3.5
Dane has begun investigating what he believes is the murder of his twin brother Derek. In the investigation, he encounters the woman that Derek betrayed and, it turns out, left pregnant and alone with his son. At first, Dane believes that Angel had something to do with Derek’s death, but he soon comes to understand that Angel is in fear for her life. Pretending to be Derek, Dane does what he can to earn Angel’s trust and to take care of her, to protect her, things he is compelled to do by feelings that Angel inspires in him. For her part, Angel is astonished at the change in the man she believes to be Derek and finds herself falling in love. But she still doesn’t realize that Derek is actually dead and she’s falling in love with a stranger.
This had all the hallmarks of your classic Harlequin...the cover doesn’t show it, but it’s a Harlequin Temptation. The content is more than enough evidence for this. I mean, man pretends to be his dead twin brother so he can investigate his brother’s former lover who gave birth to his love-child. In the process, he falls in love with her, but has yet to reveal that he’s actually his brother’s twin and his brother is dead. It doesn’t get any tropier than this, and that worked in this story’s favor. This was angsty and tropey goodness. The suspense plot was fairly obvious right out the gate, but it was the vehicle for the romance between Dane and Angel. There were times that I worried for Dane’s sanity, as he honestly seemed to think he was his brother - probably not what the author intended, but I think it kinda got mixed up in there, what with Dane feeling guilty about Derek’s treatment it almost comes across as his own guilt. Still, I think that helped me with dealing with the fact that this guy is poaching on his twin’s former lover...that had the potential to feel overly incestuous or something.
Dane isn’t a bad guy - he’s actually a decent hero. He’s way too autocratic at times, steamrolling over Angel’s life and basically disregarding her worries and concerns in favor of his own agenda (and expecting her to deal with it). I don’t know how it was possible, but he wasn’t an asshole about it. He was very charming about getting his own way, so that was pretty well written I think. In any other story where this kind of thing happens, I get righteously pissed with the hero - I rolled my eyes and got a bit frustrated with the heroine for not standing her ground, but I never got angry with Dane and I almost couldn’t blame Angel...he’s hard to resist. Now Angel did get pretty justifiably upset when she learned that Dane had been lying about his identity and I figured she’d stick with that mad for quite a while. Unfortunately she started having random thoughts about life being to short for grudges and she dropped that anger way too fast. I kinda wish that angst had been drawn out a bit more, considering he made love to her while she still believed he was Derek (and he honestly believed the sex would soften her up about the deception - men can be such idiots). So this was a pretty good start - I think I enjoy Foster’s earlier works more than her recent ones. This one felt like it had more heart and was less about the sex (although there was plenty of that).