WARNING: major spoilers
I loved the first six books in this series. Fall of Hades immediately became my favorite book in the series after I finished it. I had heard from so many people that The Final Spark was the perfect conclusion, and the best book in the series by far. I had very high expectations, and I know for a fact that I never wanted to love a book more than I wanted to love The Final Spark.
But then I read it, and I was so, so disappointed.
I think one of the things that upsetted me quite a bit was that the synopsis gave too much away. It gave away over half of the events that occur in the book, which, in my opinion, is too much information for a synopsis to explain. But that's only a tiny flaw compared to the rest of the issues I'm about to explain.
This book was 70% filler. Over half of the book was just Enele, this guy we don't meet until the very end of Fall of Hades, explaining military tactics and strategies to all of his men who are trying to stop Hatch once and for all. First of all, we met Enele at the end of Fall of Hades, like I said, and all of a sudden, him and his army are the main focus of the book? Second of all, the entire reason the Electroclan are in the book is so they can take down the Elgen, they don't need this guy bossing all of the Tuvaluans around.
Speaking of the Electroclan, the Electroclan were hardly even in the plotline of the story. I don't remember some of the members even having any lines. It mainly focused on Jack and Ostin, which is okay, I loved seeing their friendship really start blossoming, but I strongly believe that in a series finale, all of the characters need to be included, and play a role in trying to take care of the conflict that arouses, instead of shining the spotlight on only two characters from the group.
In Fall of Hades, it is revealed that Taylor has the ability to see the future through dreams. I loved this element, because I thought it added a lot of suspense, and it worked really well in Fall of Hades, but it's like the author completely forgot about her ability. It is never mentioned again, and I thought it would've been nice to see how the rest of the Electroclan would've reacted, and discussing how this could benefit them greatly. I felt like Taylor was the only one who was really grieving Michael's loss. The other members were depressed for only a little while, and then they pretty much moved on. I do like that they were trying to just move on, and focus on a new strategy, but the process was just too soon, and it made it a bit unrealistic. Until we get to Taylor, who grieves the loss of Michael regularly, which I thought was more realistic, but it made me wonder why Ostin wasn't grieving as much as Taylor. What I mean by that is that Ostin knew Michael for way longer than Taylor had, and was his best friend for the longest time, but he pretty much just moved on right along with the rest of the Electroclan.
After we are done explaining everything about military tactics, and Jack and Ostin rambling, we get on to the floofy stuff, where the Electroclan are being held prisoner by the Elgen.
Hatch introduces Zara, the seventeenth electric child, who has the most cliche power; she can replicate the other children's powers. Her introduction didn't make sense to me. Why would Hatch introduce her now when she could've saved their skins so many times before? I bet that if she were introduced a lot sooner, the Elgen certainly would've won by now. But no. It was almost as if the author wasn't planning on her being in the story, but then added her in at the last minute just for the sake of there being a seventeenth electric child. So unnecessary.
Hatch then uses Zara's power to replicate Taylor's power to read Cassy's mind to find the whereabouts of Dr. Coonradt (the voice). Hatch thinks Cassy is really hot, which comes out of the blue, and messes things up as to the way I saw Hatch. Before, I saw him as an evil villain determined to bring all of the world's governments under his control, but then I saw him as a completely different person. Someone to kidnaps electric children and comments on their appearances. What?
Dr. Coonradt gets captured, because Zara dug deep into Cassy's thoughts, and then Michael's mother is used as bait to lure the true leader of the resistance out of hiding; Carl Vey. I know that everyone thought he was dead, but we never really got to see why people thought he was dead, and what made everyone think that. I would've liked to see who and what started all of these rumors that told about the death of Carl Vey, but instead, he just pops right into the story, like everyone knew all along.
Michael shows up, as this "lightning god" and starts murdering all of these people, and appearing out of thin air to get from place to place. Then using his new abilities, he kills Hatch in the most predictable way possible, and no Elgen guards come after him?
And now, we're on to the ending. Oh, the ending. So many issues.
After Hatch died, everything seemed to go back to normal. And I truly just don't understand how that could happen so quickly with the Elgen, especially with a corporation that big. Wouldn't the generals second in command rise to power and take over? And what about all of the guards and soldiers? Did Welch get released from Cell 25?
And then we get to the Electroclan, who go back to school like it never even happened. They said themselves that things would never be the same again, whether they defeated Hatch or not. It's like they just bypassed that statement and pretended like nothing happened in the first place. And what about Michael's ability to dissipate, and Taylor's ability to see the future?
They put up a monument for Wade, but completely forget about Tanner and Gervaso, two people who were such a big part of the story in the first books. I'm not saying that I'm opposed to having them put up a monument for Wade, because I think that's great that they are honoring and remembering him. I just don't see why they can't remember Tanner and Gervaso the same way. Gervaso saved them more times than I can count, and Tanner was just one of the best characters, in my opinion. He was so sweet and kind to the rest of the group, and carried so much emtional pain from the crimes Hatch forced him to commit.
The ultimate reason why I hate the ending so much is that it only explains what happened to Jack, Ostin, Michael, Taylor, and a bit about Abigail, but not the rest of the Electroclan. This makes me so angry because the other members were such a big part of the story. They helped so much, they did so much, they risked their lives, for crying out loud, and the auther just forgot about them, like they weren't even there at all. The epilogue could've been written a lot differently.
You can disagree with me. That is totally fine, you are entitled to your opinion, and I am entitled to mine.
But yeah, those are my thoughts on this book. It is the bane of my existence, and I hate it so, so much.