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BREAKING IN: A Bad Boy Romance
A dangerous excitement shot through her and Allison gasped against the cold hard surface of the table as the hand that had been stroking his cock slipped between her legs and began to stroke the slick folds.
“You’re wet,” he said, his voice somewhat perplexed by the reaction of her body. “Is that honey all for me?”
BREAKING IN is Book One in the steamy, erotic romance, short story series, "Allison & Blake", that takes you on a whirlwind adventure that peaks throughout the series.
Allison is a gorgeous young woman living on her own since her deplorable ex-boyfriend took off with her best friend. Since then, she'd developed this outlandish fantasy about a masked man breaking into her home and having his way with her.
Her seemingly harmless imaginings suddenly take shape, however, when hot and handsome escaped convict, Blake unexpectedly arrives in her life seeking asylum. Having broken out of the prison, Blake breaks into Allison’s house looking for shelter. When she finds him there, well - let's just say her fantasy comes to life!
As Allison and Blake get to know one another more intimately, something special begins to grow between them. With their newfound bond, Allison wonders how long can she keep hiding him from the law?
And is she playing with fire by keeping an escaped felon locked away in her home?
35 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 23, 2017
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About the author
Mona Moore
14 books39 followersMona Moore has always dreamed of becoming a writer. From the moment she picked up her very first romance novel at the tender age of twelve, she was hooked. As Mona got older and more ambitious, she wrote her first Young Adult novel, which promptly got devoured by her temperamental Hewlett-Packard. Since then, she's learned a lot about crafting an engaging story to captivate readers - and how to back up her work to avoid utter devastation at the hands of technology.
Mona lives mostly in her head but calls beautiful Canada her home. She spends her days baking, coloring with her minions, and of course, weaving a tall tale (which usually includes tons of gratuitous nudity and sinfully sexy men).
Her favorite things include sharing a scotch with the real man of her dreams (her husband), reading up on the competition, taking excellent care of her family, and food.
There's nothing she loves more than to hear from her readers.
Mona lives mostly in her head but calls beautiful Canada her home. She spends her days baking, coloring with her minions, and of course, weaving a tall tale (which usually includes tons of gratuitous nudity and sinfully sexy men).
Her favorite things include sharing a scotch with the real man of her dreams (her husband), reading up on the competition, taking excellent care of her family, and food.
There's nothing she loves more than to hear from her readers.
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February 9, 2017
Allison and Blake
I really liked this short read. It's kinda out there, but still enjoyable.
With this being so short I don't want to say too much. Allison gets dumped by her boyfriend and she has been having sex dreams, her fantasy comes true.
I really liked this short read. It's kinda out there, but still enjoyable.
With this being so short I don't want to say too much. Allison gets dumped by her boyfriend and she has been having sex dreams, her fantasy comes true.
February 28, 2017
Fantasy WIN OF THE YEAR
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Just buy it! Omg YES!
I will say this much, if you are a prude or an over achiever for realism just walk away but if you are open minded to sexy, hot, fun and fantasies coming to life then PLEASE ONE CLICK!
I started this and finished it in less than half an hour its that short but that amazing!
For a short story I can't believe how well developed these characters were. I know it has two more books but still this takes skill to shape personalities in sub a short span of pages!
Blake is just a walking talking dream with a bad boy status that makes him lovable!!! He's raw and honest and so freaking adorable!!!! I want him so bad! Omg yes!
Then there is his female counterpart! She was AWESOME!!!!! I love her appearance, I love her timidness and her boldness! She was perfect!!!!
This book was a dirty delight that I'm now obsessed with! Already bought book two!!!!
Yes
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Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes
Just buy it! Omg YES!
I will say this much, if you are a prude or an over achiever for realism just walk away but if you are open minded to sexy, hot, fun and fantasies coming to life then PLEASE ONE CLICK!
I started this and finished it in less than half an hour its that short but that amazing!
For a short story I can't believe how well developed these characters were. I know it has two more books but still this takes skill to shape personalities in sub a short span of pages!
Blake is just a walking talking dream with a bad boy status that makes him lovable!!! He's raw and honest and so freaking adorable!!!! I want him so bad! Omg yes!
Then there is his female counterpart! She was AWESOME!!!!! I love her appearance, I love her timidness and her boldness! She was perfect!!!!
This book was a dirty delight that I'm now obsessed with! Already bought book two!!!!
June 19, 2017
Copy Received from the author for an honest review.
Omg. I have so many feels for this novella. I was high and strangely felt erotic so much on the brink of cumming myself.
The sex with a stranger story is a new concept for me to read and it was totally panty dropping and drenching.
My mind was racing as well as my heart like a marathon and I could see the sex scenes so vividly and transparently. I watched them in my mind having mindless taboo-ish sex.
The author has left me hanging with bare sex and cum and hot streams and nakedness. Oh my.... I can't stop wrapping my mind around certain masked guy now!
Congrats to the Author for a such a turgid and liscivious novella. And yet, it is the starting of the series! I am already growing impatient to read further about the couple!! 😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍
Omg. I have so many feels for this novella. I was high and strangely felt erotic so much on the brink of cumming myself.
The sex with a stranger story is a new concept for me to read and it was totally panty dropping and drenching.
My mind was racing as well as my heart like a marathon and I could see the sex scenes so vividly and transparently. I watched them in my mind having mindless taboo-ish sex.
The author has left me hanging with bare sex and cum and hot streams and nakedness. Oh my.... I can't stop wrapping my mind around certain masked guy now!
Congrats to the Author for a such a turgid and liscivious novella. And yet, it is the starting of the series! I am already growing impatient to read further about the couple!! 😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍
June 1, 2017
Not what I expected at all!
I hadn't expected such a quick read, but that is by no means a complaint. Author Mona Moore managed to craft a compelling and engaging story in a very compact frame. A bit like squeezing the perfect thick rump into two-tight yoga pants. The story flowed well and transitioned seamlessly. It was certainly a steamy read and had me wanting to immediately load up the rest of the series. My only complaint is because of how well this was written I wish it had been longer! (That's what she said)
I hadn't expected such a quick read, but that is by no means a complaint. Author Mona Moore managed to craft a compelling and engaging story in a very compact frame. A bit like squeezing the perfect thick rump into two-tight yoga pants. The story flowed well and transitioned seamlessly. It was certainly a steamy read and had me wanting to immediately load up the rest of the series. My only complaint is because of how well this was written I wish it had been longer! (That's what she said)
September 20, 2017
Allison & Blake.... It's Criminal What They Do....
Allison is left adrift when her sleazy ex-boyfriend Charles leaves her for her former BFF Carla. Allison doesn't miss Charles, as much as she misses the intimacy they shared.
Blake is a wrongly convicted sex offender, scheming to escape prison before his cell mate, Rex, makes amorous advances. Blake engineers a disturbance, and boldly walks away from the prison. Blake breaks into Allison's house, in search of a hot shower and some inconspicuous clothing.
Allison is terrified when, after exiting the shower, she is confronted by a masked and highly aroused Blake. Begging Blake to not hurt her, Allison is at his mercy... What starts out as terrifying, quickly evolves into an extremely sensual situation, as Blake and Allison become involved in more ways than one...
Allison is left adrift when her sleazy ex-boyfriend Charles leaves her for her former BFF Carla. Allison doesn't miss Charles, as much as she misses the intimacy they shared.
Blake is a wrongly convicted sex offender, scheming to escape prison before his cell mate, Rex, makes amorous advances. Blake engineers a disturbance, and boldly walks away from the prison. Blake breaks into Allison's house, in search of a hot shower and some inconspicuous clothing.
Allison is terrified when, after exiting the shower, she is confronted by a masked and highly aroused Blake. Begging Blake to not hurt her, Allison is at his mercy... What starts out as terrifying, quickly evolves into an extremely sensual situation, as Blake and Allison become involved in more ways than one...
June 20, 2017
Allison has been having dreams of an intruder who sneaks into her bedroom at night and gets her so aroused that he is giving herself orgasms every morning. This is after her boyfriend breaks up with her. Danger was always an aphrodisiac for allison and always would be.
Blake has been arrested for a crime and branded as a sex offender for life just because the woman's husband came home early. Now he has escaped prison.
This is a panty melting short story to be continued in Book 2, Blissful Prison. Can't wait to read next book!
The author has really used her imagination in this story. Will Blake take Allison up on her offer?
I'm volunteering an honest review for an advance reader's copy.
Blake has been arrested for a crime and branded as a sex offender for life just because the woman's husband came home early. Now he has escaped prison.
This is a panty melting short story to be continued in Book 2, Blissful Prison. Can't wait to read next book!
The author has really used her imagination in this story. Will Blake take Allison up on her offer?
I'm volunteering an honest review for an advance reader's copy.
April 14, 2017
I am definitely fangirling here, I love how Mona writes, the storyline is fantastic yet again. A beautiful short story.
Allison is a sexy beautiful woman, dumped by her boyfriend. Allison finds that she begins to fantasise about a masked man breaking into her house, and taking advantage of her. But one night fantasy becomes reality when she finds Blake an escaped criminal in her house. The scenes are hot and steamy, and you don't want it to stop. I am so looking forward to the second book in this series.
Allison is a sexy beautiful woman, dumped by her boyfriend. Allison finds that she begins to fantasise about a masked man breaking into her house, and taking advantage of her. But one night fantasy becomes reality when she finds Blake an escaped criminal in her house. The scenes are hot and steamy, and you don't want it to stop. I am so looking forward to the second book in this series.
August 9, 2017
She Gets Her Wish
Single, young professional Allison is struggling a little bit with a recent betrayal and breakup; a situation that leaves her...frustrated. Blake shows up, and things take off.
This is a beginning, with more to come. I noticed multiple grammatical and spelling mistakes, and perhaps a few too many sentences with multiple similes. Still, I will read, with interest, the further adventures of Allison and Blake.
Single, young professional Allison is struggling a little bit with a recent betrayal and breakup; a situation that leaves her...frustrated. Blake shows up, and things take off.
This is a beginning, with more to come. I noticed multiple grammatical and spelling mistakes, and perhaps a few too many sentences with multiple similes. Still, I will read, with interest, the further adventures of Allison and Blake.
April 24, 2017
Great read. fast read. wow wow. HOT read. adults only read... oh YES YES YES!
June 1, 2017
Hot! Hot! Hot!
Steamy, sexy, and dangerous all wrapped into one. Allison's fantasy comes to life leaving her begging for more. Talk about panty melting!
Steamy, sexy, and dangerous all wrapped into one. Allison's fantasy comes to life leaving her begging for more. Talk about panty melting!
June 5, 2017
Loved it
This was amazing and I couldn't put it down
It was well written and had an awesome story line can't wait to the next
This was amazing and I couldn't put it down
It was well written and had an awesome story line can't wait to the next
June 24, 2017
This was so ... erotic.
Wow. Mona did a great job keeping up with this one. It is hot, hot, hot. And so is Blake...gaaah!
The story line was a bit out there, not to say that this couldn't happen, but I would imagine it wouldn't end as it does for the pair in this steamy little read. I had to keep reading. I wasn't given a choice, because I had to see where this was going and what was happening.
Wow. Mona did a great job keeping up with this one. It is hot, hot, hot. And so is Blake...gaaah!
The story line was a bit out there, not to say that this couldn't happen, but I would imagine it wouldn't end as it does for the pair in this steamy little read. I had to keep reading. I wasn't given a choice, because I had to see where this was going and what was happening.
August 6, 2017
Yum!
Great start to a new series, I can't wait for the next book; Blake and Allison are explosive together!
Like I said before, YUM!
Great start to a new series, I can't wait for the next book; Blake and Allison are explosive together!
Like I said before, YUM!
September 6, 2017
Allison may have been dreaming about her break-in lover, but when he actually shows up at her house, the heat level in that house rose to an epic burn. Blake is a hot man who's been wronged, but he's ready for some all out loving, and Allison is more than happy to give him what he wants. what a quick, hot read! I voluntarily reviewed an advance reader copy of this book.
April 10, 2017
Deliciously hot and dirty! Mona Moore is a talented writer that commands your attention and keeps you salivating the whole way through. Moore manages to retell a common fantasy is a new and exciting way that will have you begging for more! This book is the perfect quickie! Can't wait to find out what happens to Allison and Blake next!
September 7, 2017
I loved the book,it was very hot! I wish it was longer! A well written book.
September 7, 2017
This was a good story. It was a little predictable but overall it was a hot and sexy read. What happens when one fantasy turns into reality? Only time will tell for Blake and Allison. When Allison's boyfriend left her for her best friend she was devastated. She is lonely and has a continuous erotic dream about a stranger every night. Blake was doing hard time for having sex with a married woman. When he escaped prison he was only looking for a warm shower and clean clothes. But being caught in Allison's house may have serious repercussions for them both.
October 18, 2017
Short and sexy read with a young woman, recently dumped for her friend has erotic dreams about a masked man breaking in to her house then it happens .
May 27, 2017
SUPER hot!! I can't wait for the next story!!
February 17, 2017
This is a quick and dirty read, but so enjoyable! Ms Moore does a fantastic job creating characters with a lasting impression!
Because it's so short, I don't want to give anything away, but grab yourself a coke or two and dive right in!
Because it's so short, I don't want to give anything away, but grab yourself a coke or two and dive right in!
September 8, 2017
This book is a exciting book about Allison whating to have a masked man break in to her home and sleep with her.. Allison has these dreams and wakes up excited and wanting a man in her life and her friends tell her to start dating online..
Blaine has been in jail for over 3 yrs and is wanting a to escape from the jail. Finds out that they are transferring him to another jail that is worse then the jail he is in. So Blaine watches everything going on to make his break from jail. When Blaine sees his chance he takes the break away from jail and finds a place to shower and get change of clothes tell Allison comes home and hears him.
Allison see this may. Be her chance to get have a dream come true and is finding that the dangerous side is making her excited and is wanting to play hard. But will Allison help Blaine or what will happen now.
Blaine has been in jail for over 3 yrs and is wanting a to escape from the jail. Finds out that they are transferring him to another jail that is worse then the jail he is in. So Blaine watches everything going on to make his break from jail. When Blaine sees his chance he takes the break away from jail and finds a place to shower and get change of clothes tell Allison comes home and hears him.
Allison see this may. Be her chance to get have a dream come true and is finding that the dangerous side is making her excited and is wanting to play hard. But will Allison help Blaine or what will happen now.
February 7, 2017
3.5 stars
June 30, 2017
If you like the genre of romance mixed with the bit of darkness, then check out this book! Seriously, its a bit different but if you keep an open mind you'll be in for a treat!
Allison is a woman who has been burned and reluctant to trust, let alone give in to her hidden passions. She's dreamed of a man who can take control of her body and give her the bit of kink she needs. She didn't expect for that man to be hiding in her closet.
Blake was sent to prison on a bum charge. The longer he stays there the greater chance his survival will be greatly decreased. He devises a plan that gets him out into society once again. He chooses to enter an empty home to make a quick change. Little does he know that there would be a temptress walking in and throw his master plan into a tail spin.
Holy gravy grandma, the steam is so there! It was refreshing to have characters who gave into their inhibitions in a way. that borders taboo. But if you honestly stop to think about it, how many people have that kind of fantasy? I enjoyed the book and Mona did a good job of adding a twist to the usually predictable plot that can happen with this genre. The only thing I found to be a bit off was maybe some of the descriptions of Blake attributes. Other than that, I found it to be a good book! I'm curious to see how it pans out for them!
Allison is a woman who has been burned and reluctant to trust, let alone give in to her hidden passions. She's dreamed of a man who can take control of her body and give her the bit of kink she needs. She didn't expect for that man to be hiding in her closet.
Blake was sent to prison on a bum charge. The longer he stays there the greater chance his survival will be greatly decreased. He devises a plan that gets him out into society once again. He chooses to enter an empty home to make a quick change. Little does he know that there would be a temptress walking in and throw his master plan into a tail spin.
Holy gravy grandma, the steam is so there! It was refreshing to have characters who gave into their inhibitions in a way. that borders taboo. But if you honestly stop to think about it, how many people have that kind of fantasy? I enjoyed the book and Mona did a good job of adding a twist to the usually predictable plot that can happen with this genre. The only thing I found to be a bit off was maybe some of the descriptions of Blake attributes. Other than that, I found it to be a good book! I'm curious to see how it pans out for them!
May 27, 2017
Great extremely enjoyable read. I absolutely loved this book. This is the first one in a three set series and it was freaking amazing. Mona is a new writer to me and I absolutely love her work. She provides so much in a fast paced short book. It is a fast paced sexy ride that has you hanging on and wanting so much more. By the end of this book I seriously was hoping for that perfect sexy guy to be hiding in my closet. I guarantee you will not be disappoint in this book. It is an absolute must read. Down right enjoyable and hot.
May 11, 2017
WOW -
I do not know exactly how to word this review in a manner that will be eloquent and articulate, so I'm just going to simplify it: This is one of the best books I have read in a very long time. Ms. Moore's got a knack for writing kinky stories with a steamy edge that are downright THRILLING. You will not be disappointed by the crafty way she positions words with character dialogue and to be frank, it's just a great story. Kudos, Mona, I'm hooked. <3
I do not know exactly how to word this review in a manner that will be eloquent and articulate, so I'm just going to simplify it: This is one of the best books I have read in a very long time. Ms. Moore's got a knack for writing kinky stories with a steamy edge that are downright THRILLING. You will not be disappointed by the crafty way she positions words with character dialogue and to be frank, it's just a great story. Kudos, Mona, I'm hooked. <3
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