I may be the unpopular opinion here, but I did not really care for this novel. I got Roses for his Rival from Voracious Readers Only and I was looking forward to a steamy boardroom romance. What I got instead read more like angst-ridden teenage drama.
The biggest issue I had with this was that I inherently did not like either of the main characters. Leah is first presented as a confident, take-charge woman in line to take over her father’s business, but as soon as she spends even a few days with Harrison, her actions and decisions become irresponsible, juvenile and reckless. She becomes senselessly jealous of one of Harrison’s ex-lovers, she gets drunk, twice (one at a business function), and despite her desire to be “with” him, she makes snap judgements without even bothering to allow him to explain anything – an interesting choice considering she had basically been stalking him for the better part of the decade. Unfortunately, Harrison is no better.
I’m fairly certain he’s meant to be an Alpha male, but I just don’t (or can’t) believe it. Harrison does well enough in the boardroom, but outside of it, he seems to have no idea what to do with members of the opposite sex. If he had no interest in Monique, why would he let her occupy his time for “hours” at the awards banquet? Why would he allow her to stay at Connor’s birthday party despite knowing Leah didn’t like her? Why didn’t he warn Peter about her after their first incident? So many of his choices just make no sense, in his business practice, and when it comes to Leah. By the end, the only person I really liked in this entire novel was Peter, and he was barely even in it!
This book takes place ten years after they initially meet, but Leah and Harrison still seem to be the same irresponsible barely-adults. Their lack of development made it difficult to picture them in any kind of management position (let alone the CEO), and the plot holes throughout made most of the book made it a struggle to get through. Honestly, it’s a shame because I did like the premise, but wow, does it need some heavy, heavy editing.