From Lon To Adam

by Chris McHart

A wrong email address doesn't lead to anything... right? Except, sometimes it does and Lon might meet his Mr. Right when he doesn't expect it at all.

**Short story with 7000 words, hot sex and a happy ending**

Genres: M M Romance, Romance, Short Stories, Contemporary, Gay, LGBT, M M Contemporary

48 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 10, 2017

Reviews

[Denise H. · Rating 4 out of 5]

*** In my first book by this author, I found a cute, clever, short story of two men who begin to communicate because of a mistaken email.
Back and forth a mystery develops and Lon is in danger from a client. Adam invites Lon to his place for protection and safety.
The characters are wonderful, the flow is steady, and it is totally interesting ! Sexy, too !
ENJOY !

[Elsa Bravante · Rating 2 out of 5]

Meh, muy corto y no tiene sentido ninguno. Me encantaba la idea, pero la forma de desarrollarla :/.

[Nerea · Rating 4 out of 5]

Supershorttttt! But really cute ♥

[Regencyfan93 · Rating 2 out of 5]

I liked the book until near the end when it veered from a developing relationship into lots of sex. I didn't feel that the sex advanced the relationship. I am not sorry to have read it, but see no need to read it again.

[Tam · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a cute short about a wrong e-mail address leading to love. Lon is an accountant who accidentally e-mails Adam looking for invoices. Seems the client gave him the wrong e-mail. They go back and forth a bit and pretty soon the client is threatening Lon that if he doesn't do something (I forget what exactly) he'll be in trouble. So Lon decides to go and stay with Adam until the police can figure out what's up with the crazy client.

You always hear about those stories of people who meet accidentally like a wrong e-mail or text and love blooms so it's kind of fun. It was short, so not much depth but I liked the concept and that they got to know each other a bit before meeting in real life. Worth a read I think.

[The Celtic Rebel (Richard) · Rating 4 out of 5]

A romance short with a clever little twist. Two people by accident find the person they need. The story did need a bit of better editing, but in this case for me the mistakes didn't hinder my enjoyment.

The pace was nice. In short stories things have to move fast and sometimes that gets in the way. Here it did not for me. Both characters were likable and I happily anticipated each each step of their budding relationship.

I've never read anything by Chris McHart before, but I look forward to enjoying more of her works.

[Meep · Rating 2 out of 5]

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Not awful, but no point to it

Continuing to email wrong email address seems odd. Do these guys have no family? Friends? Colleagues?
The not going to police or tax authority, not my field but there'd be contacts, procedures for reporting. I'd not be stopping at nearest construction site for advise on that!

Then they're both perfectly the others type and having sex. The issues go away unanswered.

[Donna · Rating 4 out of 5]

Can I just say that I love this cover? Although I found it strange that the author didn't physically describe either MC... we weren't told anything except that Lon is about a head shorter than Adam... very strange!

I liked the unique way the story begins... it makes the "fast" pace of the relationship more believable! I did notice a few editing errors, but they didn't pull me out of the story... but, I will admit that I would've liked a bit more on the "client" issue! Maybe a chance for Adam to use all of those lovely muscles to come to Lon's aid... just sayin'! ;D

[Skye Kilaen]

This read like a quickly written first draft, with grammatical errors, typos, and awkward phrasing throughout. One of the character's last names is even spelled inconsistently. There was potential for an interesting story, but few of the characters' actions made any kind of sense in the real world.

[Courtney Bassett · Rating 4 out of 5]

A fun little short

I love the concept behind this story, where a wrong email address leads to a love connection. Obviously things moved quickly, which you have to expect in a short story. Still, their interactions were sweet and their chemistry was hot.

[Dakila Reed]

I loved this short story. It was short but made my heart flutter. Their relationship must have developed fast but it didn't feel rushed. Although I was a bit hoping for something dramatic with the guy complaining about his taxes. Still, it was a very good, sweet read.

[Bobbi · Rating 4 out of 5]

From Lon To Adam by Chris McHart. Loved this story story that started out with a wrong email. Loved both main characters and their chemistry together. Definitely too short. Would love to read more about them.

[Garth Mailman · Rating 3 out of 5]

An M+M Short in need of considerable editing. Begins as a series of exchanged e-mails that lead to a hook-up and a make out session that follows. At least they engage in safe sex. Love at first sight gets a modern update.

[Monica · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fun short story

[Carrie · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short and sweet, with a bit of heat. Good chemistry. Some editing issues, but they didn't really get in the way.

[pkczetalife · Rating 2 out of 5]

The emails were funny, too much "insta" in the rest of the story.

[Hermann Denis · Rating 4 out of 5]

Reminds me of Glattauer "Nordwind"

[juanita · Rating 4 out of 5]

Cute story

Nice, very short read. Two lonely guys fall for each other over a email that was meant for someone else .

[Kevin · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a very short mm romance. Two men meet by accident and the next thing you know, they've moved in together.
Typo: sentence fragment ("Do you want to stay with me? He asked).

[Laura · Rating 4 out of 5]

Eine echt süße Kurzgeschichte mit einer heißen expliziten Szene 😉
Alles geht sehr schnell und glatt und total zuckrig. Ein kleines Zwischenspiel fürs Herz ❤❤❤❤

[cmbookdiva · Rating 4 out of 5]

What a sweet story Lon and Adam were great together.

[CJLuvsBooks! · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really liked this short story. I thought it was sweet and unique, and I could actually envision this being a real life couple’s love story, that they would share at a social event where someone would ask them “How did you two meet?”. I would read another story by this author. :)

[Rachel · Rating 3 out of 5]

I voluntarily reviewed an advanced reader copy of this book.
This is a very short story. It all happened really fast but I t seemed to fit with the situation. It didn't seem rushed at all and fit with the feel of the book.
The writing was good my only disappointment was that the threat went away really quick with no real problems.

[MsS · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 *

[Molly Lolly · Rating 4 out of 5]

Original review on Molly Lolly
Four and a half stars!
This was such a fun and sweet story. I adored Lon and Adam. The way they met was cute and just a tiny bit cheesy. But it worked so much in this story. Lon was a total sweetheart. His enthusiasm was a joy to see. Adam and the way he cared for Lon was wonderful. He quickly connected with Lon and wanted to ensure Lon was safe and I adored seeing it. These two are on a clear path to a happily ever after There’s so much hope for them and starting a relationship together. I would love to read a sequel with these two to see how they get there.

[Zane Kage · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 stars

[Anja · Rating 4 out of 5]

Sending emails to a wrong mailadress you're not aware of. Not that impossible nowadays - it only takes a misspelling etc. Just what happend to Lon and Adam ... A few mails later you ist in the other one's because you're beeing threatend by a client... And e voilà you're moving in because the two of them just click... Nice little story for in between books..