The Devil's Obsession

by Refictionista

War’s over and the good guys lost. Hermione is now Draco’s captive. He’s obsessed with her, desires her, and he knows she utterly loathes him. He’s going to do whatever it takes to get her to want him back, or he’ll break her in the doing.

A Dramione fan fiction.

Chapters: 6 | Word count: 14,658 | Rated: MA

Genres: Dark

32 pages, ebook

First published February 9, 2016

Reviews

[Elizabeth Tryon · Rating 3 out of 5]

It’s dark, and I do not like this Draco. He’s just selfish and dark. I wish Hermione could have just had the chance to fall on her own, because the rest of the story was good, I just couldn’t get past how Draco made her “love” him 🤷🏻‍♀️

[Jess · Rating 3 out of 5]

“Fear evil when it loves you. Draco Malfoy was obsessed with Hermione Granger. Draco claimed to be in love. Draco used dark magic and committed even darker deeds to make her love him back.”

[Jemma Burns · Rating 3 out of 5]

Very quick read
Liked the complete difference from original story.
Great added dark elements

[| Anaïs 🦢 · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5/5
did I love this?
Yes
Am I worried for my mental health?
Yes

[Alexzandra Pattinson · Rating 2 out of 5]

Once Ron abandones Hermione and Harry in their Horcrux hunt, he get's captured by snatchers and get's dragged into Malfoy Manor where he get's tortured.
When the final battle takes place and Harry gets a massage about Nagini being dead, he goes and comfronts Voldemort and ultimately winds up dead.
Once the battle is over and the Dark Side won, prisoners are taken and giving to anyone that wants to claim them, to do whatever they want. That's how Hermione ends up being imprisoned in Malfoys bedroom with him insisting that she's his.
Getting forced to drink potions and having entchanted jewlery that makes her crave for Draco and forget anything else, Hermione can't help but get sucked up into this twisted relationship.

I'm a sucker for Dark fics that involve and obsessed Draco and this fic seemed promising.... buuuuut I wasn't really impressed.
I didn't really like the writing. The first two chapters were a bit slow paced for me and the characters were very OC.
Alot of things happened very fast that didn't make any sense. The relationship was too forced and Hermione accepted everything too easily.
Draco was just a bad character that didn't deserve his happy ending. Even tho he claims to love Hermione, he doesn't treat her very nicely. He keeps calling her names and telling her that she is filthy.

[Vernice · Rating 3 out of 5]

Well... that was a lot darker than I expected o_O