In general, I try not to leave reviews for books if I have nothing but bad things to say, which is why I wasn't going to leave a review for this book. But then I realised that I read this book in one sitting and that there was a reason why I was getting angry at points. It turns out that, surprisingly, I have become really invested in this series to the point where I really want it to be good.
Suddenly, I'm looking at this book in a whole new light. It's not that it's a bad book, it's just frustrating as hell at times. So with that said, onto the review. Just to forewarn you, the bad will come first, but stick with it because the good will come later.
---------- THE BAD -----------
1 - IT'S STUPID - I hate calling anything stupid, but while reading this book I kept muttering that phrase (or screaming it) over and over. The characters kept making decisions that seemed bat s*** crazy because it was always the most stupid option they could possibly choose. One of my key examples of this ties in with my second problem, which is...
2 - COPIED THE FLAWS FROM DRESDEN FILES - I said in my review of the first one that it has been heavily influenced by the Dresden Files. Well, this is to the extent where it even copies the flaws from the early books in that series... namely, Murphy. I always hated how Murphy had hired a supernatural expert, never listened to his advice and remained willfully ignorant, constantly got herself and Dresden in trouble because of it, blamed him for that trouble, and then Dresden would just roll over and take the blame. That is exactly what happens in this book with Vega and Crofton. Croft tells Vega not to do something early in the novel (basically because it is suicidally stupid), she does it anyway, he has to figure out a way to deal with the fallout from this and then he gets s*** for it from there on out. When Vega keeps repeating this pattern throughout the novel, it makes you want to climb into the pages and smack some sense into these stupid characters to break the cycle.
3 - ROMANCE IS POINTLESS AND UNDERDEVELOPED - One of my pet peeves with novels is when we have to accept a romance based solely on the fact that the people involved have declared that they are in love and nothing else. This breaks the golden 'Show don't tell' rule. Without showing us how this romance came to be, why the characters care for each other or give us any reason to root for this relationship, then there's no point including it as it never seems real.
4 - CAROLINE - I finished this novel feeling like you could have removed her story from this book and it would instantly have made it better. That's not because it's not intriguing, far from it. It is actually the more intriguing story, but it is so underdeveloped that the few times we do come across it, it just seems unnatural. There is a point in the third act where her story gets... well, not resolved... but we find out an answer to a particular storyline. That answer comes from nowhere with no foreshadowing and was so out of place it sucked me right out of the story completely. Then there is the climax of the novel and... well... enough said on this.
5 - Croft's Demon - Other than in the 1st act of the last novel, Croft's demon has never come out. It get's mentioned a lot, but when nothing ever comes of it, it feels like little more than useless baggage that bogs the story down.
++++++++++ THE GOOD ++++++++++
1 - THE CHARACTERS - By far the biggest success of this series are the main characters. Sure, they're frustrating as hell and the cause of most of the problems listed above, but for some reason I care for them. Croft seems to genuinely care and he tries his hardest which makes you root for him. Vega, as annoying and wilfully ignorant as she can be, is also trying hard to do the right thing. Also, it doesn't hurt that she is a single mother, so you kind of root for her there as well. I'm not all that attached to Caroline yet, but I don't hate her either. Somehow this series has created some real attachments to characters and that is the main reason why this isn't a 2-star review.
2 - THE POTENTIAL - I have a feeling that this series is only going to get better. I love the Dresden Files, but that didn't really pick up until the 4th book. It suffered from many of the same issues as this one and it had the same two good things that kept me reading. This book shows promise, and if this series follows that same path and tries a bit harder to separate itself from the Dresden Files, then I can see it being really good going forward.
========== THE VERDICT ==========
Okay, so judging by this essay of a review, you'd be forgiven for thinking that I hated this book. I didn't. I actually enjoyed it for the most part. It was just really frustrating.
Would I recommend it? Yes... tentatively. I'd like to read a few more to see if the issues get ironed out or to see if they just continue to grow and piss me off, but as things stand you could do much worse than this series.
So overall it's a 3-star read with definite potential for higher marks in the future.