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123 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 21, 2017
Liam brooded over her words. Briskly and efficiently! What sort of woman wanted that? Not that he hadn't thought of taking her roughly and quickly [...]I think the thing that bothers me isn't necessarily the fight OR the words—there's obviously a philosophical divide separating their preferences for the use of erections. I mean: let's have the Great Debate; I will facilitate.—Rather, it's the very fumbling, clumsy way the words are clunked into the text, with all the grace of a sloppy thesaurus-izing. I've read great plays on adjective-based love-making, which brought the characters who were doing the boning (swiftly and briskly) together and made the whole thing delightful.