Silent Enemy begins with a bang, literally. The Afghan National Police training center is attacked with a bomb. The survivors, many of them injured, are evacuated by transport planes. Once the planes are airborne, it is discovered that bombs have also been placed aboard several of the planes.
The story is told from alternating viewpoints through the eyes of the pilot, Major Michael Parson, and one of the teachers from the school, Sergeant Major Sophia Gold. The plane can’t descend without triggering the bomb and no country wants to let them land.
Almost the entirety of the story takes place in the air. The plane is on autopilot most of that time, and unfortunately, so is the storytelling. The two main characters are supposed to be engaging, I suspect, but I didn’t feel much for either of them. There’s an odd romantic angle, as Parson has romantic feelings for Gold; she seems unaware and doesn’t really reciprocate. They never talk about their feelings and that element of the plot sort of remains limp and unresolved.
Thin characterization in a thriller can be forgiven if the story or the threat they are facing is itself exciting, but that falls flat here as well. There are a few action sequences scattered throughout, but the intensity isn’t quite there. The thrill of a mid-air refueling is not terribly exciting when all is said and done. There are exchanges with Major Gold’s Afghani students, reminiscences from both Gold and Parson about past trials they faced together, and several passages describing clouds and water as viewed from 30,000 feet.
There are a couple of obvious “what are they thinking” moments, but I wasn’t invested enough by that point to really be upset. There are a few mildly exciting moments, but not enough to make this a recommended read. The premise seems like it had potential, and I was looking forward to it on that basis, but instead the book misses it’s mark.
I received an ARC of Silent Enemy by Thomas W. Young through Library Thing’s early reviewer giveaway.