A less than thrilling thriller
I was so eager to dive headlong into this read and lose myself in the story but the longer I read, the more it felt like an obligation I had to complete, rather than the compelling page-turner I hoped it would be. It had good bones which made it all the more disappointing when the story seemed to lack propulsion forward. Set in a town that could easily mirror any in small-town America, the characters encountered seem on the surface to be quite intriguing. As the reader, I waited to read as their stories and motivations unfolded, which unfortunately did not happen. Also, in terms of character development, there seemed to be conflicts in the thoughts/actions of the protagonist. Often narrative in later pages did not ring true based on earlier insights into Kate’s experiences. There were sprinkles of details that, because they were not expanded upon, just muddied the waters. For example, mention of Seth having a sister. This detail was an excellent opportunity to gain insight into why Seth is so aloof and judgmental with Kate but, alas, it was not capitalized upon.
Overall, this could be a young adult read but as an avid adult reader, it definitely missed the mark. Another side note: For readers with a keen eye for editing errors, such as myself, there were several editing misses (at least 7-10), everything from wrong words (that because they were correctly spelled would be missed by spell check) to in complete thoughts/sentences. Hopefully, any future works will show a progression in character development, tightening up a plot, and overall readability.