So Much Potential...
I truly wanted to like this story a whole lot more than I did. The premise was good, and I was really looking forward to hunkering down with a nice, sexy read, but the story just kind of fell flat. There were some parts that were headed somewhere good, but then the author pulled back just when the conflict was on the brink of becoming interesting. Even the ending came abruptly--just when it would have been nice to get any kind of glimpse of the next chapter in this couple's lives.
I loved the way Gemma and Dominic met. I thought him referring to her as "the Angel who saved his life" was sweet and so sexy. Yet, they just couldn't seem to get it together for me. I was rooting for them, but the chemistry fizzled out with their silly and confusing arguments. Sometimes they seemed like silly kids who didn't understand why they were fighting with each other. I hate when disagreements are not resolved, and none of the ones between Gemma and Dominic had any type of reasonable resolutions. They said a lot of "I'm sorrys," but no real reasons for the conflict in the first place.
*Case in point*
Dominic (sort of) asked Gemma to come to his next fight, or if she would like to be there, but when she asked HIM if he WANTED her there, the question doesn't really get answered. (Yeah, I'm not sure what was happening there.) Gemma got upset because she couldn't understand why he would even ask her if he didn't really want her to show up in the first place. He just stood there and let her come to her own conclusion as to why. Gemma was so upset, she ended up hurting herself, and this led to them apologizing to each other. Later, readers hear Dominic's thoughts about the real reason he didn't want her there. It would have been nice if he had actually spoke those words out loud to Gemma and gotten her response.
There was a lot of potential simmering just beneath the surface with this story, and I was a little disappointed that I didn't love it the way I'd hope to.