of Davenia-Band dreht sich um zwei grundverschiedene Männer. Auraq Greystone ist ein ehemaliger Militäroffizier, der seit einigen Jahren auf der Flucht vor seiner Hinrichtung ist. Er ist ein typischer Krieger – meisterhaft mit der Waffe, zwischenmenschlich aber eher brummig.

Kane ist etwas jünger als Auraq und lebt seit dem Tod seiner Familie bei einem Händler. Das Leben, das er dort führt, wird jäh gestört, als ein seltsames Zeichen auf seinem Arm erscheint, es Mörder auf ihn abgesehen haben und sein Meister im Kampf stirbt. Zu Auraq, der kurz zuvor versprach, Kane zu beschützen, hat dieser in keiner Weise Vertrauen. Zudem hat Kane ein Problem mit Auraqs abweisender Art und kämpft zunehmend mit der Wirkung des Zeichens auf seinem Arm.

Das alles sind keine guten Voraussetzungen für die Reise, auf die sie sich machen müssen, um die Bedeutung des Zeichens und den Grund, warum Mörder Kane jagen, zu entschlüsseln, und sie sorgen für einigen Zündstoff zwischen ihnen. Nur langsam gewöhnen sie sich im Laufe der Geschichte aneinander. Diese Entwicklung gefiel mir sehr gut, da sie absolut überzeugend dargestellt wird. Auch als Gefühle zwischen ihnen entstehen, sind die beiden zögerlich und werfen nicht alle Vorsicht über Bord. Was zählt, ist vor allem ihr Überleben. Ihre Gefühle füreinander stellen sie so lange zurück.

Die Handlung ist insgesamt durchweg spannend und abwechslungsreich erzählt. Von blutigen Kämpfen über Monster und Magie, Intrigen und vorsichtigen Annäherungen ist einiges dabei. Dabei verliert die Geschichte niemals ihren Fokus auf Kane und Auraq. Dass sie aus Auraqs Sicht erzählt wird, trägt sicher viel dazu bei.

Einen kleinen Punktabzug gibt es von mir, weil mir eine Karte oder ein anderer geografischer Überblick fehlte. Es werden viele Länder, Völker und Landstriche genannt, aber ein echtes Bild, wie dieses Land Davenia nun aussieht, habe ich nach dem Lesen leider immer noch nicht.

FAZIT: Ein spannendes Fantasyabenteuer!

Man muss übrigens den 1. Band („Lord Mouse“) nicht kennen. Für „The Shadow Mark“ wird kein Vorwissen benötigt.

[Ken · Rating 4 out of 5]

"The Shadow Mark" has some of the weaknesses of Mason's previous novel "Lord Mouse". Its prose is not visual enough at times, some dialogue feel unnatural, and he makes a character say dialogue when silence or action could've done better job at giving power to the emotional quality of the scenes. BUT, "The Shadow Mark" is definitely a LOT LOOOOOOT better than "Lord Mouse". Like, a LOOOOOOOOOOT. The world building is so much stronger (Har Tesera's history, people's attitude towards the mages, the lax Har Tesera's guards, etc.); the romance is better set up, much more believeable, and flowed beautifully; and surprisingly, it fucking made me cry. The fillial relationship between Malgar and Auraq, that conversation about the "murder", is so heart-wrenching, and it felt so true and honest and bare and I found myself choking up. It was a perfect scene. Also, the plotline about Auraq admitting his feelings to Kane was a bit comedic really, with all the interruptions, but never ridiculous. It just made me want to scream and throw tomatoes at the universe for interfering, which is a great sign because that meant the author was successful at making me feel frustrated in behalf of Auraq. The resolution of this romantic plotline was perfect too. Like, it's felt so true to the characters and it brought all the feels without being corny. That was awesome. Also, the resolution of the plotline involving Auraq's guilt was handled really well, and I am also very glad to say that Mason Thomas wrapped up that storyline in a very poignant and hopeful way. It was like, a sweet goodbye kiss from a really good friend that needs to leave. And yeah. I probably just finished this book intwo days, but it was a friend during those two days. And if a book makes you feel like it's some living thing that you have a relationship with, well that book is a good book.

I do recommend this book, although if you're not a fantasy lover, okay, you're excused. You're missing out, though.

[Sarina · Rating 5 out of 5]

4.5* Review written for Love Bytes Reviews.

Auraq Greystone is a man on the run: from his past, the military and, most of all, from himself. When a chance encounter with a pair of travelers finds Auraq fighting for his life, and then swearing an oath of protection to Kane, a young man with a mysterious mark, he finds himself embroiled in a dangerous situation he could have in no way predicted or prepared for. With assassins and creatures of myth hot on his trail, it will take all the skill Auraq possesses to keep both himself and Kane safe until the mystery of the marks Kane carries is solved. And with Auraq’s past steadily catching up to him, the assassins may not get the chance to kill him after all…

I was first introduced to this author via his debut novel Lord Mouse and I have to say that I was extremely impressed; the plot was well thought out with engaging characters and a story that I didn’t want to put down. I’m thrilled to say that the sequel, The Shadow Mark, was every bit as good and I found myself impressed all over again. The beginning started off sedately enough before unexpectedly thrusting the characters into the middle of an ambush and while you don’t have a lot of information about Auraq at this point, this scene set the stage for the rest of the story. This book was filled to bursting with action and the same type of wonderfully fleshed out characters I was treated to in the previous novel. What surprised me, however, was just how much my appreciation for the story itself grew as I got further and further into it; I liked it in the beginning but by the end I was in love! And that ending…*sigh*. It was an unexpected little nugget of happiness and getting to see a character I’d come to both admire and adore get everything he deserved but didn’t think he could ever have was just perfect.

Fans of Lord Mouse should absolutely read this second book in the Lords of Davenia series; the story and characters were just as compelling and it was totally worth the wait! If you’re a fan of fantasy or action books, I’d recommend giving this one a look, as well; you don’t have to have read Lord Mouse in order to read The Shadow Mark but I’d still urge you to give it a try because it was an amazing book and with how good the sequel was, I wouldn’t want you to miss it! I can’t wait to see what this author comes up with next.

[Tim · Rating 4 out of 5]

Author Mason Thomas returns with this (unrelated) follow up to Lord Mouse, also set in the same world. The story opens with Auruq camping in the woods, hiding out from the law, bandits, and other eyes. Then two men crash his camp, a friendly older man named Tan and a younger surlier man, Kane. The three are wary but eventually Auruq relents and lets them stay. Then they're attacked by three mysterious men in all black. Auruq fights off two, but the third mortally wounds Tan even as Tan kills him. As he lays dying, Tan demands Auruq Promise to escort Kane to safety. Reluctant to get involved because he's wanted for his crimes, the big man eventually does swear despite his own misgivings.

As they flee cross-country, chased by more assassins and menacing beasts, Auruq discovers why the men are after Kane. He bears a mark on his arm, a magical script of fire that somehow is the embodiment of the last memories of a man. He deduces the man may be the center of a plot to overthrow the monarchy 20 years ago. But why are they stirring now? Who is behind the assassins? What does the script do? How can Auruq and Kane safely discharge their own debts?

The plot was pretty well paced, reasonably well done, and I enjoyed reading this one a lot. The only thing I didn't like was the character development was uneven and the character relationship was a real slow burn. Auruq got a bit, but it was more in the form of backstory than growth. Kane remained mostly a blank page. I kept wondering why Auruq would drawn to the younger man? This part was just a miss for me.

Still, I'd recommend this. 4 stars.

[Maji · Rating 5 out of 5]

Huuunnnnnhhhh! AMAZING READ!

Fell in love with "Lord Mouse", and fell in love with this one too!

Admittedly, slightly sad that the MC's from the first novel did not make even a tiny cameo in this one, but meh, such is life. Plus, Kane and Auraq? HEART MELTED.

The overall atmosphere and writing was pleasantly gritty and super smooth at the same time. Exactly what one would expect from a Medieval-action-fantasy-romance without being uber typical.

There was a texture to the writing that enabled you to envision and experience the exact atmosphere Thomas had in mind when writing. Kinda "Lord of the Rings"-ish, but with only two guys, and gayness involved.

Thomas really writes in such a way that sucks you in. He doesn't use any filler scenes or lines. Every single word has a purpose and doesn't miss a beat; before you know it, you've gone from the first page to half the novel, itching to cram more of it into you head before you fall asleep.

The romance was a slow burn. Almost TOO slow, but enough of it was there to quell any love-pangs a romance-reader might experience when going through pages and pages of swords and sorcery.

Another thing was the consistency of the novel. Due to there being no fillers, the plot was so evenly paced and written in so well that you're never left wondering what happened eight chapters ago. The plot wasn't diluted with anything. It was super fluid and constant.

The action was stupendous, 'nuff said.

Overall, really recommend this to action-fantasy-romance readers.

Muah!

- M