This book was very difficult for me to rate. I really did not enjoy the first story, but I liked the second one. Giving the book a 3 is pushing it for how I felt about Taken!, but I felt that Say Yes deserves a 4. If possible I would rate the book overall as a 3.5. My problem with Taken! was that I really did not like the characters, especially the heroine. She was very abrasive, difficult to like, and I got truly tired of how much focus was given to her being overweight. The hero was generally more likeable, but I found his background and situation to be strange and not very feasible. It also really annoyed me when the hero questioned why the heroine wanted to watch her weight and she replied that she was ten pounds overweight. The hero responded with, "More like twenty." I thought that was a horrible line for a hero even though he went on to say he thought it looked good on her. The characters from Say Yes were much more likeable, although I worried about the heroine's antics at the very beginning of the book. The hero is very sweet and knows from the start of the story that he wants the heroine in his life permanently. He was a very tender beta hero who salvaged the entire book for me.
Taken! finds Dillon Jones working as head of security for an athletic products company so that he can prove his younger brother innocent of embezzlement. In order to gain the evidence he needs, he decides that he must pretend an attraction to one of the owners of the company, Virginia Jones, and become intimately involved with her. Virginia is a very difficult, controlling woman, and Dillon is very surprised when he actually begins to like her. When it becomes obvious to him that Virginia is in danger, Dillon decides that the only way to protect her while exonerating his brother is to drug and kidnap her. Virginia is understandably upset, but soon trusts Dillon to sort the situation out. When Dillon reveals the person behind both the embezzlement and the danger to Virginia, she will have to convince him that they will be able to mesh their seemingly conflicting lifestyles together.
In Say Yes, Gavin Blake is both amused and relieved when his normally sweet neighbor, Sara Simmons, chases his ex-girlfriend, Karen, with a rake after finding her in bed with Sara's fiance, Ted. Gavin's relief comes from the fact that he cares about Sara and knows that she would be better off with him than Ted. He hasn't wanted to interfere in their relationship, but now that it is over, he plans to show Sara how he feels. Sara's extreme embarrassment over her behavior causes her to avoid Gavin. When Gavin finally finds a reason to be in her company, Sara lets him know that being badly burned has destroyed her trust in permanent relationships, and she has given up the idea of marriage. Gavin knows that marriage with Sara is what he wants, so he has to find a way to convince her that they belong together forever. When Gavin finds that Sara is having financial difficulty due to the payments on her house that he built, he convinces her to let him move in with her and share the responsibilities. Gavin showers Sara with attention and affection, is always understanding, and sleeps in her bed, but doesn't become physically intimate with Sara right away. He feels that acting on the temptation between them will leave her with no reason for marriage. Finally, Gavin gives in to the physical attraction he feels, and although he and Sara become closer, it takes the antics of both of their exes before she is able to admit and declare her feelings.
I enjoyed the second story in this book much more than the first. Aside from not feeling particularly sympathetic towards the characters, the reasoning for some of the events in Taken! escaped me. I do not understand why Dillon felt that Virginia's seduction would help him prove his brother's innocence, and I don't see drugging and kidnapping her as a reasonable, much less the only, way to keep her safe. I found the second story, Say Yes, to be much better. I liked the easygoing and accepting nature of Gavin and his determination to make Sara happy. Sara was also likeable, with her attachment to creatures that no one else wanted. I really didn't feel that the two stories belonged together in the same book.