-.- …. this isn’t even going to be a review. smdh
This book is supposed to be a “Hood Classic”…..it was HORRIBLE! like seriously. I’m not even gonna lie to myself. i was trying to convince myself that despite its MANY misgivings, that it was a good book…but I’m not about to get into the habit of allowing myself to be delusional…it was TERRIBLE!
talk about plot holes! my GOD. alright so the main character Dutch is the ruthless, crazy, smart, killer/drug lord/og/ everything else illegal and he’s supposed to be so respected and feared yet…the book only gives a MINIMUM amount of detail of his actions to prove this….it basically said. ‘Dutch is a gangster, he should be feared, that’s it. no there’s no proof just believe what i shove down your throat.’
He’s also supposed to be so crazy, like he’ll kill anybody any time any place. ie: in order to take over the drug operation in Newark NJ, he went and murdered the then, top drug lord in the game, and then chopped his head off…at age 16. now for someone to do something as crazy as this you have to think “oh some crazy ish must have happened to him when he was a child” NO…..NOT AT ALL! like…i don’t believe a person can be that crazy, and CONCIOUS of the fact that they’re crazy without a REASON. it was just….no.
what i MOST disliked about the book is that it’s basically full of flashbacks..that’s it. there’s about 10 pages accumulated that is actually happening in the present time in the story, the rest is straight up flashbacks which annoyed the HELL out of me.
Then there’s the unnecessary introduction of irrelevant characters….Nina…like what the hell was the PURPOSE of introducing her as his love interest when NOTHING HAPPENED BETWEEN THEM! i mean NOTHING at all. it was just….dumb!
Also….the author completely FAILED at building any type of emotional connection to Dutch for the reader. Usually in books there’s something about the main character and the characters around them that make you begin to care for them…NOPE. not with this book. i honestly don’t give a damn about ANY of the characters. If Dutch dropped dead right now in the book, i wouldn’t care less. i actually DONT really like him much at all. he just goes around doing random stuff and killing people senselessly.
i made a few notes as i was reading because some of the things that happened was just like WAAAAA????
1. Dutch was sent to a adult prison at the age of 16 for stealing a car and it was his first ever offense: wtf! That’s not even HALFWAY believable…like if you’re going to depict the goings ons of the hood…do it correctly please. he should have only gotten probation or been sent to JUVI, not a maximum security ADULT prison…
2. The author mentions that Sun Tzu’s The Art of War is one of Dutch’s favorite books: i swear im so sick of these urban writers dropping that book in their story as one of their characters favorite book to make them seem smart….NO! ugh. find a different book geez.
3. When Dutch went to kill the head drug lord at the moment Kazami…he gave Kazami a gun so he could kill the people who set him up. Kazami did just that….and then turned the gun on himself and killed himself before Dutch could: who the HELL would believe something like would go down….if a someone came to kill me in my house and gave me a gun….im going try and take his ass out before i go like wtf!?
4. When dutch first got home from Jail his mother said she was mad at him because he “let” the cops take him to jail: he was 15…what the hell was he supposed to do????
5. The “Current” parts of the book [the parts that weren’t flashbacks] were of Dutch being on trail….for God knows what because the damn author never really explains what he’s being charged for: the whole time Dutch’s lawyer doesn’t say a DAMN thing…the DA is bringing out witnesses just PILING evidence on him and he’s just taking it….why the hell would you hire a lawyer if they aren’t going to do anything??? Dutch says at one point he knew the jury was going to find him guilty….YA THINK?! he didn’t even TRY to defend himself.
6. The irrelevant and unnecessary character i mentioned before Nina: its revealed through a flashback -.- that she didn’t want to be with Dutch because Dutch was in the drug game and she lost her brother to the game….and she didn’t want to be associated with all that [this is understandable] HOWEVER, later on in the book she’s racing to the court room where Dutch is, to profess her love for him talking about she’s ready to do his bid with him and she’s going to stand by his side no matter what…wtf! huh?? like how does that even BEGIN to make sense???
7. A character name Young World is introduced in like the third to last chapter and he’s supposed to be Dutch’s protégé: there’s absolutely NO relationship development between these two. The author literally just said this kids name and then said Dutch was mentoring him and left him 500,000 in cash and his chain so he could take Dutch’s place when he went away….there’s no mention of how they met, there’s no mention of them spending time together. NOTHING!
8. Like every crime lord/drug lord, Dutch has a crew. his main crew consists of Angel, Roc, Zoom, Qwan, and Craze: Angel, and Roc are spending life in prison for associating and working with/for Dutch and the things they did while doing so. Zoom died while trying to run from the cops. Qwan left years back after realizing he wasn’t bout that life. Craze…..gets away unscathed! talk about believable huh!? When a person is on the level that Dutch was supposedly on, with the Mayor, the Cops, the Governor and everybody and they mama in his pocket and on his payroll….with a death toll he racked up and with the amount of money he was making, not ONE person in his team should be free. yet the cops didn’t even COME for Craze and he was Dutch’s right hand man! if anything he should’ve been the FIRST person hauled off to jail….
this whole story was just a MESS. I cant believe this is considered a "hood classic"
just UGH
this will be the last book i EVER read by Teri Woods….