My review on Golden (The Golden Trilogy Book 1) By K.M. Robinson
(Could be a few little Spoilers but nothing that gives away the in your face.)
The writing!
If I was not like “What the hell; I’m confused?” I may have enjoyed it more? I’m aware that some writers like to leave you using your own imagination and will not over descried everything little thing, which can be a good thing! But in this case I would have like to understand the time-line the writer was placing me in and where? Especially more on the other characters that seem to pop they’re way into the story?
The age of the characters had me at a lost, the only two I remember being covered were the brother and sister-in-law. This made me it more frustrating because now I’m trying to work out the age of everyone else? Leaving me feeling like I’m reading Hansel and Gretel while trying to find the breadcrumbs, never mind following them. Why you may be thinking; were you spending time working out their age?’ Because most of the men came across more like in there thirties not twenties, as for Dov and Auluria who knows? But then in chapter 12 the party of girls seem like a bunch of fourteen year olds with its dialogue and Auluria was trying to match-make one of the girls with a character that as I stated above came across in their thirties,
This fast-paced book was so fast-paced that it went from, she couldn’t remember anything and then remembering, too I’m in love and he loves me within one or two chapters. This to me became a little silly as this kind of fast-paced went on throughout the book with almost every subject. I’m aware that there is more to the story and I have the set on my Kindle, but I want to review each book at a time. However I don’t want to have to really read three to four books to get simple answers, like I stated above; time-line, age and where the hell is she? Earth, some other dimensions?
The Characters
Sorry but I have to say this, I was getting tired of reading about Auluria hair! It made me want to grab some scissors and cut it off by the end of the book. Yes she had lovely hair and Dov had a thing for it, I get it; but come on now, in every chapter? Then her training, which one chapter it would fail her and the next she was superwoman; but again her training pop into her head in almost every chapter also. I get it she was trained and I did not need to be reminded. By the end of the book I just started to feel Auluria character was becoming sometimes more arrogant with her longhaired and her superwoman training then a strong young female. The “more out of the way I’m coming through…” was getting to girlish for me.
The Plot
In this first book I felt the plot itself was like a mix of other books like the Handmaiden Tails, The Maze and many more. This is not to say I was not enjoying where the writer was trying to take me, but hoped it was more about taking me there in one book, then taking me around the houses with it’s repeated “someone trying to grab Auluria again.” I have trouble with rinse and repeat in books. I have video games for that. I came away wanting to know more about the others who were in the last chapter I was more concerned about them then I was about Auluria and that’s not a good thing good thing.
Rundown
So if you are looking for something fast to read and willing to pay out more money for the other books to get the full story and understanding on what’s going on? Then may enjoy it this? The story is ok, but need a little more for me to bite, the writing not bad, however the balance it was set out was lacking and confusing.