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374 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 5, 2017
I read this book without reading the first one, but I found I was able to follow along fairly well.
That being said, I have a lot of quarrels with this book, which I will lay out in a problem list.
1. The plot.
This was my biggest grievance because if you're advertising it as a detective/mystery novel, it should be well structured, with various plot threads that intertwine and weave together at the climax and conclusion. What we should be left with at the end is a nice garment of story, with no loose threads or poorly connected pieces. HOWEVER. There were several mysteries in the novel, the titular mystery and two minor ones. The minor mysteries did not advance the major mystery, nor did they come together in the end. Instead, they were solved, neatly packaged away into three different resolutions by the main characters who patted themselves on the back for a job well done. I spent the first half trying desperately to figure out how all these plot threads were connected AND YET- My efforts were spurned. Even so, aspects of the plot were too predictable and I saw them coming from a mile away. It felt like things should have raised suspicion that didn't, and I was yelling at the characters to put the pieces together.
2. The writing
The author has a serious case of tell-not-show-itis. I felt like everything was being spelled out to me, from why a character would react a certain way to why the mystery went as it did.
3. The way he writes women
The author just cannot go a second without criticising women. Too tall, too plain, too nerdy, were all descriptions of women used. Additionally, the main character is meant to be smart. She's a nurse ethicist and vigilante detective. She should be able to draw conclusions and make decisions without having to ask "what would professor Dalrymple say/do/think?" every time. I started a prof Dalrymple count halfway through the book and I think I got to about 20 in just the second act. It got old so quickly.
All in all, this book really didn't do it for me. There are better mystery novels out there.